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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update yar...
loving this storing a lot.
eagerly waiting for next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n interestin update! So Maan wants Geet! Yash n Maan r identical twins! Bt Yash is da good one n Maan teh bad one! well written...update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
yash n maan r twin hmmm intersting n maan want to marry geet geet toh maan ki hai chahai yash kitna bhi acha q na ho samjhi maan k dimagh main chal kiya raha hai aur yeh maaneet ki shadi kaise hogi agar ho bhi gai toh will geet accept the marige q k sidhi tarha say yah shadi tohh hogi nahi zoror maan singh khurana ka khurafati dimag main plan hai koi
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Posted: 13 years ago
FINALLYYY AFTER A LONGG TIME TU UPDATE KIA... SONA,seriouly jaan u ne lazy hogayi hain...sudhar jaa๐Ÿ˜ก warna ๐Ÿ˜‰

ohooo our geet confused hain maan k lia aapne feelings ko laker & also afraid hain ea soch k ussne aapne family ko betary karegi agar maan k sath...bahut conflict main geet (all credit goes to u...๐Ÿ˜†) & maan..he also hell bend to know geet's feelings...pata nahi agay kya hoga..*sumi thinking*๐Ÿ˜‰

yuppieee geet firsttt ayi hain...dhinka chika dhinka chika but ea kya hain uske lia rista aya hain o vi yash khurana jo maan k twin bro hain ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก but fikar not maan geet ko saabse chupake lejayaga๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰... Maan,yash ko pasand nahi karta hain..uska khusia chinta hain...very bad maan...but all time uske samne yash k tarif kara vi thik nahi hain na???so maan ko to bura lagegayi jiske bajayse maan yash k khusia bardast nahi karpati hain...but maan ko only yash hi tagal karsakte hain *sumi thinking ea kaisa relation hain 2 bro k beach*๐Ÿ˜‰...

hayallaa ea kaisa ajib will hain but accha vi hain...kamse kam ess will k bajayse maan yash k sath aya to sahi warna yash geet ko maan se dur lejata...good job grand paa ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

hehehehehe...maan to phalay nazar main hi fida hogaya hain & geet vi but usko ea samaj ne main time lagegi..no problem geet k maan hain na...๐Ÿ˜‰

aab ea dekhna interesting hogi k saabke ladli geet jisko uske family always protect karti hain...uske har wish mangne se phalay puri karte hain...jis family k baraymain soch kar geet saadi k lia agree kia uss geet k feelings maan kaisa uske zaban pe lati hain... & kaisa maaneet ek hote hain

overall supervvv update... ๐Ÿ‘me loved it..๐Ÿ˜Š โค๏ธ...

NEXT UPDATE K LIA JADA INTEZAR MATT KARANA ๐Ÿ˜ก KUMBHOKORNE K BICHRI HUI BEHEN ๐Ÿ˜† WARNA ๐Ÿ˜‰ ..

MUAHHH SONAAA...ME LOVE U SOOO MUCH...โค๏ธ
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sumigeet

FINALLYYY AFTER A LONGG TIME TU UPDATE KIA... SONA,seriouly jaan u ne lazy hogayi hain...sudhar jaa๐Ÿ˜ก warna ๐Ÿ˜‰


ohooo our geet confused hain maan k lia aapne feelings ko laker & also afraid hain ea soch k ussne aapne family ko betary karegi agar maan k sath...bahut conflict main geet (all credit goes to u...๐Ÿ˜†) & maan..he also hell bend to know geet's feelings...pata nahi agay kya hoga..*sumi thinking*๐Ÿ˜‰

yuppieee geet firsttt ayi hain...dhinka chika dhinka chika but ea kya hain uske lia rista aya hain o vi yash khurana jo maan k twin bro hain ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก but fikar not maan geet ko saabse chupake lejayaga๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰... Maan,yash ko pasand nahi karta hain..uska khusia chinta hain...very bad maan...but all time uske samne yash k tarif kara vi thik nahi hain na???so maan ko to bura lagegayi jiske bajayse maan yash k khusia bardast nahi karpati hain...but maan ko only yash hi tagal karsakte hain *sumi thinking ea kaisa relation hain 2 bro k beach*๐Ÿ˜‰...

hayallaa ea kaisa ajib will hain but accha vi hain...kamse kam ess will k bajayse maan yash k sath aya to sahi warna yash geet ko maan se dur lejata...good job grand paa ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

hehehehehe...maan to phalay nazar main hi fida hogaya hain & geet vi but usko ea samaj ne main time lagegi..no problem geet k maan hain na...๐Ÿ˜‰

aab ea dekhna interesting hogi k saabke ladli geet jisko uske family always protect karti hain...uske har wish mangne se phalay puri karte hain...jis family k baraymain soch kar geet saadi k lia agree kia uss geet k feelings maan kaisa uske zaban pe lati hain... & kaisa maaneet ek hote hain

overall supervvv update... ๐Ÿ‘me loved it..๐Ÿ˜Š โค๏ธ...

NEXT UPDATE K LIA JADA INTEZAR MATT KARANA ๐Ÿ˜ก KUMBHOKORNE K BICHRI HUI BEHEN ๐Ÿ˜† WARNA ๐Ÿ˜‰ ..

MUAHHH SONAAA...ME LOVE U SOOO MUCH...โค๏ธ



Tera sabse colorful comment and best comment on this ff
luv u sumi
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Posted: 13 years ago

"Once,, God wrote a story

that shook the heaven to the very core.

Love was the only language used;

You and I

were the only characters."


Tere Ishq ko Sajdah mean Worshiping ur love...




Part 3

She had heard everything but nothing entered her thin brain, she just looked at them innocently and then looked down couldn't handle the intensity of maan's gaze, she still don't know with whom she is going to marry but whoever it is, she need to be careful not to disappoint himโ€ฆ.

It was geet's daarji mr Balraj Handa and Rajendra Singh Khurana's(Maan's grandfather) long friendship that made them give a vow that their grandchildren will get married. Both didn't had daughter so they craved for daughter and GEET was 1st girl child that too in Handa but for Khurana she was princess of their eyes as wellโ€ฆ Khurana n Handa was best friends from generation and Mohindar n Aman also but not the next generation as aman had to expand his business and then left shimla at early just after geet being deliver.. they doesn't wanted,, circumstances forced them and aman n anisha moved to delhi later USAโ€ฆ but Savitri n Rajendra Singh Khurana Stayed in shimla.. 10 yrs before they moved to delhi later amar n anisha came with maan yash and aniee their 3rd childโ€ฆ.

Maan and yash always had problemโ€ฆ yash is sweet loverboy who is a candy of everyone's eyes because of his sweet and calm nature where maan is complete oppositeโ€ฆ He is arrogant and sometime can be evil also if he need his way outโ€ฆ from childhood he had a complex thinking his family loves yash more though it was not true but because of his rudeness to everyone his parents scolds him.. everybody started talking about how can one boy be so calm one is so dangerous, naturally they started telling how good yash is and how useless Maan is, it grew in Maan as hatred for everyone and he became a self centered man who can do anything to satisfy himselfโ€ฆ

But in the deep corner both brother loves each other immensely. Yash shows it in his action while maan did always opposite, try to show his hate towards yash but yash knew what is real maan and he took him like thatโ€ฆ yash never let anyone say a bad word against maan and maan always protected his nave brother from this world unknown to everyoneโ€ฆ. no one dare to mess with yash because maan was over protective for him though he never showed it infront of everyoneโ€ฆ. he thinks only he has the right to do or say anything to yash even he can snatch anything from him cz its because of him yash always gets thatโ€ฆ.

Here also Rajendra Singh Khurana made a will about a Land that will belong to both of his grandchildren if they agree to work together on the land for any purpose but maan n yash both had their different firm so now as a clause there is something that made them perplexedโ€ฆ. Anyone of them if marry before turning 26 yr age can have the whole property but the girl have to be choice of familyโ€ฆ maan was never a man of marriage, so it was yash that family thought to marry offโ€ฆ. but as maan made a fuse over the land yash agreed to give him the land but after only his marriage. Yash had given one mild clause that maan have to be present in his marriage ritual from beginning if he want the land and finding no other option maan have to agree on his terms staying in Shimla for a month which irked maan to the bitsโ€ฆ.

And now when everything is sorting, maan can have the land also BUT the passionate bad boy's heart stuck on the innocent angel who unknowingly captured his heart with one pearl of her eyes and a small smile that showed her dimpleโ€ฆ. He never thought he can be hopelessly in love with anyone like thisโ€ฆ. destiny has it's own game,, kya pata kisko kiske sajdah karna padheโ€ฆ

After that day maan stayed in shimla in their own mansion which is just behind geet's home.. both can see each other through balcony as the corridor of maan n geet's room faced each otherโ€ฆ maan was angry on himself that he let a mere small town girl effect him, but then her one look was enough to make him throw out all his angerโ€ฆ.

He was doing his workout bare chest and wearing only a lose baggy trouser, his anger was visible in his moves just then he heard a gaspโ€ฆ looking behind he couldn't see anyone but the aroma was too much to ignoreโ€ฆ sweet jasmine with sandal mix scent filled his nostrilโ€ฆ he saw an end where something was strugglingโ€ฆ it would had slipped if he hadn't hold it tight in his embrace and without uttering a word he pressed the soft petite figure on the wall with his masculine sweaty bodyโ€ฆ

Geet came to ask the family to come for dinner but got stuck in the gym on the terraceโ€ฆ she was just going to the terrace as dadima said to take out the pickle from there..she was feeling home here so she happily agreed to work and help them to settle hereโ€ฆ. But as she was passing one room she heard somethingโ€ฆ couldn't control the curiosity in her she walked inside and saw nearly naked maan doing his exercise vigorouslyโ€ฆ his each move made her jaw hung open that can touch the ground and finally when he kicked in the air she let out a small gasp and soon closed her mouth with her palm and hide behind the pillarโ€ฆ. But her earring stuck in the curtain and she started struggling to come outโ€ฆ. what if maan sees her.. she hadn't still saw him perfectly, whether it's yash or maanโ€ฆ

'dono ek hi jaise kyun dikhte hain babaji?' she cribbed looking at her babajiโ€ฆ her heart felt sudden thunder when maan trapped her between his frame and wall.. her throat went dry and eyes were big like it can pop out from the socketโ€ฆ.

'tum yaha kya kar rahi thi?' his deep n husky yet serious voice confirmed her its maan not yashโ€ฆ

'wo,main, main wo, ah wo,' she stammered feeling his manly scentโ€ฆ

'will u complete ur sentence today or it will take tom as well?' he said slowly yet a mischievous hint was there on his face.. as soon as geet looked at his smirking lips she gulp hardโ€ฆ

'wo, wo, aap.. ummm' she closed her eyes feeling him ever so near herโ€ฆ. 'haye babaji ye dust danav agar yunhi itne kareeb rahenge so how can I answer him, pls madad karo na'

Maan like sensed her tension and slowly draw himselfโ€ฆ with sudden pull geet was going to fall as her whole body was on him, and his removal made her imbalanceโ€ฆ before she can move again maan put his hand on her waistโ€ฆ.

'do u seriously have a problem with standing also ya jaan bujh kar girti rehti ho, take koi tumhe sambhal sake specially a richy rich MSKโ€ฆ' his words are simple, he never liked to mould words. He wanted to know this girl and her words can only give him the hint of her real characterโ€ฆ well does she know how innocent she looks with those doe shape hazel.. or it's just a mask not the real self, but his heart argued she is nave like a flower.. soon his heart pained to see her hazel becoming wateryโ€ฆ geet had never been taunted or anyone raised a finger on her character.. everyone is aware of her sensitivityโ€ฆ in whole town everyone knows her for her simplicity and innocence.. he expected her to shout or slap him but never in his wildest dream he thought to make her cryโ€ฆ he wanted to console her but she started struggling to get out of his gripโ€ฆ her mouth couldn't hold the small cry that escaped still she managed to hold her hiccupsโ€ฆ

Maan felt restless with her struggling and held her waist more possessivelyโ€ฆ. Geet looked upto his angry eyes.

'main bas wo, I came for dadima. I didn't knew u were here. Sorry.' her meek voice reached his eardrum quite soothinglyโ€ฆ but then again her word awed him 'why I will need any richy rich to hold me when I have my whole family to hold them. mere veerji hain na mujhe hamesha rah dikhane k liye, aur whenever I fell my darji and papaji always there to hold me, sorry if I trouble u' she said in a meek voice stunning maan further moreโ€ฆ. how can a person be so naveโ€ฆ she didn't even understand those words perfectlyโ€ฆ. Actually her heart is so nave that she couldn't understand his sarcasmโ€ฆ

'then why u r here? To meet yash? Or make him fall for ur charm so that he will run after u like insane' seeing her innocent questioning eyes he sighed, she is really dumbโ€ฆ

Looking at his shaking head geet understood he thinks her as dumb, she cutely pouted her lips and stomped her feet 'mujhe nahi pata tha yash hain ya aap, aap dono same hi to dikhte ho main kaise,,,' and just then she realized what she said, and again bite her lips holding it with palmโ€ฆ seeing her cute gesture maan felt hard instantlyโ€ฆ he felt like taking her right thereโ€ฆ.. but then he remember what she saidโ€ฆ. For her there is no difference in him and yashโ€ฆ. It anger him to the bitsโ€ฆ.

'ohh it doesn't matter who it is, me or yash. U just need a man for u to survive and that's itโ€ฆ'

'nahi I have enough men in my life who will do anything for me' she meant her veerji, darji and papaji but maan was shocked beyond limitsโ€ฆ his anger rose to it's level.. all girls are same only money they wantโ€ฆ he held her shoulder and again pinned her to the wallโ€ฆ

'so u have enough men to fulfill ur need ha? What if I give u everything that u had never imagined, will u come to me? yeah money u all need naโ€ฆ' he throws her dupatta on the floor and nuzzle his face in her neck, 'then I will give u enough money u can survive ur 7 birth, but break the marriage with yash and be with meโ€ฆ'

Geet couldn't understand him,,, as his lips touched her skin she forgot everythingโ€ฆ this pleasure was new to her so she couldn't say a word but when he said break marriage with yash she came to her sense, how can she do that, her darji will die if it happenโ€ฆ

'no, no I can't', she mumble but maan heard itโ€ฆ it raised his rage and he started kissing her neck planting wet kisses on her smooth skin, he was holding himself for longโ€ฆ.. he bite her neck and she cried it pain pushing him from herโ€ฆ she looked at him angrily for biting herโ€ฆmaan wasn't in mood of listening her plea, he pinned her both hand on the wallโ€ฆ

'kyun? Why can't u break the alliance, I will give u everything just satisfy meโ€ฆ I need to have u geetโ€ฆ.' He again tried to kiss her neck but geet pushed himโ€ฆ

She cried seeing the anger in his eyes, don't know why her heart arched whenever he said rude words 'why u need me, for this.. so that u can hurt me biting me like this?'

Her nave words made him burn in fury 'ohhh so my touched repulse u and that yash's touches? how does u feel his touch geet? Does he satisfy u or u have many other men for that?'

His mean words pierced her innocent heart, she is nave but not dumbโ€ฆ her mother had taught her value and respect for relationโ€ฆ she can never cross her limitโ€ฆ she had never been with any other guy and he is saying all thisโ€ฆ though she isn't well aware of those relation but she definitely know its not rightโ€ฆ his words showed her how much disgusted he is to even think that and for geet unknowingly it hurt her to see him suspecting her characterโ€ฆ she know she has to marry yash as per her darji's wish and her mother taught her never think about other man in any sense cz she belongs to him, it was long written relation that her darji and Rajendra singh khurana tied years agoโ€ฆ. Geet is innocent but she know whatever maan is saying is wrongโ€ฆ. She can't give herself to any man except her husband then how could he think so low about herโ€ฆ now his every word went in to her thin brain and she gasp knowing what he was saying about her characterโ€ฆ. She looked at him with anger mixed with pain.. tears clouded her hazels that torn his heartโ€ฆ.

Maan wanted to hold her, he knew his anger had crossed it's boundary but her all nave words were making him mad, and top of that her nave seducing body which was making him hard to control his desireโ€ฆ he never felt like this ever in lifeโ€ฆ not a single girl made him feel to look at them but 6 days before when he met geet at Handa villa his mind and soul only craved for her one look and today when she was so close to him he forgot everything and lost himself in the Forbidden Pleasureโ€ฆ but now seeing her painful cry his heart felt torn apart for the 1st timeโ€ฆ he saw her running away from himโ€ฆ how she clutched her heart in her small palm and then rushed to the exitโ€ฆ he heard his family calling her but none went in her deaf ear.. she just ran away with her little bit self respectโ€ฆ. He saw her running in the main exit gate from the open terraceโ€ฆ his knuckle turned white as he made a fist with it and then in one moment he punched the pillar behind him so hard that his knuckle started to bleedโ€ฆ without knowing anything he had hurt her, now how will he pacify herโ€ฆ he forget all his accession or resolution that he made to know her. for this moment all he want is to see her happy, her Smile that took his heart away with herโ€ฆ

Precap: Maan is J seeing Geet and Yash together?

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update dear

Geet is too nave n innocent to understand Maan sarcasm n comment on her character

Geet is very much hurt by Maan words

Maan feel guilty for making her cry

Precap - seems to be interesting

Continue soon
Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yeh maan kya hain yaar
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he is so cruel just wants geet to break the alliance is it for the land or he really wants geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi there..intense update! Maan wants Geet! Geet sees Maan! She is so innocent! Maan confronts her n is so rude! Poor Geet! well written..update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago


Maan is hurting Geet because of his anger...

he knows Geet is innocent but still his Jealousy and anger took toll on his mind...

he is in love with her...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

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