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Posted: 12 years ago



dolly thank u dear
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Originally posted by: itzzdmg

Chorry for being late. 😭 bio kills me every time. But who cares done with the practical exam. Update was super duper awesome. Meher saved mumma. Cutie kept saying the same words over n over but no one got what he wanted to say but Dadu got her n took her to mumma. Now dada ur turn. Loved meher all through out the update.



thank u dear.. yes she is their savior na
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thanks dear for reading it
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PART 28


(Past in RED)


His heart was beating yet his breadth was trying to leave him. His heart smiled with joy knowing tat she breathed to her life, knowing tat her heart started to beat again. His eyes though closed smiled behind the eye lids while his heart slowed down knowing the truth tat she was safe. The doctors were shocked to see the small movements but were more feared tat he was losing each second. Feared that he was nearing his death yet he was smiling somewhere deep. The doctors and nurses who were trying to stable him as they somewhere knew tat he was breathing his last but still they prayed tat his family reaches him on time and were shocked to see the changing expressions on his face even when he was in deep pain from smiling to happiness and now suddenly into a deep pain, where they knew tat he was living his worst nightmares before his soul leaves his body giving him the ultimate death.

He was angry and felt cheated by his own family. He felt abdomen by his own identity and blood where his own parents cheated him into a marriage. He knew he was wrong in using Sameera for his revenge but he never ever loved her, though he spent time with her. his closeness to her was to hurt tat one girl Geet who had played with him and was playing everyday and finally the big truth tat she once again played with his life made him to leave his own house where his own family stood against him. He mind and heart along with soul was filled with immense hatred for her and he just needed to get a grip on him now. He wondered all over in the car unknown tat she.. his own saviour was nearing her death. His mind drifted to the events of few days back where he had learnt tat Sameera was back from London and wanted him to meet her. he had once met and had told her tat he never loved her and though she was adamant to make him believe he loved he finally spilled the beans tat he had just used her for hurting Geet and would even marry if he had to do to see Geet in tears and begging in front of him. Though he could see the pain in her eyes tat she truly loved him but he left her there hurting her and now knowing the truth tat she was tortured for a month and by Her, Geet and his own family his heart pained more. he never wanted her to suffer though he had been using her since long for his revenge he never wanted her to get into any trouble and now finally when he knew tat Gee just used him to show tat he lost his anger raised making him to get the revenge back on his sides. He made up his mind and finally drew to Sameera making a firm decision " I will marry You Sameera.. will marry you even if I have to kill my heart and soul tat is loving tat b****. I will hurt and kill her to such an extent tat she cries for her death. Will give you, your love even if I don't love you but I will use you to kill her and she will.. she will die in front of me tat will satisfy me tat they deserved this punishment after cheating me."

His world stopped the moment he heard the words, the words tat reached his ears made him to stop his steps while Sameera unaware about him continued talking rather say warning.

Sameera: B*****.. how dare. Did not I tell.. its white damn it.. bloody white car tat belongs to her. You b*****.. not black.

She threw the vase tat was on the side table with anger rising in her and her voice.

Sameera: Kaha tha.. I want her dead.. you bloody b*****.. Geet Handa dead.. do you get.

His heart stopped beating hearing her name. Geet , why and for wat when he heard her further.

Sameera: And you bloody moron b*****.. you tampered his car.. black car belongs to him.. b*****… My Maan.. its bloody his car not hers and I swear if a scratch on him than I will cut you into pieces. I want tat bloody bitch dead. She dared played with me.. Snatching my Maan.. my wealth from me and I want her dead.. dead without water.

She fisted her palms making it to bleed by digging her own nails in her skin while Maan was still under shock.

Sameera: Bahut badi galati ki ushne..itni aasani se Maan ko chodne nahi dungi mujhe. I have played a big time and now I cant let my trump go from my hands. Seven years.. it took me seven years to get close to him.. school se.. it was tough to get a weak point in their relation but it was not hard. A mere word and it broke. Kya pyar tha.. just mere doubt broke them aur woh bhi.. I planned it.. I planned everything against Geet from spreading rumors of Armaan and Geet, poisoning his mind tat she is a bitch trying to snatch everything.. har ek plan.. I have planned it every thing.. but tat bloody bitch.. she always saved him.. saved him from coming closer to me. .. ush din bhi..if she was not in time..i would have made him to get into bed with me.. Ush din his own farmhouse would be his enemy.. agar ush din if she did not come to save him.. I would have forced him to sleep with me and marry as I know wat bloody values his has. Par nahi… she had to come to save him.. not once but how many times and now she played.. both the families played with me.. kidnapping me.. but m Sameera Singhania and I know how to get wat I want. You will be dead Geet Handa.. dead and I will prove tat you are a real bitch in front of Maan. a bitch who wanted him to fail.. fail and throw him out of everyone's life.

Sameera Yelled at the phone saying " I want her dead" and a moment later she laughed, laughed feeling her victory " You are dead Geet.. apni car se nahi.. but you will die in his own car.. Isnt it his favorite car.. and now it will be you death.. Kehte hain ki agar kuch pana hain tho bhagwan bhi saath deta hain.. and he did with me.. though I planned to tamper you car breaks but see tat bloody killer he did tampered Maan's car par nahi.. aakhir yeh maut sirf tumari hain and you are on the edge driving his own car.. You will die.. Geet Handa.. opps Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khuranna.. apni maut mubharak ho."

She turned only to see a pale Maan while her color was lost. She looked into his eyes moving closer but he backed off with her each step. Her words tat she is on the edge of her death rang in his ears while his eyes spitting the fire tat was engulfing him from all sides. He wanted to kill her but his hands refused to move while his legs took him away from her. She moved more closely and called out him in pain only to get a hard slap making her bleed. His eyes spiting anger and hatred but more for him and he threw her away from his own self hitting her on the glass while she lay in a pool of blood.

He hurt his own hand hitting it to the glass and making it to bleed. His soul cursed him to even think tat he ever loved him while she was suffering with his rudeness but right now there was no time for him to even breadth. He pulled out his mobile calling up KM only to get his calls to be disconnected the moment they heard his voice and when he tried calling their mobiles, he was left dishearten to see that none of their phones was reachable but he was lucky or say unlucky tat when once again he called the KM, nakul informed him tat Geet had left the Mansion warning them tat she would never returned if he does not come back and the worst was when he informed tat she had taken his own car, the car tat was waiting to engulf her in her death. He cried out loudly dashing out of tat bloody place.

He drew his car at a speed to save her life or say to save him but he was unaware tat he would be witnessing her own death with his own eyes. He prayed to god.. Radha-krishna asking for his mercy to be faithful to her and not him and for a moment his eyes smiled, smiled seeing her right in front of him though far away but his eyes cried seeing her driving the car, his car the death tat meant to be his. He pulled his head out from the car asking her to stop while she saw him from far away, road not so busy but her car in full speed. She smiled seeing her Maan in front of her and her hand reached her tummy telling her how happy she was and next moment there was complete silence in the air while fumes covered all over the place.

Maan lost his balance hearing the sound and dashed his car into a halted one injuring him, his lips calling out to her while his eyes getting heavy. He held his eyes wide-open coming out of his own car but everything outside was blurred. He could not see her, he tried pushing the crowd moving near her and he could only see spoke and hear cries and screams of people. His legs trying to get closer while his heart trying to make him believe tat all was right but the moment his eyes saw, saw the dreadful sight of his MISHTI lying inside the crushed car and with her eyes shut tied but her lips with a smile. He pushed everyone reaching her trying to pull her out but the more he tried the more he lost. He could not hold anymore and cried for help asking other to help him and soon they were successful in getting her almost dead body out and the moment he did his own eyes left him getting clouded with darkness while she lay in his lap all covered with blood and glass but strangely her hand protecting the small life growing inside her.

The monitor beeped showing his decreasing heartbeats panicking the doctors while his movements stopped finally getting the worst in him. His heart denied his mind while his soul confused asking him to go with his heart and his body ready to leave his soul yet it was not leaving making the doctors to run from here and there trying to stabilize him while others trying to connect his family members and lately after much try getting the contact from his phone they once again called KM as each mobile they tried was either out of reach or not responding and informed the where about of the hospital whoever talked to them on the phone they had called.



She sat upon her bed getting out from her sleep calling out for her Maan while Rano and Shikha ran to hold her shouting for others. She struggled pushing them out from her way when all entered inside and tried stopping her. Vicky was hell worried hearing her saying the same while Yash was trying hard to get information about Maan but none moved from the hospital. Geet repeatedly called out for Maan and Vicky and feeling helpless he slapped her hard to shut her voice. He held her by her shoulders shouting at her.

Vicky: Dhoondh rahe hain Bro ko Geet but m helpless I don't even know which hospital is he. M loosing from all sides Geet.. and please don't make it difficult Geet. Bro is dying and I need to get him.

"He is Dying" it killed something within her while her eyes numbed. Vicky looked at her for a second and realized wat he said. She was numb and pale but her hand reached his cheeks making it to sting with her sharp and hard forceful slap tat continued with another and another. She pushed him throwing him away from her staring at him with anger and hatred. She looked around and her eyes held the scissor lying on the side table. She grabbed tat and aimed it to her wrist scaring the hell of everyone.

Geet: He is not.. do you get.. he can never.

Vicky stood coming near getting scared of her behaviour but Geet stopped him before he could reach her and eyed everyone else.

Geet: Stay where you are.. aur bolo. Say tat he is not.. My Maan cant die. He cant.. he cant leave me and our baby.. do you get.. he has to know tat..

Vicky: enough Geet..enough.. bas karo.. you have missed everything.. do you get.. she is your baby.. Tumari Maan ki Mehar

Vicky pulled Mehar harshly making her to cry and the moment she did Geet's heart pained. She looked at her and than at Vicky who was still holding her.

Vicky: She is your Baby, Geet.. Your baby. She is the one whom you gave birth and now she is the one who saved you and we need to find Bro before it gets late.

Vicky slowly grabbed the scissor throwing it away while she looked at Mehar who was crying and calling her and the moment Vicky threw the scissor Mehar ran and hugged Geet hiding her into her. Her hug, her touch led Geet back to her life where she lived with Maan and Mehar. A simple touch flashed all her memories of her being mad, Maan and she living with Mehar, everything tat reminded her only of her Mehar and Maan. she kept looking at Mehar who was hiding herself deep inside her but her fingers searching the Chain tat she had tied to her Mumma. She looked up at Geet while her fingers held the Mangalsutra.

Mehar: Mumma.. chain.. Mumma good… Dadda says.. Mumma chain.. Mumma good. See Mehar good girl..Mehar, Mumma chain.. hain na Mumma.

Everyone had tears in their eyes hearing the soft painful words of their Angel when the door to the room was wide open while they saw Nakul entering with a worried and scared face.

Nakul: Maan..Maan Sir.. tat.. he.. Hospital..phone.. no answer.. all.. mansion.. Maan Sir.. critical.. all..

Vicky came around to Nakul and asked him to calm down first and than he informed them about the call they received at the Mansion and how they have been trying everyone's phone and tats when they realized tat except Vicky none has their phone with them and Vicky's was broken after he had the call from hospital. Geet sat there looking at Nakul while Mehar said holding her Mangalsutra speaking to her unknown tat her Dadda needed her and her Mumma. Vicky turned and reached Geet as he knew tat Maan leaving his breadths was impossible and to get him to life back he needed his Mishti but unaware tat this time it was their ANGEL MEHAR who was supposed to fight their evil destiny. He held Geet by his shoulder while Mehar hugged her tight fearing tat Vicky may hurt her Mumma again.

Vicky: Bro.. needs you.. he needs you to save him.

She sat there numb once again looking deep inside his eyes while Mehar hugged her tighter seeing Vicky getting angry.

Vicky: Why don't you understand damn it.. Unki saase sirf tumare ish Mangalsutra ke karan chal rahi hain.. but he needs you to make his heart beat. Tum sirf uski Mishti nahi.. but you are his saviour Geet.. His saviour when he is your destroyer.

Vicky shook Geet but there was no response. The words tat Vicky had said earlier and than Nakul's words rang in her whole body making her num to everything. Vicky looked at Raj who has been sitting in one lone corner of the room. He marched towards him pulling him by his shoulders and shouting in anger.

Vicky: tell her Dad.. explain your DOLL tat she is just not his wife.. but wat she is.. tell her the truth tat they are married since childhood. Since when they were just 5. Tell her tat his heart will stop beating if she does not reach him. Tell her tat he will die.. he is dying.

Vicky fell on his knees while Raj just stared at a numb Doll. He looked at everyone who was trying to get her understand tat she needs to reach him but there was no response. Raj walked towards her eying Mehar and the moment he tried pulling her he was pushed away by a strong force. He looked up at his Doll who not only held her tight but her mind and heart though numb were holding her Mehar tight and the moment she felt someone she pushed him. He looked at Geet and than at Mehar and ordered Vicky to carry them. Everyone looked at Raj while he said.

Raj:We cant waste time. She needs to reach him before his heart stops… and if we don't than her heart will stop. see her… dekho ushe.. she is already numb proving tat he is breathing his last.

Mohinder looked at the determined face of Raj and quickly ran out and called Yash from the hospital phone saying him to arrange a quick flight for them to the Mumbai where Maan has been waiting for them. Mohinder turned to see Vicky Carrying Geet while Mehar was on her. Though somewhere the weight he was carrying may be more but he was determined to reach his Bro.. No her Maan who she was loosing.

Precap: Will Mehar fight their evil Destiny or will the destiny destroy them living Mehar all alone.

Hi all..

A news to you all.. As most of them know about the issue related to Love and Hate FF and you might be aware tat m putting it on hold for time being. I don't know when I will be updating it back but will update my other works. I really cant think about love and hate right now as you all know tat the story has emotions tat has to be dealt with at most care so no updates for it now.

And here another thing.. a BIG WARNING… for you all

Teddy500 has changed her profile name to tobblerturbo and to say there's another shock tat turbotruffle- another account. I do have a doubt tat this three or say two are one and the same person. Anyone who is receiving any pm's messages or comments on their thread from this members do refrain yourself from replying her back. Have recently got to know tat dreamyharika (harika Maaneet) has got a message from this turbotruffle tat teddy500 was her account but she was not using it as she was away to Scotland for months and she just came a day back and found all this but m pretty sure tat they are same and she has started all her irritating work again. Anyone getting any pm from her please do not reply her and if you do tat its your wish. I will not take anything as I had enough of her and tats the reason m putting my LOVE AND HATE for hold. I wish tat you will do as I say as most of them know how irritating she is and wat she wants so anyone replying her will be your choice but please do not pm me her pm's back as I just want to stay away from her. Have already warned her many times and have been clear enough tat I wont forgive her but she is yet playing her games so sont say tat I did not warn her. Your reply and accepting her friend request is totally your wish.

Lastly..

Destiny, will be coming to an end very soon. may be another few updates and it will end.

So hope I have made it clear.

And now my target.. 200+ Likes with 10 pages comments or else I wont update it but I know you will do..

Do like and comment..

Thank u all.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb Update

Maan is in critical conditions n was reliving his past which had changed their life

Geet can't able to take the news tht her Maan is dying n so become numb to his surrounding

Raj ordering Vicky to carry Geet along with Mehar as they know tht Maan is breathing his last


Regarding note-

Will be waiting for the update of love n hate, take ur time dearie as I know tht it require calm mind to write the update

thank for informing abt teddy500 will be careful
Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor maneet... same scenario one take geet from maan second take maan from geet...

i wanna kill this sameera
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wow lovely emotional painful, tearful update.. te way in past my maan thinking to take revenge and for tat to marry sam and see his geet die in front of him, but wen he came to know te truth and his whole world shattered was so painful..te way his heart bursting hearing his misty in danger , oh god why u playing with my maaneet .. te way my maan seeing his misty dieing in front of his eyes and and te way geet smiling seeing my maan and holding her little life was so painful, emotional scenes.. in present te way geet stood numb and te way geet behaving wildly hearing her maan in danger was so lovely.. oh so if my dies his misty too will lose her soul.. pls geet go to my maan.. te way mehar hugging geet and te wya gete holding her angel and te way she didt react was lovely emotional.. te way vicky carrying geet to my maan was lovely emotional.. i love te update so much dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
a touching one...poor maneet...their angel meher...hate sameera...continue sooon...
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what a emotional update ...ohhh you are ending it soon no i want happy moments tooo
waiting for update loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
maan can never think rationally when he is angry then afterwards regret
that what has happened in their past
he believe whatever sam told but never believed what his mishty told him
nd when he got to know the whole truth nd sam real face
then also he was late that he saved his mishty but then also he can't saved her
now about present all r worried about maan but where were they when he was broken he wanted someone to share his pain it was only meher who can bring life in her mumma dadda but then also they stop her from meeting him
now when he breathing his last breathe the want him safe
geet got her memory back
nd all also got to know where maan is
now geet nd meher r now there way to save him
nd will fight with his destiny to bring him back

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