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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Good. Don't strain it too much. 😊



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Heytz, first of all 🤗


🤗 to u too
even if u hadn't mentioned ur name ur comment itself spoke for u😳
Welcome back
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Can I say without blushing that something just got added to my wish list...😳
All of a sudden I feel like going off to Kerala for a houseboat vacation...

U should go Avi its an amazing experience
Backwaters is so beautiful
and very peaceful too
Add it on the top😉
Ur hubby will be shocked and surprised too☺️

Oozing romance in this update...
I loved loved loved it...

Thanks so much😊
Talk about two people who were meant to be...

Finally they are ONE ❤️
I am sorry for the late comment but due to newbie status I can only post 10 comments a day and I was not aware of that...
Too good update Heytal...

No issues yaara
we all missed u so much
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The song was perfect and the shaiyari... muaah... superb... loved it Nauri; mujhe lagta hai when you get married, tere hubby ki jagah tu shaiyari karegi...😳 Woh bhi humare jaise fida ho jaane wala hai...😉
Haan Nauri needs to make sure hamaari romantic Nauri ki shayari sun ke woh madhosh na ho jaaye😉
Waiting for more soon... Love your writing style and before I forget...
Congratulations you totally dazzle
Dazzler!
Avi...

Thanks so much
U people are the best just make my day
Love u all
Muahhhss
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Posted: 12 years ago


Thank you so much
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

Congo dazzler...

GWS...



Thank you so much Sky
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mishu-

beautiful part heytal 😊




Thank u so much Mishu
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Hope ur studies are going good
All the best
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fariya20

nice ff i ead it in one go



Thanks so much
Glad u liked it
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Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 20
awesome part...
so beautiful...
cont soon dear...



Thank you so much Deepa
Glad u liked it
Will update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very well written hetal...loved his surprise for her...beautifuly writtn SR ...so now brij is going to come bakc in maaneet life again...


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Very well written hetal...loved his surprise for her...beautifuly writtn SR ...so now brij is going to come bakc in maaneet life again...




Thank u so much
I'm glad u liked it
😃

Brij 😡 has some surprise in store😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Teaser
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"Kya hua Geet, kuch yaad aa raha hein?"


But my innocent beauty just owns up still keeping her eyes closed.


"Aisa lagta hein jaise yeh koi khwaab hein jo aankh kholte hi gayab ho jaayega." Oh my I felt a sudden urge to demonstrate to her in my own way to her the difference between the dream and reality. But neverthless it wasn't still late.

Picking her up in my arms I walked towards the entrance of the raft and the next second we were down in the chilling water. She just clung to me as a magnet to iron, her teeth chattering, eyes wide open with shock, anger and complain in them. I too innocently declared.


"Yeh haqeeqat hein Geet, khwaab nahi!"


She pouted angrily, "Maan aisa koi karta hein kya?" She complained still clinging to me.

I knew she doesn't know swimming, but still there wasn't a tinge of fear in her eyes. Her trust in me not only made me feel self-worthy off but at times scared me too.

'I JUST HOPE I CAN ALWAYS LIVE UP TO HER TRUST IN ME!'

Edited by heytal - 12 years ago

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