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Posted: 12 years ago
ughhh gotta wait till Monday?!? :( boohoo! xD LOL ...Anyways loved it! really getting pissed off at Tanveer -.- even the one in the show -.- ! But thank goodness here...she's evil! xD
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Posted: 12 years ago
I cant wait plzzz update soon
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Loved it... Amazing. Continue soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suchishah

U were best...u knew which part to describe more and which to describe less...just fantastic at ur part...pls pm me when u update on Monday if possible...it helps a lot...bye tc


thanks a lot dear... will def pm you...
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What suspense.. continue soonnn


don't worry, suspense will be released today... thanks dear...
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Originally posted by: ARHI-SKLOVERS

awesome ff plz pm me next time


thanks dear, will try to pm you...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hammer_hily

Thanks for the pm. love your writing. it was funny but sad. poor zoya. waiting for more


thanks dear but next is def going to be sad one...
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Originally posted by: irock321

ughhh gotta wait till Monday?!? :( boohoo! xD LOL ...Anyways loved it! really getting pissed off at Tanveer -.- even the one in the show -.- ! But thank goodness here...she's evil! xD


everyone is pissed of at tanveer but what to do?nyways thanks...
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I cant wait plzzz update soon


just going to update dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey all, thanks for liking previous part... here comes the next one as promised...This is just my theory going with the time lines of the show about zoya's past... hope you all love it...

Part-7

Zoya was still in arms having tears in her eyes'

but how can you be so sure Miss Farukhi'..Asked Asad'

I don't know Mr. Khan, but some thing was wrong there'. I felt so'. I know her'..

Ok, Miss farukhi, you know her but why are you weeping so badly'.

I want to listen that recording again'..

but why?

Please Mr. Khan, no question' I want to listen'.

Asad could not say anything and just played the recording'..

NNN' Nadira' Razia whisperd'. zoya stopped the recording'. and she broke down'

what? asked Asad holding her arm'.

Nadira is my ammi's name'. this means that lady had killed my ammi seventeen years ago?

but that is a common name , it may be some else Nadira'. and also you had told your mother died twenty years ago'.. asad asked'.

wait.. Ayaan said' it's a bit confusing zoya'.. your mother died twenty years ago and you shifted to New York' but mumani killed some Nadira Seventeen years ago, so how can she be your mother? and how did your mother died?

may be due to fire'..

May be? you don't know? said Asad'

Appi and jiju never tell me properly'.. they say it will break me down''.and may be due to fire because I have burns on my body'look'..she showed them her arms' there were burns on her arm'. may be I was saved from fire but ammi died'.

this is all quite confusing Miss Farukhi' you need to talk to your appi and jiju' Asad said'.

Zoya called her jiju and asked'

but he replied' no zoya, you know i have promised your appi not to tell you anything'. please' come back and forget everything''

but jiju, I am quite close to the truth now, jiju please help me, i know appi will never tell me in detail... its only you who can help me now...'.

but zoya you are alone there, you will not be able to handle the truth alone'.

no jiju, I am not alone now, Mr. Khan is here with me'. zoya looked towards Asad, and he nodded and held her arm giving her strength' please tell me everything'.

Ok, then listen'.. jiju siad'. and Asad made her mobile speaker on'.

" Your ammi had married a manager of your nanu's factory'..you were three years old when your ammi came to know your abbu had fallen in love with some other lady and he was married to her too'. but the property and factory belonged to your ammi as it was gifted by your nanu to your ammi'.your abbu wanted factory as well as property, so he didn't divorce your ammi'.that lady had come to your home and had confronted your ammi' when your ammi didn't agree to transfer property on your abbu's name, she set fire at your home' you and your ammi both had come out safely' but your ammi called zeenat's ammi and sent you to new york, so that, that lady may not harm you'. but that lady was very dangerous'. your ammi was in contact with zeenat' ammi for three years'.

but after three years, she suddenly disappeared'.. Zeenat's ammi came to India to find her, but could not and there she came to know, your factory had burnt in fire, she sold the factory to some one' and came back'. may be it was deed of your abbu & that lady as your mother had made a will giving everything to you in the care of zeenat's ammi instead of him'. that's why we have always stopped you to go back to India'' now you know everything' I tell you they are very dangerous people' please come back'.zoya, zoya are you listening?

while zoya was holding Asad's arm and weeping badly''Asad put his arm around her back and helped her to gather the strength to listen while Ayaan too was shocked on listening all this'.

Yes, We are listening.. said Asad instead of zoya who was still weeping on Asad's shoulder'. one last question, can you tell what was the production of zoya's factory'.

I think it was a doll factory'..said Anwar'.

Thanks Mr. Anwar'' and Asad was about to cut the call' when Anwar said' Mr. Khan'.

Yes'

Please take care of zoya, wo bachi hai, she will not be able to handle so much stress and I know she will not even say anything to anyone' will be weeping alone'.

don't worry Mr. Anwar' I will never leave her alone'. said Asad and cut the call'..

Zoya was still weeping while Ayaan said... So if Mumani killed Zoya's mother, this means, mamu is zoya's father? Asad was shocked on listening...

but you don't know your Mamu's background?

Bhai , you know he is not my real mamu... he had saved my ammi from some person and my ammi considered him as his brother... i don't know anything about him...but just one thing, ammi trusts him and mumani a lot and can never imagine, those used abbu for some murder..

and not only that, they used your ammi's property too...

and now everything belongs to them only... said ayaan in anger...

After some time, zoya wiped her tears and said' let's go Mr. Khan'. but first make a copy of the recording and delete it from laptop.

you are right' miss farukhi' Asad did the same and all the three of them came out of factory'.

Ayaan went back on his bike while zoya and Asad were still in car'. zoya had still tears in her eyes'.Asad wanted to take her into hug and tell that I am with you always' you are always safe with me and all your pain is mine'. but he could not find any words'..

As they reached home, zoya went to her room without uttering a single word'.but tanveer was not there in the room which was good for her, she lifted all the pillows and slept on her place but sleep was quite away from her eyes'.

As Asad reached his room, he saw Tanveer there..

Tanveer, what are you doing here?

I'.I just came to check you need anything? but you were not here'

Thanks I don't need anything'. I was out for walk, was not feeling sleepy'

Ok'. good night' Tanveer said and left the room'.

Asad placed CD in he locker with the doll and went to his bed for sleep' but could not sleep thinking about zoya'.

It was the morning when Asad was on dining table but still sad'.

Dilshad came and asked'. Asad what happened , why are you so sad?

nothing ammi, was just thinking about some thing'..

Zoya's work has been finished or not?

yes ammi, up to some extent'. will ask her now, if she wants more search?

Ok, when you get free, I have to take zoya to market' we have to purchase some gifts for her as she will be leaving tomorrow evening'.

Ammi' Nazma spoke'. can't zoya stay here forever?

Dilshad smiled on listening'.

Ammi, she brought life in this home'. so much has changed after her coming to our life'. look we are talking on dining table, which was not allowed earlier' now we smile together, talk together and so much changes''

Nazma, I too wished, it could be possible'. but'..said dilshad' she looked towards Asad with a meaningful smile expecting him to say something' but he just lowered his head'..

When Tanveer came on the dining table, wished all and sat next to Asad'kya baat ho rhi hai phuphi? asked Tanveer'

nothing beta, talking about zoya'. she is leaving tomorrow na?

Tanveer smiled' I think she is staying from long here that's why you all are attached'

yes, from three months'.

so long for a guest? tanveer said'.

she was a guest but now she is a family member''. like you'. said Dilshad'.

Tanveer just smiled on it and dilshad served food to everyone'..

but where is Zoya'. asked Dilshad' she has not come yet'. , Nazma please call her'.

As nazma stood to go' Zoya came downstairs'. as usual she hided her feelings with wishing good morning to all with a beautiful smile'. Asad looked into her eyes, he could see the pain and feel she had not slept full night'.

all had breakfast while zoya was just sitting to accompany them but was not having anything'. as the breakfast finished' Zoya went to her room, Asad too followed''

Miss farukhi, are you ok?

yes, I am Mr. Khan' I need a favor'

hum'.

I want the DNA of that skeleton to be matched with my DNA'..

What? Miss Farukhi.. please give it a second thought, you must have mistaken'.. don't go for it'.

No Mr. Khan, I have just one day'

Ok' lets go'.

and Asad took zoya with him to the police station' he requested DSP for the same by telling him the whole story'. but requested him to keep it quite secret , no one should come to know about it as it may be dangerous for Zoya''

DSP after completing the formalities to take permission from court, arranged the doctor to take Zoya's sample for DNA'

Doctor, when will we get the report? asked Asad'

by tomorrow'.. said doctor'

Miss Farukhi, I think you should go to home and take some rest' said Asad'.

No Mr. Khan, I am fine'. Mr. Khan, have you taken care of the doll and CD na?

yes, I have kept them carefully and no one knows about that'

Mr. Khan, if she is my ammi' I am not going to leave that Razia alive'..

don't worry Miss Farukhi' I am with you'.

Thanks for your help till now' it is just you due to which I may reach to the truth'.. Mr. Khan, I will always miss you'..

Asad looked towards her but could no say anything'.

Precap:-Dilshad's proposal to Asad to marry Zoya...

so how was it? could i wrote to your expectations or not? this was the most difficult part for me to do justice with zoya's past... could i succeeded?do leave your feedback...


Edited by jeenia123 - 12 years ago

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