Yeh Kaisa Ishq Hai Sajnaa! (UP#3 pg 27) ~ AsYa SS - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

oh God, dis was simply awesome. u write exceptionally well n da song was just superb. i loved da song n its lyrics. it was heart breaking to see Zoya take such a drastic step and Asad devastated seeing her in so much pain. Looking forward to read da next part soon. plz add to ur pm list.

love,
Nimra.


Okay, well, truth is i really write in my impulse 😆. which is really bad 😆. And am like really reeally bad at writing which is again soo true :p . 😆
Thank you soo much for the appreciation. They make me feel heaven! Ehhee!
Yupp. Do buddy me, its easier to send pms 😳


Originally posted by: ROckinG_Armaan

👏Superb yawl😊Conti. Soon


Yupp i will, in just an hour 😆


Originally posted by: fee-fee

Really good! Please update soon and PM me!


Sure deary. You didnt continue your dream sequence btw! 😭


Originally posted by: e_enigma

No joota, chappal or tamatar for you!


Very nicely written! Loved it!


Kabhi kabat toh dediyaa karo 😆

Originally posted by: risingsea101

Fantasic

I loved it with all my organs
lol, beautifully written
Nice star, continue soon
Thanks for the PM <3


Haiyee!! really??!! On cloud 9! 😳

Originally posted by: sophie420

Loved the beginning!
Nicely written!
~Sophie :)


Thank wala you! 😆

Originally posted by: Nisbahx

Amazing Amazing Amazing


Bapre. Thank you soo much 😆

Originally posted by: Eternal1234

awesome i loved it ...it was great write the next part soon can't wait to read further


Thank you soo much. next part in an hour i guess :P


Thank you! 😆

Originally posted by: grad2011

really nice plzz update soon!!!!


Thank you! 😳 😆


Thank you soo much. 😆


Thank you soo much 😳
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Thank you soo much


Originally posted by: kandygrover

Wow!!! Ur a fantastic writer. This was amazing.


Nay nay nay. am not. Truth is you guys are. You guys nahi hote toh mera kya hota?! 🤗


Thank you soo much 😳

Originally posted by: Meself

Damn my exams!!!! Because of them I'm missing out on such brilliant works both from you and Annie. It was so good and at the same time heart wrenching. And statutory warning for you: I am stalking you😉


Exams do come first. Me or my posts wont run away. AM all here. Come back Asap. I kindaa miss you. 🤗

Originally posted by: subhakmhl

luv this keep updating ...


Thank you soo much 😆

Originally posted by: sweetypie_16

Res :D
I was waiting for it :P


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OMG...I never knew you could write serious stuff too...You never fail to surprise me hun Appie? ;) :P It was so damn beautiful Appie! And so flawlessly penned :):)
Brilliant work...Loved every bit of it! :)
Zoe committed suicide?😭 Nahiii...:( Kya Appie? That's not done! Poor Asad :(
Over all...Wonderful!!! :D And the song was so beautiful!! :):)

Continue super duper sooonish...!!! :P 😆


Well i used to, at one point of time. but those were crap. that was in fanfiction.net 🤣
Noo i dont, afterall kisski Appii hoon 😉 🤗
Ohh my gosh itna psand aaya??!!

Yupp. A few more mins ka wait. :P

🤗

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

Wow

Read the beginning

This is awesome

I so love it

Gr8 job

Hope Zoya gets all well soon



Update soon

Luv

Mahi


its the starting deary, picture abhi bhi baki hai deary! 😉 😆 😆

Love yaa too 🤗

Originally posted by: taareyzen

claps ...claps ... clapsss 👏 wooow ya vrrry nicely rittn plzzz plzzz cntinue...


Thnak thank thank you!

Yupp soon i will 😳


* gulps*

😲

Yeshh your highness! ASAP i am! 😆 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
And the 100 comment is the Update 😆 😆

Thanks for the Stalking Lovelies. 🤗 🤗

I would have updated last night and earlier today, but whatever i wrote was just crapoo, 😕 soo tore that off wore this again. 😆 😆

Hope you guys like it! 😳 Nahi bhi toh chalega, i am waise bhi super hungry. Anything will taste delicious to me 🤣

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"Chot gehra nahi hai Mr Khan, there's nothing to be worrying about the injury. Its just a mere slash. But I am afraid. She is highly stressed but more over depressed-"

"Meri Zoya thik ho ho jayegi na?" Asad blurred out through his tears.
"Yess!! Absolutely Mr Khan!! Unhe kuch nahi huya hai. She is out of danger. But she is highly stressed which lead to the depression. I guess you know what is bothering her."
Asad frowned through his tears. He was at loss of words.
"Mr Khan please make sure that she is happy. Stress might be fatal this time. And yes no sharp objects near her reach this time." The doc pressed Asad's shoulder in assurance.
"Aur do please make sure that the medicines are given on time. And please take extra care of her. She really needs it! NOW'"
"Are you sure that we don't need to keep her any longer in the hospital?'"
"Mr Khan, Mrs Khan needs the care of a family at the present moment. Not a hospital."
"Jee!!" Asad said inaudibly as his tears blurred his vision.
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Teri kismat tu badal de
Rakh himmat bas chal de
Tere saathi mere kadmon ke hain nishaan
Tu na jaane aas pass hai khuda

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"Zoya beta--!!" Dilshad said lovingly as she caressed Zoya's hair while Zoya fluttered her eyes to open them. Asad meanwhile impatiently held Zoya's unhurt wired hand in his. His life seemed to have fled away leaving a dead materialistic body behind. He barely was breathing. To be precise his life has come to a stand still at Zoya's. This time it was worse than the previous. At Mangalpur, he was more at a relief because he hadn't realized that he had fallen for her. But this time he very well knew if anything happened but this time the tables had changed, the lock on the door was lost, Asad Ahmed Khan would be dead if anything happened to His Zoya Farooqqui. Wasn't fixing back her Jiju and Appi's VISAs a lame attempt to bring them here so as his mother would propose them with their marriage proposal? Although he had no intentions presently to want to marry as he wanted to give his Lady Love the happiness of courtship, but he knew the only cure to the pain she was in now, would have been their marriage. How madly he had been planning all the things subconsciously and how fate played its cards. If anything happened to Zoya now, even Allah couldn't save Mr & Mrs Siddique from his wrath, forget the IPC giving its verdict in a week. Asad Ahmed Khan would burn them alive just the like they did to his Zoya's Ammi, that even in front of public. Violent thoughts took over Asad. Zoya please wake up please. Asad rubbed her cold hand over his wet cheek. He died a living death while pulling Zoya out of that makeshift grave. He died another series of thousands of death in those 15minx when he feared she would never again response. But the worst death he ever died was the last night, this time waking up to find his Ammi screaming, and then finding her on the floor, bathing in a pool of her own blood. What else could be more horrifying than to find one self's love floating lifeless in their own blood? The only thing still echoed in his ears was a piercing hurt animal's cry, which was apparently his. Whenever he closed his eyes, he found her in that state .It was a living Golgotha. Rather than having his nights and thoughts haunted this way, all he wished for death to elope with him. He was just a thread away from losing her for the eternity both the times. Dismiss fear, he wished he had died, so that he didn't had to go through all these horrifying moments ever in his life, What if, if she never responded back?
Death was easier than to answer such a question.
Zoya wake up! Its freaking 2days dammit. How long more? Wake up and yell that you are all right. Wake up please. We need to go home. I need to tell you to shut up to your non stop blabbering. You need to call me a Mean Coldblooded Monster. We need to get married so that we can have extreme kids like us. I need to have you utter nonsense cake, its ages that i tasted it. Zoya wake up and tell me a shayeri i don't really feel good without it. Zoya please wake up. I did feel your little finger press against my cheek. Now Wake up now Please Zoya please. Apni shayri ke khatir utho please. Asad screamed at his inner demons. His patience was literary over with him.


Words might have had their win that time, Tired exhausted eyes greeted his at finally back to life ones. Asad smiled hard through his tears. More at the fact that she was fine, and her shayari had won. Pagal he mentally said. Dilshad too was elated. She muttered a prayer as she ran her fingers through Zoya's hair. Asad squeezed her hand back Zoya retuned a confused tired blank look, and before he could ask her a word she decided to submit herself to slumber.

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Mitt jaate hain sabke nishaan
Bas ek woh mitt ta nahin haye
Maan le jo har mushkil ko marzi meri haye
Ho humsafar na tera jab koi
Tu ho jahan rahunga main wahi
Tujhse kabhi na ik pal bhi main judaa
Tu na jaane aas pass hai khuda,

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"Zoya ab kaisi hai?" Rashid panic voice echoed from the receiver.
"Behosh hai Rashid. Khatra tal gaya hai. Hum usse ghar le aaye aaj. Ap phikar mat kijiye, Doc ne kaha hai woh jald hi bilkul thik ho jaygegi. Apke ghar mein sab thik hai na?" Dilshad a bit more concerned than usual.
"Pata nahi Dilshad,kya ho raha hai, Bala tall gai hai ya phir usska saya abhi tak mandra rahi hai, Humera toote chuki hai,magar sab thik ho raha hai."
"Sab thik ho jayega Rashid. App himmat mat hariyee. Jab bura waqt ata hai, toh sab bura hota hai, magar jab jata hai, sab burai apne saath le jata hai."
"Asad thik hai naa?"
"Shayad.Bahut mushil se apne aapko sambhale huye hai.Darr hai iss baar kahin'"
"Ammiii'"
"Rashid,ghar mein sab thik hai Asad bhi thik hai,ap bewajah chinta mat kijiye."
"Kal ho sake toh main Zoya se milne aunga, Asad se bhi kuch baat karlunga. Khuda Hafiz."
"Khuda Hafiz."
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Khud pe daal tu nazar, Haalaton se haar kar
Kahaan chala re
Haath ki lakeer ko, Modta marodta,
Hai hausla re

Tu na jaane aas pass hai khuda

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"Bhai-jaan. . ." Najma's hushed panicked voice was enough for Asad to have a heart attack again.
"Kya huya Najma?" Asad said as he abruptly disconnected the call he was attending to.
"Zoo-Zoyya kuch bol kyun nahi rahi? Aise sirf-sirf roo rahi hai. Bhaijan!!"Najma started sniffing."Unhe kya huya hai? Woh mujhse baat kyun nahi kar rahi hai? Woh aise toh kabhi bhi nahi behave karti Bhai jan!" Najma wailed in helplessness.
Asad's eyes spilled out again. How could he console his little sister when all he needed was to be consoled himself. "Kuch nahi huya hai Zoya ko Tamater. She needs some time. Just some. I promise she will be fine like before."Asad dried her tears as she hugged him.
Asad stood at the door of Zoya's room. He died another death. It was more pathetic than ever. Asad wished he never owned a heart. Zoya stared at blank.T ears rolled down her red puffed up cheeks wetting her grey gown, she was paler than the milk white walls of the room, her eyes seemed like they would bleed up blood now, and her body lifeless. Asad bit his lip until it he could taste his own blood. He reluctantly sat beside her. Those eyes didn't even flinch once to recognize his presence. He realized he was shaking himself while he cried. He looked down at her hands. The hurt one on a pillow, swollen like a log and the other connected to an IV, rested on her lap as she reclined on the bed stand. He gently took the wired one in his hands and gave it a squeeze, hoping her to respond. He knew she won't, and he was right. He ran his fingers through her hair to remove them from blocking her sight and cupped her cheeks while drying them. She still made no response to his touch. Asad could no longer take it. He pulled her into an embrace, rubbing her back as he hugged her. Tears wet his sleeve silently.
After a long while a horse murmur came, "I-I-wiss-ed-you-didnt-save-me-Asad"
The words sunk in Asad, stabbing all the possible stuff left inside his body. It was hard for him to breathe now. He literary choked. Asad cupped her face in his hands looking into her eyes he said "If anything ever happened to you i would have been dead! You know that very well! Why would you ever think of even hurting yourself for someone who deserves nothing but to be fed to the figs?"
"Mujhe apne aap se ghinn aatii hai Asad.I-"
"You know very well , I will- never ever-"
"Mere andar uss-uss insan ka khoon-khoon daud raha hai jissnee-jiiss-jissnee merr-meeriii Ammmii ka-"Zoya started hyperventilating.
Asad panicked "Zoo-Zooyaa relaxxx!!Zooo-Zoyya!! Calm down.Tumne apni Ammi kaa khoon daud raha hai---Zoyya do you hear me?? Naaajjjmaaa!! Aaammmiii!!! Zoyyaa---yes its your Ammii's blood kisi aur ka nahi trust me!! Ammmiii" Asad screamed as Zoya got into another panic attack. Asad hugged her hard caressing her hair. Najma and Dilshad came running. Dilshad understood the gravity of the situation and quickly rushed to Zoya. Asad landed Zoya safely in his mother's arms and fished the syringe out and injected her a sleeping pill into the IV. As the medicine started to take its toll on Zoya, her hiccups slowly died and she gave herself to slumber. Asad brushed her hair back and tucked her blanket to the chin, placing her hurt hand on the pillow carefully again so that she didn't hurt it again her sleep..

__________________

Ho shaam bhi toh kya
Jab hoga andhera
Tab paayega dar mera
Uss dar pe phir hogi teri subah
Tu na jaane aas pass hai khuda

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Jootas, Chapps, Tomatoes Andas Everything dedo! Mujhe sab Qubool Hai. 😆 😆


Link to the song : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uxvSFH4r1MU


Dedicating this to my Chaddie Buddie Sohini Dasgupta. All thanks to QH. The friendship of 16 years got revived back again. Love you Bunny. ❤️


❤️ Ankie


Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
reswa

first to comment yippie

unreswa!

AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING

FAN-FREAKING-TASTIC!

you made me cry girl! 😭

Zoya was so broken!

i could feel Asad's pain!

poor Zoe going through so much!

please pass me the tissues! 😭

and update soon!

loved this chapter! 👏
Edited by startruck - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Reswa

will be editing it after solving Math problems

Done with three chapters. Now I can sit online for sometime. *whew*

Net pe baithe maths kaise kiya jhata hai bhala? Do let me know :p

I just woke up after my afternoon siesta and came online. Saw your PM and just resed it bcoz I had to complete solving the three chapter by this evening🤔 Net pe baithke toh mujhe bhi Math solve karna nahi aata. 😆 Logout karna padta hai😆

Now coming to your update

Share your box of tissue paper with me Mera toh khatam ho gaya hai

Gosh!! This is so painful I can't see Zoya in so much pain.

Asad too has started to lose his composure

Hope Asad and his family succeeds in bringing her out of this mess soon

And above all, I wanted to say is, you are a fantastic writer

I enjoy reading your works.

Keep them coming like rocket

love,

Diya


Edited by asyaforlife - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Now this is called an update... I cant tell you how much I loved it, the "adhoorapan;' which was left before in your SS now its complete. Loved that emotional pain through which Asad went. Zoya's pain made him die awww... Dilshad was adorable... Great update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh wooow wt a story man... hattts off 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u r 2 gd writer yar... Its wondrful... Thnks 4 pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: startruck

reswa


first to comment yippie


I get that feeling right 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyaforlife

Reswa

will be editing it after solving Math problems



Net pe baithe maths kaise kiya jhata hai bhala? Do let me know :p
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
SUCH A FRIGGIN LOADED CHAPTER!
I'm already falling in love with this SS. :D Super job, Ankie.
This is really painful and moreover, REAL. I mean, this is no lol funny types. :P
But I'm loving the concerned Asad. :D Just wonderful! :D

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