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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome onee...
am feeling so sorry for general here am not getting angry on him for wht he did to shashii
and he doing all these to prevent curse tht to key is khush poor herr..
in this update i came to see tht some where in general he is good and he is
confused ..
update soon , thnx 4 pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
After reading this part i actually dont know why but i am feeling a soft corner towards Shyam even remembering what he did to Mr.Shashi and obviously what he will do in future!!!!!!!
I pity Shyam yes but i feel so sorry for Anjali!!!!
Her heart is something which is so pure and loving but he is playing with that heart of hers!!!!
Why cant he just love Anjali more and forget Kushi!!!!
Oh ya the curse!!!!!!!

Well its you Acquiline who is brilliant in writing Shyam's character and make us confused!!!!!
All credits go to you for such an amazing and tough character!!!!
I so feel that Shyam is in love with Anjali when he is with her!!!!!!
But then all thoughts about his curse make me curse him more!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -memorable-

am first yayeee

whats with the changing forms of these two...Anjali knows about the curse but then doesn't know what the cure is or rather who the cure is.
General didn't wanted to kill Sr. Gupta but when he will recover won't he b trying to rescue Khushi from General or He has planned something to make Gupta's mouth shut from some other means.
lets wait , watch and find out.


Congrats dear memorable on becoming the one to get the Throne this time! Meg was winning it in a row and its surprising that you, dear memorable, got the chance ! Really happy for you! And let me tell you, I am impressed by what you have written here about the General. And yes, what you wrote about Anjali is quite right. Clever, you are!

Originally posted by: sansu

hi!!!

the "nocturnal return" turned my confusions regarding shyam!!!...

he loves anjali...he really loves anjali...
how am i not able to hate him...*sigh*...

i can see him vulnerable...atleast a bit...
i can see he is human with a heart...
a heart with emotions..
a heart with turmoils...
a heart which has its own emotions of what is going on around it!!...

The General was confused and Lady Anjali asked, "When did it begin again?"

anjali is such asweet-heart!!>..
any person would be blessed to have someone like her with them...
she is a devoted, wife, lover n sister...
she loves him with her whole heart...she trusts him blindly...
im mesmerised that such a person can be understanding n not pesky!!>...

THAT GENERAL IS ONE HELL OF A LUCKY GUY!!!...but, he loves her n i feel it in this chapter...

"here, always for you"...she really will be there, no matter what...
but, what about him...wont his decisions affect her??...

"He won't die," assured the General confidently, his voice strained from not being used for some time...

he had not intended to harm him...
it was aspur of the moment reaction to have let the beast out...
did he control the beast in him to not harm master sashi...?

He shook his head and held her next to him and she smiled as she cuddled close to his warm chest...
he craves her warmth...
he needs her beside him...

or is he afraid to lose her...
afraid what may happen to her?...

sees her love, feels her love...wants to be worth for it!!...

atlast the legendary ball night ends!!...

a night that saw so many emotions..
it has left with a morning to see the after-math of whatever happened...

loved it!!!
waiting for more!!
🤗
🤗
🤗



Sansu, darling!! *puff* The effect of your bear-hugs is still weighing on my heart. Weighing lovingly, that is! And yes, about what you felt here. I was literally grinning like a kid who opened her Christmas present! The lines of yours that I have coloured stand for what I loved the best. A side of my General that you were all not able to see...
But there is more to the tale and I will not say what is right and wrong until the tale reveals it in time...

Originally posted by: LeenaRocks

Hi Dearies!!!


ohh did i tell ya how much i missed you guys!!!

This really really felt like a long time!!

Lin baby!! u just know when to show yourself!! to soothe the thrombin in my head!!
seriously just what i wanted to calm my nerves!! its been a hectic day!!

~~~Update~~~

wow!! did i just fall for the General again!??
Seriously ... i never felt a tinge of displeasure towards the nocturnal ...
I am confused as to not knowing what to feel for him...

But Anjali... you are the best lover.. wife... partner one can ever get ... who can understand all the pain and anguish your beloved...

No this cant be pretense for sure... Shyam of this tale is not the vile character of the show... i know it .. i can so feel it .. through Anjali's eyes... Atleast his love for her is not feigned...

i felt this sudden gush of blood flowing under my skin reading the update ... i felt for Anjali... i felt for Shyam... but what exactly it is ... i do not know at this moment ... all i know is i feel content ... mabbe its the tale... visiting the Inn that i missed ... mabbe its my comrades of the Inn... mabbe its Lin!! :)

Thanks a lot for the update Lin...
Indeed an eventful night that was ...

Yes bring it on baby ... i am all prepared for the next climax.. whatever thats gonna be!! :)

~Leena

This is OFFICIALLY my FAVORITE COMMENT for the last update. Dearest Leena, do you know something? I enjoy reading your comments and look forward to it. I love your lil' fellas who show up to address @ Arnav @ La @ Kushi or @ Anjali. But the line I love the most in all your comments is, of course, the @ Lin. And because they are put at the end of your comments, I cherish them more. Like dessert after a hearty meal.
However, this latest comment above. Devoid of your monkey business and devoid of any @s...
I was simply so moved by your love for the tale and for your excitement to be in the Inn that I actually leaned forward and kissed the screen on your comment...
Thank you. For loving me, Leena.

Originally posted by: snehashetty34

Unbelievable!!!!!!
whoa i made it on the same page... ahh it's a first for me..
shyam is really scary...
Lady anjali is such a sweet dedicated wife whereas her husband creepy monster...
you have enriched Anjali's character more than the original one...
waiting for the other climax..:)

Sneha dear! I am so happy to see you made it early today. You always used to be sad that you were late in commenting but this time you made it!!
Ah, you love my Anjali. Thank you very much dear. I am trying to keep to our IPKKND spirit but flourishing things in a more better way. I hope I can keep up with this quality though so as to make you happy as always!

Originally posted by: bea_rom

so he returned

anjali and him seem to have a greater connection than in the show
and, as I already said, I feel that he really cares for her; he said that he would always be there for her; it must count for something right?
so his obsession with khushi is only connected with his curse
he said that khushi's father WILL NOT DIE
does that mean that he was not at all planing to kill him but just scare him?

curious to know what will the next climax be

Bea! How are you dear? Ah yes, here there is some sort of a connection which I am building quite different from the show, dear. Its nice you noticed it and like it too. Thank you, dear. What he intended with Shashi you will have to wait and see but for now, I really like the thoughts you have in the direction of the General's true nature. To understand him that way, you have a wonderful heart, dear bea!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ShrutiPandey



..he was firm when he said "Master Shashi wont die!" Ohh you jerk! our Aqua wont let him die.. who the hell are you to say that! d'uh!

PS- is it just me..or the chapter was actually too small! 😛 never mind.. a PM from you is always a remedy to my boring schedule! 🤗


Shruti dear!! You won't believe how much I laughed reading the first line of yours here! So all credit is on me to not let Shashi die? * chuckle* Oh you are a sweet one, Shruti!! And I am so touched that you think a short update is worthy enough to make you smile! Thank you sweet Shruti!

Originally posted by: ASRandKKGSRFan

Hey!

Well-written.
Hmmm ... well that was quite an interesting update.
The events that lead to this ... Lady Lavanya's leaving ... Lord Arnav's gentle and caring self that one doesn't get to experience usually ... and now the General ... He seems sooo totally out of it ... like he is there in body, but his soul, mind and emotions are completely elsewhere ... the tension and suspense is really building up to the next climax ... I'm feeling pretty anxious ... I trust that whatever you will do next will be exceptionally well-written and will fit the plot as it should ... 😊😕

Hey there dear! Or should I say, Rabba Ve!! And you, my dear fiend, is one who actually read this chapter and saw beyond its words. You read the foreboding, the anticipation and the essence of what is to come...I really admire your gift to see it so, and I am excited to tell you of all that will come. Well, wait a while longer and you will hear of it... Thank you so much for everything, dear. And hope you are doing well. Your usual "Hope you are doing well" to me was not there but the "hey!" was!! *wink*

Originally posted by: KKKA

A QUIL ...LOVED PART 152...WILL COMMENT TOMORROW


FOR SOME VAGUE REASON I AM BACK IN BLUES GOD KNOWS

HOW AM I NOT IN GOLD I DEDICATED MY 1000TH POST TO YOU N

NOW I AM NO MORE IN GOLD ..[BOO HOO]

KEEP ME ALERT




KKKA


KKA!! I so love your comments always but I see that this time you were worried by the technical difficulties in IF. Don't worry dear. The MODs had been clearing off many old posts at once and so there were some technical errors which needed some time to resolve. Its okay now. And yes, I still remember the 1000th amazing post you gifted me! Special it is!

Originally posted by: vidya.sanjay

Really Shyam is so lucky to have an angel for his wife.Does he really love her ? and needs Khushi only to relieve him from his pains?
Waiting or the next update.


Vidya!! You know how happy I am to see you always! Told you, I always feel elated when I see the ones you had been with me from the beginning of my IF existence! Your questions are really wonderful for the answers to them will clear a lot of the mysteries, but I think I should wait for the tale to provide you the answers in the right way.

Originally posted by: vrinda-95

Amazing companionship between the couple!I am very surprised to see this side of their life.
The General says Master Shashi won't die with conviction; and Anjali is not suspicious,even after knowing his nocturnal wandering that night?

Hey there Vrinda! Hope you are doing well...and wow! You loved this side of their life too? Nice! Really nice! And very clever question, Vrinda. You are the only one who might get an answer to a question asked in this set of comments. Anjali is too innocent to be suspicious of her husband.

Originally posted by: yush-swt

wow...was about to miss it and dont know whether im late...would update soon..but really felt for anjali and i feel that shyam truly loves he as well..but his two timing is just not making me feel good for him..

And here comes Yush dear!! A sweet hearted one, you are!! Shyam is confusing eh? Well, don't worry, he will become clearer and clearer as the plot evolves...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...continue soon..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rockprincess123

Finally the Great General returnss!!! 😊

Anjali and Shyam are truly an ideal couple in this FF; their love for each other is clearly evident which is what I loove about the relationship that they both share. There is nothing but pure love ❤️.
Just like the show, Anjali could not be a more sweeter wife to Shyam; she is honest, beautiful and inderstanding and she loves Shyam dearly. Unlike the show however, Shyam is a kind, loving and honest husband who adores Anjali truly and is faithful to her by not looking upon Khushi or any other girl in a lustful way.
He only seems to want to use her for ridding him of his curse, which is one of the reasons why I take a BIGGG liking to his character!! 😛
Thinking back to his conversation with Shashi, i quote, he said "I need your daughter." What does he need Khushi to do?? It's obvious he loves Anjali dearly so I'm assuming marriage or the "PHYSICAL" is out of the question then right?? 😉 😉
Is his and Arnav's curse related by any chance?? Are the both to be "cured" in the same way or rather by the same person, in this case Khushi?? We will never know...
Whilst reading this chapter, I got the feeling that Shyam looked towards Anjali to find solace and peace from the night's events. He seemed to relax a lot after being in her company and it was soo nice to finally see that sort of love from Shyam's end where he turned to Anjali for guidance. Usually it is always the other was round with Anjali needing his help. Seeing as we never got to see their true love in the show, we got to live it through with this chapter so I thank you for that!! 👏 👏
Am I right in thinking that Anjali knows Shyam's transforming?? I may be wrong but that's what I picked up from their conversation.. only time will tell whether or not she actually does.
Waiting to find out what happened to Shashi. I hope he gets better some time soonn... Xx


When rockprincess is back, the Great General is also back! Love how you refer to him as "Great"! He is my favorite character in this FF and I am so happy to hear you like him too! Its too early to decide on his intentions but I will tell you, the lines I colored in your comment are simply amazing! Quite true, too! Now, the questions you asked are ones that were already asked by many others so I will answer them for you here: No, Arnav's and Shyam's CURSES are NOT related. yes, Anjali knows about his transforming. She is his wife, she should know, right?
I think I should write it more clearly about this transformation business coz there seems to be a lot of confusion related to it, rockprincess (M). Or maybe, I think I will let the tale move a little more coz the answers are soon to come find you! Take care, dear M.

Originally posted by: Mouktika

Hi Aquiline this one was indeed very nice

I loved the way u explained both Arnavs and Shyams psychological condition in one chapter

If Arnav was effected by Kushi to become soft towards Lady La ,Shyam on the other hand for sure knows his fault and didnt wanted to harm anyone but what iam confused abt is if both r cursed and Anjali knows abt their pain and condition she is the one who provides love ,comfort and security to both of them when they need but if Shyam loves to be with her like that why is he doing these things, is it one of the effect he has due to his curse or his past or is it his nature.

Arnav is waiting for a lifepartner like Anjali and he got it in Kushi but Shyam even after getting Anjali as his wife is not yet complete he also wants Kushi what a wonder both the males wants the same two females to be in their life.
Hope noone gets hurt in this process.

Bye.

Hey there dear Mouktika!!! I didn't know both their psychological conditions were written on one place until you told it! * chuckle* Thank you dear! I see that you worry about what is to happen but don't worry dear, all is fine. Even if some things may seem to be out of place or happening horribly, just know that once the storm passes, it will be a bright clear day soon and everything you will understand You will know why it all had to happen. I so love your thoughts, my dear. Because they mirror how much you care for my tale...thank you dear!



Originally posted by: selcouth-names

Whoops, i'm late.

I read the updates that i missed. It was amazing.
I still can't understand this Shyam. Guess i have always seen him in one dimension.
Completely evil guy or a very nice man. I cant seem to grasp that he is a guy with grey shades.

Anyways, i loved the way Arnav comforted her. Esp towards the end, he placed his hand on her head. And when she refused to look at him, he titled her chin. Those small nuances were brilliant.⭐️

I also loved the way La and Arnav parted on friendly terms. I hope she gets her due happiness through Aman.

So the night is finally over. I can't wait to see how Arnav-Khushi's relationship is going to develop considering that Akash-Payal like each other. 🤗

Dear selcouth, I LOVE tender nuances and I LOVE it more when my readers notice them. Thank you dear for loving the little details in my tale. And yes, Shyam is confusing you too, eh? Don't worry. I will make him more confusing in the future! *wink* So glad you could catch up with all the missed updates!

Originally posted by: kvarsha

awesome onee...

am feeling so sorry for general here am not getting angry on him for wht he did to shashii
and he doing all these to prevent curse tht to key is khush poor herr..
in this update i came to see tht some where in general he is good and he is
confused ..
update soon , thnx 4 pm 😊

And kvarsha! How are you dear? I am so moved by your reaction to the chapter! I feel like dancing about coz you are seeing the side of the General I am not showing yet. Your thoughts will change I know, and it will be tossed about. But remember this, he is my best creation!!


Originally posted by: anusada

After reading this part i actually dont know why but i am feeling a soft corner towards Shyam even remembering what he did to Mr.Shashi and obviously what he will do in future!!!!!!!

I pity Shyam yes but i feel so sorry for Anjali!!!!
Her heart is something which is so pure and loving but he is playing with that heart of hers!!!!
Why cant he just love Anjali more and forget Kushi!!!!
Oh ya the curse!!!!!!!

Well its you Acquiline who is brilliant in writing Shyam's character and make us confused!!!!!
All credits go to you for such an amazing and tough character!!!!
I so feel that Shyam is in love with Anjali when he is with her!!!!!!
But then all thoughts about his curse make me curse him more!!!!!!!


Anusada!! Do you know, dear? You are a very SPECIAL person to me. There is something about your comments that reach out to be and tell me I am worth it. They make me happy and blessed to be alive! Thank you dear! And yes, one more thing. You see my characters not because they are written but because they are created. By me. That is something not everyone can say. There are a few of my readers who can do it. And I cherish such thoughts because then I don't feel invisible anymore. Thank you dear! And so happy to see you confused about Shyam as well. That is the writer's victory. To make the readers confused and only at the end to make it all clear. So I think I am not that bad in creating confusion, after all!
Take care, dear Anusada!


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rockingsoni

Wonderfull...

awsome...
Lady Anjali is just soo naive...
So, Seems like General knew that Master Gupta wont die, because of his attack..
Waitting to see the love birds..
Lin, m eager to know about Master Gupta's health...
update soon, dear..

Rocking Soni! I am always happy when I see your "likes" on other comments as well. Shows how much you care to be around in the Inn, listening to the others as well. Thank you dear!
And yes, I will assure you of Master Gupta's health as soon as I update next...

Originally posted by: saga_twilight

The same s0ng which I had p0sted at the beginning 0f the ball
"At the ball at the ball
There was a princy at the ball
And Cinderelleee...was the maiden...at the balll!!!"

Ah! A salutation made at the start is sung at the finale too!! Love you for this, saga!! Its like you were compering for the ballnight!

Originally posted by: yashal_khan

So general knows that master shashi is alive wht will he do ? Hope lord arnav comes to know early reason behind sahshi health ... Love this side of lady ajnali n general life 😊

Thanx for pm
Continue soon

Chochoo! I am so happy you loved the last chapter! Wait and see how all your questions will find answers in the coming chapters, dear!!


Originally posted by: smartgirl9009

anjali ix sooo sweet... shyam behavior ix so confusing n of course, horrifying...but above ov all, the update ix ,as usual, AWSM...
n
there ix no need to thnx us. Instead of we , the readers, should thank u 4 penning down such brilliance...
continue soon
n
thnxxx 4 da pm...


Smartgirl! Let me tell you, I am liking you more with every comment you post. Special friends of mine I am winning here!! I must thank you all, shouldn't I? For making me not stop in between and continue with the tale even after the show ended? So yes, the biggest THANKYOU goes out to my readers!! And especially to you, dear!

Originally posted by: lakshmim_84

So the general is sure that master Gupta will be alright... That means he purposely didn't hurt much... But his obsession with khushi... Not sure if he is a negative character or just a grey one

The confusion will be there dear Lakshmim. We have only seen him as a VERY irrational and VILE character in the show. It will take time to understand him in this FF. So its okay.

Originally posted by: moon8387

Finally an end to the ball night... A closure to the most happening night only to pave its way for some more action!!! I like this...

This update had General Shyaam in a completely different light... I dont know what to say...
He loves Lady Anjali... Khushi is his need and Anjali his love??? Is this the equation?
And Lady Anjali... How much a woman can love!!! It amazes me to see such a woman whose heart is so full of love that she makes everyone feel loved and cared for...
She loves Lord Arnav and General Shyaam... But that doesnt limit her love to them only... She loves Ram, Lavanya, Khushi, Payal, Aakash and who not!!! A heart capable of so much love is a heart that is to be treasured...
Absolutely love you for etching each character with so much life!!! You truly are a genius storyteller :)

Ah moon!! I know you are often very busy like many others but I always look forward to your thoughts! You have made me happy with these like insights of yours. Thank you for loving my creations, dear moon. And I really like how you made the "equation" but as to if it is right or wrong, I will let the tale make it more clear to you...
Thank you dear for the love you shower on me!!

Originally posted by: neevankrish

TAT WAS A VERY SHORT UPDATE

Originally posted by: shubhadask

Short but sweet update...

Originally posted by: flowers4u

fantastic update...the ball was awesome...alot happened...looking forward to read more...keep on writing...

Originally posted by: farha5556

wow nice,how shyam done that thing to kushis father and how confidnt he is,lovd it,i think the beast in between shyam and arnav is so powerful that they will get hurt by this,continue soon.

Originally posted by: 123vava

amazing 😛😛😛😛😛😛

Originally posted by: seshatree

shyam is unpredictable..so scary..

Originally posted by: Mxk3444

Longest but most amazing-est night ever!!!

Originally posted by: hiahmed

apt climax. all the characters available on the big night

Originally posted by: siamesecat

wonderful update as usual. by the way, what if by kate winslet was beautiful too!

Originally posted by: rini_kat

nice update but its very small

Originally posted by: Annie12

short and sweet update... though missed Arhi ;)


Originally posted by: SilverFairy

The Ball Night Ended. Conti Soon Dear.

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

nice update...continue soon..😊


Thank you dears! All of you!! Your presence in the Inn and your love for me and my tale makes my moments quite cherished! Shijina missed you a lot, you just be too occupied these days! hatelove, angeldream, neevankrish, shubhadask, sweet flowers4u, farha who came though she was quite busy, 123vava, seshatree, Mxk3444 who loved the night a lot, and as hiahmed pointed out, every character was there. Even a glimpse of the Dark Lady, eh?
siamesecat, so sweet of you to hear the song and tell me you liked it dear!!
Thankyou to rini_kat, Annie12, SilverFairy, and Surya.Ravi!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Rabba ve dear Aquiline... an intriguing chapter about the most curious couple of Arhasia...

The rain poured heavily all through the night and thunder roared angrily over the sky

Was Mother Nature crying out of grief and simultaneously voicing out her fury and disapproval as loud thunders... upon the harm inflicted upon an innocent soul by a cruel monster that night... and the awaiting storms to be faced by a lot of innocent souls in Arhasia... all due to the selfish act of one cunning person, who is still gliding out freely in the dark sky without any fear or remorse for his deeds... and warming up himself in his wife's pure, protecting love...

For the eighth time, she walked towards the door, her hand reaching out to open it, when it was suddenly opened from the outside and she stepped back as the General walked in, dripping wet from the rain.

Was it about the future? Hinting about Lady Anjali's eighth month of pregnancy... and the shocking events to be followed...

He stood there in the bath chamber, naked, and staring into the empty space before him.

She looked at him, trying to understand,

and he walked towards her slowly, his hands reaching for the towel. She let him take it and watched as he began drying his hair.

But she saw how his hands were weak

and could not do it quite well, so, without a word, she took the towel from him and dried his hair for him, as he stood passively, lost in his thoughts.

Again, was it hinting that in the future, there will come a time when the General will be standing all vulnerable and exposed, all alone helplessly and his wife will understand his pitiable state and will hand over the key of cure to him... upon witnessing that he is unable to do that by himself, she will step in and try to heal him off his curse...

The General was confused and Lady Anjali asked, "When did it begin again?"

The curious light in his eyes died and he looked away.

Im very curious here to know whats going on in his super-calculative mind. So, he didn't bother letting his wife know about his transformation as his bro-in-law already figured out that... so the damage is already done... no use in hiding it further... also, Mas. Gupta has seen him transform, though he had successfully silenced him temporarily... I guess, Mas. Gupta will not regain back his health anytime soon, atleast not until he succeed with his selfish intentions with Khushi... The General may not have harmed him to death, but definitely played his part in making Mas. Gupta inactive temporarily...

She helped him get into the bed and though he was naked, he was not feeling cold. His body was extremely warm now even though he had been in the rain for so long and she joined him in the bed, cuddling next to him.

"Tell me," she asked him in a low voice, "Does it hurt?"

He looked at her and said nothing.

He pulled her to him and dug his face into her long hair

.

How selfish???!!!! He is vulnerable and cleverly taking advantage of his doting wife's pure love to soothe himself, gain strength and protect himself from the coldness of his curse...

Gen. Jha... though his actions look like he is all weak and vulnerable, in a pitiable state, and trying to seek solace from his beloved... though he has mentioned at times that he only need khushi for curing him from the distress caused by his curse, I sense some high level of selfishness in both his love for Lady Anjali and his supposed need for khushi... its just that he need their presence in his life only for his comfort... he prioritize ONLY himself without caring for the feelings of the persons who love and adore him...

Edited by hoopoe - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: hoopoe


For the eighth time, she walked towards the door, her hand reaching out to open it, when it was suddenly opened from the outside and she stepped back as the General walked in, dripping wet from the rain.

Was it about the future? Hinting about Lady Anjali's eighth month of pregnancy... and the shocking events to be followed...

Again, was it hinting that in the future, there will come a time when the General will be standing all vulnerable and exposed, all alone helplessly and his wife will understand his pitiable state and will hand over the key of cure to him... upon witnessing that he is unable to do that by himself, she will step in and try to heal him off his curse...


rabba vey hoopie!!...

i love ur comment as usual, you are giving me a 360 degree turn in viewing this chapter...
the words n thoughts you have used is really beyond me...

not even i single thought about seeing the general in a wrong light crossed me when i read it...but, im very glad to have read a very different perspective about the situation...

n the "8th month"...very much possible!!...

n then, your thoughts that , when a time comes wherein the general can be vulnerable n she will be there for him is really amazing!!>...

maybe this is what was mentioned in her words...
"I am here, my love," she whispered fondly into his ear, "I am always here for you."
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Originally posted by: hoopoe

He stood there in the bath chamber, naked, and staring into the empty space before him.

She looked at him, trying to understand, and he walked towards her slowly, his hands reaching for the towel. She let him take it and watched as he began drying his hair.

But she saw how his hands were weak and could not do it quite well, so, without a word, she took the towel from him and dried his hair for him, as he stood passively, lost in his thoughts.

Again, was it hinting that in the future, there will come a time when the General will be standing all vulnerable and exposed, all alone helplessly and his wife will understand his pitiable state and will hand over the key of cure to him... upon witnessing that he is unable to do that by himself, she will step in and try to heal him off his curse...

The General may not have harmed him to death, but definitely played his part in making Mas. Gupta inactive temporarily...

He is vulnerable and cleverly taking advantage of his doting wife's pure love to soothe himself, gain strength and protect himself from the coldness of his curse...

Gen. Jha... though his actions look like he is all weak and vulnerable, in a pitiable state, and trying to seek solace from his beloved... though he has mentioned at times that he only need khushi for curing him from the distress caused by his curse, I sense some high level of selfishness in both his love for Lady Anjali and his supposed need for khushi... its just that he need their presence in his life only for his comfort... he prioritize ONLY himself without caring for the feelings of the persons who love and adore him...


Now, we do we love all Hoopoe's comments. Because there is wisdom and thought in it. There is intuition. There is depth. And then there are strands of truth...
Hoopoe, you must know you have a great FAN following your magical melodiousness...and I am among them. But I shall not tell more about this chapter in fear it will reveal more of what I intend to let expose when the time is right...
Like I said before, I am always silently aware of all that you guys discuss but I won't be able to intrude for the Writer cannot give answers until the answers are visible on the Chapters...Then I shall come.

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