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Posted: 12 years ago

Hai dears,😊
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special thanks to suhana,rhu90 n eza..
PART 41

Maan woke up n saw jaanu stirring in sleep to wake..geet was still sleeping..maan took jaanu n moved to washroom with slow steps..he made her brush n gave bath to her..he dressed up her in a jean n top..n covered her with another overcoat..it was cold outside..he made his way out to kitchen..dadi was sipping coffee..

Maan:dadi,u made it..i thought to make..

Dadi:no problem maan..

Maan left jaanvi to dadi n made her choco horlicks..he made black coffee 4 himself..n settled beside them taking the paper..soon adi n vicky with priya also joined them..

Adi:what happened this ladies are sleeping too much..

Maan:time difference.let them sleep till we all get ready..then its not going to be easy..

Adi smiled knowing his plan..vicky scratched his head..dadi thought that some mischief is going in their mind..she remained silent..

All got ready

Dadi:are u all going for outing today..

Maan:yes dadi..first preference to kids..so disney land..

Vicky:what i will do there..

Maan wacked him:u r also a kidna..u will enjoy..haina adi..

Adi:haan haan..we saw it yesterday too na maan..how he was playing with kids in plane for hours..chal mere gode..chal chal chal..ab chal disney land..

Vicky:u both are teasing me..hu..

Dadi:maan..i thought to take rest for today too..i feel tired..so u all go..

Maan:its ok dadi..i have arranged servants..they will come around 9..they will help u..u take rest..im there na..i will take care of all..

Dadi:ok..

Then the scream came from both rooms as expected..

Geet:maaan..

Pinky:aadiii..

All closed their ears to save their eardrums including kids..

All looked at the fuming girls ..who came out of their rooms..

Geet:maan..where is my dress..

Pinky:geet,urs too..adi were is my dress..

Geet:and what is this maan..how can this be in our room..all are modern dresses..

She threw a dress on him..

Pinky:mine too geet..

Maan n adi smiled at each other.she saw it..

Pinky:so,this both have planned it...

Maan n adi smiled sheepishly at each other..n said..

If u want to come out with us,u must wear it..

Geet:maan..no ways..

Pinky:no adi..give my salwars..

Geet:i want my saris..

Maan adi:this is america dears..so u both will come with us in modern dress..

Geet:dadi..tell him na..

Pinky:how can we wear those jeans n shirts..

Vicky:uff..jeans..i thought something else..

He was wacked by both geet n pinky..

Pinky:what u thought..

Geet:say what u thought..

Vicky:mini skirt or frocks..

Geet:vicky,chi chi..how dare u think..she threw the things which came in her hand n

He was again doomed between the two..n maan n adi were laughing loud..dadi was happy seeing all smile after long days..priya n jaanvi were clapping their hands seeing vicky beaten up..

Vicky:pls pls..bhai asked only jeans to wearna..y u r creating scenes bhabhi n di..

Geet:tum na..chado..i havent wear those types of dresses..till now..

Maan:everything has a first geetu..pls..go n get ready soon..

Adi:haan pinky,its getting late to go for disney land..see the kids are also ready.

Geet pinky:Humari dress

Maan adi:u have to come in jeans only..or u have to go back to aircraft..

Geet pinky:what?

Maan:we left ur luggages purposely in plane itself..u can get back only when we reach back..

Dadi:beta..u will look odd if u wear indian clothes here..for ur husbands wish wear it na..

Now they cant say no too

They stamped their foot n went to get ready..maan n adi hi5ed each other..

Geet n pinky looked at each other..they had no way..they went inside ..it was nearing an hour both didnot come out..maan went to check geet n adi to pinky..both were dressed in jeans ..but were too shy to come out of their rooms..

When maan entered geet hide behind the bed post..maan was nearing her n she was stepping back in shy..maan pulled her infront of him..she hide her face in hid chest..n was beating him with her small fists..

Geet:u are too bad..mujei bohut sharam aarahi hai..ab mei kese bahaar aasakthi hoon..

Maan:u look so beautiful geetu..see urself..

Geet:na baba..i cant see..n i am not coming with u out from house..

She was totally red..

Maan:but i know how to take u out..

In a swift moment.he scooped her in his arms n came to hall

Geet:maan..chodiye pls..sab bahaar hai..dadi..vicky bhai..pls chodiye na..

He did not listen to her plea n made her stand in feet..

Geet stood behind maan covering herself n maan was moving..

Dadi:geet beta..u r looking gorgeous..why are u hiding behind him..

Geet nervously came infront..pulling her tops down..like it will stretch..

She saw pinky also coming out from her room same like her red n nervous..

Vicky whistled..

Hmm my di n my bhabhi looks pretty..aaj tho sari americans will be behind them..

Geet n pinky threw the cushions on vicky..

Vicky:hmm..kya zamana hai..i gave complement only..u both look se...

He bite his tongue swallowing his words..Now maan n adi gave an angry glare to him..

Priya n jaanu:mama u look like papa..

Haha..is this a complement..

Dadi:ok..its getting late..go enjoy n come soon..

Maan:ji dadi..

Geet n pinky looked at each other..they have been cornered..n they have no way ..so they walked behind them..

All entered disney land..

The kids were very excited seeing their favourite cartoon charactors dancing before them..

Geet n pinky also were normal after they saw all girls dressed more short dresses..atleast they are dressed in jeans which is gud looking..with kids n mens around n watching the fun around them,they forgot their sorrow..thats what maan n adi wanted..at the end of the day all were tired..they had their dinner out ..priya slept in vickys arms..jaanu was still enjoying the sight seeing..n the colourful lights n the tall buildings..they returned home..

Maan:vicky,priya ko dadi ke pass sulado..

Vicky:ji bro..

Geet:maan,i will check dadi n prepare jaanus horlicks n will come..

Maan:ok..till then i will fresh up..

Adi n pinky entered the room..

Maan called them in phone..

Maan:erm..jiju..there is another room inside ur room..check in today there..gud night..

Maan kept in hurry..

Adi wondered why maan was struggling to speak..he opened the adjacent door ..it was a surprise for both..

Adi:now i got why maan was not able to speak..afterall i am his jiju..

Adi:pinky,do u love ur bhai's surprise..

How can she speak when she was all sharam se pani pani..the outing n now this surprise has made her totally forget her pain..

Vicky went to his room after making priya sleep beside dadi..he kept pillows side to her so,she doesnt fall down..geet checked dadi n asked her if she took her dinner n tablets..then she went to kitchen making choco horlicks n gave to jaanu..after she had it..she washed the container n kept it..

Geet:ok,now lets go to sleep..

Jaanu:mama,will we go tomorrow also to see cartoon..

Geet:no baby,tomorrow we will go to see water falls..

Jaanu:water falls kya hai..

Geet:there will be water flowing from up..bohut saraa pani hogi..

Jaanu:oh..hum bohut masti karengi na mama..like today..

Geet:haan beta..

Both entered their room..

Maan has changed n was watching tv..seeing them he quickly changed the channel..he looked like a thief hiding something..

Jaanu:hai..cartoon..she sat next to maan n geet too sat in the couch exhausted ..

Maan was looking at geet..she can feel his piercing gaze on him..he cleared his throat few times..to get her attention n to say something which did not came out of his mouth..geet looked at him..he was nervously looking at geet n then at jaanu..

Maan again cleared his throat..

Geet:maan..what s that..

Maan sighed...

Maan:ermm..wo..make jaanu sleep..haan..she must be tired..

Geet:but she didnt seem so..see how she is watching tv..

She said without knowing his plight..

Maan came n sat next to her..

Maan took jaanu n placed in geets laps..

He neared geets ears n his hands were busy lifting her shirt n making her bossom visual to jaanu..

Maan:for the first time i feel its not wrong to feed her..

She turned looking at him..his dark eyes desired her..his hot breathe falling on her nape..

Geet:ma..aa..n..

Maan:geetu..i want u soon with me..with jaanu around..i cant make out..

He saw jaanu who has slept already now..nibbling geets buds..

Maan:dont u want to know why i am desperate..

He changed the channel which he was watching..it was nearly xrated..who ever watch can turn up soon..

Geet lowered her eyes..

Maan:jaanu sogayi..hmm..u place her on bed n come with me..

Geet slowly made jaanu sleep on bed..before she turn up maan scooped her n took her to the next room..it was decorated fully with red roses n petals with candles..

Geet:maan..ye..

Maan:our HM special..i hv arranged for adi n pinky too..we both will start our journey without fear n sorrow again...

Maan placed her on bed n joined her..

Maan looked at her lips..she was blushing seeing him like that..he took her juicy lips n devoured it hungrily..he bite her to open her lips..his hands hurriedly taking off her shirt n jean..

Maan:first time u looked outstanding in western out fit..

Geet:maan..dont tease me..

Maan:really,all must beg before ur beauty..

Geet hided her face in his neck..her hands on his bare abs..moving up n down..slowly her hands went inside his vest to feel him more..

Maan took her lips once again..n soon they started to love each other madly..maan was turned up to extent..he did not leave geet the whole night..the room was hot with their moans n kisses..

Here adi n pinky also forgot their pain n started to live their life again..both pairs were drugged in the effect of love..that can keep them away from any sorrows..both pairs were wishing one thing..a baby in their life again to fulfil their life..

Bechara vicky was turning in his bed left n right thinking about his loving vaishali...dreaming he will come with her for next vacation or after marriage..

precap:all back to india n facing problems...

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8.3.2013..8.00 pm

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Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


wow lovely cute update.. te way my maaneet ki family vacation was so lovely.. te way my maan and adi planned for they wifes was lovely.. jeans and tops oh god geet is shying was so lovely.. te way my maan carrying her to hall and te way vicky commenting and te way both girls hitting him was so lovely.. my maaneet ki happiness was back to them.. te way all are enjoying in disney was lovely.. te way my maan planned surprise for adi and pinky was lovely.. te way my maan was waiting for his geet but buddhu geet without knowing my maan intention she is making him mad was lovely.. te way my maan planning for his geet was lovely.. my maaneet for hm with they family, superb family..i love te update didi
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update

maan and adi did a good job

atleast they forgot thier pain

but nw again problems
sumaiyariya thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
tho ye hay maan nd adi ka idea" modern dress"😉

kids: mumma u looking like papa🥳🤣
poor vicky hamesha pitta hay 😆😆.
all r enjoying nd forget theri pain.😛😛
awee maan too naughty.😆.maaneet roamntic night😳😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome di
di very short hm 😒
n d precap is scary what prob?
cont sun di
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update dear loved it thx
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice one... Pinky n geet fit this saying jesa desh vaisa besh lolzzz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
medern dress for ladies n
poor vicky aiwe hi h ws beaten😆😆😆
j jiju
n apne lioye planning
wo toh phle 😆😆 forgot their pain 4 sometime..
wawaiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
Valli ur updates have become tooo short dear ...y
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice di 😊

wow maan n adi stole geet n pinky's clothes😆

poor vicky😉

maan plans hs hm very well😳

but update short hai

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