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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyvirmanians

Shaiko n Manvi looking too cute...

N Our VirMan symbolising intense relations... ❤️
With ointment btween four of them...
Lovely banner ❤️

You are very true here Sana 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mamaian

Aweee!
I just cme thru ur story n man seriously lovd it genuinely
the cncept the way it is written is so gud
i hope virman cnfess their feeilings soon n manvi once again tell virat abt everythng happend wid her! My eyes got watery ready whatever happend to her poor grl!
I justwhav doubt does shaiko n manvi had feeling for eachother or they were friends only plz clear tis to me
n plz pm me ur updates
thank u

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey lovely girls... how you all are doing??? look I am with one more update... now read and comment please 😳


PART : 8

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"Manvi I am doing all these only for you. Please don't hate me. I will die." He screamed under lips and sat there closing his eyes just to welcome another morning of his misfortune.

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Sometimes, When we put ointment to our wound''.. For the first some minutes it burns the skin'But slowly and gradually that very ointment heals the wound. Life is so unpredictable'.

The morning breeze brought happiness and refreshment to the world again. But many souls belongs to world were trying hard to find any happiness.

Time: It was almost in the morning.

Place: The vast roof of Rehman Mansion.

Virat went upstairs to get some fresh air. When he saw Abaan there, leaning on the wall and lost in any deep thought.

"Abaan!" he called out. But no response, this time he called out little loud, "ABBAN!!!"

Abban turned little flabbergasted.

"Yes" he replied.

'Look I am not here to give you long suggestion or knowledge' But I guessed something between you and Manvi'.Abb batao ge ya batane pe majboor karun?( Now will you tell me? Or I have to make you tell?)??

"Bade possessive ho rahe? Aur hoge kyun nahi? Patni hain wo tumhari!!!(Possessive huh? After all she is your wife" Shaiko said little sarcastically.

"haan hun main possessive' she is my friend!!!" he said in a bit angry tone.

'I saw'. Really Man (grabbing his hand) I am very thankful to you. Thank you very much for taking care of her." Shaiko said with teary eye.

Virat narrowed his eyes. Little shocked to his reaction.

"Didn't manvi tell you anything' she is not that kind of girls who hides things'" Shaiko stated.

'May be my mistake! May be I am not trustworthy' Virat thought to himself and left a sigh.

"look I can't blurt out something now, believe me, all I am doing is for her!!And I am I am so happy for her, you really love her a lot.."

"Hey don't live in any dream world' the man who loves her are YOU!!! And I can feel it now after talking to you." Virat said back.

"Are you sure you don't love her???? But I can see the love in your eyes, in your every attitude" Abaan stated.

"You know what dude??? It is really not that important that who loves her' Whom she loves is way more necessary' And she loves YOU" Virat said at last piercing his heart.

Virat please do understand she needs you. You have to stand be her always. Please and now I can't disclose you anything but trust me, I am doing all these only for her.

"I understand" Virat said patting his shoulder.

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One and half months back

"You are now perfectly fit." Smiled Heena.

Shaiko just smiled back.

"Shaiko?? You are ready to leave now??? " said a man.

"yes, uncle I think he is ready." Heena said smiling at Shaiko.

"Heena , go and make the discharge paper ready and am coming with him" Mr. Mansur rehman said.

Yes, uncle" Heena left again glancing at Shaiko.

"Shaiko? Erm.. I want to share something with you"

"Yes Sir, please" Shaiko asked.

"You already guessed I think. Erm, Heena is head over heels in love with you."

Shaiko opened his mouth to protest just then Rehman Started talking "And don't ever try to reject, you know' she is suffering from Leukemia."

"Yes you heard it right, Leukemia' May be your love can do any miracle.. Please for her"

"But I have my other responsibilities Mr. Rehman. I have my mannu. She too needs me"

"Uncle we are ready' come soon'. "Shouted Heena from outside.

"Let's go now." Rehman said and they two left the hospital.

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Present

Manvi wakes up quite late. She is now three and a half months pregnant. Her flat belly is changing to a soft ball gradually. But she became thinner, as she was not taking proper healthy foods from last three months. So, little bit fat of her belly is show able to all.

She was feeling damn hungry and she just wanted to grab any spicy food. But how? And where will she found??? She cursed God for making that kind of serious situation in her life.

She took and warm bath and fitted herself to her salwar kammez but to her surprise her kammez tightly fitted around her bottom. She started panicking. Now every people will get to know, about her condition. And moreover her Shaiko is not here for her. Should she discuss her problem with Virat? Uff She was feeling like dying. She wanted to cry cry and cry a lot.

She left her room and went to the kitchen of course for some food.

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"Beware Abaan, yesterday Heena went unconsuos and you were not there?? WHERE THE HELL YOU WENT THEN?" Mr. rehman asked abaan aka shaiko.

"wo Mr. Rehman I am sorry and he looked at Heena with pleading eyes.

"Koi baat nahi uncle, main abb thik hun' aur Abaan kabhi mujhe chod ke nahi jaa sakta, hain na(looking at him)" she said.

"hum" he agreed.

Just then Heena started coughing and Shaiko excused himself to grab some water for her. he went to the kitchen.

He saw his Mannu was finding food and pouting for not getting her favorite. He smiled himself. For some moment he forgot the reason for which he was in kitchen then.

"Mannu" he called.

The smiles and pouts faded in that instant from her face, when he called her. Her eyes welled up. Shaiko went to her and said, "Mannu, bahut accha hain tumhara pati' he will be with you always'. I am really happy for you"

She didn't protest just kept sobbing. After some minutes of silence she uttered, "He is not my husband. He is just acting''. Shaiko you promised me, you will take care of this child, I don't wanted this child but you made me understand then''. And now you are not with me" she said which left Shaiko speechless.

"Manvi? He is not your husband???" he just uttered in shock but his expression changed instantly when he was hit by a strong muscular fist. He looked up at him. Viraat. "So you will still say you don't love her?" Shaiko smiled rubbing his bruised face.

Manvi looked up at Virat in shock. Virat just looked down to escape from this awkward place.

"where are you abaan?" Mr. Rehman walked to the kitchen and got the shock.

He looked at Abaan held his wrist and said, "Come with me, I have something important to discuss with you" they left virat manvi alone in the kitchen.

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"I am shocked' you really pregnant??? "He said with shock

A lone tear escaped from her eyes.

"That too with a guy, who can't even take the responsibility of yours???" he said in disgust.

"What??? NO'. Shaiko is my best friend. How could you think me sooo cheap???" she said. She was hurt; she never thought she will saw disgust in Virat's eye ever in her life.

"Then for God sake. Tell me, who was that behind your this condition???" he almost shouted shrugging her shoulders. That was the limit. Manvi broke down and finally uttered everything to him. From her birthday till today.

Virat looked away. He was shivering in anger. His eyes were red. He broke the vase which was kept beside the fridge. Manvi was hell shocked with his behavior.

"He hates me; he can't tolerate me in front of him. He hates me." Manvi couldn't stand a more minute. She rushed towards the door.

"Manvi''." He called spreading his hands but she was left till then. Far away from him, mentally and physically.

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I will wait to know which scene you liked most 😳

Guys may be you all are not liking the way the story is moving then please feel free to tell me... I will mold the story in other way... I am writing for you guys hain na????
But if you don't give any feedback really hurts a lot
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Edited by preity_d - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
RES 😛
UNRES 😃
Preity awesome update ⭐️⭐️👏👏.. Loved it veryy much..
I loved the beginning of the update.. " Sometimes, When we put ointment to our wound''.. For the first some minutes it burns the skin'But slowly and gradually that very ointment heals the wound. Life is so unpredictable'. The morning breeze brought happiness and refreshment to the world again. But many souls belongs to world were trying hard to find any happiness." - Beautifully written 👏👏👏.. But my favourite part in this update is definitely Virat-Shaiko conversation ❤️.. "Abb batao ge ya batane pe majboor karun" - Kya line hai boss 😉.. Possessive Virat ❤️.. "'May be my mistake! May be I am not trustworthy' Virat thought to himself and left a sigh. " - Awww dukhi Virat 😔.. Preity kyun tu Virat ko itna pareshan kar rahi hai 😆..
"Are you sure you don't love her???? But I can see the love in your eyes, in your every attitude" Abaan stated. "You know what dude??? It is really not that important that who loves her' Whom she loves is way more necessary' And she loves YOU" Virat said at last piercing his heart. " - Awesome⭐️⭐️ .. Love both of them .. Both Virat and Shaiko love Manvi but their love is not selfish.. They want her happiness only ❤️.. I think I should stop now.. I can go on and on about them 😆..
I dont know why but I didn't really like Mr. Rehman in this update 😕..
So Heena is suffering from Leukemia.. and thats why Shaiko is getting married to her.. He doesn't want to break her heart.. But that is not the only reason haina?? There is something more 😉..
Feeling really bad for Manvi 😔.. She already suffered a lot.. And now she has to go through this pregnancy phase also.. Loved the way you have portrayed her emotions 👏👏..
So now Shaiko knows that Virat is not Manvi's husband.. I wonder what he will do now .. Finally Manvi told Virat everything.. Thats great 😃.. But she misunderstood his reaction.. But its okk.. Now Virat will pacify her 😉.. And Im eagerly waiting for that .. Thank you for the pm.. Please continue soon 😆.. Take care 🤗🤗
Edited by meera.chaudhuri - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preity_d

Next update will be in new thread...
Now how will it possible...??? only readers knows 😉😆

Yeh thread khatam hote hi update milega na?? 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Preity awesome update 👍🏼.. Par main kal unres karungi 😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Preity awesome update 👍🏼.. Par main kal unres karungi 😉😆

okk... no problem 😉😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ashishi

Ye kya baat hui bhai

kaunsi baat???
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