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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: archa2810

u r too precious a buddy to lose just due to some delay in commenting... just inform me when u want the PMs n u'll get them...


i loved ur latest update... m anticipating a big twist coming up... do update soon dear 👏



yup...sure dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nichuss

part c


o m g...who ths lady...

why she concerned abt kushi...?

is she kushi's mom...sis...or aunt...

waiting for the further...

back to kushi...arnie...was infod by arju

kushi met with accident and is in hosp...

want to knw...hw kushi will react seeing the

brthrs




umm...before Khushi someone else will react..guess who???
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kuts

Hey.. Welcome back.. F.D.R..


Missed u.. I was scared thinking u left just my works Only.. 😭
U dont even know that i dedicated a teaser to u.. of hidden secret..

😔

Anyway.. leave all that.. am really happy k ur back.. 😃
Am also less active.. But happy to see my friend Back In Action..

😊

Welcome back deary!!
Gud luck.. Happy to see u BacK.. 🤗


thanks darling
how can I live without I-F ???
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Posted: 12 years ago
hello...everyone...

I am here today...for the first update...

and I would like to get all the links from where I have missed...

and the lucky draw winner is...

no not winner...

winners are...

archa and Shree.Nanda...

please do send me up all the links...
Edited by Fleur_de_Lis - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


chapter thirteen:-

part A:


Arnav drove the car in full speed and reached the hospital.

Arnav met the doctor in front of Khushi's cabin.

Arnav: doctor what happened to Khushi?

Doctor: excuse me, but I am not attending her. Please talk to Dr. Sharma.

He saw Mr. Shashi Gupta there. Khushi's dad.

Shashi Gupta was quite tensed.

Arjun came out of the cabin along with Dr. Arohi Sharma.

Arjun: so there is no need to worry about her, right?

Arohi: yes..very few and minor injuries had occurred. Since it a case of accident you must handle the stuff of police for avoiding legal complications.

Arnav was almost in the near to death state, but he got relieved hearing that Khushi was unconscious and very few injuries had occurred.

Arohi: Mr. Gupta your daughter is fine now.

Shashi Gupta: thank you so much doctor. I was afraid what will happen to her now.

Arohi: she needs some rest, that's all. You can take her home by tomorrow itself.

Shashi Gupta: can I meet her now?

Arohi: yes..sure.

Arnav hugged Arjun.

Arjun was taken aback. His brother is changing.

Arnav: thanks bhai.

Arohi's face was like an "O" shape.

Arohi: you..two..brothers?

Arjun: yes.

Arnav: why?

Arohi: umm..nothing..excuse me.

Arohi left there.

Now she understood..

##FLASHBACK##

Arjun: You?? Here??

Arohi: Got a shock or what??

Arjun: Yes..I mean no..I mean

Arohi: Whatever you mean it is upto you..please excuse me..Mr. Malik.

Arjun: Arohi..I need to talk to you.

Arohi: But I don't want to listen you

###FLASHBACK ENDS###

That's why he was there in Akash bhaiyya's engagement.

He is a relative of the Raizadas.

Yup, Aradhana also said he was their cousin. She was busy so much settling matters for Anjali di and her brother Rahul..she forgot her life only.

Edited by Fleur_de_Lis - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
part B:-

****

Arnav saw a woman in wheel chair.

He felt like he had seen somewhere before.

He couldn't recall.

Some similarity with someone.

Yes, Lavanya Kashyap.

Is this Lavanya's twin?? He thought to himself.

He decided to enquiry.

At the reception,

Arnav: excuse me, can you please tell who that lady is?

Receptionist: which lady sir?

Arnav: in a wheelchair, a nurse took her.

Receptionist: no sir, there is no such lady, sir you may have seen someone else.

She started working.

He could understand that she told lies to him.

But he couldn't understand what happened.

Suddenly he met there NK coming hurriedly.

Arnav: NK, you here?

NK: yeah..umm..some emergency.

Arnav: can you just give me some information.

NK: about what?

Arnav described what he saw and also told him that the receptionist lied him.

NK: no, Arnav. You must be wrong. Why would she tell lies to you unnecessarily?

Arnav: but NK, I swear I saw Lavanya there.

NK: how can you see her here? She must be in your office or at some photo-shoot. I think you were tired and some sort of hallucination has occurred.

Arnav didn't tell him anything.

He thought to find it by himself.





so what do you think what's next????

what about Lavanya's doppelganger ???

Is that Lavanya or someone else???

Is NK telling lies or is it a mere hallucination???

Is there any relation with this hallucination and the mysterious lady????

and yes...sorry to say..but I think my reader count has decreased a lot...I have 200+ buddies and I get only 30-35 likes???
is it fair???
I feel depressed...!!!

has my standard of writing gone so down????

please boost me up...



and yes I would like to get the links from Alina and kuts.

Edited by Fleur_de_Lis - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
this part is going to be longer as it is my compensation for giving a mini update of part B

and yes...one thing...my story is based on Arshi and also Arjuhi...but that doesn't mean...the story can have no more characters...well my story is mainly a multi-starred story...so sometimes a whole chapter might have no romance at all...

and another thing..the rest of the things act as a catalyst for Arshi...

ok no more blabbering...

and I would like to get the links from SugarArhi and also kuts and Alina(cause these two hadn't send up the links still now). If possible please let them know..

ok..

ok

part C:

****

Arohi messaged Aradhana.

R u fre nw?

(are you free now?)

..beep..

Aradhana replied

Yup. Nethn srus?

(yup. Anything serious?)

Arohi replied back

v.v.mu6. dnt knw wt 2 se n wt nt 2!

(very very much. Don't know what to say and what not to!!)

No message from Aradhana.

Arohi again messaged

R u dre?

(are you there?)

Aradhana called Arohi

Aradhana: what happened? Why are you confused? Why are you tensed? Was any surgery tough?

Arohi: no..no…not regarding proffession.

Aradhana: then?

Arohi: you told me about Khushi.

Aradhana: yup, you met her. Where?

Arohi: she is admitted in m..

Aradhana: oh my god! What has happened to her? How did she came to hospital? Is she well now?

Arohi: you are more tensed than me Aradhana. Chill. Khushi is fine. Just a minor accident and very few injuries. Nothing to worry about that. Arnav bhaiyya is also there.

Aradhana: bhaiyya there? What is he doing there now? Did he take Khushi to hospital?

Arohi: no. Arjun Malik came to me with Khushi. He said he saw her unconscious and so the first thing in his mind came about me and he brought her here.

Aradhana: and who informed Arnav bhaiyya?

Arohi: most probably Arjun Malik himself.

Aradhana: so why are you tensed?

Arohi: I don't know how much this will be good or bad and I don't know the consequences also.

Aradhana: about what?

Arohi: about your brothers.

Aradhana: will you tell me clearly without any sort of riddles? My phone balance is already low.

Arohi: shut up.

Aradhana: ok, then you call me back. I need to change from prepaid to postpaid from now on.

Arohi cut the call. She was damn irritated.

She dialled Aradhana's number.

Arohi's POV

Silly girl. She is thinking about her 30p/min and 60p/min rates and I am in a confused state. Both these Mr. Egos'!! sometimes I don't understand the matter between these two. They are there always for their families for others and for everything but never for themselves. But for the first time they are together and unknowingly Khushi behaved as a catalyst. What will be the consequence on her?

Will it be good or bad?

As per Aradhana's words Arnav bhaiyya is damn practical but he is inclined towards Khushi, may be it will be good for them.

But Arjun Malik?

Is he any way interested towards Khushi?

Should I ask him?

No.

Why should I?

It is his life. He can like anybody.

But why I am so affected.

He behaved rudely with me, hurted me and I am thinking about him?

Am I insane or what?

No..I don't need to think about my..my..love..no..no love..only life..life..anything..but not love!

Aradhana: hellooo

Arohi: yeah..Aradhana say.

Aradhana: you were in which world my darling? I had been saying hello and hello for last few minutes. Who pays your bill sweetheart?

Arohi: ohh..sorry..nothing as such..was bit distracted..was thinking

Aradhana: about?

Arohi: Arju..no..no..no one..none.

Aradhana: but I think you were taking someone's name..most probably Arju..umm..Arjun Malik?

Arohi: shut up. No. Why would I?

Aradhana: do you want to say anything? About my brothers?

Arohi: nothing. Would talk to you later.

Aradhana: pakka?? 100% sure??

Arohi: yeah..am fine.

****

Arjun's POV

I have never seen Bhai like this. Is Miss Gupta unknowingly creating the bridge and filling up the gap of so many years?

Could see how much my bro has changed.

But why did Arohi react like that?

Didn't she know that we two are brothers?

But she behaved as if she knows Arnav more than she knows me.

But how?

Hello!! Why am I thinking about her?

She can know about anybody. She is a doc, man.

I am behaving like typical men.

Wait..

I called myself typical?

What the hell is going with me?

Have I gone nuts?

Why?

She is none to me..

And why the hell is this haunting me that she my misunderstood me regarding Miss Gupta.

Why?

…Dhaam…





then?????


what do you think????


and whom did Arjun strike off with???


and what does the pov's indicate????

Edited by Fleur_de_Lis - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
resss

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i got fleur...arohi will react lols...

i forgot tat arohi knw arnie...she s anna's friend...lolss

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oye oye...arju...shocked seeing...arnie's reaction...

arohi..surprised to knw arju-arnie r brthrs..lols

btwn..i didnt get...arohi forgot her life...

is it regarding her feelings for arju...

im waiting for arjuhi...n arshi romance...

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btwn hws ur health?



Edited by Nichuss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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-----Part b

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i found this part very short... 😲

dnt kill me... just felt... 😲

i think Nk too is lieing..

some mystery behind..lady on wheel chair n nk
Edited by Nichuss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ress partc

compared part b c is long updt...thank u...

arohi and arjun disturbed on thr own thght...

is arohi thinking arjun intrested on kushi...?

is arjun thinking arohi n arnie are close..?

lots of ques...

i think arhi collided with arjun
Edited by Nichuss - 12 years ago

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