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Posted: 12 years ago









😉All ff writers i love u all ,u r making my day complete wit maaneet by ur writings.. i love u all.. inspired wit ur writings i falling in love wit maaaneet madly so for showing my feelings for maaneet i too started to write ff wit all ur blessings nd love.. if i hav made som mistake forgive nd support me...😳



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Maan : now say ur punishment Geet wat u want, im ready to accept it

Geet : r u sure

Maan : MAAN SINGH KHURANA wont backoff from his words

Geet : hmmm leave Maan u cant and she got up to leave

Maan hold her hand

Maan : Geet say wat u want

Geet : Maan leave my hand I will say

Maan left her hand

Geet : ouch, r u made up of iron, see ur grip , and mark on my hand

Maan : im

Geet glare at him , and he stop,

Maan : Geet say yar , im waiting




Geet : ok ok , , Maan

Maan can sense her seriourness in her voice

Geet : Maan don't think im interfering in ur personal life, but

Maan : Geet u can say anything

Geet hesitate : Maan if u didt like u can say to me, but don't take me wrong

Maan : Geet will u pls say wat u want

Geet : Maan I want u to celebrate Anni ki birthday tis time, u have to spend ur day with her

Maan was shocked to hear tis from Geet, he look at her and went to his room

Geet : Maan

But Maan didt stop and went to his room

Geet : wat happen to him, she run behind and went to his room and saw he was standing near te window and looking at te sky


Geet was shocked te see Maan like tis, till now she only Maan who look rough tough outside and stone heart , but wat he is , she went beside him and touch his shoulder





Geet : Maan im sorry I didt mean it but

Maan : it is ok Geet , he turn to face Geet


Geet was so shocked to see Maan ki sad pale face, she didt think her words will hurt him, but she decided wat ever she wont leave him today.. she thinks tat he too have to be normal like others

Maan : Geet its so late go and sleep

Geet : no

Maan didt turn,

Geet : Maan look at me,

Geet made him to sit on te bed and hold his face , Maan saw her eyes which showed so much care and concern for him







Geet : Maan I wont ask why u like tis, wat happen to u, but listen to me, Anni is craving for ur love Maan, for her Bhai ki love.. she want to be pamper by her Bhai like all other girls who will be roaming with they brothers, shopping, teasing . she too want all tis happiness, Maan , Dadi wants her grandson to spend some time with her and Ayesha u know wta she want


Maan eyes started to well up but he controlled


Geet : I know Maan wat burden is placed on ur head, u have to look after KC, ur family , for tat u have lost so much, but for whom u doing tis, are they happy, no Maan how cum , wen they brother is not spending time with them, and losing his life.





Maan was looking at her : u r thinking I don't love them Geet


Geet : I know Maan u love them so much, for them only u r living but u have to show it wen they needs u, im not asking u to spend all ur time with them, atleast ask them had ur dinner , u want some thing, like small thing they will feel happy, u can give money to them to buy wat they want, but u go with them and buy it they will feel so happy. Tats a sister heart Maan , for how long she will be here , after her marriage she will go to her laws house , tat time whatever u try u cant do anything as ur wish, her laws and her hubby will be her priority,



Maan , lump formed in his throat: Geet

Geet : im sorry Maan I don't know wat I said , but I cant see Anni like tis, im a sister if my brother behave like u, how hurt I feel I know, she too losing her teenage like u Maan


Maan was shocked to hear it , thinking how she know


Geet : yes Maan my uncle said tat u have took over KC in ur 17 years , I know for tat u have lost ur teenage, like other boys u didt enjoy anything, but ur only aim to bring ur business and ur family, so pls try to live ur life, I want my friend to live his life , but not who losing himself in his work

Maan was staring at her







Geet sensing it is going too senti senti,

Geet : I know u r old but not tat old to live like a saint

Maan got shocked hearing Geet saying old

Maan : wat Geet im not tat old

Geet : wat is ur age

Maan : 26

Geet : 26? Four more years u will became 30, so ur uncle

Maan : GEET T T T

Geet : tis is my friend Maan who always show his big big eyes to scare others, not so sad

Maan smiles at her

Geet holds her heart : oh god for tis only im dieing , ur smile

Maan nodes his head

Geet : ok Maan will u celebrate her birthday and u should be te first person to wish her

Maan was silent


Geet : hello drama king i know u too want to do all tis things but u are locking urself, coz u having a image TAT MAAN SINGH KHURANA wont do like tis things naa, KALLULIMANGAN


Maan : Geet dont call me like tat

Geet : i will call u KALLULIMANGAN, KALLULIMANGAN

Maan : Geet t t

Geet : dont shout showing her fingers to him





Maan glares at her

Geet : one more thing don't think im trying to change u, but tat was te truth, Maan was seeing her like she some kind of alien , coz I have all right on u, u r my friend


Maan : ok

Geet saw his room : Maan tis ur room naa,

Maan : hmmm

Geet : first time im cuming here

Maan : hmm how is it, he was thinking tat Geet will get shock seeing his room ki luxury and elegant

Geet was looking at his room, his bedroom , nearby a room his study room and she went inside ,

Geet : Maan tis is ur study room

Maan : yes Geet

Geet : wat is tis , room?

Maan : my study , open and see Geet

Geet : and tat one

Maan : open it

Geet open and was shocked to see a swimming pool attached to Maan's room,

Geet was looking and seeing all his things, she like it but want to tease Maan

Maan was eagerly waiting abt wat she will say

Maan : did u like my room Geet

Geet : boring

Maan was shocked to hear it : wat

Geet : yes Maan it is so boring like u

Maan : Geet


Geet : wat Geet , see all are in white, tats why u too very boring no colours in ur life too like ur room


Maan : Geet all will faint seeing my room ki elegant but u te only one who can say my room is boring

Geet : then they will be blind

Maan : wat

Geet : wat I will say oh Maan its so dreamy like Pari who is behind u saying u r her MR.DREAMY

Maan : Wat DREAMY

Geet bit her tongue : Maan pls don't shout at her , u erase from ur heart wat I said hmm

Maan : Geet are u hiding something from me

Geet : no leave tat all cum to te point, see ur room, no tv atleast music system,

Maan : i wont watch tv

Geet : dont watch tv , dont listen to music tat s why i said boring and it is look like bhooth room, wase u r Rakhashashan then ur room will also will be like tat only naa

Maan : Geett t t , dare u say it again

Geet : wat u will do ahan, showing her fingers

Maan glares at her

Geet : ok ok now leave it , say u will celebrate Anni ki birthday naa

Maan : humm ok

Geet : ok then im leaving me feeling very sleepy, good night

Maan : good night,

Geet went near te door,

Geet : but i have to sya Maan u room is so beautiful, look like a bungalowe inside tis mansion

Maan smiles at her

Maan : Geet our rule said not to say thanku , but pls I have to say THANKU TO u to make me realize wat my sister needs

Geet turns and smiles at him : Maan u know one thing

Maan : wat Geet

Geet : tat u r u r BUDDHU SINGH KHURANA AND RUNS OUT

Maan : Geet t , and smiles


Dadi was watching all these ad shedding tear thinking Geet will bring colours to her grandson ki life , praying to god for they happiness


Next day , breakfast table

Every one were sitting and having breakfast, Maan came down

Maan : gm Dadi ,

Dadi : gm beta

Maan saw Anni who was expecting him, Maan smiles

Maan : GM Anni

Anni was shocked to hear it : GOO D GOO D MORNING Bhai

Maan smiles at her and sat , and kissed Ayesha , Anni holds her heart like fainting


Every one had they breakfast ,

Dadi : today also u want to go in taxi

Geet : sorry Dadi

Maan : better go in car or else u can cum with me

Geet : no

Every one looks at her

Geet : no no I will cum in another car

Anni : why Geet Bhai ki car was so big, u know he have black mercedez which only two people have here

Geet : wat is te name , all are car only naa

Anni who was drinking water chocked it and started to cough , Maan got worried and patted her back and gave her water

Maan : r u ok

Anni : hmm thanku bhai

Anni was shocked to see her Bhai doing tis for her, and she had tears in her eyes

Geet : wat happen ANNI wat happen

Anni who was staring at her brother , : hmm Geet im ok,

Geet can sense how emotional she became : for a car u r doing like tis

Anni : then wat Geet u r joking, did u know te rate of tat car

Geet : why I want to know , aim going to buy it no naa so

Anni : leave it say why u don't want to go with bhai


Geet : first of he will be very silent like watching some horror movie and next he wont allow me to on te system, and his collection worst , I will get so bored to travel with him, so better I will go by walk


Maan glares at her and leave : bye every one


After he left Geet and Dadi burst in to laugh,

Anni : why u teasing Bhai , see he is angry on u

Geet : then wat to do he is always having his face like hard and showing his big eyes threatening others,

Anni : yes I have to agree tat

Every one started to laugh , echoing te whole km, were Maan was standing near te door and admiring it, thanku Geet

KC,

Geet enter te office and went to her cabin, and started her work


Maan too came to office at 9 clock, he went to his cabin and saw Geet through te blinds who was engrossed in her work. He open his file, were it was written THANKU and saw through te blind and saw Geet smiling at him., he too smile at her and showed his stern face asking her to concentrate on her work






Geet : RAKSHASHAN ,


Maan know wat she will be cursing him and engrossed in his work


At evening Geet packed her bag and came down , to get into her car, but Maan ki driver came


Driver : Geet baby sir is waiting for u in his car ,

Geet : but were is my car

Driver : sir have sent it


Geet got angry : oh he is taking revenge from me , for I said I wont get in his car,


And she rush to his car and open it and started to scold him

Geet : wat u think Maan , u want to take revenge naa for wat i said in te morning but I wont , I will not cum in ur car, tis car ah no , tis is tis ah, a broken iron box, I don't like u car im going

Maan kept his finger on her lips : CHUP BIKUL CHUP




Maan was lost in her eyes , Geet was struggling


Maan : Geet listen to me first then u talk

Geet nodes her head

Maan : good ,

Maan took his fingers from her lips,

Geet : wat say fast, i have to see my Drasti serial

Maan nodes his head : Geet u have to cum with me for shopping




Geet : shopping at tis time

Maan : wat naa i have to buy some gift for Anni , so help me

Geet : Maan dont buy gifts to surprise her but u take her to shopping with u, she will be so happy Maan, tat will be her best birthday gift

Maan was thinking

Geet : dont think too much Maan, u spend time with her she will be so happy,

Maan smiles at her : hmmm

Geet : Maan wase i and Dadi planning a small party with her friends alone.

Maan : hmm ok then

Geet : ok then i will go now

Maan : how u will go, u car have left

Geet : i will go in tax, before she fiish





Maan : dare u Geet , chup chap sit here , we are leaving

driver start te car to KM..













PRECAP : ANNI KI BIRTHDAY PARTY..

NEXT PART-


Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow wow me first 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳
Very very nyc update..😊😊
Maan realises what he needs to do for his family..😃😃😃
Its all becos of our sweet Geet👏👏👏
Waiting for anni's b'day
Edited by Rami92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it
geet made maan realise
becoz of him ani is loosing her teenage
she is missing her brothers love n care
loved geets teasing to maan..superb
lovely
as usual light hearted..
happy
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome awesome...geet rocking with her cute antics..lol..making maan speechless...waiting fr anni birthday...:-))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update dear so geet advised maan to take care of aniee and her wishes..loved the way geet made maan realise about aniee...now what happens next waiting for it dear continue soon🤗
Edited by geetsrir.maan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
its 1 of the dreamy update.
finally geet ne maan ko samja dia ki ani needs her bro love😛😛
geet understand maan very well .geet nd maan never ending fight.😆
le geet call maan boring poor maan😆.dadi is happy that maan life becoming normal nd ani get shock after shock seeing maan😛.
maan rooms just awesomee 👏👏..
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
geet understand maan well gr8
waiting
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
geet made maan understand that his family want his time not money
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow..amazing update
Love maan n geet convo
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
lovely teasing session
thanx for the pm dear
cont soon

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