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Posted: 12 years ago

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agar woh hours bolti toh mein uski jaan le leti...🤣

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pre tumhe toh taylor lautner bhi pasand hai na..??
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Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

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aur uski laash ko hum IF ke CC mein dafna dete... kisiko kuch pata nahi chalta... hehahaha...🤣

🤣 kya planning hai... preity ko lautner pasand hai??
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Lo guys update kar dia
update dedicated to Mist
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listen to the song when reading I listened it while writing 😃
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PART : 8

"And this is our wood be daamad Aaban."

Aaban who was back facing them turned. Smiles faded from Manvi's lips. "SHAIKO?!!!!"

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Before 1 and a half months

The still bitten up body of Shaiko was lying on the isolated forested area. His mind was ordering him to get up and get her Manvi back. But his damn body betrayed.

The dark night faded into the dawn. Birds started chirping as usual unaware to the facts what happened. A ekka(one horse chariot) came spreading the dusts, he saw a blurred vision from corner of his eyes. He tried to raise his hands. He tried to shout, "please I am here, please rescue me! Please! But his broken face muscles and bones didn't give him the permission. But to his surprise the cart halted near him. A pair of two shoes with a classy trouser came to her slowly. The stranger patted to her cheeks.

'''''."hey' hey' please try to open your eyes. Hey..."

Finally somebody came to his rescue. He closed his eyes in relief.

'''''."hey NOOO' you can't close your eyes, hey please.. We will reach the hospital soon. Please'. Hold on." He can feel a warm, soft lap where he was lying and her sweet voice.

"Mannu'." He uttered last word before reached the world of unconsciousness.

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Present time


Magical Shimla - Hotel Bridge View Regency

Manvi came to the bridge beside the lawn where the dinner was arranged. She felt so helpless, what she thought and what happened? Her shaiko who was there always with her. Who she thought will accompany her in her cursed life is happy with someone else? But but why is she behaving like this? Her friend Shaiko no best friend shaiko' she wanted every happiness for him from her childhood, now when he found his happiness, why on earth she is feeling like this? No she is a very bad girl, that's why God punished her like this. Tears flowed continuously from her cheek. The cold air was rushing rashly to devour the warm water drops. She flinched in the cold air. Her soft skin was cracking in the embrace of demon like cold air. A warm hand tapped her shoulder. She turned back in no time to find those orbs, which are trying hard to know her. Her emotions, her soul, her inner self, her everything.

"Kya hua Manvi? Tum yaha? You are not fit yet. Don't stand here in the cold night. Let's go. "He simply said while weeping the tears from her cheeks. He didn't ask a single question to her. Manvi kept looking him confused. He took her to the venue.


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Before one and a half month

Shaiko opened his eyes after 2 days slumber. He saw a lady feature in his dreamy eyes. "Mannu'" he whispered. He blinked his eyes to got a clear vision. He just wanted to saw his mannu safe and sound. He wanted her Mannu near him. He blinked again. But someone said right that if you want to live your dream don't blink. His dream also crushed after he found that was his Doctor. A woman in her late twenties, wearing lab coat, noting down his health report.

A man in his mid forty stormed to his cabin.

"So Dr. Heena? How your patient recovering?" he took the chart from her hand and went through that. "Hum, impressive. And the credit fully goes to you." He said smiling widely, "just one suggestion. Don't give your heart to him while nursing" he whispered to her ear and stormed out. In reply she just blushed hard. May be she already gave her heart to this boy.

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Present time

In the party Virat didn't left her hand for a single minute. Mr. Mansur called Virat for some talk. He had to go. He looked at her with pleading eyes and went with a heavy heart when Manvi just smiled a little. She stood there where Virat her, alone. Her eyes searching a person whom he trusted the most.

"Abaan, you are feeling good na? If you want something please tell me" Heena asked.

"I am fine Heena, you take care of yourself. Don't ignore the sayings of doctors. You took your medicine na?" Abaan aka Shaiko asked with care.

"Why should I care for myself darling? You are here for that na?" she said leaning onto his shoulder. He tapped her head and looked away with a sigh.

Their eyes met. He looked at her from far. He looked at her shimmering eyeballs. They are dangling with tears.He can see there hurt. Her Mannu, there he can ran and touch her now if he want. But he can't. Now his Mannu will hate her. He clutched Heena's arms more tightly. Not for his love towards her but for the pain he was going through in his heart. He closed his eyes and looked at the direction where his only belonging stayed but found no one. He left Heena's hand and stood up. He looked here and there. He wanted to just run from there but he can't.

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"Manvi chalo tumhe khana khila du."(manvi come I will feed you now) Virat said and grab her hand and escorted her to the nearest table. He took a spoonful of gravy and fed her. She gulped all the food. She felt so special, so out of the world with him. Just like what he used to feel with Shaiko.

She finished all the food like an obedient kid. Words are not enough to thank him. All of a sudden to his shock she hugged her and let her all sorrow washed away with her river like tears. He as usual didn't ask a word or told any soothing words. He just kept rubbing her back. Sometimes really actions speak larger than words.


Shaiko felt a pinch on his heart when he saw her crying. He was thankful to God that God send somebody to look after his angel. But why is he feeling so strange? She is her friend na? From childhood he always wanted best for her. Now when she got why is he behaving like that? No no he is doing wrong, wrong. He has to take care of Heena now.

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Virat soothed Manvi and took her to their room. He gently laid her to the bed and placed a soft kiss on her cheek. She was flabbergasted to his gesture. He covered her with the blanket and whispered, "I will wait for you Manvi till the last day of my life. I will wait" he again kissed her forehead and went to his couch before glancing at the window. Shaiko knew Virat was not a common man, something in his extraordinary. He looked down when Virat found him behind the window, but to his surprise he didn't uttered a single word. He again looked at the angelic figure at the bed. His eyes welled up. She saw him. She was watching at the window, she knew Virat guessed it. She just closed her eyes in disgust when their eyes met .

"Manvi I am doing all these only for you. Please don't hate me. I will die." He screamed under lips and sat there closing his eyes just to welcome another morning of his misfortune.

will send the PMs tomorrow

I am afraid about this update please don't through chappals 😕😳

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Edited by preity_d - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Preity Im so happy finally tu ne update kar diya and tu ne mujhe dedicate kia Preity!!!! Thank youuu !!!
Coming to the update, loved the begining.. Flashback part was interesting.. Btw who was that stranger who helped Shaiko?? Was it Mr. Rehman?? 🤔 So Heena fell in love with her patient.. Interesting 😳.. I guess Heena is suffering from some serious disease haina ❓
Awww poor Mannu she is hurt and angry🥺.. She is thinking that Shaiko left her .. She is lil jealous, isnt it?? Loved the way you have portrayed her emotions 👏👏..
Virat is so caring and considerate ❤️.. Loved him in this part.. He didnt ask her anything but supported her like a true friend 😳..
"In the party Virat didn't left her hand for a single minute."
""Manvi chalo tumhe khana khila du."
"He gently laid her to the bed and placed a soft kiss on her cheek." ☺️☺️
"I will wait for you Manvi till the last day of my life. I will wait" he again kissed her forehead"
- Loved these lines 😳😳😳..
The ending was very emotional.. Virat already guessed there is some connection between Manvi and Aaban.. Poor Manvi she is so heart broken 😔..
But Im really eager to know the truth behind Shaiko's weird behaviour.. "Manvi I am doing all these only for you. Please don't hate me. I will die." - After reading these lines Im even more curious ..
Please continue soon 😆.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care
Edited by meera.chaudhuri - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great update pretty...
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Edited by MaaNeeTLuV - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww finally but again not up to the mark

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