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After along time but it was awesome update
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there should be hm of maaneet nd jaanvi tooo
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wow thanks 4 the update after a long time 😊loved geet n maan bonding ...waiting 4 next part ...
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it was so touching di...
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hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update! Well written! update soon
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i misssed so many updates
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awesome part
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Hai dears,😊
thanks for the friends who gave cmnts n likes😃
PART 39

Present

Rahul:when maan came to me i was happy to see him like that..to see him helpless infront of me..ididnot believe his words,when he said he loved my sister..i thought he is acting gud infront of me..i believed what my eyes witnessed...how much happy he was with his wife n daughter...never thought,he loved my sister n married her n whom i tried to kidnap is my own niece..

Rahul said looking at maan n dcs photos hanging on the wall..

Rahul continued..

I never thought i am wrong..my love to my sister blinded me...i did not see the love in his eyes..when i saw his painful eyes,i thought it is becoz i hurted him..but it was my words that hurted him..for accusing him as a killer for my sister..

I regret it now...becoz of me,my janu was kept away from the real world..

Jaanvi didnot look at her uncle,who was confessing his deeds..there was only hatred in her eyes for him n arjun..her one single glance too made arjun look at floor..it was accusing him..

Vicky now continued the past...

Bhai loved drashti bhabhis family as his own..though rahul hate him n want to take revenge from him..

PAST

.Next days were hard for them..looking pinky lost all were sad..maan cancelled his honeymoon trip..geet came to know about it later..

.none of the members stepped out of the mansion as maan requested..only vicky adi n maan went out..but with body gaurds..maan managed to plot some of his mens in rahuls company..n hired some of rahuls men to spy him n inform about rahuls moves..

Maan requested the police not to go through the kidnaping case..he dont want rahul to be found culprit or being arrested..in one way maan was happy,that rahul didnot hate DC..rahul still loves her after her death too..now his DCs soul will be in peace..knowing her brothers love..

Maan let rahul do whatever he wants..but made sure it didnot affect KC much..maan himself gave up sometimes to make rahul win..but rahul never came to knew about it..

It was 15days after that incident..geet managed to bring pinky out of her shell..geet always made priya to get attention from pinky..whether to play to eat to bath or anything..n it worked..pinky got busy with her..now geet n pinky also joined office back.. maan n adi made pinky busy in office works.. they all kept their family 24x7 under their eyes n protection..vicky went to college,but rahul neverharmed vicky..his only aim was maan..n to take the love which maan cheated dc in name of love n making her pregnant..only geet n jaanvi..n maan soon came to know about it..so,he kept them both near to him..whereever he went he called them n confirmed they are safe..

Another side,maan n geet were longing to be in each others arms..they were busy making pinky normal..they did not give importance to their desires...one or two times they shared a kiss..which longingly said how they want to quench each other..

It was one morning..maneet room

Maan was late the previous night n was tired..so he was sleeping..jaanvi got up early n was playing with priya,hide n seek in pinky's room..

Geet was chosing her dress to wear..she took it n the towel n moved to bathroom to take bath...she was placing it inside

Jaanvi...aahhh...mama..papa.she rushed out hurriedly hearing the scream of jaanvi...

Geet:jaanu..kya hua beta..

Maan too woke up..n rushed to jaanvi who was hiding in a small place behind a table..she looked scared.

Jaanu:i cant come out..

Maneet laughed hearing it..she did not know how she went inside n now to come out..maan pulled the table n jaanvi came out..n hugged maneet in fear.they rubbed her back..

Geet:nothing beta..

Maan:u r fine..see darling..

Priya came searching jaanu..

Priya..jaanvi out..

Jaanvi:nono..jaanu..stuck na..i voiced out..so only u caught me..

Priya:phirbhi i found u ..u r out..

Jaanvi was in verge to cry..

priya..ok jaanu we will play again..u hide..

she said..she cant see her little sister cry..

maneet:ok..u both go..but no more risky places..play in hall or in garden..

both went down..

geet:how easily jaanu forgot her fear..if we are kids we can forget everything soon na maan..

maan:hmm..but we cant always be kids..then how will kids come..

he said hugging geet..geet can see him smiling naughtily..she wacked his arms..

geet:maan..aap na..bohut besharam hogayi ho..har waqt mazaak ..

maan came to her ears..im saying truth only geetu..if we didnot grow up..how can we make love..n..

geet closed his mouth..

geet:bas bas...she was red hearing his talks..

she rushed to washroom n closed the door..her heart was beating fast..she smiled n started to take a shower..

maan:where will u go from me..he thought..

after taking bath geet looked at her dress it was on floor

geet wrapped her in towel scolding herself..

geet tu na ek dam jalli ho..cant u check ur dress before taking bath..now its all wet..how to go out n change..wahaan tho..maan bhi hai..she blushed at her thought..

geet slapped her head..geet zyadha math soch..pehle dekh wo kahaan hai..what if he is not in room..it will be easy for u to grab a dress n come inside..haan yahi teek hain..geet tu open kar..thoda sa..she talked to herself n unlocked the door..when something fall on her body..she screamed gaining maans attention..maan immediately neared the bathroom door n found it open..n geets voice caught him..he opened the door lightly thinking to whom geet is talking... geet was not oblivious that maan is watching her..geet was holding the cockroach by its moustach..n it was struggling to save its life..

geet:bohut mazaa aaya hogana..geetko..geet maan singh khuranako daradiya..how dare u..u fall on me scaring me..

maan chuckled seeing a baby there in form of women..next moment his throat went dry seeing geet in towel..her slimm hands n her bare shoulders n her slim smoothy legs..she is obsolutely looking like apsara..geet was busy with the poor insect..

geet:tu na..i will give u punishment for scaring me..with that she flushed the insect.. n washed her hands..geet turned only to see a smirking maan who was now closing the door with his legs..she froze..his eyes were dark n showing his desires..

maan moved towards her n geet took steps backward..

maan:do that insect knows u ..u r the wife of great maan singh khurana..

geet :he he..maan..wo..wo..mein..tho..mei tho..bus..yuhi..aap..aap kab..aayi..

she asked him nervously..her back hit the tiles of the wall..

maan:jab tum us cockroachko class lerahi thi..

she bit her tongue n smiled sheepishly..

maan came near her n tugged the hair strands behind her ears..geet closed her eyes feeling goose bumps over her body..maans hands travelled on her side of ears n touched her neck..

geet:maan..

she moaned..it was a sweet torture..n maan was lost in her moan which added fuel to his desire..his hands went to her knot of towel travelling on the tip of it..his fingers made her shiver..

geet:maan..

maan bent n captured her lips..while his hands released the knot of her towel..geet hugged him tight n started to reciprocate his desires..she kissed him back with equal favour..her hands went inside his vest feeling his bare skin..maan groaned...she kissed him back with equal favour..her hands went inside his vest feeling his bare skin..maan groaned..he was playing with her tongue n tasting her..he came down cherishing her every skin n marking his love on her..geet 's knees went weak n she held maans shoulder for support..

maan:geet ,can we make out..i cant contol..

he said his wish..he was aroused so much n she can also feel it..he want her acceptance..they are going 2 consumate after long time..

geet:but maan..jaanu..n how can we close bedroom in morning..

maan:so,u r ready..who told u,im going to take u out to room...

he said naughtily carrying her to the bath tub..he took off his pants n hovered over her..

geet:what if someone comes..

maan:they will think u r taking bath..now no more questions.let us make love soon n get out from here before anyone arrives..he said hurriedly

.he sealed her lips with his..his hands travelled on her feminine parts giving pleasure to her..geet could only let a sweet moan n accepting his wish..maan was soon inside her making out..both hit their climax..maan kissed her forehead ..

Maan:i think we need a break.i want u so badly..i will do something for it..before i get wild with u..n take u 24x7

Geet was red ..he was openely saying he needs her..n can be raw..

Both took bath together with some more romance..maaneet came out of washroom confirming noone is there in their room..or they will tease them..

Soon they dressed up n came down..n joined the family..

Then they went to office..maan was all the way thinking about pinky..n how to get her normal n then about themselves..his desire is growing day by day towards geet..n they did not get enough time for each other..in a family,its so important to spend time with each other..it doesnt mean physicall..but talking with each other too has reduced becoz of the burden ofwork..he has to cancel their hm plan too ..then it striked..why cant we go for an outing for few days..it will be a change for pinky n we can give time for family n i will make it as HM for us too..maan decided..

After they reached office maan checked his appointments n cancelled appointments of the next week..he immediately planned a trip to america...n finalised everything..

When they came home n said about it..pinky refused..but they managed her to accept for kids sake..n next week they flew to america with family..first dadi thought not to be in between childrens..then she thought,she should take care of the small ones n give some time for her childrens to spend time alone..

Precap:HM for whom????


i know its short one..but promised 2 give fast 2 updates so given

1618 words..

27.2.2012..9.00 pm

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Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago
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didi wow u r updating ...
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wow lovely update.. te way rahul confessing his deeds but wat ever he made as much as damage... te way jaanu looking at arjun and his guilty.. te way my maan looking after his family and his business was so lovely.. te way geet bringing pinky out of her pain was so lovely.. now my maaneet craving for each other.. te way geet talking to cockroach, oh god .. te way my maan asking his geet and they passion in bath tab.. maan u r multi millionair , and have a king size bed , but having ur love making in bathroom, wat to do with my maaneet.. te way my maaneet ki passion shows how they missing each other was so lovely.. now my naughty maan planning for hm for him?..i love te update so much didi
Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago

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