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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: had2bu

are we getting an update today?

chota wala bhi chalega...😊


For you Avi, Of course😉
Ange
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello readers

Have some mixed comments about my last update...oh well, can't please everyone😕

If I don't mention the devil and his wife, I am told why have I forgotten them...and when I do, I get told, why have I mentioned them.

My Geet, is a bit confused- she had planned her life a certain way (interior designer in Delhi), only to have those plans overturned. She then married Maan under difficult circumstances and realised that the marriage interfered with his plans. She was confused about their relationship and Ms Roy played on her insecurities. She has now convinced herself that she should set Maan free and allow him to follow his life as he had planned before coming to HP...she doesn't want him to be bound by obligation. It's not about her wanting someone else. It's just she doesn't know what she wants, hence the title.

Have updated today, but it is a small update...not too small, but definitely smaller than yesterday

Ange

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: angeesh

Hello readers


Have some mixed comments about my last update...oh well, can't please everyone😕

If I don't mention the devil and his wife, I am told why have I forgotten them...and when I do, I get told, why have I mentioned them.

My Geet, is a bit confused- she had planned her life a certain way (interior designer in Delhi), only to have those plans overturned. She then married Maan under difficult circumstances and realised that the marriage interfered with his plans. She was confused about their relationship and Ms Roy played on her insecurities. She has now convinced herself that she should set Maan free and allow him to follow his life as he had planned before coming to HP...she doesn't want him to be bound by obligation. It's not about her wanting someone else. It's just she doesn't know what she wants, hence the title.

Have updated today, but it is a small update...not too small, but definitely smaller than yesterday

Ange

Win some lose some... All negative is always treated with revulsion, so don't worry; we are supposed to hate them.
Thanks for the small update in advance...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 45

She turned to Maan and both stood outside the front door in awkward silence. Maan didn't want to leave and Geet didn't want him to leave.

Geet looked down at her phone almost willing it to ring. Hoping that Pinky was coming home rather than seeing a movie. She didn't want to be alone, especially after today's events. She was feeling anxious and scared. "What should I do? I don't want to stay in the house alone and Pinky and Uncle won't be back till late? Would he stay if I asked him? How can I ask him to stay? I cut him loose from my life...from any obligation to me, so how can I ask him to do something for me? What right do I have? Babaji help me" Geet thought helplessly.

Maan had overheard most of Geet's conversation with Pinky. He gathered that Geet would be alone in the house until at least midnight. He looked at her pale face which was lost in thought. "I cannot leave her here alone, especially after what happened tonight. I know she is upset but too proud to show it. I now she won't even ask for help, Ms Independent. Think Maan, think...how will I get her to let me stay?" he said to himself. Then it came to him, he knew exactly what to do.

He cleared his throat and broke the silence between them "Um Geet?"

Geet looked up at him and said "Ji?". He smiled when she said "ji".

"Can I come in for a moment and use the washroom?" Maan asked. "She can't refuse me, can she? Then once I am inside, I can say I am hungry, and she would have to feed me, wouldn't she?" he planned.

"Ha, yes of course" she said excitedly. She took her key out of her purse and started to open the door. As she did, she closed her eyes for a second, took a deep breath and said silently "Thank you Babaji. Once he is in the house, I can ask him to stay for dinner"

Once inside, Geet turned on the lights and showed Maan to the washroom. By the time he came out and into the living room, Geet was waiting for him on the sofa with a cup of black coffee. Maan smiled at her gesture, which made her blush. "Wo, em, I thought you would like a cup of coffee, so I eh..."

"Thank you Geet", Maan said taking the cup and sitting on the sofa beside her. His proximity was comforting but was also affecting her in another way. She could feel his firm body next to hers, his warmth, she could smell his masculine aroma, causing her heart to race and her breathing become shallow. She started remembering what had happened in the office earlier, the way he held her and kissed her. Suddenly she got up from the sofa keeping her back to him. She didn't want him to see her flushed face.

Her sudden departure from the sofa worried Maan, who got up and stood beside her. He held her shoulders trying to turn her towards him. "Geet are you okay?" he asked with concern

"Babaji, what is he trying to do to me?" Geet thought, feeling him close to her again..touching her. She took a deep breath and resisted turning towards him. "Ha, Yes of course I am okay. Wo..., I am feeling hungry...you must be too, mmm?... I am to make us some dinner" Geet said in an unsteady voice before pulling away from him and running to the kitchen.

Maan looked at her leave the living room, wondering what the hell had just happened. "Women!" Maan thought and then corrected himself "No. Not women. Only Geet!" he smiled.

After a few minutes he followed her to the kitchen where she was concentrating on cooking. She decided to make pasta, knowing that Maan would eat it and because it was quick to prepare. Maan stood at the entrance of the kitchen, leaning against the doorframe with his arms folded, just watching her. He took in her thoughtful expressions, as she searched for items in cupboards, her graceful movements as she moved around the kitchen and added ingredients to the pan, the way she played with the hair around her face or pouted her lips as she sampled and re-sampled the food. He had never been so mesmerised by anyone cooking before, but "I could get used to this" he thought, smiling to himself.

After about half an hour, Geet was satisfied with her creation and shouted "Dinner is ready. Maan, we'll eat in the kitchen it that is okay?"

"Fine by me", Maan replied instantly, feeling very close by, to Geet.

Geet looked up and she saw Maan standing leaning on the doorframe staring at her. "How long has he been there?" Geet thought, blushing.

Maan saw Geet blush, and thought "I could get used to this"

Maan sat down at the kitchen table and waited for Geet to join him. Rather than sit beside him, Geet chose to sit opposite him, thinking "he can't affect me here". But she was wrong. Sitting opposite him gave her the most gorgeous view of his features, his beautiful eyes...his noble nose...his strong chin... his stuble...his kissable lips. Geet suddenly closed her eyes, took a deep breath, and then opened them, only to look down at her food while she ate. She couldn't make eye contact with him without blushing.

"Geet, this is great" Maan said as he ate his first bite of pasta. "You know, you will have to make it for me again" he continued, trying to engage her in conversation. He was worried, that she had been quite since they came into the house, and that she wouldn't make eye contact with him. He was anxious that she was still upset over the earlier incidence. Little did he know, that Geet was quiet, because he was arousing her and she needed to control her desire for him...

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Posted: 12 years ago
😊
Such a cute romantic dinner...
What a detailed description of Maan, Ange... very detail oriented are we, I don't think you missed a feature😉
I love how he stood and watched her from the doorway instead of crowding her..
She is fighting a loosing battle with herself...
Geet you may as well give up dear, we all did two years ago😆
Thanks for the update Ange!
Missed you last week, so hope all got taken care of.
Please continue soon and if you bring the devils in make sure they get proper punishment..
Edited by had2bu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update she want to ask him in and he wants to come in loving the update hope they talk so he will understand why she ran hope they have the talk soon awesome update loved it thanks for the pmDrashti Dhami as Geet & Gurmeet Choudhary as Maan in Geet Hui Sabse Parayi kitchen scene
Edited by dumas - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ange, thanks for the beautiful update. So sweet. Can wait for next update. Waiting to see how Geet controls her urge ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Both finding reasons to spend time together. Maan understands geet so well. Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
first of all thank you for the update :), erm erm Geet madam is affected and Maan sir is unaware...lol...lets see whats gonna happen now as we have a whole half night in hand...*cough* *cough* *cough*, LOL.x.
Edited by x.Maaneet4eva.x - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update:) geet affected by maan closeness:)

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