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Posted: 12 years ago
i knew today will be destiny's turn may be tomorrow or day after tomorrow we can get DL
waise di u might get less like due to exam season so dont get hurt

now waiting for update
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where is shoba..knock..knock..
updating status kabse hai..
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PART 27

Maan.. she screamed opening her eyes looking around for Maan. Her voice trembled with each second as it uttered asking him to believe her.

Nahi Maan.. its not a mistake. Our love cant be a mistake Maan. Our baby.. it cant be Maan. Your Mishti never betrayed you Maan…. Never.

She screamed getting hyper searching for Maan all over. Everyone rushed to her but she was as wild as she can be. Raj and Vicky could not hold on and Raj finally hit her hard getting her back to her senses.

Raj: He is dead. Do you get DEAD.

Geet stared at Raj for a moment and pushed Raj away from her.

Geet: he cant do you get. You are responsible for this. Everyone here. Kyu jhoot kaha. Why did you fake your death Dad. Kyu.

Vicky: We did not have any other way. Do you get.

Geet: Way.. aap sab ne meri zindagi barbaad kar di. Why did you do this. My Maan called my love, our baby (she placed her hand on her tummy) a Mistake… a betrayal tat I gave. Why why did you do.

Geet was getting wild by each passing second and it was getting hard to control her. Shikha and Dadima hold her tight to calm her down.

Dadima: Geet.. you need rest beta. Doctor ne mana kiya hain.. please .. for your baby please Geet.

Geet looked at Dadima and smirked bringing her pain out.

Geet: Baby.. kaha.. it's a mistake Dadima. Don't you know, Maan said it's a mistake. Kaha main aaj Maan ko surprise karne wali thi but see the destiny Dadima it betrayed me again but this time I wont let Maan win Dadima. I wont let him betray my Baby. I won't.

She stood pushing each and everyone but Raj and Vicky stopped her from going but the moment her words her hatred reached their ears they backed off.

Geet: Galthi ki aap sab ne. You played with my life like always and I swear if this time he betrays me and my love I will kill this baby Dad. I will kill myself in front of him. Galthi ki hain aap sab ne and I will not let my baby to suffer coz of you all. Do you get I wont let him leave me.

She stormed out of the room only to engulf her death, the death tat was waiting for her in the form of her Maan's car, and the car tat was his favorite now would be the death car for his own MISHTI. She picked the same keys tat Maan had thrown in anger and looking back at the top where her whole family stood with tears she said "Trust me.. if I don't get back my Maan than I will loose myself along with the baby. Yeh rahegi aap ki galti ki sazza Dad. The punishment tat will take your DOLL away from you Dad. I will die Dad.. I will die if I don't get my Maan back."

"Maan.. its not a mistake Maan.. nahi hain yeh galthi.. humara pyar hain" Geet screamed opening her eyes for a moment but yet again they drifted to a deep slumber decreasing her heartbeats. Doctors have been trying since last few hours but they were not successful in getting her back. Each passing second feared them for the worst while they tried their best for her. The fall was not tat serious but her heartbeats have been declining every passing second. Her breadths getting weaker and weaker while her body getting numb for any treatment. The doctor who was attending Geet finally decided to inform the Khuranna's and Handa's who had been waiting for the last few hours but the moment he saw all waiting he could not utter a single word.

Vicky: How is she?

Raj held Vicky's hand tight while his eyes glued to the doctor for a single assuring word.

Doctor: Mr. Khuranna, I will not lie but the fact is tat though she is not seriously injured by her head but her heart and body has been not responding.

Yash: How is she?

Doctor: Critical and m sorry to say but she has less time.

His each word pierced the heart and soul present there while Raj almost collapsed hearing it. Yash ran to hold Raj while Mohinder he was numb to say anything. Shikha and Rano stood watching their family break yet again when they had seen a small hope of light but now tat was too engulfed with all darkness.

Doctor: I hope tat you understand wat I say, and would wish tat you pay her a last visit before it's late.

Shikha: yeh nahi ho saktha. Mere bache aise nahi jaa sakthe.. nahi jaa sakte.

Shikha screamed holding Rano while Dadima she sat numb but praying tat this was just a dream unknown tat there was another storm coming in the form of a phone. Vicky tried to ignore the rings tat his mobile had been giving since last 10 minutes but this time he could not. A strange feeling of fear engulfed him while hearing the words from the other side slipping the phone from his hands breaking it into pieces. His body weakened falling down on knees while his voice echoed through the whole corridor of the hospital " Brooo" scaring the rest of them.

There was no need for any confirmation for them to know the reason why and wat happened as it was the reality tat they have been living with and had tried to ignore but now it came haunting them from all sides when Vicky shouted cursing their fate and destiny and the almighty who had given such a evil life for them.

Vicky: He killed Dad. He killed my bro and Geet. Khatam kar diya Mom. Bro ki aakhri saas.. he is breathing his last Dad

His each word shattered their life already pierced souls tat awaited for the final death.

Vicky: Their heart stopped Dad. Stopped beating the moment they realized tat they soul left them. (He shook his dad who was sitting besides him) Kyu Dad.. why.. why did he give them such fate. Why dad.. kyu itni buri kismet likhi unke naseeb mein. I hate him Dad.. I hate god. Nahi mantha main unhe.. nahi mantha main. Dad.. Mehar.. wat wil I tell her. Kya kahenge Mehar se Dad.. wat will we tell her about Bro and Geet .. how will she survive Dad.


Mehar Maan Singh Khuranna


Pari who was sitting on the bed hugging her Teddy was continuously crying for her Mumma –Dadda. She had seen the fall, her Mumma falling down the staircase while Pari sat next to her trying to calm her down. It had been hours since she was trying and was getting difficult for Pari. Her mind on hospital unknown tat their family had shattered into pieces. Pari hugged her once again crying and calling out for Maan and Geet when her eyes caught something shining at the farthest corner of the room. Her eyes looked at it while her legs moved in the direction making Pari shocked but she smiled tat she stopped her cries for sometime. Mehar looked carefully at it and smiled taking it in her hand.

Mehar: Alle.. .. Mumma chlain.. Chachtli… Mumma chlain.. see Mumma buddhu.. she porgot.

Pari looked at Mehar who was holding the Mangalsutra. She was shocked to see it and tried to pull it from Mehar to keep it safe but Mehar's behaviour shocked her. Mehar pushed Pari with all her force and shouted at her.

Mehar: na.. my Mumma chlain. Dadda said.. Mumma chlain.. onlyb.. no.. touchling. Chachtli no

Pari: Beta.. Mehar good girl na. We should keep Mumma's Mangalsutra safe na. Give it to Chachi na beta.

Mehar: ma.. man.. sutal..

Mehar looked at Pari while Pari tried to grab the mangalsutra from her hand but her grip on it was much stronger than wat she could. Pari looked at Pari with bit anger but next moment Mehar pushed Pari away running towards the door.

Pari: Mehar.. you will fall don.. wait beta.

Mehar: Mumma.. nahi.. Dadda.. Mumma chlain here.. Mumma… chlain Dadda.

Pari saw Mehar running fast towards the stairs tat feared her and at the last minute she held Mehar tight in her arms who struggled to get out. Mehar hit and bit Pari to move out from there and finding no other way Pari shouted at Mehar.

Pari: Mehar…Agar gir jaanthi tho.

Mehar: Mumma..chlain.. chachli.. Mumma.

Mehar cried holding the mangalsutra tight in her hands while Pari looked at her with tears.

Mehar: Mumma.. Dadda.. Mumma diel. Dadda.. chlain.. diel. Mumma.. Mehar chlain.. Mumma.

Pari could not understand wat her words meant and she tried to make Mehar understand tat they can't go to Mumma and Dadda.

Pari: Mehar Beta.. Mumma not well na.. so Mehar and chachi wait for Mumma see.. Mehar good girl na please.

Mehar: Naa.. Mehar.. Mumma.. chlain.. Mumma- Dadda.. diel.. Mumma chlain.. chachli.

Mehar cried hitting Pari while her tears wetted Pari. She carried Mehar with her thinking to call any of them in the hospital but neglected the thought tat it would only worry them. She asked the drive to drive them to hospital and all the while Mehar only murmured her words tat went above Pari. She held the mangalsutra tight in her hand fearing tat someone would snatch it away from her. Her eyes glued to the black beaded chain while Pari was shocked to see her only looking at it. She tried to divert her mind but Mehar just neglected her each attempt keeping her eyes on the Mangalsutra.

Vicky looked at his Dad who was all broken while he only questioned him about Mehar.

Vicky: Wat will your answer be Dad.. Mehar.. kya kahenge hum.. ush bachi se.. Mehar.. how will she live..

Chachlu….

Everyone froze hearing the loud scream. They even feared to turn and see the source who was screaming as they knew tat it was Mehar, the one whom they feared.

Chachlu… Mumma.. chlain.

Mehar who was carried by Pari now struggled to get down. She hit Pari asking her to keep her down but Pari feared seeing the crowd all around. Mehar was only getting angry and getting nothing to do she bit Pari hard on her hand tat loosened the grip while Mehar fell down tat did not even make her feel the pain. She stood on her tiny legs pushing Pari with all her strength and ran towards her chachu who just kept looking at her from far. His fear of loosing the angel made him to shatter more while others looked at the little angel who was running with her unsteady legs pushing all the huge people around her.

Mehar, she ran pushing everyone with her small legs while Pari chased her. Mehar held the black beaded Mangalsutra tight in her small hand while her lips murmured " Mumma… Dadda..Mehar, needs you." Her mind only echoed with the words tat her Dadda once said to her " Mehar, this chain is Mumma's life and you should keep an eye on it so tat Mumma does not remove it." She looked at the mangalsutra once again hugging it to her chest holding it tight while she only screamed for her chachu and before anyone would reach her she fell down again hurting her legs and hands. She tried to get up but her weak body was making it difficult for her but her heart was strong enough to make her strong. (after all maaneet ki beti na). she slowly stood once again running to cover the small distance but now it was Vicky who ran to grab her to him. he pulled Mehar close hugging her tight while she only tried to move.

Vicky: m sorry.. chachu. Bad.. Mumma..Mumma..

Mehar: chachlu.. Mumma.. chlain.. Diel.. Mumma..Dadda chlain.. Dadda.. says.. Mumma.. no chlain.. Mumma.. diel.. Chachlu.

Vicky was so lost in his agony tat he failed to hear and understand wat she said. Mehar was getting restless, her heart only crying for her Mumma and Dadda while Vicky tightened his hold on her and once again Mehar bit Vicky hard on his hand but Vicky only held her tight. She cried saying the same thing again and again and hit Vicky continuously. Her moves and struggle became rough tat she slipped down Vicky and ran to the others. She looked at everyone and the one who could help her or say her heart knew whom she could.. Her Dada.. her Mumma's Dad. She pulled Raj by her hand and showed him the broken Mangalsutra.

Mehar: Dada.. Mumma.. diel.. Mumma chlain.. brokle… Dadda.. Mumma.. no chlain.. Mumma life.. Mehar.. Mumma chlain give.. Dada.. Mumma.. Chlain.

His world froze while other stood numb hearing the words her soft lips said. She looked at everyone looking at her trying to know where her Mumma is. She cried loud enough calling out for her MUMMMA – DADDA.. and next moment Raj ran carrying her inside the OT where her Mumma and his Doll was fighting for her life. A body whose soul was about to leave but their evil fate would now lose in front of their strong Mehar. Raj pushed opened the door shocking the doctors whom he cared a damn. He pushed each and everyone and next second he pulled out all the tube tat were attached to his doll and put Mehar on the bed.

Raj: tie her Mehar.. Mumma ki angel will fight tat evil. Save Mumma- Dadda Mehar.. save them.

Mehar looked at Raj and next she tied the broken Mangalsutra around her neck and the moment she did her Mumma responded to her one touch. Her Mehar's one touch and the black beads tat were her life line since the age of 5 forced her beats to get back to her heart. The doctors rushed to her trying to pull them away but a strong voice from behind stopped them from moving closer.

Vicky: Get the hell out from here.. dare a touch and..

His eyes saw the small angel giving their life back while her fingers caressing her Mumma. Her small hand held Geet's hand taking it all the way to her Mangalsutra the way Maan taught her and next only a faint voice tat was audible to Mehar came out "Maan". Mehar looked at Geet, while her hands held her hand moving on the Mangalsutra both trying to get back the life tat was fighting somewhere away from them and next moment her voice echoed into the room " MAAANNN" jerking her out from her sleep tat was destined to take them away from their angel.

Geet looked at everyone and the moment she saw Vicky she screamed calling out for him.

Geet: Vicky.. mera Maan,,.. he needs me Vicky.. he needs me..

She pushed everyone near her running to Vicky who was the one who would understand her while Mehar looked at her with tears thinking tat she did not see her.

Geet: Vicky mera Maan.. I need to save him Vicky.. he is dying Vicky.. My Maan.. I know he needs me.. I want to go Vicky.

Her words were choked hearing the soft voice while her hand rested on her tummy feeling her baby. She panicked when she could not feel it when again tat soft voice "Mumma" echoed in her ears. She looked at Vicky who was looking at her while her eyes questioned him.

Geet: My baby… mera bacha Vicky.. kaha hain.. I cant feel it.

She cried while Mehar walked softly towards her. she reached near her and held her hand calling out her again "Mumma". Geet's heart skipped for a second but her mind did not believe when she felt herself sitting down with Vicky. Vicky took her hand and made her to touch Mehar's soft cheek tat was wet with tears.

Vicky: Mehar Maan Singh Khuranna.. Meri Geet ki parachayi.

His words did have the effect on her but her question remained the same and when Mehar touched her kissing her cheeks her mind and heart took her to her life where she saw her Baby and her Maan playing with her. she closed her eyes tight fearing tat it would be just dream but the images were clear enough for her to know the truth. She jerked opened her eyes only to hear Mehar crying.

Mehar: chachlu Mumma… hurt.. Mumma pain chachlu…Mehar Dadda chachlu.. Mumma Dadda.

Mehar touched Geet again tracing her forehead where she was hurt. She looked deep into her eyes and instantly hugged Geet while geet sat numb with nothing.

Raj: She is yours Doll. Tumari Maan ki angel..Angel tat saved you both.

Geet looked at Raj who came and sat next to her asking her to close her eyes again and the moment she did she could just see her, mehar and Maan together.

Vicky: Mehar…. Tumari hain Geet.. your pure love Geet.

Everyone kept telling her about Mehar but her eyes only stared at the little angel who was looking at her with love and tears asking her to hug her. Geet could not blink her eyes seeing the angel who called her Mumma. Her tears made their way closing her eyes lids again yet she kept them open looking out for her Maan and finally her eyes gave up while her lips called out for Maan.

Precap: Will his angels save him

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
very emotional
geet fighting for her life
n another side maan
meher remembered maans words
n she was trying to say geet left her mangalsutr..
n geet is back from her mental trauma..
she is unable to believe meher..her daught..
feeling bad 4 her
she didnt remember giving birth nor cherished mehers growing up

Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome update
True mehar id angel she saved geet now she will save maan
Feeling bad for yhe famoly
Loving it
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome, amazing, beautiful emotional, painful part
feel sad for maaneet
feel sad for geet and meher more
both maaneet r suffering for their life
meher is real angel bring back geet to her real self
geet got shocked and surprise of her life to see meher
but it's true
hope now maan also be save
pls continue soon
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb Update

Very emotional one

Maan and Geet both are fighting for their life, one side all the family members are their with Geet and on other side they received another news that Maan too is taking his last breath

Every one had loose the hope but Mehar their angel had bring life to their princess their Doll

Geet is back from his coma life where she forget that she had delivered the baby and the angel is in front of her and who is crying to see her Mumma all hurt

Hope Maan to gain his breath, his Mehar n his Mishti too bring him from the death bed where he is fighting for his last breath

Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
mehar is awesome child
she saved her mom
now angels will surely save maan

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
so geet got her memory back
an is fine now
and lets see what now happens to maan
he gave her meher to her and he want to leave this world
but his angle wont let him leave
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Posted: 12 years ago



wow lovely painful heart tearing update.. oh god me hating god for doing tis to my maaneet.. i hate u destinty for making my maan to drown in pain...te way geet in past was saying she will die if she didt get my maan back was so lovely...te way geet too struggling for her life , and my maaneet ki love symbol, they angel giving them life was so lovely.. te way mehra holding te mangalsutra was so emotional.. te way geet screaming maan was so lovely.. now my maan ki angels will get my maan they life back to them, i know tat..i love te update so much dear

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