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Posted: 12 years ago





NOTE : Maan's past is out finally but there was one question which many have asked . Wether Maan knows the actual truth or no.

Yes Maan knows the actual truth. I am really sorry I didn't elaborate on that part in the last update. I had mentioned Dadi had tried to bridge the gap once he was back after completing his school
but it was too late as Maan had already shut himself to any relations. And he didn't want to dwell in them anymore so he let wall be as it is. It was a kind defense mechanism which he had adopted so nobody can weaken him or take advantage of his emotions again.

The 6yr old Maan felt that he had been betrayed then by the three people he loved and trusted the most.
The young Maan even though he knew all the facts now couldn't forget the betrayal and so couldn't forgive them.

But when he fell for Geet and now when Maan and Geet faced a similar situation, he could relate to his parents and understand the depth of their love and strength of their relation.
I hope I could do justice to the whole situation.




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Part 15


Faint sounds of the chirping of birds hit my ears as I opened my eyes. It was still dark just about time for dawn, I slowly moved out of Maan's embrace making my way to the balcony. Today was Our Special Day and I wanted to witness that moment when the first ray of light hits the dark sky indicating the arrival of the new day, a better tomorrow...


As I stood there waiting for the glory of nature to unveil, a pair of strong hands encircled around my waist resting his chin on my shoulder and gluing my back to his chest as he spoke.


" Iss nayi subah ka swaagat hum milke karenge Geet"!!!

On that very moment faint traces of light spread across the sky eliminating all the darkness around and both of together wished each other.

"Good morning Maan!"

"Good morning Geet!"

It was truly a spectacular and spell bounding sight. The black, blue, yellow, orange shades painted across the sky. The lush green trees and grassy slopes, as if washed by the dew drops slowly surfacing out of the blanket of the night. The sparkling of the water as the suns rays hit them brightening up the whole atmosphere.


'A great start to a special day'!!!!!


Maan spoke diverting my attention from the magic of nature.


"Geet hamaara aanewala kal chahe jaisa bhi ho hum milke usse aise hi khoobsurat banayenge"!!!!!

We stood there just living the beautiful moment! When suddenly the colour of my mehendi caught my attention. It was the darkest shade of brown, not that I had any doubts but the feeling was simply amazing!!!

I turned around and kissed Maan on his nose. Surprised at my behaviour Maan inquired,"Aaj bada pyaar aa raha hein mujh par, aur apne haathon ko dekh ke muskuraane ki wajah "?

"Woh issliye kyon ki my darling hubby loves me sooo muchhh and I was just letting him know that I too love him sooo very muchhh..." I exclaimed.

"Oh! to yeh tumhaare haathon ne tumhe bataya"?

"Nahi pata to mujhe pehle se hi tha bas mere mehendi ke rang ne uss vishwas ko aur bhi ghaada (dark) aur pakka (solid) kar diya".

He looked confused just like that kid in the classroom when a maths problem just goes above his head. He looked so cute, though I dare not utter that word. I reminded myself.

"Aw! my darling DD, kehte hein jis ki haathon ki mehendi ka rang bahot gaadha hota hein uss ka pati usse bahot pyaar karta hein". Aur dekhiye meri mehendi ka rang kitna dark aaya hein". I cleared his confusion.

Keeping his hold firm on me he said, "Oh! Accha issliye mujhe aaj good morning kiss milli, par naak pe kyon"?

One part of me wanted to trouble and tease him by not answering his earnest question but the sincerity in his eyes made me give in. Today at this moment I wanted to give him that ONE answer.

"Yeh naak hi to hein jo aap ke liye sabse zyaada important hein. Maan Singh Khurana ki aan, baan, shaan, pehchaan, attitude, ego, gussa sab kuch to rehta hein yahaan. Aur iss par sirf aur sirf mera haque hein"!

"Yeh mera copyright hein, aap ki har ek ada aur khoobi mere sar aakhon pe".

"Aur yeh naak, 'MERA MAAN'!!!!!

(My Honour)

He just kept gazing at me with a different unexpressed emotion in his eyes and a smile on his face as he spoke.


"Aaj tumne bahot badi baat keh di hein Geet. Aaj tak bahot log the jo Maan Singh Khurana ke paise, position, power sab pe haque jatana chahte the par aaj jis cheez par tumne apna haque jataya, woh main hoon, meri zindagi ki poonji (treasure) hein. Jis ka dusron ki nazar mein KOI MOL (price) NAHI"! he finished with a chocked voice.



"WOH ANMOL HEIN!!! Meri nazar se dekhiye Maan". I just hugged him tight never to let him go.

In matter of some hours I had witnessed so many shades of Maan's persona. His anger , his claim, his emotional outburst, his vulnerability and his insecurity which he hid behind the tough exterior of ruthless businessman. I am happy that I could reach to and bring out the actual Maan.

"Maan", I screamed suddenly realizing we were getting late. We had spent quite a time out here. "Bahot der ho gayi hein dekho din nikal aaya hein, kitna kaam baaki hein, Dadimaa bhi kuch ghante mein aate hi honge. Mein aap ke liye coffee laati hoon". I concluded. But just as I tried to walk away he held my hand.

"Geet tum kahan jaa rahi ho, mein shaadi ke rasmo ke baare mein bahot to nahi jaanta par itna to jaanta hoon ke shaadi ke din dulhan koi kaam nahi karti. Issliye aaj nashta mein banaonga. So My dearest wifey, Maan Singh Khurana aap ki seva mein haazir hein". I couldn't believe what he just said to which he just nodded and assured that he had indeed said that.

"Tum fresh ho jaao Geet main breakfast banata hoon". He started to move when I enlightened him on a very important fact.


"Maan aaj hum breakfast mein sirf coffee, tea ya juice pi sakte hein aur fruits aur dry fruits hi kha sakte hein. Kyon ki aaj hum dono ka fast hein. Shaadi hone tak hum aur kuch bhi nahi kha sakte. Phere hone ke baad hi hum dono milke apna vrat khol sakte hein. So don't bother much for breakfast". I declared.


He stood there shocked."Ab yeh kya baat hui", he complained.


"Dadimaa ne kahan hein to karna to padega na". I told him. He was clearly not happy with turn of events and I had a tough time controlling my laugh. Haaye my DD was looking so cute! I thought. But controlling my urge to pull his cheeks I tried to do some damage control.

"Maan sirf shaadi tak hi toh fast karna hein, yeh rivaaz hein. Shaadi ke baad jaise main aur tum hum ban jaayege, hamaara bandhan atoot ho jaayega waise hi hum ek saath ek thali mein se kha ke apna vrat kholenge". He nodded and walked off while I headed to the washroom.

Picking the cell in its first ring and the voice on the other side informed me, "Brij paaji ek taxi driver mila hein jisne uss raat ko ek Geet jaisi ladki ko Delhi ke bahaar choda tha, aap Geet ki tasveer bhej do mere phone mein abhi sab pata chal jaayega".


"Tu wahi ruk aur usse pakad ke rakh mein abhi aata hoon". Its been two days I'm looking out for that Geet. I will find her for sure and punish her. She can't escape from me." Kahaan tak bhagegi Geet mein tujhe dhoondh hi loonga".


Suddenly the glass kept near the washbasin fell down by the movement of my hand while I was straightening my dupatta. There was a weird feeling lingering, everything was too perfect and good to be true. I was scared.

As I walked out of the washroom, I heard the doorbell ringing non stop. Why wasn't Maan opening the door. I called out to him but no answer. A sudden fear gripped my heart. Had they found me? Where was Maan? Who else can be at the door? Dadimaa wouldn't be here so early.

I walked down the stairs towards the kitchen, there was no Maan, the coffee and tea was no where to be seen. Where was he?

Praying to Babaji with shivering hands I opened the door and sudden shock braced me!!!!!



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Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
😊
Loved how she made him feel about his "naak"
A persons worth is not in his looks or his money or his possessions.
It is the honor he carries and she recognizes and loves him for it...
BRIJ😡, pyaar ke dushman Handa's are on the way, looks like.
Loved the beautiful morning scene
A new day dawning for a new start
I love how you intersperse symobolism in everything Heytal...
Very well thought and penned..
Thanks for updating...
You are spoiling me
🤗
Edited by had2bu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Updated on page 135
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for clearing the confusion. It was needed. 😊

Do I sound very analytical and silly if I say that the sunrise scene was a great symbolism? I felt it was a wonderful scene with Maan insisting on welcoming the new day together and then after they're together, the light breaks the darkness of the night. It was as if their togetherness is going to break the darkness of their lives and being a new dawn, a new day and a new chapter to be filled in with their own memories... Very well-written! 👏

One thing which I'm in awe of is the way you give the strongest and most impactful dialogues! They just leave me agape in wake of their depth and the meaning behind them. Loved Geet's words where she explains why she chose the nose!

Ah.. Brij finally makes an entry. He seems determined to punish his sister with vengeance written all over his mind. Can't say I'm happy with him coming into view but I guess if he's made an entry then I'm sure his exit won't be far either! 😃

I wonder who's at the door and where's Maan. My guess is that it's not Brij, not yet at least.
A question I have. Where's Annie? Could it be her at the door?

Thanks for the PM. Loved the update! 😃
HeytzMaaneet thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: had2bu

😊

Loved how she made him feel about his "naak"
A persons worth is not in his looks or his money or his possessions.
It is the honor he carries and she recognizes and loves him for it...
BRIJ😡, pyaar ke dushman Handa's are on the way, looks like.
Loved the beautiful morning scene
A new day dawning for a new start
I love how you intersperse symobolism in everything Heytal...
Very well thought and penned..
Thanks for updating...
You are spoiling me
🤗


Thanks a lot Avi
I have always noticed in your, Aash and Maari's comments
the parts in the update that are closest to me
It always touches u guys too
I guess telepathy
😃


I feel nature always signals us
and its for us to understand😛

I truly have this thing for naak
its ones honour😳

Brij 😡
thoda drama to banta hein😉
Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Thanks for clearing the confusion. It was needed. 😊

Do I sound very analytical and silly if I say that the sunrise scene was a great symbolism? I felt it was a wonderful scene with Maan insisting on welcoming the new day together and then after they're together, the light breaks the darkness of the night. It was as if their togetherness is going to break the darkness of their lives and being a new dawn, a new day and a new chapter to be filled in with their own memories... Very well-written! 👏

One thing which I'm in awe of is the way you give the strongest and most impactful dialogues! They just leave me agape in wake of their depth and the meaning behind them. Loved Geet's words where she explains why she chose the nose!

Ah.. Brij finally makes an entry. He seems determined to punish his sister with vengeance written all over his mind. Can't say I'm happy with him coming into view but I guess if he's made an entry then I'm sure his exit won't be far either! 😃

I wonder who's at the door and where's Maan. My guess is that it's not Brij, not yet at least.
A question I have. Where's Annie? Could it be her at the door?

Thanks for the PM. Loved the update! 😃



Thanks a lot yaara
Maari as I mentioned above in Avi's reply
U guys always notice the parts which I feel strongly for
Yeah I totally believe in symbolism
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Yeah the nose I always feel its ones honour
and Geet considers that as her right , her treasure
Her Maan😳

Yup kamine Brij 😡ko thoda kaam karwate hein
Baaki Maan hein na😉

Thanks a lot Maari
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wat did u do to maan
I am so scared now


Biting my nails

Forgot even adore their morning sweet moment
Kiss was so cute
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

Wat did u do to maan
I am so scared now


Biting my nails

Forgot even adore their morning sweet moment
Kiss was so cute



Thank you Muski
😃

Shaadi hein to thoda drama to hona chahiye na😳
Brij ki band bhi to bajni chahiye😉

Thanks a lot u liked both the scenes
Will update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal


Thanks a lot Avi
I have always noticed in your, Aash and Maari's comments
the parts in the update that are closest to me
It always touches u guys too
I guess telepathy
😃

I truly have this thing for naak
its ones honour😳

Brij 😡
thoda drama to banta hein😉

Yup! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

I edited my comment check Avi😊

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