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Chapter-27

In Juneja mansion

The Preparations are going on. And the entire juneja household is dancing on the tune of Mrs Gayatri Juneja

Gayatri:- Arre Kulraj maine tujhse kaha tha na ki decorations ke liye white or violate colors ke flowers lagenge.

Kulraj:- Han ma ap chinta mat kijiye maine decorators ko bol diya hai white or violate colors ke flowers lagane ko'.dont worry ma!!!

Gayatri:- Arre worry kaise nahi karun'or yeh badmash preet kahan hai, maine use bola tha mithaiyan lane ko

Then only Preet came there in Rajesh Khanna style

Preet (sings):- Tumne pukara or hum chale aaye'.jaan hatheli par le aaye re!!!!

Gayatri:- Chup kar preet'.tujhe masti soj rahi hai'.maine tuje mithaiyan lane ko kaha than a'kahan hai????

Preet:- Mom take a chill pill'.maine abhi shop pe call kiya tha to unhone kaha ki unka admi delivery ke liye nikal chukka hai'.bus ata hi hoga.

Gayatri relived but again asked

Gayatri:- Kulraj tere bauji kahan'maine unko bola tha ki hotels jaake ek baar sare arrangements dekh le.

Kulraj:- Ma bauji already kiran ke sath hotel chale gayen hai arrangements dekhne. Ap itna tension kyun le rahi hai.

Gayatri:- tension hogi hi na Kulraj'mere Heer or Prem ki sagai hai aj'kitne sapne dekhe the maine is din ko lekar or aj wo sare saone sach hone wale hain'.isilye mae chahati hun ki sab kuch perfect ho.

Preet:- Mom sab kuch perfect hoga bilkul Prem bhaiya or heer bhabi ki Jodi ki tarha. Ap chinta mat kijiye. Main hun na!!!

Kulraj:- Isi baat ka to darr hai!!!

Both Gayatri and Kulraj started laughing. Preet pouted and Gayatri pinched his cheeks.

Just then Prem came downstairs

Kulraj:- yeh lo!!! Dhule raja bhi agaye..

Gayarti (asked):- Prem!!! Tu kahin bahar jar aha hai kya'

Prem (nervously):- umm han ma wo ummm'ek bohot important meeting hai client ke sath'to bus wohin ja raha tha.

He lied. Actually he was going to meet heer because he was dieing to see her face.

Gayatri:- Nahi aj koi meeting veeting nahi'aj teri sagai hai prem aj ke din bhi kam karega'bilkul nahi'chal ja upar apne kamre mein.

Prem:- ma lekin!!! Pls ma jaane do na bohot important client hai'.I promise mae 1 ghante mein wapas ajaounga..

Preet smirked put his hand on prem's shoulder

Preet:- really bhaiya bohot important client hai???

Prem:- umm han'

Preet:- acha to kya naam hai us client ka???

Prem:- tu jan ke kya karega???

Preet:- Arre bauji to kehte hai ki mae thorda sa kaam mein hath bataoun apka'isilye pooch raha hun bataiye'kya naam hai client ka

Prem:- Acha tu kabse bauji ki baat manne lag gaya'

Preet:- Aj se infact abhi se'.batao na

Prem:- Preet tu'ma ap samjhaye na isse'

Preet:- Ma mae kya kuch galat bol rahaa hun. Mae to bauji ki agya ka palan kar raha hun'.infact PB mae to keh raha hun. Aj apki sagai hai to apki jagaha mae chale jata hun uss client ko attend karne. Thik hai.

Gayatri:- Han yeh thik rahega'

Prem (shouted):- Nahi!!!!!!!!! Ummm mera matlab hai nahi, actually wo kya haina Preet'.us client ko na sirf mae hi attend kar sakta hun'or koi nahi kar sakta'.

Preet:- Kyun PB aisi kya baat hai uss client mein'jo sirf ap hi usko attend kar sakte ho or koi nahi kar sakta'.PB ap indirectly challenge to nahi kar rahe ho'.Bus ap to uss client ko attend mae hi karunga'.

Prem grabbed his collar and drag him in the corner away from gayatri and Kulraj

Prem (whispered):- arre mere bhai kyun mere pyar ke chiken mein kabab ka haddi ban raha hai'pls muje jane de na

Preet:- my darling PB yeh apki saza hai'.apne apne or Heer bhabi ke chakkar ki baat mujhse, Preet se, the greatest Preet juneja se chupai, to uski kuch to saza milegi hi na'.isiliye ap bhabi se milne nahi jayenge'.ap to bhabi ko aj sham ko hi mil payenge'

Prem:- Dekh preet tu'(gabbing his neck)

Preet:- PB ab apne zyada mera mood kharab kiya na to mae ma se keh dunga ki ap kisi client se milne nahi balki Heer bhabhi se milne ja rahe the

Prem immediately leave his neck and start massaging his shoulder

Prem:- Nahi tu to mera pyara bhai hai na'please mat bataiyo'.

Preet signaled Prem to massage his arm also but Prem irritatedly jerked his arm

Gayatri:- yeh kya khusar-phusar chal rahi hai tum dono bhaiyo ke beech'han?

Preet:- Ma PB haina kisi client se milne nahi j''.

But Prem interrupted him in middle and start massaging his arm'.

Prem:- Nahi ja raha'.Preet keh rah hai ma ki mae kisi client se milne nahi jar aha'.haina Preet???

Preet:- han ma!!!

Gayatri:- very good'chalo Kulraj ek baar Heer ka shagun ka saman dobara dekh lete hain'

Kulraj:- Jee ma chailye'

Gayatri and Kulraj left from there'

When Prem make sure that Gayatri and Kulraj are out of their sight Prem stopped massaging Preet's arm and start folding his selves..

Prem:- Preet beta (said while folding his selves and taking small small steps forward)

Preet:- Haannn PB!!! (Sensing some danger starts taking steps backward)

And Before Prem could catch him Preet ran from there and Prem starts chasing him

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In Maan Villa

Heer was sitting on the thinking and smiling about events that held in her life. Jewelleries and sarees are scattered all over the bed. Just then

Meher:- Di!!!

Heer :- Han Meher

Meher:- Apse koi milne ayen hain

Heer (confused):- Mujhse milne? kon?

Meher shifted aside and Heer saw Sanjana was standing their

Sanjana (smilingly):- Hi Heer!!!

Heer:- Hi!!! Andar aaona baitho'

Meher left from there leaving them alone to talk. Sanjana sat on the bed beside Heer

Sanjana:- Mae bus tumhe congratulate karne aai thi. Congrats Heer, tum bohot lucky ho jo tumhe Prem mila, uska pyar mila. I am so happy for you'

Heer:- thanks!!! Tum aj party mein to arahi ho na?

Sanjana:- Nahi!!! Mae nahi ana chahati. Kyunki mae Prem ko kisi or ka hote hue nahi dekh sakti'..

Heer:- Sanju tum..umm I am so sorr'

Sanjana:- Shhh!!! Don't be sorry, jo kuch bhi hua isme na to tumhari koi galti hai or na hi Prem'galti to meri thi ki maine hi meri or Prem ki dosti ko pyar samjh baithi. Prem mujhe nahi mila, kyunki bhagwan ne use meri kismet mae hi nahi likha tha'.kyun Prem to tumhari hi kismet mein tha hamesha se' or mera yakeen mano'.Mae tum dono ke liye bohot khush hun'

Heer:- Agar tum khush ho to aj party mae kyun nahi arahi

Sanjana:- Darr lagta hai Heer, ki kahin mae kamsoor na banjaoun'Prem ken a karne ke baad bardi mushkil se khud ko sambhala hai maine'.or agar mae aj tumhari engagement party mein agai to muje darr hai kahin mae toot na jao'isiliye behtar yahi hai..ki mae party mein na aaoun. Mae tumhare or Prem ki khushiyon ke beech nahi ana chahati Heer'because I love you both'

Sanjana and Heer smiled with tears in their eyes and hugged each other

Sanjana :- And by the way ek waje bhi hai jo mae aj party mein nahi aapoungi'

Heer:- or wo kya!!!

Sanjana:- Rishab bhaiya!!!

Heer (confused):- Rishab!!! Tumhara barda bhai or jo Prem ka friend or business partner bhi reh chukka hai right. Mae bhi 4-5 baar mil chuki hun unse.

Sanjana:- right!!! I so happy bhaiya aj raat ki flight se U.S.A se wapis arahe hai'.aj poore 4 saal baad mein unse milungi'isiliye mae thorda waqt unke saath bhi bitana chahati hun'

Heer:- that's so nice!!!

Sanjana :- Ok Heer I gotta go now'.congrats once again or Prem ko bhi meri taraf se congrats karna ok

Heer nodded and hugged Sanjana. Sanjana was about to leave just then Teji entered Heer's room

Sanjana:- acha aunty ab mae chalti hun

Teji:- Arre beta tum ja rahi ho, party ke liye nahi rukogi kya'.Heer tumne roka nahi sanjana ko

Heer:- Ma woo

Sanjana:- jee aunty Heer ne to roka tha but wo kya haina ki aj mere bhaiya arhe hai U.S se to isiliye mae ruk nahi paoungi.

Teji:- Acha chal theek tu ja'lekin shadi pe koi bahana nahi chale ga, or apne bhaiya ko bhi sath leke ana. Thik hai!!!

Sanjana:- Jee aunty zaror. Acha mae chalti hun.

Teji:- thik hai beta, apna khayal rakhna

Sanjana:- je!! Ok bye heer, bye meher!!!

Meher and Heer:- Bye

Soon sanjana left from their

Teji turned towards Heer

Teji:- yeh kya Heer. 5.30 baj gaye hain or tune abhi tak taiyaar bhi hona shuru nahi kiya. Hume time pe Juneja's hotel pohochna hai

(Note:- engagement ceremony is going to held in Juneja's hotel)

Heer:- Han ma bus abhi taiyaar hoti hun

Teji:- Jaldi kar puttar, 6 baje se to mehmaan bhi ana shuru kar denge, Or bechara mere Prem ko kitna intazar karna pardega.

Teji tease her, Heer blushed and Meher started laughing seeing the red cheeks of her di

Meher:- Ma ap chinta mat kijiye. Mae di ko time pe ready kar dungi.

Teji:- Han or tu khud bhi time pe ready ho jaiyo.

Meher:- Han ma take a chill pill. Sabse pehle ap to ready ho jao, apko to sabse zyada time lagta hai taiyar hone mae.

Teji:- han han jati. Tum dono jaldi taiyar hoke neche ajana jaldi thik hai'

Heer and Meher nodded their head and Teji left from there and both the sisters start to get ready for the evening

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In Juneja Mansion

Trio Preet, Kunal and Manmeet continuously teasing and irritating the "dhule raja". Prem came out of the washroom wearing Black Armani suit looking completely dashing and handsome. He looked at the mirror seeing the fitting of his suit.

Kunal:- aaye- hayyee kya baat hai Prem babu barde chamak rahe ho

Preet (teasingly):- PB apko nahi lagta ki piche apka coat thorda sa loose hai'I mean kuch ajeeb sa lag raha hai.

Preet winked at Kunal who trying hard to control his laughter

Prem (worriedly):- Kyaa!!! Piche se coat loose lag raha hai'oh God ab kya karun'koi or dhanka suit bhi nahi hai mere pass. Maine uss designer ko achi tarha se samjaya tha ki fitting achi honi chahiye'lekin'.ab tak to uska showroom bhi band ho gaya hoga'or doosra suit lene ka time nahi hai, warna hotel pohochne mein der ho jayegi'ab kya karun'

Prem kept blabbering worriedly and Preet, Kunal and Manmeet started laughing the reaction of Prem. Prem got shocked.

Prem:- yahan muje tension ho rahi hai or tum log has rahe ho..hadd hoti hai yaar!!!

Manmeet:- Prem just chill!! Preet tuje chirda raha tha'Coat ki fitting bilkul sahi hai.

Prem:- Sahi hai fitting??? Paka na???

Manmeet:- Han baba teri kasam'Aj to Heer kya baki sari lardkiya bhi pagal ho jayengi tuje dekh kar

Prem blushed

Preet:- Han PB

Prem ran after Preet to beat him and Preet hid behind Kunal to save himself

Prem:- Preet ke bache bohot maze le raha hai aj to mere'.rukh ja beta mera bhi din ayega

Kunal (laughing):- Ok Ok ab yeh sab chord or jaldi niche chal, bechare Lalit uncle hume bula bula ke thak chuke hain,

Preet:- han chalo PB!!!

Prem, Preet, Manmeet and Kunal came downstairs where Lalit and the other family Members are waiting to them all ready

Gayatri came forward to Prem and kisses his forehead

Gayatri:- Hayeee!!! Kina sona lag rah hai mera Prem aj, kisi ki nazar na lage tuje.

She put the kal tikka behind Prem's Ear and Prem blushed

Kiran:- ohoo dekh rahi ho Kulraj, humare saale sahab sharma rahe hai'

Kulraj:- Aj to mere bhai ke chehre pea lag hi ronak hai

Lalit (strict tone):- Ho gaya tum logo ka mazak!!!

Everyone got silence hearing Lalit's strict voice. Lalit looked at everyone and then

Lalit (teasingly):- Ab kharde kharde ek doosre ki shakale kya dekh rahe ho'chalna nahi hai hotel'dekho to bechara humara Prem, kabse tardap raha hai apni Heer se milne ke liye

Everyone was shocked at first and then started laughing. And Prem was like "bauji ap bhi"

Lalait:- chalo chalo bohot der ho gai hai'warna pata chale ki humse pehle lardki wale pohoch gaye or humare hi hotel mae humara hi welcome kar rahe hai

Everyone again laughed and headed to their Hotel

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In Maan villa

Everyone was ready and waiting for heer in the hall to come downstairs.

Teji:- Yeh Heer itna time kyun laga rah hai

Balraj (whispered to Meher):- lagta hai Meher teri ma insecure feel kar rahi hai ki Heer, use zyada time laga rahi hai taiyaar hone mein

Both Meher and balraj giggled

Teji (suspiciously):- Kuch kaha apne???

Balraj:- arre mae to keh raha tha Meher ki Heer ajayegi, aj suki sagai hai to time to lagaigi na taiyaar hone mein.

Teji:- Arre lekin itna time??? Yeh lardki bhi na, shadi hone wali lekin harkate bilkul bacho jaisi'

Balraj (low tone):- Han bilkul tum pe gai haina

Meher giggled

Teji (angrily):- Kya!!! Kya kaha apne???

Balraj:- mera matlab tha ki tum chinta kyun kar rahi ho'hum late nahi honge'.abhi meri Lalit se baat hui hai, wo log bhi bus abhi abhi hi nikale hai ghar se'unhe pohocne mein bhi time lagega na'.to tum chinta mat karo'Mae ek kam karta hun baki saar jo mehemaan hai unhe mae bus mein bhijwa deta hun'.unhe bhi time lagega pohochne mein. Thik hai!!!

Teji:- Han yeh thik, ap baki sare mehmaano ko bhej dijiye'Meher zara tu dekh ke to aa'yeh Ash or Misha abhi tak Heer ko niche kyun nahi la rahe hain'

Meher:- Jee maa

Meher went upstairs. She knocked the door of Heer's room

Meher:- Ash di, Mish di'.or kitna time lagega'sab log niche wait kar rahe hain

Misha:- han bus ho gaya'ek minute!!!

Meher:- offo di ek minute karte karte ap logo ne poora adha ghanta kar diya hai'jaldi karo na!!!

Just Then Misha and Ash opened the door

Misha and Ash:- ho gaya!!!

Meher:- Di samne se hoto na muje Heer di ko dekhna hai'

Ash:- Arre roko roko'ahem ahem so ladies and only ladies here we are representing the Princess of the Day "Miss Heer Maan"

Both Misha and Ash got aside and revealed the Princess of her Prince charming "Heer" who was looking beautiful in baby pink heavy designer saaree with silver border'.looking out standing!!!!

Meher (her mouth was wide open):- OH My God!!! Di'.it's you!!!! I can't believe it'.you're looking gorgeous di'.hmm aj to Prem jiju ke sach mein hosh urdne wale hain'.

Heer blushed

Heer (blushingly):- Ab bus bhi kar Meher!!!

Meher:- No di, mae sach keh rahi hun'I swear agar mae lardka hoti na aj hi abhi isi waqt apko yahan se bhaga ke le jaate'seriously!!! Ufff Di kahin meri hi nazar na lag jaye apko

She also put the kaka tikka behind her ear and she hugged her

Misha:- umm excuse me meher tumhe nahi lagta ki thordi bohot tariff ke hakdar hum bhi hai..

Ash:- Han or nahi to kya hume hi to itni mehnat se Heer ko taiyaar kiya hai

Meher:- han ha nab dono ne bohot acha kam kiya hai..well done

Ash and Meher: Thank you!!! Thank you!!!

Meher:- Ab niche chalo sab log wait kar rahe hain'

They came downstairs and Teji was so happy to see her daughter in this avtar

Teji:- mera bacha kitna pyara lag raha hai aj'aj mae tere liye bohot khush hun Heer, bohot khush !!!

Heer hugged Teji. Just then Balraj came there

Balraj:- Arre Teji chalo gardi taiya'.

But he was stopped seeing Heer

Balraj:- Heer!! Beta bohot achi lag rahi ho'pehle to Heer papa ki princess thi lekin aj se yeh princess apne Prince charming ki kehlayegi.

Heer (with tears):- Papa!!!

Heer (hugged Balraj):- Heer hamesha se apne papa ki hi princess thi or hamesha apne papa ki hi princess kehlayegi'

Balraj (wiping his tears):- I love beta!!!

Heer :- I love you too papa

Teji:- Chalo bus bus karo ap, thorde bohot ansoon bidaai ke liye bhi rakhlo, or chalo ab hume chalna chahiye

They headed to the Juneja hotel

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[So guys here is the next chapter. I am sorry, isse zyada lamba chapter nahi likh sakti mae sorry. I hope you all enjoy it. Now eagerly waiting for your comments. Thank you!!!]

Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved preet.. how he know beforehand that prem is going to meet heer...love prem and preet bond...

The tesing and all by everyone especially preet... its just so adorable and make me smile...

Ahhh... finally their engagement is going to happen... hmmm both bride and groom are waiting eagerly to see each other...

Awesome... Fantastic... update ... loved it and eagerly looking forward to the next part...

thanks for the pm... do continue soon...

take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wowww loved loved loved it... Awosome Fabulouse update... Eagerly waiting for the next part... Thankx alott for the pm... Please update soon... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love preet! and the whole teasing and blushing 😆
i can imagine handsome prem & beautiful heer
don't know what will happen to this desperate jodi premeer 😳
gr8 update kiran 👍🏼 thank u for making time to write an update 😃
❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
its really an awesome update
lovely tooo...
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Posted: 12 years ago
kiran that was such a sweet update
Loved it completely
The family scenes were really cute
And prem -preet were too good
Can't wait for the engagement
Don't know what will happen to prem when he see our heer😉
Eagerly waiting to know that.
Heer-Balraj scene was so touching and emotional
Overall a great update
Keep it up dear
Love you
Take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
🤗 Kiran

pg 111
It's so much fun to read. Enjoyed it a lot.
Oh man I can't believe how funny Preet is. He was enjoying the heavy dose of teasing on Prem. Feel sad for Prem as he looked so helpless hehe
Whoa Sanjana paid visit to Heer. It'll be nice if she keeps her word.
Oooh Rishabh is coming - wonder if there is gonna be any drama in engagement party hmm
I love the interaction betw the Maans. Meher and Balraj are awesome - making fun of poor Teji. Heer and her friends were sweet. Lovely scene. Simple description of Heer and it was sweet.
I liked Prem and his friends scene too.


Loved the funny dialogues. Thanks so much making us laugh. It was too funny. Can't wait to see what is going to happen next.

Banner is v beautiful. Keep it up.
Edited by AASUS - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
what is going to happend next in your story
thanks for the pm

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