Asya : Night of stars ...(CH5b PG 18)(/23/2/13) - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: skavya

I just read this FF

Its amaizing
I am waiting for the next .. Delhi trip of Asad & Zoya



thank you so much dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey friends hows you all i am really very sorry for not updating the ff . cox of m health problem i left updates for some time but slowly i am trying to cover all my updates . so let's come to ...

CHAPTER 5B

asad was walking and calling zoya , zoya ...
he was much near to her that she can hear him
asad : zoya ... kahan chali gayi miss newyork
she turned to go back to station but as it was new place for her so she was confused which way to go...



Asad fret searches all the area in station and then went out of the station and search all the near places for her but all get in vain as there was no trace of her again ...



he was worried and was shouting her name to find her...
suddenly he heard a scream from a far place and it didn't take a second for Him to recognise that voice and yes it was zoya ...
without giving any thought he ran towards that place..
zoya's place



zoya was doing efforts to find a way to move towards station and suddenly some goons appereared in front of her ...
they covered her and started misbehaving with her ...
she slapped one of them who was trying to come near her ...
whom she slapped to take revenge came more closer to her and tighten his grip on her wrist ...



zoya immidiatly screamed and push him away .
suddenly Asad arrived by the help of her screams

the fight begins and he fight wid those goons in a perfect heroic manner ...
zoya was standing shocked on a side soon all goons ran from there...



zoya was hell scared nd as goon ran from their zoya ran towards Asad and hugged Him tightly and starts crying like a small baby ...
First Asad got confused to see that side of zoya and was not understanding what to do ...



he cupped her face and in pleasing manner told that he is here nothing wil goin to happen
her or no one can harm her...
they both share an immense eye lock and lost in each other eyes and forget everything around them...
thus their first step towards what we call LOVE...


BG music played back

Mitwa ishq pe zor nahin...


soon both come in their sense and was feeling embarrassment that how they can loose their control over their emotions
Zoya was first to speak up
zoya : wo...m khan i'm really very sorry meri waja se
asad quickly move forward saying it's ok ...



zoya was still standing there opening her mouth and shocked
aakhir mr.khan apne aap ko samajhte kya hai ( she thought in her mind ) .
when she saw up to him he went far she immidiatly run after him
asad know she is afer me he roll his eyes and stare at another side



zoya : mr khan aakhir aap ki problem kya hai aap aap hamesha itne gusse aur attitude mein kyun rehte hain ...???
asad : meri adat hai
zoya : to change kirein na apni iss adat ko
asad : thike hai agar mein aap ko kahun ke aap dhang ke kapde pehna karein or mera ghar chod kar chali jayein to kya aap ye karein gi ?


zoya was speechless so she silently walk with him toward station .

i know it was short but as i say i am trying to cover all my pending updates so may for some time i give short updates😆...


PS. who want pm's send their buddy requests to -lisana- she will pm you all ...
Edited by saba-ramisa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93

awsome rami but very short yaar...continue soon

thnx for pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
lovey yaar :)
do continue soon :)
thnxx for the pm :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update!
Thanks for the pm!
Feel better!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Nice post Ramisa, very interesting read. its short but very nice. plz do the next part soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
I am loving this story... Really good. Please pm me the parts
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
I just read all the chapters and they're amazing :-) please pm me when you continue

Nikki <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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the way they both questioned each other...that was so funny...

Mr akdu aadat hai uski...

awesome...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great story plz continue soon

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