MG FF - Unwantedly Tied : updated part 13 pg 48 20/09/14 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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updated above😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jass.KN

Well first of all congrats...I m new to ur work so will try to be a good reader...Coming to this part.😃 its awesome...Language is very clear...flow of thoughts easily understandable and Above all the concept is very clear .A well known problem of Indian society forced marriages which happens even in well educated society and mostly girls suffer..I think u have some thing more than this to show...Update soon



And dear if u don know me ..we had a talk on fb two days back...😳

Sonia


Thanks dear, yes I remember our conversation.

LOL! Well...I have just added my bit to the show. I hope you like it.

Love,

Mishty
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome girls. Loved it.

Thanks to Shradda & Dipithi that maaneet readers are again getting to read this FF but in the right style.

Well edited.

Love Mishty
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MishtyShah

Awesome girls. Loved it.


Thanks to Shradda & Dipithi that maaneet readers are again getting to read this FF but in the right style.

Well edited.

Love Mishty

Thanx Misty...😃
from Shraddha n Dipitha
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Posted: 12 years ago
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reading it again...m feelin sooo good...
thanx guys
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayapari

reading it again...m feelin sooo good...

thanx guys


Haha...same!

Reading your own work is so wierd. I keep thinking - no way I wrote this!

LOOL!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 2

She came back from her thoughts when she heard the wind whistle loudly. She turned around and saw her husband a few inches away from her. She saw him, stare at her peculiarly.

I just came to tell you to go to sleep! said Maan in a stern tone.

I will go to sleep when I want to go to sleep. You don't have any rights on me, just because we are married does not mean I will listen to you every time. This is my life, stated Geet.

Look Geet...we have already had this argument, and to be honest I don't really care about you. Also if you don't listen to me, I can just as well force you said Maan while smirking at her.

You wouldn't dare? said Geet with an open mouth. She tried to back away from him but her husband was faster.

It's not good to challenge your husband on the first night itself said Maan. He pulled her with force so her chest slammed against his chest. He slid his hand in her nighty, his hands were roaming around her navel. He pinched her waist with force, making her scream out loud.

Tell me Geet...will you come and sleep on the recliner? asked Maan in a low voice.

NOOO shouted Geet. This angered Maan.

How dare she defy me? he thought angrily.

His hands rose further up, touching her just below her breasts. He could feel her cotton bra with his hands. Her smooth supple skin was creating warmth beneath his skin.

I will give you one more chance Geet...! Just remember where my hands are placed and what I could do to you. Will you come and sleep inside? asked Maan.

Geet could feel his hands on her stomach. She felt violated. His touch was soothing but he was a stranger. She couldn't bear this anymore. She couldn't bear this humiliation from her so called husband. She was just 21 years old for crying out loud. No man had ever touched her the way he touched her, yet it felt right.

She jerked back from her thoughts when she felt his hands rising. She suddenly panicked and yelled "Yes".

Good...! he said. Suddenly all the warmth left her and he took a step back, waiting for her to enter the bedroom. She slowly entered and slept on the recliner. She closed her eyes, but sleep was a long way from her.

Maan lay on the bed with his eyes closed. He knew that she would come into the room; nobody messes with Maan Singh Khurana. He remembered how soft her skin was when he touched her. How small her waist was. The way she was breathing and how her chest was moving up and down, her flushed reactions, her supple lips. Her breasts that was almost too good to touch. She was a very responsive woman.

Oh God...what am I thinking? I should just stay away from her, thought Maan and gave into his tiredness.

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It was 5 am when she woke up. She checked the surroundings and everything came back to her like a lightning bolt. She saw the man that she was forced in the alliance with. He lay sprawled on the bed. He looked so innocent and when he woke up he was a complete Rakshas or a Control freak. She stood up and stretched. She felt a little pain in her ribs and her hands. They were fingerprint marks on her elbows. She slowly walked outside as she felt slightly claustrophobic inside the bedroom. She lost a track of time as she sat on the swing, falling back asleep.

2 hours later, Maan woke up due to the sunshine disturbing his sleep as the curtains blocking the terrace window were open. He got up frustrated to close the curtains, but by looking at the decorated bedroom, everything came flooding back to him and he looked around for Geet.

GEET... he shouted but received no response. He walked onto the terrace frustrated.

His breath stopped as he saw the sight of an angel sleeping on the swing, unaware of anything. He saw tresses teasing her cheeks and by the expression on her face, he knew that she wasn't comfortable. He walked towards her in a trance and his fingers were about to touch her face when she twitched. He backed off immediately, feeling angry at himself for giving 1 girl importance.

What are you doing Maan? Giving Importance to the girl that managed to turn everything upside down within 2 days! He thought angrily.

GEET... he shouted.

Ji... Aap? She said petrified by the angry glare that he was giving her. She wanted to run inside to avoid speaking to her.

Why are you sleeping outside? Oh now I understand...you want to get ill so that I have to stay at home and look after you!

But remember 1 thing Geet... I am Maan Singh Khurana who doesn't give a damn about the world... If you want to get ill then you can and if you want then I can permanently shift a sofa to the terrace! He said angrily and walked off to his workout.

Geet just stood stunned not knowing what to say...to be honest, he didn't give her time to speak.

What did I do and why is he reacting like this? Oh leave it Geet! Who knows what is going in the mind of Zalim Singh Khurana she thought.

She then quickly got ready in a gorgeous red saree and she put the mangalsutra on and filled her Maang with Sindoor. She took out clothes and put them on the bed for Maan and headed downstairs to greet Dadima, Annie, Naintara and Dev.

Good Morning Bete said Dadima happily. Geet bent down and touched her feet.

Good Morning Dadi said Geet in a happy tone, to make it feel like that nothing bad happened between them.

She really liked Dadima and admired her as a woman. One of the reasons, that Geet initially liked Dadima because she was like a mother to her and had an understanding with everyone. Soon everyone greeted each other.

Geet bete...You have to make a sweet dish today, ek rasam hai...which every suhaagan follows on her first day of marriage. We cannot have muh dikhai but we can certainly do this one said Dadima.

Ji Dadi... What shall I make? asked Geet

Kheer nahi, Halwa nahi, Gulab Jamun' Naintara listed while trying to decide which she should have.

Then Annie came forward and whispered in Geet's ear.

Bhai likes thandi kheer.

Thanks Geet whispered back.

Annie, Naintara and Geet entered the kitchen when Naintara asked.

How was last night Geet? teased Naintara. Geet just became embarrassed and carried on with her work.

Was he good in bed? Geet eyes became wide open and she turned red by her devrani's blunt question.

Naintara... Leave bhabhi alone... said Annie.

Oh come on na bhabhi... Bata bhi do! Whined Naintara.

All the teasing was just endless for Geet and she couldn't wait to just get out of the kitchen. She took the kheer prepared by her to the dining table. Just then Maan entered in his arrogant avatar; completely ignoring her while he took a seat at the end of the table.

She noticed that he was wearing different clothes to what she got out in the morning but she didn't want to argue at that moment of time.

Maan yeh kheer taste kariye na! Said Dadima enthusiastically. (Maan taste this kheer)

Maan couldn't refuse his Dadima so he took a bowl. He started eating it. It did taste really delicious compared to what he had eaten before, it tasted mind-blowing.

Bhai... aaj kheer bhabhi ne banayi hai! Must say she has magic in her hands! Said Dev. (Today Geet has made the kheer)

Hmm... It's alright aur yeh sab karne ki koi zarurat nahi thi... humare ghar mei servants hai! he replied arrogantly but knew he liked it but was just being awkward.

Servants ko humne chutti di hai... jab mere ghar mei itni achi bahu hai... toh hum unke haath ka khana, khana chahti hai! said Dadima proudly!

Hmm... kyun nahi... maanna padega bhabhi... aapke haath mei jaadu hai chirped Naintara.

Dadi...main ab office ja raha hun...aur Dev I will see you there! Maan got up from his seat and was going to start walking when he heard Dadima's voice.

What is this Maan? It's the first day of your marriage and you're going to office. I don't approve this at all said Dadi angrily.

Dadima... there's an important meeting in the office today and I need to attend it, even if this is my first day of my marriage, and I am sure Geet won't mind? He looked at her angrily.

Ji Geet replied meekly without looking to his eyes.

Maan just left before anyone could ask him questions and Geet accompanied him outside quietly without creating a scene on the first day. Soon as they reached outside, he turned around and faced her.

You told Dadi, right, to make me stay at home? How dare you interfere in my life? He asked in a low tone shooting an angry glare in her direction.

Nahi maine kuch nahi... Geet began to say but was broken off by him.

Listen Geet... for the whole world you are my wife but for me you are no-one. So stop trying to pester me with this marriage nonsense.

You don't need to do anything for me or make anything for me. You should be glad that you are living in such a mansion that you wouldn't even have to dream of. Don't expect anything else from me.

Oh and yes... try and stay away from me because you would be doing me a great favour.

He said this all in one go, not letting her speak. He soon left to office while she was standing lost in her own thoughts. She knew that he didn't care about marriage and neither did she, so why was she doing all this and for whom was she doing all this? She may come from a small town but that didn't mean that she was clueless.

She had now just made up her mind to never ask him of anything. Why would he care anyway? She walked back into the mansion while trying to think what was the next step?

She approached Dadi in her room and asked her.

Dadi...Before I got married, I was doing my MBA in IIT delhi. If you don't mind can I please join my college? said Geet confidently.

Of course beta...you can! But make sure that no-one finds out that you're married otherwise they will pester you, especially the media, they love creating the stories. So when you go to college you don't have to wear a mangalsutra and sindoor.

Thanks...Dadi...you are the best! Said Geet and gave her a warm hug.



Note : This FF belongs to Mishty Shah... If anybody wants PM's for this FF then add me @MishtyPm


Edited by ds.mish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome updates dr

love it.

do continued soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome updates
loved it
Maan shouting on geet
Geet taking permission from dadima for higher studies
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heya Misthy!!! you have another story named "UNWANTEDLY TIED"... are these two same or else please do your other Maan and Geet creations...

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