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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update Kunchu! 👏
Loved ArNi scene! It was too good! 😳
Hmm...you are an awesome writer Kunchu! Baaki logon ka pata nahi, but I toh love ur writings! 😊
Continue soon!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update yrrr...Loved roshni today...Amaizing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update
Pari aur papa perfect combination hai...cute!

The action sequence, sikandar's message to Arjun
and the link to the past...Roshini and her promises...were just awesome...loved Arjun's emotional outpour

So thats the problem between Sam and Arjun...good going!
I loved this part the most dear...I dont think its beating around the bush
COnt soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice
precap is scary
wtat is it in that parcel?
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved arjun nd pari secnes
the flashback secnes was amazing
loved roshni
love each nd every bit of it
intersting precap
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it yarr
plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
My dear Kunchu,

I do not think you need to worry too much about anything.

One should not expect each chapter to be uniformly gripping; it is after all a serial, not an OS. Then again, I like your handling of emotional scenes more than that of the action scenes, but that is a personal preference that need not be widely shared.

This time, interestingly enough, the action part , or rather the aftermath of the action, has come off very well, and the very calm way in which Sikandar's footsoldier commits suicide after delivering his message is truly chilling. I was intrigued by this kind of behaviour. It is not the same as the TV serial scene of the head of the Anti-Narcotics Wing committing suicide on the steps of the court after delivering a similar message from the same man. That official would have welcomed death, since he would then escape deep disgrace and a very long prison term. Here it is different, for this man has no such compulsions, and yet he seems to die willingly. He looks more like a committed terrorist than like the common gangster.

The secret that Arjun has been hiding for so long, which has been eating him from inside all this while,comes out now with explosive force. Roshni comes across as a very brave and principled wife of a police officer, who does not want to become his weakness. But things are not always so simple, and in the end, it is Arjun who pays the price for the choice she forces him to accept, and he is still paying it.

But it is also clear that what she insists on in the only way that the near and dear ones of police officers can be safe, as they can no longer be held hostage to ensure that the officer is soft on crime. The old Israeli policy of no negotiations with hostage takers was always successful, and it minimised the danger to the country and its people. Nowadays even they have gone soft, and the results have been predictable.

Shyamala Aunty
hai everyone!! here comes the next part!!!

CHAPTER 28:


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Posted: 12 years ago
hi kunchu di🤗...awesome update...in last update papa rawte was so touching n cute avataar of arjun...roshani n rathore knew that he would be a great father...👏👏👏👏👏...arjun pari's bonding is like father daughter bonding too good...pari caleed arjun papa...it was just so heart touching...arjun promised roshani thats why roshani died...arjun has gone thriugh a lot already plz ...make him atleast out of it... riya's efforts should be apreciated 👏👏👏👏👏...sam
happy coz pari called arjun papa...i'm so happy for arjun that atleast pari can give the happiness that he deserves...
n di ur update is damm...😆😆😆😆😆beautifull...👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for your comments everyone!!!
so here is the next part!!!

CHAPTER 29:

The emotional downpour was dirturbing both Arjun and Sameer. Sam was silent all through the ride back to the office. The trio often glanced at him and to each other deciding whether they should speak up or not. They decided to give him his liberty of silence for a while until the unknown storm settles. They didn't know the meaning of the message or its significance. But they only knew that it had some inner meaning and memories connected to it. Something so deep that they couldn't see properly.

On reaching the office everyone watched the team unusually silent. Usually they would walk in with the case discussion and more orders to the other staffs. The staffs had already witnessed an angry agitated Arjun storming in before and now an unusually silent team coming in with a bigger storm hidden inside.

While walking into the discussion room, Sam looked at the glass wall of Arjun's cabin. He was sitting in his chair; forehead creased proving his endless thoughts and cold stare to nowhere particular. Maybe something called him out from inside that made him look sideways and met the eyes of his friend. Yes friend and not the chief. The team who was already inside the hall, was watching everything. Sam was just casually or rather not so casualy looking at Arjun's door and Arjun answered him by another look. They were wondering about the so-called telepathy between them.

Sam walked in and was followed by Arjun in a while to the hall. Aisha started recording the events on the discussion board. Chotu was finding out the dead man's identity and Sree was suppoting Chotu.

Another staff knocked and walked in handing over a parcel to Arjun. "sir, ye abhi abhi aye hai.apke naam" he nods and the staff walks off. He looks at the brown colored parcel and the name on it. it was addressed to him, without the sender address. The team's attention was on it too. He was standing at a corner of the table, while the team sitting at their own positions.

Arjun slowly opened the parcel and put his hand inside it. he felt something like wooden. He pulled it out carefully. Each moment he was pulling it out, somewhere inside he felt something similar. Something odd.

He took it out completely and looked at it. the brown cower fell from his other hand. Sam watching his face every second and he could swear that Arjun looked pale. "kya hua Arjun?? kya hai ye??"

Arjun was controlling unknown emotions now looking at it. Sam and team noticed Arjun's hands shaking, maybe due to rage. His face showed disgust and more than that pain. Sam couldn't hold on more. He stood up and walked towards Arjun.it looked as if Arjun didn't even realize Sam was near to him. "Arjun?? kya hua??"

Arjun wakes up as from a bad... No worst dream. He hands over it to Sam and walks out of the office. He walks away to the parking lot and starts his SUV to the only destination, where he could find comfort.

The team was shocked at the sudden behavior. Sam now looked at the parcel and he at once knew what the trouble was.

Sree: kya hua sir?? Kya hai ye?

He keeps it on the table for everyone. It was a photoframe with a smiling Arjun and Pari walking hand in hand at the beach. But the shocking part was something else. A big artistic letter "S" written over the photo in red ink, almost covering the smiling faces.

Ais: iske matlab...

Sam: is baar message sidhe nishane pe laga hai...

Sre: sir hamare samaj me kuch nahi aarahe hai. aaj wo message jo uss admi ne diya...aur ab ye photo. Maana ke ye Arjun sir aur Pari se related hai, lekin aap dono aise kyu react kar rahe ho, jaise aap ye message pehle bhi suna hai!!

Sam: kyunki humne ye do messages pehle suna hai Sree. Aur shayad tumhe Arjun ke baath yaad hoga ke 'history is repeating'. its really repeating guys. Aur patha nahi iss bar kya kya hone wale hai.

Ais: sir aap saaf saaf kyu nhai batha rahe hai?

Sam sits on his chair tired and takes the photoframe. "pichle baar jab aise parcel aya tha, thab ek photoframe me, Pari ke jagah Roshni thi. Aur jab wo direct message mile, thab uss admi ke jagah Sikander tha."

He closes his eyes absorbing the memories.

Arjun's SUV:

He was driving like a maniac. That photoframe brought a lot of memories and more than that, even though he hated it to admit, it brought back fear.

"Arjun, apkeliye koi parcel aya hai..."

He was having his bath after coming from the station. "parcel?? Aur iss waqt.(its almost 8 pm). Lagtha hai aaj kal courier service wale kaafi hoshiyar hogaye hai. lelo Roshni... mien abhi aya."

"bhaiya (to the courier man) aap mujhe dedijiye. Wo naha rahe hai" she signs and get the parcel for him.

He comes out after a while. "Arjun apke parcel table pe hai. kisne bheja ye tho likha nahi. Lagtha hai ko secret admirer hoga"

"secret admirer nahi yaar, shayad mere GF me se kisiki hogi. You know they miss me a lot na??"

"acha... lagtha hai aap bhi unhe bohot miss kar rahe hai. tho jaake mila kyu nahi?"

He comes and hugs from behind. "kya karu meri jaan. Dil tho ek hi hai. aur wo aapme kurbaan hai. tho khaali haath kaise jau??"

"achaji, tho mien wapas kardu apke dil??"

"bhoolke bhi aise karne ke koshish math karna. Mar jaungi jaan!!"

"ab bas kaafi romance hogaya. Parcel dekhlo, thab thak khana table pe hoge."

He walks and takes the parcel and sits on the sofa. There is no sender address. He opens it and gasps. It was a photoframe with him and Roshni together. Maybe it was taken by someone when they had gone out the previous night for a dinner. And above it was a big "S" in red ink.

"Arjun, khana ready" he didn't hear it so she came to him. He was looking at something deep in thoughts. "janab GF ke gift dekhke khogaye hai kya?" he didn't respond again. She felt somrthing off and so sat by him on the sofa. "kya hua Arjun? aur ye kya hai?"

She looked at the frame and understood. She looked at him and knew it was something serious. "ye "S" kaun hai Arjun?"

" S yani Sikander."

"aur ye frame ka kya matlab hai? kya hua??"

"Roshni, Sam aur mien ek case ke piche hu. In fact Sikander ka piche. Wo ek bohot bada don hai. drugs, smuggling, human trafficking, you name anything, sab karthe hai. uska racket bohot bada hai. jabse ye case liya hai, dhamki tho athe hi rahthe hai. lekin ab..."

"ab bhi kuch nahi hua. Isse bhi ek aise dhamki samjhiye."

"Roshni you are not getting it. koi kal raath hamare picha kar raha tha. Aur mujhe patha thak nahi chala. How could I be so careless?"

"its ok Arjun. Relax. I know aap inke jad thak jaoge. Aur kuch bhi apko nahi rokge. Na mien, aur na ye dhamki. Ab fresh hojao aur khana khalo. Aur ye frame do, me ye writing mita dungi. Waise ache pic hai, aap kaafi ache dikh rahe ho"

He knew she was trying to make the air light. So he smiled at her. "nahi Roshni, mujhe ye dept lajana hoga. Its an evidence too."

"ok then aap ajao, khane keliye ok!!" she walks off, leaving his mind to work extra time.

The next morning, he shows the frame to Sam.

Sam: Arjun take more precautions. Roshni se kaho ke school na jaye. Aur ghar pe hi rahe.

Arj: I already asked her Sam. Par wo maan nahi rahi. Aur isliye...

Sam: what?? How could you be careless Arjun?

Arj: mien usse kabhi kuch mana nahi kiya hai Sam. Aur naahi karunga. Aur mera dil keh raha hai ke kuch nahi hoga.

Sam: dil?? Huh?? Ek police officer ko dil se nahi dimag se sochna hotha hai!!

Arjun looks at him and smiles.

Sam:ab ye smile kyu de rahe ho??

Arj: main yahi dialog aaj kal kaafi bar sun raha hu. Isliye.

Sam: Arjun its not time to joke. Understand.

Arj: I know Sam, isiliye meine Roshni ke phone ko hamesha detection pe rakha hai. wo jaha bhi hai, mujhe patha hoga.

Sam: firse sochle Arjun.

Arjun (in mind) : bohot baar socha hai Sam, par mien kya karu? Mujhe bhi usse kahi jaathe hue dekh nahi paraha hai. but I have promised her. I'm sorry Sam.

Kash mein uss din se Sam ke baath maan liya hotha...

He reches home and looks at the guards. He instructs them to be extra vigilant now. He walks in and finds Pari playing video games. She hears him and runs and hugs him while he sits down on knees for her. He hugs her tight and kiss her hair. Badima and Riya notice him.

"kya hua Arjun? tum is waqt yaha kya kar rahe ho?"

"kuch nahi Ma, bas aise hi. Iski yaad agaya." He hugs her again. Suddenly a call comes from Rathod. He takes it and walks to the window.

"Arjun, aaj ek aur explosion hua hai! aur waha ke local police ne phone kiya hai ke waha ETF keliye koi message bhi hai"

"kaha hua hai?" (Sam gives the location) "wo jagah yaha se kamse kam 2-3 hours ke drive pe hai. is baar yaha se ithne dur kyu?"

"Arjun ab ye sab sochne ka time nahi hai. chalo"

"nah Rathod. It's a distraction, to take us away from here. Hum, sabko aise chod ke nahi jasakthe."

"then what to do?"

"Chotu ko yaha bhejo. He'll stay here till we come back. Chotu ke yaha aane ke baad mien khud waha ajaunga. You carry on. We'll meet at the spot"

"ok. I'll send Chotu now"


PRECAP:

Sikandr's call to Arjun


CHAPTER 30: PAGE 133

Edited by kunchu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved d chapter dear

Arjun's pain was quite visible

n dis sikander...😡 idiot Stupid Moron

y he has to create troubles for Arjun

n now he s after pari...Arjun's sweet doll😊

i hope he s caught soon

n arjun make him pay for wat he did
Edited by tani23 - 12 years ago

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