MG FF -My Vampire Boss- Part 23 Page 35 - 02/08/2014 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice...
cont soon...

PS - do edit the title everytime u update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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My Vampire Boss


PART 1


The girl woke up with a start when her alarm started ringing. She cursed herself for getting late for her New Office and her opportunity to meet her New Boss too. She started getting ready after switching off her alarm.

Khurana Constructions,

The girl was walking along with her co staff to meet her new boss.

Staff:Director's character is quite difficult to understand. But I hope you meet his expectations.

Girl:Thanks I will do my best.

They both enter the cabin of the Director after a knock.

Staff:Excuse me Sir, I would like to...

The scene in front of them made both the Girl and the staff to go red in embarrassment. The Director was leaning on a girl, who was sitting on the office table, the guy's hand was on the either side of the girl to balance himself on the girl.


The man looks straight at the girl and the staff while hugging his girl with one hand.

Girl (giggle) :Oh Maan!! This is why I always ask you to lock your cabin. She get down and adjust her dress. I guess you got some work to do. So I better leave now. Bye. (She kiss his cheeks and leave)

Geet and the Staff were witnessing the whole incident.


Staff:I'm terribly sorry Mr. Khurana...

Maan looking at the direction of the girl:So?

Girl:I am Ms. Handa and I am your new secretary. And I was looking forward to work with you.

Maan:You starting today? (Looking into the file)Ms. Geet Handa right? I have heard so much about you. You joined only a few months ago but you have shown a extraordinary qualities.

Geet:I am afraid so.

Maan Singh Khurana, aged 27, still single. The Managing Director of Khurana's Construction. Younger son of the President. He reached this position not because of his father's influence but he is truly capable of this.

He is very strict towards his staff, and never forgive mistakes. The most odd thing of all is his working timing. He works after the general office hours. He insist his secretary to work late night. Due to this, his many secretaries have left the position without any prior information. So the whole secretarial office (The secretarial office is the place where they recruit and train people especially for the post of secretary) follows him.

He never separate business from pleasure(Ha Ha... This character is totally opposite to the Maan which we have seen in GHSP). He is always famous for his relationship with many women. There are humours that more than 75% of this guest are women. And he uses his office cabin exclusively for his secret affairs. I also noticed that the female staffs in here are fighting with each other to gain his attention.(Hope it is a very stuff job. But still I wish they can)

Oh God! I am not suppose to let these humours into my mind. But he is what I have said to you guys.

Maan was looking into the file of Geet. He raise his eyes from the file and stares at her from top to bottom, like studying her.

Maan:Excellent qualities. But... GET HER OUT OF HERE NOW.

Next: Part 2

I have divided the Part the same way as it was the way made by Priyanka as you guys know this is a Take over FF. But there will be some areas where I have made some very slight changes but not that noticeable. I hope I can get the same amount of Likes and Comments for this story even though there are read already. Waiting for your reply. Thanks.

Edited by mathura152 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pls pls a bit bigger yaar... Pls try to make the next and coming update. Bigger...
Interesting update waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: spvd

CS
nice...
cont soon...

PS - do edit the title everytime u update...


The CS is not at all changed...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ar_art

Pls pls a bit bigger yaar... Pls try to make the next and coming update. Bigger...

Interesting update waiting for more

Okay then the Part wise break up might get disturbed... No Problems. will give long update dear...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update
nice start
thanx for the pm dear
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome
thnx for pm..waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THIS IS THE FIRST TIME I AM READING IT
THE START IS GOOD BUT HAVE LONGER UPDATES AND YOU CAN IMPROVE ON IT IF POSSIBLE
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start.
Maan's character really totally opposite of what Maan is.Interesting.Previously also I loved the story and I m gonna enjoy more.

Cont. soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am really looking forward to read ur version of this story...

I loved this story and I waited really for Priyanka to update but I guess she is busy so she handed this over to u and I am very excited to know where u have made changes and how u take it forward...I will again read it from start...

very interesting start...

thanx for pm...


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