GUIDING LIGHT - FINAL PT pg 323 -12.12.06 - Page 84

Originally posted by: rocky25

Hi,

How can you you stop now?..... 😭

😳 God arent you getting evil?

ab intezaar nahin hota.. next part please....

tata,
rocky25

😲 ME...? EVIL...? 😛 😆 thank you!!! 😈

pehle thoda saans lene do, then i will update the next part!! 😕 😆

Originally posted by: ovaltine

Good part. Saahil's plan is working. at least part of it. Need to move it up one level now. Looking forward to the next part. 👏

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

hi meri cordy di..

tusse gr8 ho!! jai walia aap bhi gr8 ho!

loved it di!


please do continue!!

thanks guys! 😃 i agree, both Walia men are a real piece of work aren't they?! 😆 i'm glad you're enjoying it! 😉

👏
i loved it...kia baat hai...quality aur quantity both there!

Originally posted by: maria-n

Dear Cordy,

of course I remember, so I humbly request you to accept a few comments of a lady belonging to a Nation, that can be seen as the scum of the World, albeit that you belong to a similar Nation, so that sort of levels us....😉

😆 ENGLISH-DUTCH BHAI-BHAI!! 😉

Well, I have to laud you for the fact that you are back soon with the update, indeed! In spite of a short night, as I have witnessed personally (not to mention my night....sleeping 3.30 and waking up 7.30, for a husband needing coffee and children needing lunchbags for school😕. Ah, well my health is robust, no probs.😃)

wow! looks like you're as sleep-deprived as me!! It's all this forum's fault!! 😡 😆 i think we could both do with a coffee! 😉

Another quality episode, it almost becomes boring to comment, can't you put in a misser sometimes, so that I might bash you for poor language and stupid turns and twists? Murdering your characters (only for one epi, please). Oh, I will beat you left and right for that!😛

thanks so much hun! 😳 you're too sweet!! i could say the same to you guys, you all flatter me so much I can never say anything more than a million thank you's!! for once turn around and tell me that i'm writing crap, and to re-write it or stop!! 😉

But no, it was very consistent with the characters as unfolding here - Sahil as the clever naughty boy, who loves his brother so much that he chooses to hurt him (Sahil: the new Bani! 😆😆 ).

😆 never thought of it that way!! Sahil as the new Bani! 😆 But I would hope my Sahil, unlike our dear Bani, will in the end get exactly the result he is looking for - without too much heartache!! 😉

And Jai, patiently listening, hiding his disgust, until he can no longer hold it. And of course Bani, waiting in the background, probably biting her nails, for being apprehensive about the cause of events.

Keep it up dear! Am enjoying! (even enjoying to reply)

regards, Maria

thanks my dear supporter! 😃 i enjoy replying to you too!! 🤗

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGG cordy........that was amazing!

seriously...it was awesome!!! poor Sahil...i really do feel sorry for him for that slap...but hey..if he's happy..i'm happy 😆

awww...jai...i'm falling in love w/ him again 😳 😆

you BETTER update soon, missy!!! 😉

Originally posted by: frndsnstrngers

wow cord that was a heated up part.if only it was shown in d seriel itself.amazin part.waitin eagerly 4 d update
debolina

Originally posted by: stahmed69

Dear Cordy,

I am speechless, don't know what to say. I love your JW sooooo very much. Great writing.

Love,

SONIA.

aw you guys are the sweetest, thanks!! 😳 so glad you're enjoying the read!! 😃

ps. sonia - your siggy is lovely!! can i steal it to use in my emails...? 😳

Originally posted by: mk727272

Hey Cordy,
Yeh Jo tum bar bar aisa kaam kar rahi ho yeh teek nahi!!! 😭 😭
Kya mera dil yahan pagal ho raha hai aur aap hai jo mazaa kar rahi hai!!! 😡
Arre bahi JW agar yahi baat Saahil ko aapna cabin main bolta jahaan bani bhi sun sakti toh kaisa hota!!!!! 😛
Unless Saahil already had Bani on his extension and Bani heard everything!!!! 😳 😳
U cannot stop like that!!!!!
Not fair ok!!!!!
Cannot wait to read the next part!!!!
Pls continue sooooooooooooooooooooooon!!!!

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish

i'm so sorry for making you cry manish!! 😭 ab mujhe bhi rona aagaya!!

now about your take on Bani overhearing - what can I say, i must be quite predictable!!! 😉

thanks for your comments hun, i will try and update asap!! and now i am off to read hum tum part 6!! 😃

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Bechara sahil he got a slap from his Jai Bahiya for playing cupid and for acting 😭 🤗
I am so proud of Jai for confessing his true feeling about what he feels for Bani, wow Sahil should realize that his brother loves Bani deeply but Jai still needs to confess it
awwwwwwwwww that was so emotional and gripping 😭 I am so proud of Jai 🤗
I can know image Sahil running to Bani's cabin or to Bani when being chased by Jai saying Bhabhi bacho 😆
please write soon 😛

😆 KYA THAPAR VAH VAH VAH VAH 👏
For that i slaute you 👏 👏 👏 .
Ah if only it would happen like this, someone push jai to his limit making him explode and admit all! 😛 😃
Well done...nice way to provoke him...and force him out of his secluded shell! 😃
So happy that you didn't make me wait too long...aur why did Bani try and slap jai? hmmm....good thing sahil didn't listen to her!
Now i am very curious to know what will happen next....between Sahil, Bani and Jai.
Am wiating for the confession scene....or something romantic....do hope that you'll write it and post it soon...in a few hours time 😆 😆 varna merah kya hoga? 😆
Love this ff....waiting for you to continue soon! 😳 😃
Luv
Sweetu
P.S. Aur yeh thanks kyun? 🤗 It should be me saying thanks to you...for writing this ff in the first place! 😳

i was sooooo into this!! i was like omg!!!...

it was getting good and then u ended this!!! i didnt even know what was going on around me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

cuz i could picture that!!!


i am dying for ur next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!