Mere Papa Maan-2 Th#7/Last part 57 pge 87 n 89/epilogue pge 89 /17 Aug - Page 2

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congrats for new thread
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Whole day and whole night had been passed but '' Papa's '' poor girl still unconscious Replica of her father brought destiny exactly same as her mother..Like Geet she also has every thing but even than nothing.

Geet only daughter of millionaire father should have a life as she wanted or as her parents might have dreamt about her...about her grand plans for future. But what happened ? Destiny cheated her...When even after loosing every thing it should be her parents's...like any other parent to protect and secure her future and this is rule of the mankind..She fulfilled that duty giving her every thing to protect to save her father's life.

She saved him..Inder got back what he had lost just due to her.But she lost herself .This empire was also hers but it was her father's dream for her..for which she secrificed herself...her own dreams..ownself...She had every thing again but nothing after loosing herself...

Now destiny cheating this lil girl when she has every thing..She has her father on her side but she was not into her senses...Literally she has nothing at this point of time.Geet was aware what she was doing taking that step 5 years back ..But poor girl what happened with her..It was not wrong to say she had been ditched by her dear ones who brought her here making lies to her.Ditched by doctor who even not gave a chance to come out of sleep.

Standing outside her room some where Maan was thinking same.He was taking himself responsible for this.Not for every thing but at least for the things which were in his hands..The share of happiness Mannat deserved but he snatched it from her...

Every passing second was bringing new challenge for Maan..,With Mannat's critical condition Geet's depression level was increasing.Teetering around in Intensive care she was not ready to take bit rest.Just one person was permitted to stay with patient in ICU so it was not possible for other family members to take care of both Mannat and Rehaan.But Maan had to be with her .He was following her commands. When she was with Rehaan she asked Maan to be with Mannat and vise versa

Maan forcibly sent Daddi Maa home with Dev.All other family members were in waiting room every one refused to go back.

'Geet you should take some rest ' Maan asked Geet when she came out of Mannat's room to be with Rehaan

'How can I Maan ?' looking blankly in his eyes she questioned

'Geet I can understand .Even if we keep every thing apart this is also reality you have depression and you need rest.One more life is dependent on u ?' Maan's inner grief was taking shape of frustration but he can't show...

'Ek jagah baith jaane se kya dimaag sochna band kar dega...jo mere depression ko kam kar de...' But she said with ease

'Okey I don wanna mess with u.'He knew nothing gonna change her..He put his weapons down...

'Aap Mannat k pass he rehna..usko chod kar mat jaana'

'Okey u go Rehaan is also alone' he said calmly'...

'Aab to jab takk wo uth kar mujhe ''Mere Papa Maan'' nahi kehti usko main chodne walla nahi.' he thought even after lots of self control his eyes flooded but some how he hided tears.

Geet nodded her head and moves toward Rehaan's ICU

Maan eyes were still chasing Geet from behind until she enters room.After this he also pushed door and moved inside.Where tiny lil girl was laying lifeless on bed.Closing her eyes.

Without any noise Maan sat next to her on bed.Brushed her hair and kissed on her tiny forehead.Tears which he had controlled hardly now break the barrier of over flooded eyes and rolled down to his cheeks.Few of them fell on Mannat's cheeks eyes and forehead when Maan kissed her

' You are angry on me..Its okey..But why with Ur Mommi and Brother ? ...Aap Rehaan ko Nanu k ghar le jaana beta.I m really bad..I deserve punishment..But plz once open ur eyes ' he hugged her tightly and started to cry bitterly.But soon he realized he is in ICU.

'Yoy told your Momi ..You will forgive me once.But even than I m ready for punishment' mumbling this near to her ear he put her down on bed again

In Rehaan's Room

Rehaan was sleeping peacefully. Even after nurse's request to sit on couch and to have some rest Geet preferred to sit next to him...Rehaan was under effect of medicine so in deep sleep

'Aap bhi so rahe ho...Mannat bhi so rahi hai...to aab main kya karu..No u can't sleep utho...utho...Rehaan...' she started to jerk him ' utho maine kaha' she started to scram..But Rehaan was under effect of medicine so no reaction...

Nurse heard her hurriedly moves toward that direction...But after getting no response form Rehaan Geet herself ran outside to call doctor...

'Doctor...Doctor mera beta mera bacha...wo uth nahi raha..' Nurse and ward boy tried to hold her from both sides but she pushed them with full force...


This was enough for family to smell odd... whole family in doubt of any critical situation ran toward ICU and Maan too came out of room...He had estimated she was under effect of fit.

After pushing Nurse and ward boy she ran toward Mannat's room where she bumps into Maan. ' Maan ...Mannat...Rehaan...uthao unko..utha...'

'Geet hosh main raho... ' Maan tried to calm down breathless Geet

'Let me wake them up...years back U took Rehaan from hospital with u when he was sleeping... I beard that separation..how only I know...but not now...I can't let my kids sleep in hospital...no one will take them now..' this strange explanation surprised all why she was thinking so ? But this was insecurity of a mother who remained away from her child and now when they r close to her their lives r at risk

'Geet no one gonna take them away from us.Dekho udhar sabhi apne hai yahan...Apno k sath hai Rehaan aur Mannat apne Momi Papa k pass...' he grabbed her in his arms and moved her face toward whole family worriedly running toward them...

Geet calmed down bit but again she started to scram 'Mannat marr rahi hai Maan.., Meri Mannat ko bacha lo..Bacha lo meri Mannat ko..' she started to loose her senses in Maan's arms ' Rehaan ko uthao wo nahi so sakta...Meri Mannat..uthao usko wo itna nahi so sakti...kya hua hai usko...Maan bacha lo usko' Her scrams were echoing almost sound proof ICU...and whole family was crying with her in this state she became unconscious.

'Nurse you are still standing here...Where's the doctor .. my wife she is under fit what the hell doctor is getting late ? ' he shouted lifting Geet in his arms.

'Jija Ji chaliye..I m here na..I gonna examine Didi... know all details and I have infromed Geet's Doctor he is out of town.Kal morning takk he aa sake gay ' Nandini dragged Maan toward examination room

'My mind is not working Nandu even I forget that u r here...Jaldi chalo...'


Ward boys came with stretcher in between this and Maan put Geet on it...

'Maa plz be with kids' Maan shouted looking back toward Rano.

'Jayo beta aap Geet ko dekho...hu hai yahan..' Rano said with heavy heart..she was also crying loudly resting head over Inder's shoulder..

'Jaanta hu main aap apni beti k pass rehna chahti hai but at this time she needs Maan...Har baar humne sambhala usko...But we can't do that magic which Maan can do...We can hold our child from behind ..jab wo chalte chalte thakk jaaye tabb...per Maan wo uske saath chalega...she needs him to be with her in her fight...Let her come out of it...and I know she will survive in the struggle for own existence ..Her fight with ownself...' Inder consoled her hugging her tightly


In other room Doctor Nandini started Geet's check up and nothing was alrite it was clearly visible from her face...She performed several tests

'Any problem Nandu ?' worried Maan said

'Her BP is going down ..I can't tell u lie Jiju her mental condition is much critical Isse Didi ki pregnancy per bhi asar ho sakta hai...I m afraid kahi Didi ka miscarriage na ho jaaye ja humme koi hard step na lena pade...' she whispered near to his ear...She was doctor but a sister first.Always with her sister in any situation Even this day may come he might haven't thought this.Saying this she gulped her saliva...


'R u mad Nandu...pehle mere dono bache zindgi ki jang ladd rahe hai and now u r saying my unborn child is also at our mercy..he is danger for his mother...and with him ..Geet's life is also at risk..Fir reh kya gaya mere pass...This Maan Singh Khuraana the Great MSK...for me nothing is impossible now such helpless that I can't do any thing to save my kids my wife' shocked surprised looks at Geet with blank eyes...takes some steps back and strikes with door


'Jiju plz hosh main raheay...Apko itna tense dekh kar Geet Didi bhi aur tension main aa sati hai...Unko kush derr main hosh aa jaaega..Like always happened after fit...But unka internal system bahut weak hai...' she placed hand on his shoulder wiped his rolled down tears...

'Hosh main...Behosh to pehle tha...aab jab hosh aaya...I m on verge to loose every thing...Why god giving punishment to my kids and my wife of my doings ? I didn't let Mannat say me father...aur rabb ne soch liya wo mujhe Papa keh-lane ka haq nahi dega theek hai...He want to punish ...I m ready but not at cost of my kids lives my wife's life...No no...' saying this Maan decided some thing ...Strong determination to do some thing was clearly visible on his face and without waiting Geet came back to senses .He wiped his tears with his back of hand and left room in hurry...

'Jiju where r u going..' there was some thing fishy thinking this Nandini asked nurse to take care of Geet and instructed her not to tell any thing to Geet if she comes out of this state...She also ran behind Maan...

'Jiju sar firay hai...I m really getting afraid...He is not in condition to think any thing kahi kush galat na kar le...' She was mumbling when she bumped into Dev...

'Nandini what happened...itni jaldi main kaha bhag rahi ho'

'Dev I have no time ...lets go with me...Jiju ka mental state theek nahi and he left ward in this condition...before he leaves with car lets go...' she held his hand and without letting him speak she dragged him


Her phone buzzed Lucky was there.He had seen Maan going out so he also started to chase him and now Maan was in under ground parking area from where Lucky called her...Nandini asked him to control situation for some time as they were also reaching in minutes...

'I parked car in outside parking isliye maine Bro ko nahi dekha...You r rite.. Nandini ..he can do any thing wrong...lets move fast...'


In UG Parking...

Maan was about to unlock car when Lucky back called him


'Jija Ji where r u going ?' As Nandini said he was trying to put him in conversation to divert his mind..

Maan put a sight on him ' I don know ?' saying this he unlocked car...

'U don now every one is here ..and night time u can't go to office than where r u going KM ?'


'I said mujhe nahi patta' irritated he said

'If u don know than who knows Bro...u can't run away from this battle ground like a coward ' Dev came running near to him and grabbed him in his arms tightly

'Log to dusro se haar kar bhagte hai ..unko kehte hai coward...jo insaan khud se he haar jaaye usse kya kahogay...who I m Dev' he jerked Dev off

'The great Maan Singh Khuraana...jisne apni Beti ko fight back karne ki khubi viraasat main de hai...and now he is running leaving his kids..leaving his wife to fight alone..'

'I m the reason what happened...I hav no rite to remain in Geet's life...Bahut himmat se jee rahi thi wo jab takk main nahi tha uski zindgi main...some where due to me Rehaan is in this state and to save him...Mannat's suffered...ya I m coward...let me run away...' without waiting any reply from them Maan took his car out of parking


'Bro is really turned out to be mad...hurry up we hav to follow him..Nandini aap yahan raho main aur lucky jaate hai ...'


'Chaliye Dev bhai hamari car issi parking main hai...'Lucky said and both moved out behind Maan





So any idea what gonna be next...why Maan ran away ?...What he is upto ? What is future of their unborn child...? When Mannat gonna be out of this state ?


So many questions Wait for next update...


Lots of comments and likes r expected if next update is being expecting...I wrote after long if find some mistakes please forgive me...its more important at least I dared to write again...😭



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Edited by Jass.KN - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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mee first



nice



feeling soory for maaneet😭


update soon😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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too gud superb update,geet getting d panic attck n maan loosing it,,,,,i just hope tht both d kids n geet will recover soon,,,,,,maan totally feeling lost,,,,,,,update d next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESOME just loved it ,very emotional part felt sorry for both maan n geet
hope maannat will be ok soon other wise maan will become mad 😭
beautiful writing dear brilliant 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsem update mannat still in danger maan geet taking care of kids and geet fit maan getting mad hope to have mannat fine soon



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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz kisiko kuch maat hone dena plz...sab ko thik rakhna...humein lagta hai maan darga ja rahi hai...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Finally most awaited part.geet's insecurity,maan's blaming himself.nw d unborn is suffrng,what is happning?waitng fr nxt

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