VIRMAN STORY(THE OINTMENT)1 - Page 40

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

CCP im also ready 😆

🤣🤣preeto to ab paka gye ,,but preeto dar mat🤣

finally ur besharam no 1 is here,
ab to cmnt krne me bi sharam aa rai hai yr.
isle is bar murga style me sorry.
*kaan pakad k and sa th me puppy face*.
chal ab tera shuru,
update was super duper,
thnk god manvi virat ko jaldi hi mil gayi ,i thought inka to seperation track strt ho gaya(tu mere type sochti hai yr),flt bad fr virat yr,such a sad past,and apne virman ka reunion to awsm tha ,finally ab dkhte hai aage kya hoga.
perfectly written.
and shaiko k entry se kya hoga,i am really excited 4 dat .

thanks for the pm nai bolungi ,Kyunki itna to friend k liye krte hai na.

Originally posted by: ashishi

Res res balle balle ..oye oye preeto ornaments k sath tje ek or gift free free lol

unres😳

oye pehle to i wanna say shaiko to bhut acha boy hei rey🤣pehle i thot ufff shaiko but now it seems good yar😆all credit goes to preeto ka ointment🤣

ok chal come to ur upd😳

oye mannu is back wa ji ❤️

hawww bechara virat hvnt mom dad n dad hei bhi to inne saru type🤢

i love tat part when virat was drunk😳aweeen mannu was protecting him☺️

manvi vadhera☺️

super duper update preeto👏

acha sun this time if u try to delay upd na than phir dekheo dhishum dhishum☢️☯️🤣

update soon soon soon soon plzzz

loved ur upd❤️

is mindblowing upd k liye ek jhaphi ho jae🤗

tujhko achanak se shaiko kaise accha laga re? 😲

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

RES 😃

UNRES 😃

Wow Preity awesome update .. Loved the begining very much.. The way you have portrayed Virat's thoughts is just amazing..

Im quite disappointed in Virat's father.. He didnt really care about him and then he slapped Virat 😡😡.. Not good ..

Sahana sounds fishy .. Virat hates Sahana but still he is friends with her daughter.. He is such a sweet and caring person .. Loved Virat-Kaka bonding..

Finally Virat found her .. "Look, I know her. Don't you guys dare to snatch her away from me" - Loved these lines veryy much.. He recognised her even when he was completely drunk 😳.. and then Manvi defended him in front of that man 😳 .. Loved that part.. Jealous Manvi is a treat to read 😛.. and Virat is also very protective of her ☺️.. Loved the part where he introduced her as Manvi Vadera .. Now who is this Mansor Rehman ?? I hope he wont create any problem for them.. Eagerly waiting for the next part.. Shaiko ki re-entry.. I really want to see a jealous Virat 😳.. Please please continue soon.. Thank you for the pm in advance.. Take care 🤗🤗

tujhe sahana yani rupa ganguly fishy laga?
bong connection rupa ke sath tera match nahi kia 😕 😆

Originally posted by: preity_d

tujhko achanak se shaiko kaise accha laga re? 😲

ye sab teri daya hei🤣no no cid wala daya nahi🤣

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your comments matters a lot
sorry this time I wasn't able to reply each

guys without any bakbak I am updating next part


part : 7

They entered the grand house hand in hand. Virat was tremling due to heavy drinking. Manvi supported him till the room which was escorted to them by some men of Mr. Rehman. They entered their room. It was a medium lengthen room. The first thing Virat did after entering the room was fall on the bed and went to sleep. MANVI left a big sigh looking at him and then she adjusted her petite body in the couch and drifted off.

At 1pm, Virat first woke up. He pressed his forehead and let out a groan. His head was terribly hurting. He then looked at the room. That seems unfamiliar to him. His vision was blurring. He looked at the couch. A small curvy figure was lying there. He blinked his eyes several more time to register who she was. A smile crept on his face when he understood who she was. He stood up from the bed and went towards her while holding his paining head. He thought to wake her up.

"maan" but stopped midway. She was looking so heavenly in her sleep. Free from every worry which she had in her life. He slowly caught her by her waist and shoulder and took her in his arms. Then he turned back and after few steps placed her in the bad. The noon breeze suddenly bellowed from the opened window. She shivered a little. He quickly covered her with a warm blanket and caressed her cheeks. He then tried to remember how they reached the place and after doing few minutes of mental cyclone the flashback knocked his mind. He smiled at the thought that Manvi didn't protested when he called her as his wife. He again looked at his new sweet addiction and get lost. A knock at the door brought him back from his daydream.

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"Hum to Virat, right. Manvi aur tumhari kab shaadi hui? I mean tumlog bahut young lagte ho" asked Mr. Mansur.

"yeah, actually her father is a bit rude person, he didn't support us, so we flew away and got married." Virat said sweating in tension.

"what is your age?"

"23"

"But fleeing not a solution beta" he said.

"You are right uncle. We are going to him to ask forgiveness just after the marriage" he blurted in a quick manner.

"That's like a good boy. Waise what are you doing?"

"I am at third year of my M.A. at Government Art college of Mumbai. There is my maternal house in Kashmir. I came here to finish my project in peace. But here I got to know, the recent political condition of the sta..." he interrupted by rehman.

"wow you also a painter? My niece is a amazing painter. She also studies in Art College in Mumbai. May be you two are in same college. Wait I will call her"

"You niece that means who is getting married?"

"No no not heena. Tabassum. Heena's younger sister." He said excitedly and went to call her.

He came back after a while holding a young lady. The lady was wearing a designer chirudar. She was beautiful; her beauty is able to draw anyone's attention.

"She is Tabassum" said rehman.

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Manvi woke up near about 2:30 to 3 pm. She searched her room but couldn't find Virat. She stepped out from the house while rubbing her eyes. There virat and Tabbasum were chatting and laughing. An electric shock of anger ran from her body.

"Viraaat" she shouted.

Manvi looked worriedly at her sudden loud scream. He ran to her. "What Happened? "He asked

"nahi kuch nahi. Wo meri pith thodas dard ho raha hain pata nahi kyun?(no nothing' just having back ache) she said.

Tabassum came to them and said "hey' I will call the doctor"

"No not needed" manvi said sternly. Virat was surprised to see her talking like this. She never talked to anyone in this tone before.

"Then I will give you a back massage. You know I am a very good physiotherapist." She said smiling.

"aww. How sweet!" virat said smilingly looking at Tabassum.

"When I have a hattakatta jawan husband, then why should you waste your time? He will give me a back massage. Kyun Virat? Doge na?" she asked pouting.

Virat was dumbdtruck watching her. She never thought the sehmi hui si dari hui si ladki could be that bold. "Wow yeh to bilkul sherni nikli" he thought.

"Then wait for a moment. I will bring a magic lotion. My fianc is a Doctor, so no need to worry. That is a great lotion"

"tum bhi taken? I thought we could make a hot couple!" he said winking at Manvi.

Manvi looked at him with disgusted face. He enjoyed pulling her leg. Her expressions were heavenly.

"pagal" said Tabassum while patting Virat's cheek. Virat gave a wide smile to her sweet gesture. Manvi looked all these from corner of her eyes and stomped to the room. Virat followed her. Manvi started throwing thinks at him, not the breakable one. She had throws pillows plastic flower sticks at him. Virat quickly closed the door.

"itna gussa kyun ho rahi ho?(why are you being so angry?)" he asked.

She stood numb. Really she didn't think that. Why was she being so hyper? Now she was hell embarrassed due to her own behavior. She went near the closed door to hide her face from him

"Why you were drunk last night?" she tried to divert his attention.

"Jawab nahi diya tumne" he said

She felt nervous. She started gripping her palm more and more at the handle of the door. Virat saw this and said, " wo main thoda upset tha kisi wajah se to pee liya. Sorry"

"But tumne mujhe dhunda kaise?(how did you find me?)"

"I felt unconscious after drinking a lot, when I woke up I found me at the road in front of that desi bar. And heard a sound of horn. I saw you at the back seat. Why the hell you escaped from my house?" He said angrily shrugging her shoulder.

"aaah" manvi moaned in pain. Just then Tabassum reached infront of the closed door.

"chodo please Virat" she pleaded

"nahi" he groans

"aaah please" she again winced

"No"he said

Tabaasum ran from there blushing hard. Sounds of her shoe brought back Virat from his trance. He looked guilty and stepped back apologizing.

"Its okay" she opened the door and found Rehman there.

"Yes uncle" she asked

"Beta Virat tumhe dawa laga diya kya? Tabassum ne mujhe yeh dia. He handover her the ointment and ent away.

"abhi laga dun kya?" virat smirked

Manvi only rolled her eyes in answer.

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It was becoming tuff for virat and Manvi to hold on their concentration because they never stayed in a same room. And the truth is they were attracted to each other, off course totally oblivious to themselves. She had her lunch at 4'o clock along with Virat in their room. They were late for today's lunch, so didn't able to have it with everyone else in the dining table. Rehman's old mother herself made them eat everything standing beside them. Manvi felt puckish suddenly and went to the washroom running. Virat waited for her outside the door, hell worried." She is still unwell" he thought.

She came out after sometime. Mother came to her and asked "kaunsa mahina hain?" she asked Manvi."tumhe aur khayal rakhna chahiye iska beta" she ordered Virat, who was beyond shock at the sudden revelation.

"ji Three months" manvi said.

Virat looked at her amazed. What was she telling? False or true?

The old lady left after showering a mountain of do's and don'ts.

"Manvi aisi jhoot nahi bolna chahiye tha yaar" he said, "maine tumhare saath aisa kuch kab kia jo tum"

Manvi was surprised seeing his reaction. That means he didn't hear anything that day. Wow Manvi again destiny played with you. In the whole day you are thinking that he accepted your friendship after knowing you truth! But look here, he didn't even know the truth. She was blocked. She needed time to fix everything and she wants her shaiko now.

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The day passed and came a decorated lighted evening as it was a marriage house. Rehmans invited them for dinner together. Virat was there along with Rehman and everyone at the dinner table. He met Aaban, groom of the marriage, heena's fianc. Aaban seemed a nice, innocent caring boy to him, may be of his age. He was continuously helping Heena with placing rightly her dupatta, asking her drinks. Heena also doing the same. Lovey-dovey couple Virat thought. Just then he saw Manvi coming. She was wearing a anarkali churidar suit looking as good as an angel. That suit may be Tabassum gave her, Virat thought. He stood up and went to her. He gave her his hand but making him shocked she refused. Virat didn't notice that Manvi was steeling glances from him. They reached the table. Mansur Rehman one by one introduced her to his every family member. It was a big family.

"And this is our wood be daamad Aaban."

Aaban who was back facing them turned. Smiles faded from Manvi's lips. "SHAIKO?!!!!"

May be it is longer than the previous but I am not satisfied with it. please every criticism is welcomed.

please don't forget to comment and like. It matters a lot.

will send the PMs tomorrow

res🥳
unres😳

OMG preeto mindblowing upd👏

u noe i read this upd 2 times😳

loved it yar❤️just freaking awesum upd👏

awww virat took her in his arms☺️aweee😳

yea i can imagine she was sleeping 😳she was looking like inno cute lil gal😳

n tabassumn sudden manvi shouted☺️jealousy😉

oh god yar viat doesnt noe k manvi is pregnant😲awww yar poor mannu😭she was thinking k he knows it but no he doesnt noe this😒ab kya ho ga when he comes to noe about manvis pregnancy😒

shaiko ki entery😆

ab to bas tu next upd jaldi kr de yar plzzz i cnt wait now

upd sooon sooon sooon sooon plzzz😛

once again superb duper upd🤗