Arshi: As Long as There is Life last chapter up - Page 4

Originally posted by: Archu61

I like it so far but you need to elaborate more on how no one is awaRe of khushie having an accident or going into surgery where are the rest of the cast ,or family ? It's a good plot and you can work more on the plot as you go along keep on it I read the the latest one so I glad you told us the background it interesting

thank you so much for telling me for to improve me self and l am glad that you have like the latest part but the rest the cast will come but on time. and if you have read the the latest part you have seen that l have presented lavanya and she will came back in the story:)

thanks again for commented and telling how to improve me self:)

Originally posted by: please6

love the story and plzzz update longer and sooner

l am glad that you like the story:)

ok as I couldn't comment in chap 1 and 2 in time...
here my comments on the chapters one by one :
chap1: First, I like your style, how you write it keeping it simple and clear...at the same time full of emotions and intense...
chap2: I just like how you paint Arnav's pain without even knowing about Khushi...he felt it in the bottom of his heart that she's in danger...😭😭😭😭😭
chap3: I like the way they simply fall in love with each other and married each other in one day and so fast...like it that way ...😳
how they met in caf and how Arnav flirt with her was amazing too...
I like it and want to read more dear 😉
the-crazy-girl

Originally posted by: the-crazy-girl

ok as I couldn't comment in chap 1 and 2 in time...
here my comments on the chapters one by one :
chap1: First, I like your style, how you write it keeping it simple and clear...at the same time full of emotions and intense...
chap2: I just like how you paint Arnav's pain without even knowing about Khushi...he felt it in the bottom of his heart that she's in danger...😭
chap3: I like the way they simply fall in love with each other and married each other in one day and so fast...like it that way ...😳
how they met in caf and how Arnav flirt with her was amazing too...
I like it and want to read more dear 😉
the-crazy-girl

thank you for comment and l am glad that you like it:) after reading your comment l become so happy:)

ohh...

the banner

I used to be a journalist but life got in the way but I may come back to writing soon

loved dis story...😊

Originally posted by: Fleur_de_Lis

the banner

hope it will serve the purpose...

sorry for being so late...

internet connection problem !!!!!!

sorry if had disappointed you !!!!!

omg, I love it😲. it is so beautiful😃. thank you so much. l am so happy after seeing the banner and the great job, you have done👏.

Originally posted by: Archu61

I used to be a journalist but life got in the way but I may come back to writing soon

really, you used to be a journalist. wow, that is so cool and well l am glad that a journalist is reading my story hopefully likes it😆
and hope you to come back to writing soon:)