virman FF : woh pal : PART 31 updated pg 145 - Page 39

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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks
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a MILLION times😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow cant wait please update it ASAP
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wowowow thanks a ton

plz update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927

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<font color="#330066" size="5">i know guys some of you are waiting from ages for this story to get updated...</font>

<font color="#330066" size="5">so here i give u a good news...!!!!!!</font>

<font color="#330066" size="5">i will update it today...!!!!</font>

<font color="#330066" size="5">i promise you all will get a good update and woh pal will be back with a bang...</font>


<font color="#009966" size="4">LOVE</font>

<font color="#009966" size="4">NAINA...</font>



Yayy...thank u so much naina...looking forward... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
<<<part 13
PART 14
virat : hi karan... nice meeting you...
manvi : motu where is your moti...???
karan : oh hello she is not a moti... she is very hawtt...
manvi : oh really...??? then why is she hiding from all of us...??? is she shy shy...???
karan : actually...
manvi : actually what motu...???
karan : mani she is in the hotel... she was hell tired...
manvi (yelled) : what...?????????
virat : why are u shouting manvi...??? please drama queen dont create anymore drama...
manvi : patidev u dont understand...
virat : tu tum samjha do na ded futiya... (so u make me understand ded futiya...)
manvi : virattt... (glaring at him) remember...???

virat : it slipped off my mind... thats it...
karan was just smiling and looking at the duo...
swamini : karan they can continue this the whole day... you come n sit here...
karan : sure buaji... can i call u bua ji...???
swamini : yeah... sure u can...
vanshika : virat manvi u can continue this later we guess...
manvi : yes mom you are right but this son of yours is just impossible...
virat : same goes for your beloved daughter-in-law...
vanshika : virat she is not my daughter-in-law... she is my daughter...!!!
manvi hugged vanshika and showed her tongue to virat...
jeevika : so karan kaise ho tum...??? aaj achanak itne saalon baad... (so karan how come u after so many years...???)
karan : actually i was in london returned today only... afer u two left, i felt so lonely... i tried calling u both but i think destiny didnt let us meet...somehow i completed my 10th and after that i went to london for further studies... i told dad that i am coming back and he gave me a news that he found about u two. dad gave me mani's mobile number and i called her yesterday night...
manvi was smiling and loivngly looking at karan...
karan turned his eyes towards manvi and said " i am sorry mani... i shouldnt have called that night at night... "
manvi : its okkk motu...
jeevika : mannu... dnt call him that...
manvi : di he is my motu... i call him anything... right motu...???
karan : right mani but try n call me karan...
manvi : i will try... india gate ki kasam...
karan : u still remember that...???
manvi : ofcourse...!!!
virat was again jealous of the bonding between manvi and karan... he has already begin hating karan... how can he see another guy that close to his manvi...
karan : jeevi your mannu hasnt changed even a percent...
jeevika : i know karan...
viren : sorry to interrupt u guys... but its time for breakfast...
manvi : yeah jiju... i am also very hungry...
virat : sherni back in action...
dadaji : cmon all lets have breakfast and then we can chat...
manvi went to karan and held hs hand...
manvi : come motu oops karan... lets have breakfats... you must be hungry na...
virat was still standing at his place and looking at manvi who was holding karan's hand.
manvi : sit here...
virat gritted his teeth as he saw karan sitting on his chair which was next to manvi's... karan just came and took his place... how was virat supposed to like him...
viren : arrey virat... tu wahan kya kar raha hai... yahan aa na... (virat... what are u doing there...?? come here na...)
virat : yes bhai...
manvi turned around and looked at virat. she saw that he was clearly upset about something but manvi in her happiness of meeting her lost friend wasnt able to make out what was that 'something'...
then suddenly something struck manvi and she realised taht she made karan sit on virat's chair...
manvi : virat... come sit here na...
virat : its ok manvi...
manvi : please sit here na... please..
how can virat ever deny manvi so he sat on manvi's chair. manvi asked tarun to bring an extra chair and she placed that chair next to virat's...
manvi : karan please feel at home yaar... di...???
jeevika : u sit mannu... i will serve karan...
manvi : thanks di...
manvi served virat and sat next to him.she held virat's hand under the table and virat looked at manvi surprisingly...
manvi winked at virat and whispered " i love you..."
this small gesture of manvi made virat realise that he is the one for her and no karan can ever take his place...
virat : i love you too...

shlok : bhaiya bhabhi... why you both are just looking at each other...?? its beakfast time...
virat and manvi broke their cute eyelock and virat almost choked...
manvi got worried and hurriedly gave him a glass of water and rubbed his back...
manvi : are you okk...??
virat : hmmm..
kadambari chachi : haaye ni... mere shahrukh kajol... tum jiyo hazaron saal...
manvi blushed when she saw everybody looking at them... and started eating her breakfat... when everybody was again busy on munching their breakfast, manvi held virat's hand with her left hand under the table...
virat looked at her with the corner of his eyes and smiled at manvi...
after the breakfast...
everybody was sitting in the hall and talking with karan. jeevika had gone to prepare tea and manvi was standing in a corner listening to them. viren left for office and virat was about to leave as well when manvi held his hand in front of all...
virat : kya kar rahi ho...?? (what are u doing...???)
manvi : tussi jaa rahe ho...??? tussi na jao... (u are going...?? pls dont go...)
virat : yes i am going... its important...
manvi : important than me...???
virat : may be...
manvi : haaw... maa see... your son is saying he has something important than me in his life...
virat : i said may be...
manvi : he again said that...
vanshika : virat dont tease her... dont go to office today... it wont make nay difference...
virat : mom but...
manvi hugged virat and said " thank u... thank u chep... i knew u would agree..."
virat : i never said yes...
manvi : but u never refused as well... now go n change your attire...
virat : why...???
manvi : because we are going somewhere...
virat : where...???
manvi : first go n change...
virat : this girl will make me go crazy someday...
manvi : you are already crazy... i can only make u go crazier...
virat : uff...
virat left to change...
manvi : karan...???
karan : yes manvi...
manvi : where are you staying...???
karan : hotel sapphhire...
manvi : great... bua ji dont you think karan should live here... i mean what would people say that the guest of vadera's is staying in a hotel...
swamini : you are right manvi... kran u have to stay here only...
karan : okay bua ji...
manvi : so lets go n bring your girlfriend and your luggage... (shouting) virattt hurry up...!!!
virat : coming...
manvi : di u ask tarun to prepare something good for this karan and his madam...
jeevika : i already have mannu...
manvi : my bestest di...
and then virat, manvi and karan left for the hotel...
they reached the hotel...

virat : u both wait here only... i will just go n park the car...
manvi : ok jaanu...
virat winked at manvi and went to park the car...

karan : so u really love him...???
manvi : yes... very...
karan : love marriage or arranged...???
manvi : love marriage...
karan : badiya hai...
virat : cmon guys... lets move...

virat, manvi and karan were going to the room when virat got a call from viren...
virat : i will just be back... u carry on...
manvi : okk...
karan knocked at the door and someone opened the door...
manvi pushed karan and went straightaway to the girl and entered the room...

manvi : hey i am manvi... oops mrs. manvi virat vadera... karan's best friend...
? : hi manvi... i am maya... his girlfriend...
virat turned around after attending the call and got the biggest shock of his life...
manvi was hugging maya... his present and his past were now both in front of his eyes... his life came to a standstill... his nightmare has just become reality... virat's phone fell from his hand and broke... the thud sound made manvi brke the hug and she looked back...

manvi : oops... it broke... never mind now i will gift u a new phone like u gifted me...
manvi held virat's hand and stood in front of maya...
manvi : maya meet my husband.. mr. virat singh vadera... and virat this is maya... karan's girlfriend...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow wahat a dhasu update nainu...it one of mah fav ff.and glad that u started it again...after a long tym i am first to comment in ur ff...maya nand manvi hugging wow...waiting for next...pls dont make me wait so much these tym please update soon
Edited by avika26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
See i am here commenting! 😛
ok so let me come to the update without going on with my bak bak! hehehe
Hmmm.. i went back and read all the other parts again! hehehe so our virat was jealous.. i see... but awww i loved maanvi's sweet and cute gestures! awww maanvi holding virat's hand under the table was so cute! Ok now comes the main shocking part or the twist in the story! Maya is Karan's girlfriend! hope she doesnt cause any problems in virman's life! *fingers crossed* Wait i can see lots of dramas ahead! 😆
Anyway update soon naina! u know that i am excited and jumping around! so update sooonnn!😉
and thnx for the pm!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update!!!
Loved it!!
Manvi & virat are so sweet!!!
Can't wait 4 next update!!
Plz update soon!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow, maya and virat face to face
update next pt soon
its a twist
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Posted: 12 years ago
HAWW NAINA THAT WAS AMAZING AND AFTER A LONG TIME YOU UPDATE THIS FF YAAR. I LOVED IT WHEN VIRAT FEEL JEALOUS TO SEE MANVI AND KARAN SO CLOSE TO EACH OTHER AND MANVI'S UNDERSTANDING WAS JUST AMAZING. AND VIRAT'S REALIZATION THAT MANVI ONLY BELONG TO HIM AND NO ONE CAN COME BETWEEN THEM. AND WHAT WAS IN THE END VIRAT'S PAST BACK IN HIS LIFE. HMM THAT'S A BIG TWIST NAINA. GOOD WORK. NOW EAGERLY WAITING THE TRUTH COME OUT IN FRONT OF MANVI AND KARAN ABOUT MAYA. WAITING TO SEE THEIR REACTION. PLEASE DON'T BE LATE THIS TIME AND CONT SOON. THANKS FOR THE PM

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