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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesme update. .loved drunk manvi she was so cute..virman bedroom romance was awesme. .thanks 4 pm
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awesome update...loving it...pls update soon
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Originally posted by: Krazzy4u786

Amazing update!!!
Loved manvi's drunk scene, she was so cute!!
Manvi & virat's bedroom scene was awesome!!
Superbly written!!
Waiting 4 the next update!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!

Thnk u so much..n ur most welcum...will b updating soon..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cutiepie2244

Aaahhh finally you updated... i was waiting since long... back to the update it was really superb, fantastic, dhamakedaar, super duper update... i just can't express my feelings,, that was really a good one...👍🏼👍🏼...


Convo of jeevika, maanvi n chachi's was really cute one... loved it the way virat said( sahi kaha chachu aur un k saath mannvi b hogi)... that was really a sweet one... he is afraid of maanvi sooo mucchhh...
When rohan said ( pehle tou tu shot pe shot leta tha ab kya hua??) the way virat replied to him n blushed was damn awesome...😳😳... the song which u uploaded was really great... new song haan... sweety good going...
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I really can't believe that how u updated this post sooo awesome???? the way maanvi was glaring at virat was damn cute... hawww viren alaso danced with girls poor jeevika😔...
Virat imaginning maanvi in that girl.. great... covo b/w VIRMAN after the party was sooo good... the way maanvi said ( tumhari itni himmat mjhse maanvi chaudhry se us k hone wali pati virat vadhera ko dur krne ki)... waooo maanvi danced infront of virat...
NOT BIG BUT A SMALL TREAT 2 U 4 GIVING US SUCH A GREAT UPDATE...

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In the end i will only say that it was at all an awesome update... loved it 2 the core... continue ASAP...
sorry 4 late commenting c0z i was preparing 2 give u a longer comment which u deserve...😊😊



Aww dat is so sweet of u, m so touched ❤️..thnk u a 🤗sooo mucchhh...u dn't knw hw much dis means 2 me, thnk u a million tym, u r really sweet, thnks a lot 4 da treat, luv Pizza 😉...lol...Thnks once again...I will continue soon..😊 Thnk u, thnk u, thnk u anjali.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvVirManNiShal

-beautifully virmanian love wow especially the ending so cute lol cant wait to see manvi's reaction when she wakes up seeing her and virat proper close to one another in one bed lol interesting aww loved how all the wives gatecrashed the bachelor's part lmao talli manvi so cute especially when she began crying for her di, then virat, then jiju& then finally for dance loool fabulous updte
update soon and pm me please
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Thnk u soo muchhh...glad u lykd it...n ur most wc, will update soon..Thnks once again..😊
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Originally posted by: shabsem

Awesme update. .loved drunk manvi she was so cute..virman bedroom romance was awesme. .thanks 4 pm

Thnk u so much,,,n ur most wc..😊
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Originally posted by: avika26

awesome update...loving it...pls update soon

Thnk u so much...will update soon,,..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello guyz,,m bck..thnks a lot 4 ur lovely comments n lyks...Anjali(cutipie2244) dis update is 4 u, I worked on sugesstion, I hope its up 2 ur expectation...Enjoy...

VirMan...Kuch Iss Tarah...Part 27...


~Recap~


Viraat pulled the duvet over them, and drift off to sleep, holding his life in his arms...as close as he could.


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Sun beamed through the window, disturbing Maanvi's sleep. She opened her eyes, and looked around the room, surprised and confused.

Maanvi: Yeh main kiske kamre mein hun. (holding her head) Uff, mera sir...

While looking around the room, her gaze went towards Viraat, who was sleeping beside her, his head on her shoulder and hand wrapped around her waist.

Maanvi: (smiles) Sote huye toh tum aur bhi pyaare lagte ho Viraat. (kisses his forehead)


The next moments, her gaze went towards his body. He was lying beside her, without wearing a shirt. Then she looked at herself, her dupatta was not around her neck.

Maanvi: (screamed her lungs out) AAAHHH...

Viraat got up with a jerk.

Viraat: (concerned) Maanvi, kya, kya hua? Tum chikhi kyun?

Maanvi: Tumhe dekh kar. (worriedly) Viraat tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Viraat: Oh...(rubbing his eyes) woh kal raat...

Maanvi: (shocked/worried/sitting up) Kal raat? Kal raat kya, kya hua Viraat?

Viraat: (sitting up comfortably) Arey, woh tum bahut nashe mein thi, toh Bhai ne kaha ki tumhe ghar na laun, so main tumhe yahan le aaya.

Maanvi: (getting restless) Fir kya hua?
Viraat: Fir..
Maanvi: (softly/worriedly) Humare beech mein, kuch galat toh nahi hua na Viraat?

Viraat: Kya? (eyes narrowed) Tumhe kuch yaad nahi hai?
Maanvi: Idiot yaad hota toh tumse puchti kya?
Viraat: Haan. (pretending to be sad) Woh actually kal raat humare beech mein bahut kuch hua..

Maanvi: Kya? (eyes filled with tears) Yeh maine kya kar diya.

Viraat: (looking at Maanvi, with a sad face) Haan Maanvi, yeh tumne kya kar diya. Main toh jaa raha tha, tum khud dance karne lagi, aur mujhe apne paas khichne lagi.

Viraat was controlling his laughter, seeing Maanvi all worried, but he didn't noticed her eyes which was filled with tears.

Maanvi: Hey Bhagwaan, ab kya hoga. (hits him on his arms) Chep, main toh nashe mein thi, tum toh pure hosh mein the na, tum rok nahi sakhte the mujhe?

Viraat: (innocently) Maanvi, tumhe aaj tak koi rok paaya hai jo main rokunga.

Maanvi: (saddly) Ab kya hoga Viraat, humare beech aisa nahi hona chahiye tha. Yeh humne kya kar diya.
Viraat: Maine toh kuch kiya hi nahi Maanvi, (controlling his laughter) sab kuch toh tum kar rahi thi.

Maanvi: (looking at Viraat, with teary eyes) I'm sorry Viraat, maine tumhari izzat par..
Viraat: (hands on her cheeks) Its ok Baby, humari toh shadi hone wali hai na.
Maanvi: (moves his hands away) Fir bhi Viraat, shadi se pehle yeh sab nahi hona chahiye tha. (crying) Yeh sab meri galti hai, mujhe drink karna hi nahi chahiye tha. Main kisi ko muh dikhane ke layak hi nahi rahi Viraat.
Viraat: Arey Maanvi, ro kyun rahi ho, (holds her hand) Maanvi.

Maanvi: Mujhe tumhare saath aisa nahi karna chahiye tha Viraat. (crying, while holding her ears) I'm sorry.

Viraat's heart melted seeing Maanvi in tears.

Viraat: (holds her hand) Maanvi, main toh mazak kar raha tha, humare beech aisa waisa kuch nahi hua.
Maanvi: (in between her sobs) Nahi Viraat, mujhe aisa nahi...(stops crying) KYA?

Viraat: Haan.
Maanvi: Toh tum yahan, mere saath ek hi bed par, bina shirt pehne kya kar rahe the?
Viraat: Kal raat, jab tum so gayi thi, tab main jaa raha tha, utne mein hi tumne kaha ki, Viraat I Love You, mujhe chodke mat jao. Toh main tumhari (touching her cheek with his fingers) yeh pyaara sa chehra dekh kar ruk gaya. Aur rahi baat iss shirt ki toh, (smirks) yeh toh tumne hi utara hai, kal raat ko...tumhe pata hai, agar kal raat tum soti nahi na, toh shayad humare beech,,
Maanvi: (hits on his arms) Chep, tumne meri jaan hi nikal di thi.

Viraat: (pulls her close by her waist) Meri Jaan toh tum ho...

Viraat leaned in towards Maanvi's neck and starts placing soft kisses on it, making her lie back down on the bed. Viraat slowly moved on top of her, kissing her collar bone, while Maanvi was lost in his touch. Her fingers were ruffling his hair, with closed eyes, enjoying his each and every kiss that he was placing around her neck. He moved back and looked up at Maanvi, her eyes were still closed.

Viraat: (running his fingers on her hair) Kal jo nahi hua, woh aaj ho jaye toh?

Maanvi opened her eyes and realized their closeness.

Maanvi: (pushing him back, while blushing) Viraat. Chalo, hume ghar jaana hai.

Viraat: Chale jaiyein gein, (pulling her close to him) pehle thoda romance toh karlun, baar baar aisa mauka nahi milta.

Maanvi: Mauke pe chauka marna toh koi tumse sikhe. Kahin bhi kisi ke bhi saath shuru ho jaate ho.

Viraat: Arey, main kahan kisi aur ke saath romance karta hun, dekha hai tumne mujhe kisi aur ke saath?

Viraat gave Maanvi a confused look, when he saw her giving him a deadly glare.

Maanvi: (angerily) KAL.

Viraat: (confused) Kal?

Maanvi: (pushes him away/sitting up) Uss ladki ke saath tum kya kar rahe the?

Viraat: (sitting up) Ladki? Maanvi woh...Maanvi...
Maanvi: Itne chipak kar, uske saath dance kar rahe the, (screaming at the top of her lungs) TAB YAAD NAHI AAYI MERI, JO AB MAANVI MAANVI KAR RAHE HO?

Viraat: (cutely) Partner meri baat toh suno...
Maanvi: (fuming in anger) Partner? Ab Partner, kal kahan gaya tha tumhara yeh partnership huh?

Viraat: (sweetly) Maanvi, pyaar toh main tumse karta hun na, gussa kyun ho rahi ho.
Maanvi: (sarcastically) Arey haan, main gussa kyun ho rahi hun. (screaming at him) GUSSA NAHI HUN TOH KYA TUMHARI TARIF KARUN. PYAAR MUJHSE KARTE HO AUR CHIPAKTE KISI AUR SE HO.
Viraat: Maanvi, main to...

Maanvi: (pointing finger at him) CHUP, mujhe kuch nahi suna hai. Tum abhi ke abhi mujhe ghar le jaa rahe ho samjhe.

Maanvi stormed out of the bed, picked up her dupatta, which was lying on the floor and went straight to the bathroom, angerily.

Viraat: Mujhe toh laga tha ki bhul gayi. Par nahi, meri kismat itni achi kahan. (looking up) Hey Bhagwaan, ab aap hi kuch madat karo meri, iss Sherni ko manane mein.

Maanvi came out of the bathroom, and without looking at Viraat, she walked out of the room. Viraat got up, wore his shirt, and went to the bathroom. After he was freshened up, he walked out of the room, looking around the house for Maanvi. He walked outside and saw her sitting inside the car, not looking at him at all.

Viraat: (walking towards her/to himself) Iss manane mein aur aag se khelne mein zyada farak nahi hai. Aur kar dance Viraat Beta kisi aur ladki ke saath. (reached at his car) Maanvi tum yahan ho, main tumhe pure ghar mein dhundh raha tha.


Viraat gulped and quietly sat on the drivers seat, as Maanvi gave him a deadly glare.

Viraat: Ghar hi chal rahe hai Maanvi.

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Jeevika: (smiles) Mannu, aa gayi tu, chal andar jaa ke nahale, main nasta taiyaar karti hun.

Maanvi smiled a little at Jeevika and left towards her room, without glaring at Viraat.

Jeevika: Isse kya hua? Naraz lag rahi hai.

Viraat: Bhabhi, ab naraz hai toh lagegi hi.

Jeevika: (confused) Kyun kya hua?

Viraat: Kal raat, mujhe uss Chipkali ke saath dance karte dekhliya tha usne.
Jeevika: Oh, acha hai. Main bhi bahut naraz thi Viren ji.

Viraat: (hands folded, head bowing down) Aap toh Devi ho Bhabhi, (looking up at her) Maanvi aapki tarah nahi hai. Aapne toh Bhai ko maaf kar diya hoga, (saddly) par Maanvi, woh mujhse baat hi nahi kar rahi hai Bhabhi, bahut naraz hai.

Jeevika: Toh manalo Devar ji. (smiles) Maan jaiyegi.

Viraat: Magar kaise?

Jeevika: Woh toh aapko sochna padega Devar ji.

Viraat: Ok, waise ghar ke baaki log kahan hai?

Jeevika: Ghar par koi nahi hai, sab bade bahar gaye hai, sirf hum bache hai, Badi B, aur dono Chachi aur Chachu hai.

Viraat: (smiles) Arey wah, perfect hai. Bhabhi main naha ke aata hun.

And he ran towards his room with a smile.

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Maanvi: (fuming in anger) Samjhta kya hai apne aapko? Kisi aur ladki ke saath dance karta hai, woh bhi itne chipak ke, aur ab sorry bhi nahi bol raha. Main bhi baat nahi karungi usse.


Maanvi was drying her hair, after having a warm bath. She walked out of her room and went downstairs. A smile crept over her lips as she saw a board, which was hanged on the wall with poster around it, saying "I Am Sorry, Please Forgive Me..." Viraat, who was hiding behind a wall, smiled as he was a smile on her face. He was just about to come out, but stopped as he heard Kadambari Chachi shouting her lungs out. Everyone came running towards her, including VirMan.

Jeevika: (confused/concerned) Chachi, kya hua?

Inder Chachi: (confused) Kya hua, chila kyun rahi ho? Kahin aag lagi hai kya?

Kadambari Chachi: (hands on her cheeks) Haye Ni..aag hi toh lagi hai. (smiles widely) Mujhe nahi pata tha ki aap mujhe manane ke liye itna sab kareinge.

Maanvi disappointedly, and angerily looked at Viraat, while he just looked at Kadambari Chachi and Inder Chachu.

Inder Chachu: (surprised/confused) Maine?

Kadambari Chachi: Aur nahi toh kya maine? (hugs him sideways) Mazak band kijiye na, ab main aapse bilkul bhi naraz nahi hun.

Inder Chachu: (to himself) Maine yeh sab kiya..? (smiles) Chalo jisne bhi kiya ho, Kadambari ka gussa toh thanda hua, kitna koshish kiya kal raat ko, par maani hi nahi. (to Kadambari Chachi) Haan, maine hi toh kiya.

Kadambari Chachi: (smiles at him) Chalo, maine aapko maaf kiya.

Inder Chachu saw Viraat, who was looking at him with a raised eyebrow.

Inder Chachu: (to himself) Toh yeh sab Viraat ne kiya hai.

Inder Chachu gave Viraat a sorry look, while Maanvi was looking at angerily. VirIka, Vayansh and Badi Beeji were trying to control their laughter looking at Viraat's sad face. Madhan Chachu, Pinky Chachi, Kadambari Chachi, Inder Chachu and Maanvi walked away from there. While Viren walked towards Viraat, along with Jeevika.

Vayansh: Koi baat nahi Viraat, hota hai. Maan jaiyegi.

Jeevika: Haan Devarji, better luck next time.

Viren: (smilingly) Waise manana padega, Chachu bahut smart nikle, bina kuch kiye, Chachi ko mana liya.

All four of them started laughing, while Viraat gave a deadly glare to Viren.

Viraat: Yeh sab aapki wajha se hua hai Bhai, aapko hi yeh party ka bhoot sawar tha na. Aap toh bach gaye Bhabhi ke gusse se, (pouts) bhari toh mujhe padh raha hai woh party aur Maanvi ka gussa.

Viren: (hand on his shoulder) Arey chill kar na yaar, we were just having fun.
Viraat: (angerily) Fun? Aapke fun ke chakkar mein meri band baj gayi na. Aur Chachu, bina mehnat kiye, inaam le gaye, mere haath mein keep trying ka board thama kar.

Vayansh: Arey tum fikar mat karo, Maanvi ka gussa kal tak udh jaiye ga.

Viraat: Vayansh, tum Bhabhi aur Maanvi mein confused mat ho, meri Bhabhi toh chalo ek mintue mein bhul bhi jaye apna gussa, par meri Maanvi, woh toh sau saal bhi laga de na, tabhi wahin athki huyi hogi.

Jeevika: Viraat, tum koshish karte rahoge toh dekhna Mannu zarur maan jaiye gi.

Viraat: (saddly) Hope so Bhabhi.

All three of them smiled and walked away, leaving Viraat and Badi Beeji behind.

Badi Beeji: Kyun naraz hai?

Viraat: Kaun?

Badi Beeji: Jisse manane ke liye tune yeh sab kiya.

Viraat: (looking down) Woh, usne mujhe kisi aur ke saath dance karte huye dekhliya. Isiliye naraz hai..

Badi Beeji: Chudail ko manana aasan nahi hai, bahut nakhre uthane pade gein uske.

Viraat: (innocently) Woh toh jabse pyaar kiya hai tabse utha raha hun na Badi Beeji.

Badi Beeji: Yeh tum ladko ka kaam hota hai, ladkiyon ke nakhre uthane ka.

Viraat: (knelt down, in front of her) Badi Beeji, aap hi koi idea do na, jisse woh maan jaiye.

Badi Beeji: (smiles) Usse bahar ghumane le ja...

Viraat smiled at Badi Beeji's idea.

Badi Beeji: (frowns) Par woh toh jaane se rahi.

Viraat's smile vanished away.

Badi Beeji: (smiles again) Usse koi acha sa gift dedo, maan jaiyegi,

Viraat smiled widely again at Badi Beeji.

Badi Beeji: (frowns yet again) Par woh gift lene se rahi, bahut ziddi hai.

Viraat's smiled vanished again.

Viraat: (smiles at her sarcastically) Badi Beeji, ek baat toh batana, aap mujhe usse manane ki ideas de rahi hai ya mujhe indirectly yeh batane ki koshish kar rahi hai ki Maanvi ko manana impossible hai?

Badi Beeji: Main toh ideas hi de rahi hun, par sare ideas ek hi taraf ishara kar rahe hai ki uss Chudail ko manana namumkin hai.

Viraat: Kuch karo aap apni poti(grand-daughter) ka. Gussa toh jaise naak par baitha rehta hai uska.

Badi Beeji: Tu hi kuch kyun nahi karta, aapni hone wali Biwi ka. Khud gussa dilane wali harkat hi kyun karte ho?

Viraat: (pouts) Badi Beeji, please na, meri madat kijiye na, main usse baat kiye bina ek pal bhi nahi reh sakhta.

Badi Beeji: Dekho, ladkiyan na, nakhre tabhi dikhati hain jab ladke unke piche bhagte hai. Main toh kehti hun, tum usse baat hi mat karo, (smiles proudly) dekhna aadhe ghante mein tumhare paas bhagti aayegi.

Viraat: Aapko lagta hai yeh kaam karega?

Badi Beeji: Koshish karne mein kaun si burai hai.

Viraat: Haan, thik hai Badi Beeji, yeh bhi try kar leta hun. (smiles) Thank You, Badi Beeji.

Badi Beeji: All The Best.

Badi Beeji left, leaving Viraat behind, who was smiling widely.

Viraat: Difficult hai, (smiles) par impossible nahi. Maanvi, ab toh tumhe mujhse baat karni hi hogi.



Dat's it 4 2day...plz leave ur comments, n hit lyk if u lykd it...Thnk u...Luv Aarti...

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oh god!!!!!!!!!! badi beeji rocks!!!!!!!!!
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i liked it??
Neahhh!!


I loved it.. It was jus awsum.. Was eagerly waiting fr dis part..
I vl b waiting fr d next part too

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