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Posted: 12 years ago
twist??
i loved it!!!
good going dear!!!waiting for nxt part!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
@vidya.anand

Thank u so much 🤗 Indeed Rawte is too clever...😆 Khud to beach chal diya..team is stuck with the case..😆


@pihu_angad Thank u 😊

@Sinner.gurl

Thank u 🤗
Aise kaise! Main to tujhe ETF me dekh rhi thi..atleast guess to maaro..
Chalo rehne do...just go with the flow...😉 Thank u for lyking the twist...

@Santhu.The.King

Ya sry I had plannd something else... Comments on previous updates were clearly showing that everyone was xpecting the case to get over in this part... I was really confused ki kya karu...end the case or go with wat I have plannd... I chose the second one... kyuki fir jo minute case details aur clues yaha - waha chodhe hai, unka kya hoga!!!!

just go with the flow...I think u wud lyk it..😊
Thank u😊

@Piyarani Thank u 😊

@kunchu

Ya twist! Nt gud lyk u in maintaining the suspense...and hadling the case well😊..but its a try...
Thank u for lyking it...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey amazing one truely. honestly yes I was expecting the case to be end in this part buf now i am smelling it more suspicious. I am now top of my excitement now to know who the killer is. I hope ETF will find something soon.

yayy Arjun is clever haan,he just caught the chance of searching the flat with the excuse of being with them on their outing 😉 good going Arjun. Hope we can see some Arni scene thereafter 😳 😳

totaly beautiful part,waiting for a qick update priya. Thanks for pm 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -sree13-

Hey amazing one truely. honestly yes I was expecting the case to be end in this part buf now i am smelling it more suspicious. I am now top of my excitement now to know who the killer is. I hope ETF will find something soon.

yayy Arjun is clever haan,he just caught the chance of searching the flat with the excuse of being with them on their outing 😉 good going Arjun. Hope we can see some Arni scene thereafter 😳 😳

totaly beautiful part,waiting for a qick update priya. Thanks for pm 😃



Thank u so much!🤗 I'll try to update soon..
Hope u wud lyk the case as it proceeds...and yes the ETF team will definitely find somthing soon..
Arni scens..ya I hope too😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
thought the case is solved bt it hasn't
if sarthak is not the killer then who is?
well loveing the twist
hmmm so arjun going to the beach with gia nd roshni..nd leving others to do the work
hope to see some arni sence there
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh the case is a mystery...samaj me nai aa raha who might be d culprit..
waitng fr the update...continue soon😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 29

Roshni suprised looks at him. Gia comes and he took her in his arms.

Roshni : "Lekin kal to aapne.."
Arjun : "Abhi tum hi keh rhi thi na ki late ho raha hai. Make it quick."

He carefully took the duplicate keys for her flat and dropped it down from the building where Shree was already standing to catch it. Arjun came out of the buiding and moved towards the car with Gia and make her sit in the car. As he turned to look for Roshni, he saw her coming in a beautiful white salwaar kameez. She was luking absolutely gorgeous and he was luking at her dumbstruck..As Roshni touched the door's handle to open it, Arjun notices that Rathor and Chotu were sneakin inside the building. In order to stop Roshni from seeing them, he blocks her against the car body and his arms.

Roshni (shockd, scared) : "SIR!...aap kya kar rahe hai?"
Arjun : "Tumhare baal..umm...tumne hair style change kiya hai?"
Roshni (shockd) : "Aapne... abhi mere... hair style k bare me poocha!"
Arjun (confused) : "Maine poocha..haan... shayad!"

Rathor and Chotu quickly entered in the building. Rathor signals Arjun that they have reached.

Roshni (touching her hairs) : "Nhi maine to roz jaise hi..."
Arjun (seeing Rathor's signal removes his hands) : "Gaadhi me baitho"
Roshni : "Kyu ab aapko mere hair style me koi interest nhi hai? Abhi aap hi to.."
Arjun : "Haan aur ab main hi keh raha hu ki Gaadhi me baitho"
Roshni (in mind) : "Aapko hua kya hai aaj?"

Roshni was totally confused that why Arjun was behaving lyk that. Rathor, Shree and Chotu are standing outside Anika's flat.

Rathor : "Ok to Roshni beach par gayi hai. Pata nhi Rawte use kitni der rok payega kyuki iss mamle me wo thodha...ummm Khair! Zyada waqt nhi hai hamare paas. Mujhe nhi lagta ki 6 saal ki bacchi k pass se hume kuch milne wala hai to hum pehle Anika k flat se shuruwat karte hai."

They cut the police tape and entered the flat. Rathor signals them to go to different directions and all of them start their search. Shree took the drawing rum, Rathor the bedroom and Chotu the kitchen. They were searching every nook and corner for any clues, throwing things here and there, going from one room to other. They tore the sofa apart and even the bed was turned upside down.

Na koi raat hai
Na koi din yahan
Kya yeh andhera hai
Ki sirf hai dhuaan

Aankhein dhoka khati hain
Yeh kisko pata nahi
Jaane kya hai yahaan
Aur jaane yahaan kya nahi

Hai ye maya'


Arjun, Roshni and Gia reachd the beach.The beach was busy but not overcrowded and there was quite a lot of people near the water. Arjun was feeling uncomfortable --- it was almost two years that he had not gone on an outing that too with a kid and a young girl (but with a brain that works like a kid's brain sometimes). Gia held Roshni's hand and asked her to play with her.

Roshni (turned to Arjun) : "Sir aap b chaliye na!"
Arjun : "Nhi main yahi theek hu..."
Roshni : "Are to kya aap yahi khadhe rahenge...Aap yaha kya kisi case k liye aaye hai!"
Arjun (nervous) : "Nhi.. bilkul nhi! Mera matlab hain... tum chalo main aata hu.."

The reason he didnt want to get involve with them was Roshni's memories --- he didnt want to get reminded of them. It might make him weak in front of Roshni and Gia. But then Arjun brushed off that thought as he has to act better so that Roshni doesnt become suspicious of his plan and for that he has to get involved with them whether he wanted it or not. He took a deep breath, folded his jeans a bit and moved towards them. Roshni and Gia were playing with Frisbee. Arjun joined them and soon he was having fun. Gia came running and took him to the balloon vander. He cudnt say no to her. Soon he was playing with Gia and running after her. It was after so much tym that Arjun was laughing and having a gud tym. Roshni saw him really happy for the very first tym. Arjun himself realised that he was having a gud feeling, a ligh-hearted pleasure as if the sorrows have gone.

Ude, khule aasaman mein khwabon ke parindey
Ude, dil ke jahaan main khaabon ke parinday
Oho, kya pata, jaayenge kahaan
Khule hain jo pal, kahe yeh nazar
Lagta hai ab hai jaage hum
Fiqrein jo thi, peechhe reh gayi
Nikle unse aage hum
Hawa mein beh rahi hai zindagi
Yeh hum se keh rahi hai zindagi
Oho, ab toh, jo bhi ho so ho


After some time, Arjun secretly called Rathor.

Arjun : "Haan Rathor! Kuch mila?"
Rathor : "Yaha kuch nhi hai Rawte! Mujhe lag raha hai hum bekaar hi apna tym waste kar rahe hai."
Arjun : "Tumne dono ka saaman chk kiya?"
Rathor : "Nhi sirf Anika ka! 6 saal ki bacchi k paas kya ho sakta hai!"
Arjun : "Rathor! Ye 6 saal ki bacchi iss case ki eye witness hai... aur ek baar dekhne me harz hi kya hai!"
Rathor : "Accha theek hai main dekhta hu! Aur kuch milte hi tumko khabar karunga!"
Arjun : "Thodha jaldi karna.."
Gia (pulling his hand) : "Uncle chalo na!"
Rathor : "Jao Rawte! Shayad tumhara balloon laane ka tym ho gaya!"

Rathor cuts the call. Gia took him near the sea and showed him a distant boat that was very xciting to watch according to her. He searchd for Roshni who was writing something on sand.

Arjun : "Kya kar rahi ho?"
Roshni (smiles) : "Apni problems likh rahi hu.."
Arjun : "Kyu?"
Roshni : "Are sir wo kehte hai na 'Write your Sad times in Sand, but Write your Good times in Stone'. Main jab b beach aati hu na to ye zarur karti hu. Isse mujhe ye lagta hai ki problems shortlived hai aur tym k saath-saath ye b khatam ho jayegi. Sir it might sound silly.."
Arjun : "Nhi tum sahi keh rhi ho!"
Roshni (xcited) : "Wow sir! First tym aap meri kisi baat se agree kar rahe hai. To kya aap b yeh karte hai?"
Arjun : "Nhi main tumhari dusri baat se agree karta hu ki ye silly hai.."
Roshni : "Hawww.."

Gia came running to them and splashes water on Roshni. Arjun started laughing seeing her lyk that along with Gia. Roshni looked at them and splashes water on Gia but accidently some fell on Arjun.

Arjun : "Roshni!"
Roshni : "Sorry sir!"

But then Gia splashes some more water over to Arjun's face. Roshni started laughing. Arjun splashes some water on Roshni but she moved and splashes some more on him and started running. Arjun too ran behind her. While running behind her, he got hold of her duppatta and pulled it. She landed in his arms, both were breathing heavily and the tiny droplets were dropping from their hairs. Both got lost in each other's eyes.

Few moments ago - Roshni's Flat

Rathor : "Search carefully! Cheezo ki positions nhi badalni chahiye warna Roshni ko shak ho jayega!"

They started searching the flat. Shree was searching Gia's school notebuks and Chotu was searching her toys.

Shree : "Yaar ye sab faltu hi kar rahe hai. Hamare dono chief ko dekh! Ek bahar aaram se baithe hai aur dusre beach par mazze kar rahe hai. Ise kehte hai lyf. Kaash main b zaldi se chief ban jau!"
Chotu : "Sapne dekhna band kar aur kaam kar! Rathor sir ne sun liya na to promotion to nhi hoga...haan suspension zarur ho sakta hai.."
Shree : "Udi baba ae ki!"
Chotu : "Kya?"
Shree : "Mera matlab...ye kya hai!"

Chotu saw wat Shree had found. Both shocked looked at each other and quickly went to Rathor.

Rathor : "Kya hua? Tum dono ki shakal par 12 kyu baj rahe hai? Kuch mila kya?"

Shree showed him. Rathor shocked looks at it and then both of them.

Rathor : "Iska matlab...! Rawte ko turant call kark yaha bulao!"

Any guesses wat they have got??
Plz leave ur comments...


Part 30
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Edited by pink_fairy123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum update dear
me first yay!!
amazing
loved it
no guess!!
do cont soon..
superb song dear..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
So they fooled her 🤣...i can imagine arjun's discomfort!! 😆
I wonder!!...Chotu ko kitchen mein investigate karne ke liye kyu bheja?? 😛😆

Baloon laane ka time...awwh!! 😳😛

Sad times in sand, good times in stone 😊...hey..pehli baar suna! 😃
And did i ever tell you that i love Rosh's ...hawww!! 🤣...too adorable... just like a kid!! 😆

What did they find??...Kahin Gia toh nahi! 😕😲 😛

I think Anika killed herself..!! 😳..i may be completely wrong though! 😛


PLEASE REVEAL IT SOON!! 😉😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sinner.gurl

So they fooled her 🤣...i can imagine arjun's discomfort!! 😆
I wonder!!...Chotu ko kitchen mein investigate karne ke liye kyu bheja?? 😛😆

Baloon laane ka time...awwh!! 😳😛

Sad times in sand, good times in stone 😊...hey..pehli baar suna! 😃
And did i ever tell you that i love Rosh's ...hawww!! 🤣...too adorable... just like a kid!! 😆

What did they find??...Kahin Gia toh nahi! 😕😲 😛

I think Anika killed herself..!! 😳..i may be completely wrong though! 😛


PLEASE REVEAL IT SOON!! 😉😛
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Chotu ko us area me bheja na jaha uski expertise hai😆
Nhi its nt Gia for sure😆 they have found something nt someone😆
Yes u r! Anika ne suicide nhi kiya hai...aise kaise ETF wale lenge tumko😛

Thank u for ur comment🤗

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