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Konpal Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

no sad ending!

I assure you all :)

n yup!

update will take time now

exams gonna come up n imp. year hai yaaron!

So you all probably will have to wait until me and rose both gets free with everything! 😳

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..Roop..

@..Roop..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

awsm n full of suspense n shock...

kriya was pregnant...

but their child died...

how...

waiting for the mystr to reaveal.

update soon...

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shelly_Arsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

toh phir cancer kisko tha? sharon or kriya?
awsome update btw.. update sooon

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spicyrays

@spicyrays

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

eagerly waiting for d nxt update...

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Itne dino ke baad aur sirf note
Update fast

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Sonia

@princessSonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

okay dear

thnks 4 clearing d dobuts...😃

do cont soon

n do pm me plz...

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

just readed all the three parts..

beautifully explained.. loved it

kriyam dead 🤢

how can somebody be so cruel ... 😡

feeling bad for sharey... hope they are fine...

eagerly waiting for next part...

update soon

thnx for pm

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

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Heyii guys so we have a little change done in this FF and that the name.!
So now officially, its new name is Yearning - I can't resist.
Well took it by again and again describing rey's emotions
Do tell your views on how it is?!
Update below!

Edited by abhiyakreya - 12 years ago

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Konpal Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Chapter - 4
**Someone There**

I preferred going back to my farmhouse, as that I guess will be the last time I will be with her memories... I can't hurt sharon, again and again reminding her of the painful event. She deserves to be happy, at least unlike me?
Reaching my farmhouse I feel as if she was there?
Main toh.. jiya.. na mara..
Hai ve das main ki kara
I saw her!
Was I hallucinating? Is it possible? Is she alive?!
These questions caused an ache in my mind. Here she came and kept her palm on my face and flashed her usual smile at me! I surely am hallucinating, but it feels soo good; good to see her near me!
It is what I have been yearning for from the last day?
Dil jude bina hi tut gaye
Hath mile bina hi chhut gaye
Ki likhe ne lekh kismet ne..
Baar baar rod akhiyan
Tainu jo na vekh sakiyan
I saw her stepping back, I frowned! How could she step back after almost giving me a heart attack.
She started to dance and I can hear the song "Jag Soona Soona Laage" from the movie Om Shanti Om.
She danced perfectly on the every beat of the song, not even missing one! Oh well that was she - an epitome of perfection. Pain, loneliness, longing - these emotions were just clearly visible in her dance, as if she wasn't 'kriya' dancing there... it was like a goddess dancing for something she was obsessed to!
Khole aaye aaj
Kudrat ne..
Kataan main ki ve din
Teri soth tere bin
Main toh jiya na mara
She went back, back and back! And hell she disappeared from my sight - I surely was hallucinating!
What had happened to you rey? What had you done to me kriya? Why have you made me like this.
I saw a shadow ahead and followed it, but it only led me to our room.
Chan se jo tute koi sapna
Jag suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage
Koi rahe na jab apna
Jag suna suna lage
Jag suna suna hai toh..
Yeh kyun hota hai..
Jab yeh.. dil rota hai
Roye sisak sisak ki hawayein
Jag suna lage
I saw her photos all around. I remember the day when I first took her over here.
"Rey where are we going?" she asked me as I blindfolded her. "Somewhere special Kriya... a few mins please?" I told her and saw her lips having a pout play on 'em. Ah - those Delicious lips, I always feels like kissing her endlessly till the world ends.
Reaching our farmhouse, I led her inside and guided her to 'our' room and then slowly opened her blindfold.
I hugged her from back and rested my chin on her shoulder while she was busy admiring the place.
"Liked it?" I asked her in my usual husky voice. "Loads..." I heard her and admired her while she admired the room.
"Why I matter to you rey?" this question from her hit me out of blue.
Not knowing what to say, I replied telling her that "Because you are my wife!"
"No husband took care of his wife this much" she said. "Uh-huh, you are wrong. I do and swayam too do that. No?" I asked getting a feeble sound from her as she rested her head back on my chest
Chan se jo tute koi sapna
Jag suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage
Koi rahe na jab apna
Jag suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage reSuna.. lage.. re..Roothi rothi.. sari raatein
Fikhe fikhe.. sare din..
Virani si virani hai
Tanhai si tanhai hai
Aur ek hum hai..
Pyaar ke bin
I caressed her photos and again I felt her around me... what is this feeling? Why the **** I'm feeling like this? It had only been a day... for god's sake a day and it seems it had been years... why universeji?!!
I broke down again... how could I restrain myself from yearning?! I just can't...!!
I don't know how but one thing is very sure... and that's I just cant live with this feeling! Not now and will never be!
I heard the vase broke outside and rushed out but alas before I could spot the person, whoever it was left like a storm.
"Who was it?!"
This question was stuck in my mind like anything... for an instance I thought 'was it kriya?' but then remembering how she died in front of my own eyes I let the thought of her being alive still away from my mind and then again begin thinking 'who it could be?'
Was it Sharon?
No... she never knew about this place.
Was it my parents?
Heck, I never told them about this too.
It was only me and kriya and that blo*dy le*ch
So was it him?
If that is what the matter is, he is gonna get something which he never dreamt of!
Surprise, surprise baby boy!
You are gonna get your favorite gift, the one you deserve!

Sorry if it's short guys!
Our practicals are up so we aren't getting much time to write and update sigh*
Do comment and like
And please don't res if you don't have any plan to unres them!
I request you all!
Love
K and Rose

Edited by abhiyakreya - 12 years ago