VIRMAN STORY(THE OINTMENT)1 - Page 29

Originally posted by: sreshta90

awsome dear.. felt bad fr manvi she is leaving.. wondering who would be the girl is frnd of virat or more than frnd?? wanna read more.. do continue plz

Originally posted by: Arrosha

This was too much yaar.
The skeleton was for painting and the knife was for...sharping the charcoal.I was thinking soo much about the skeleton.
And who was that Girl and the Grand Woman and men.
Mani is leaving. Will Virat bring her back?????
Plz Continues soon
Thanks for the PM.
and don't forgot to PM me when u update.

Originally posted by: cutyvirman

preetoo aaj kal zara main bz hoon

per jaldi i will read and comment😊

Originally posted by: jannat89

hey priety
It was awesome
Poor soul manvi, whose the gal who hugs virat
Thanx 4 d pm
Waiting 4 ur next part... Update soon

Originally posted by: ashishi

oops i m late hawww😲
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unres

preeto🤗

sorry for late coment !!!! was in prob n u noe that na😳acha firstly i wanna scold u !!!!
u preeto the superb writer u didnt pm this upd anyone due to me hawww😲how dare u han don try to do it again its a warning !!!!! n im happy u pmd it soon😳
acha as u noe i was eagerly waiting for ur upd but unfotunately i was unwell so didnt read before but i read it now!!!!

wah ji preeto ji superb update👏u r really mindblowing writter😳

just loved ur update❤️

n virat artist😲hehehehe multitasker guy han😆

n poor manvi she left😭soo sad

ab to meko jaldi jaldi new upd chahye plzzz

awesumm story cont soon plzzz😳

vl wait for ur upd ok

preeto sun na ye story kabhi end mat krna 😉 agr ye story mene use read krwa di to wo to tera fan kya AC bhi ban jae ga🤣🤣

Originally posted by: ashishi

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ok orchids for ur beautiful upd😳

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

awesum

superbbb

Originally posted by: preetipc

Sorry ,late .

Loved the update.I was wondering abt the raas of the skeleton but it turned out different😆.Virat is a painter.And loved the way u showed Manvi's feelings, her jealousy , wen she saw virat with that new girl.Now eager to find out who the new girl is.Loved the way u showed her insecurity, loneliness etc.Loved the whole update.Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Samnafa19

lovely update

The day went with some mixed emotions and feelings for Virat. After so many days his friend Gungun came to meet him.

But could he say he was happy to see his father? Yes, which son wouldn't be? He was also happy but half-heartedly. He couldn't accept any other woman beside his father. How could he forget the moments when her mother used to wait for the man but he didn't come? He didn't come to her death-bed! For that woman, only for that woman his happy family ruined. But he never ever blamed her. He never ended his friendship with her daughter. Even he helped her, when she entered his college as a fresher. But how much a human can tolerate? The man was laughing, chatting with that woman that also in front of all the house members. In front of him! In his mother's house? In his wife's own house he was romancing with any other woman?

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9 P.M.

Dinner Table

Kaushal Mansion

Kashmir

__________:- Vivek Virat nahi aaya ab tak (worried)

Vivek:- humm, main bula ke lata hun

__________:- meri hi wajah se nahi aaya.I know he don't like me. I am sorry Vivek. I came between your beautiful family. I am the destroyer. I, I, I hate myself. She said in a very emotional voice. Her wet eyes dropped some salty-tears.

Vivek:- don't think like that sahana. He is immature. I know one day, I will make him understand. Keep faith in me. He said pressing his palms against hers.

In the mean time, Virat's room.

Kaka entered Virat's room. Virat was sitting against the bed leaning his back on the bed. His wet eyes were red.

"beta, jaao Vivek ji aaye hain. Waqt guzaro unke saath"

He looked at kaka. "aapko kya lagta ? main koushish nahi karta. Kaka main bahut koushish karta hun unhe moaf karne ki. But I can't I can't" he cried

Kaka took him in his old arms and patted his back. "beta sambhalo apne aap ko. Hummari bitiya kamzor nahi thi. Tum unke bete ho. "he said and kept patting his back.

After sometimes Virat's sobbing decreased and he said, "kaka Manvi ne khana khaya?"

"beta maine use khila dia. Par tum ekbar use mil lo. Tumhari Dost hain tumhare bina.."

"Kyun kaka, kya hua use?"

"beta bahut udas thi wo aaj" after thinking a while "ekbar jake mil aao"

"jab main khud bikhra hua hoon to use kaise sambhalunga." He said.

"but beta, tumhare siwa woh kisiko jaanti bhi to nahi" kaka said

"ji kaka. Main milke aata hun"He was about to leave when Vivek entered his room. He looked towards kaka pleadingly. Kaka left with a sigh.

Virat looked away and returned to his comfort place, the verge of his bed. He stood there. Vivek kept a hand on his shoulder and called him. Virat looked back with a forced smile.

"dad, jaiye na. aj maine pehle hi kha liya." He said in a hurry and looked away hurriedly.

"beta, apne dad se jhoot? Sahana tumhara wait kar rahi hain beta. She was feeling guilty. Usse lagta hain uski wajah se tum nahi aaye"

Suddenly Virat laughed, "Ha ha ha ha ha ha dad, maine socha apko meri fikr hain but you came because she was worried. Go and tell her I don't want her sympathy. Go away. Tell her I hate her. She snatched my mother from me, I hate her, and I hate her" he said continuously.

Vivek shrugged his shoulder but he still was saying, "I hate her.

At last he slapped him. He slapped him hard. Virat stormed out of the mansion angrily. Kaka tried to stop him but in vain. He kept looking at the gate helplessly. Vivek knocked his fist hard on the nearby wall.

Totally oblivious to all this one poor soul was cursing Virat for not coming to her.

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Virat entered a roadside desi bar. He took a bottle of desi daaru and drank all of it. He finished 3-4 bottles but kept drinking. He was losing control over himself but he kept drinking then also.

After 12 pm. Virat was lying in front of the closed bar. He was unconscious due to heavy drinking.

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Manvi went out from the mansion after 4pm. She couldn't wait for the morning rays to lighten her path. She left the house. She had to find her Shaiko.

She reached the isolated bus-stop. 1^st bus will come at 7 am. So she still had to wait for three long hours, in this forested area. She waited for long one hour. Suddenly a cab came and stood beside her. A middle aged muslim guy stepped out from the car. He looked kind. He requested her for lift and she agreed.

She didn't know where they were going but she was too tired to ask anything. She was alone at the back sit, after sometime she went to a deep slumber. Suddenly her sleep interrupted because of a halt. Their car stopped. She opened her eyes and looked at the window. After some minutes her blurred vision cleared. Virat was arguing with that man. She went out from the car.

"Look, I know her. Don't you guys dare to snatch her away from me" he said in a drunken voice.

"Hey man. Look at your state. You are drunk. Go back. I can't give her to you. I will send her to any safe place. Not to you" said that kind man.

Manvi said the first word, "viiirat?"

"Look she knows me" he smiled and said to them. "What are you doing here?" he said her in an angry tone."

"Hey boy? Don't talk to her like this "Said the kind man.

"Nahi baba, HE IS A VERY GOOD BOY. He is not like what you are thinking" She pressurizes.

"So if everything is fine between you two then, what the need of me." Then looking at Manvi, "beta day after tomorrow my niece is getting married. I want you both. Please can you join?"

Manvi pleaded Virat through her eyes and of course he agreed. How could he say NO to those eyes? They sat on the back sit.

"beta jhagra karke pee lena aur ghar chor dena thik nahi. Pati-patni ko thoda bahut samjhota karna padta hain" said the kind man and with this they got the biggest shock of their life. They are married but when? They didn't know when it happened? They were unable to say anything. They were so much in shock. But suddenly Manvi remember something and asked

"tumne piya kyun? Aur itna? Dekho apni aankho ko"

"Kya hua mere aankhon ko. Inhi aankhon se dekhke tumhe rok liya na? nahi to chali jaati abtak mujhse dur?"

"To? Kal aaye kyun nahi? Mujhe bura nahi lagta kya? Oh' busy the na? apni wo choti kapde wala saheli ke saath?"

"arre aur isiliye tumne ghar chor di. But tumhe kyun itna bura laga? Who meri friend hain"

"Beta in biwiyo ke samne koi dusri ladki ko importance doge to kya unhe bura nahi lagega? Manvi beta I'm with you" said that kind man.

Manvi blushed hearing his words. Virat was so dumbstruck that he could say anything. Again the car became silent. They reached his house after 8.

"uncle apne apna naam nahi bataya. I am Virat, Viart vadera and she is Manvi Vadera, my wife(under breath as you said)"

Manvi was so shocked to hear it from him. But somewhere she liked it. She likes Manvi vadera and mostly being his wife.

"main Mansur Rehman. And welcome to my world" said that man with a peculiar laugh and went away leaving two confused souls at the entrance.

"Mansur Rehman, somewhere I hear this name" thought Manvi and they entered the grand house hand in hand.

Be prepared for the next. Shaiko will re enter in the next. A lot of turns and twists is coming in the way.

I want some ornaments for this update. I love ornaments. Don't do kanjusi sending me ornaments 😛😆 🤣

will send the PMs at night 😛

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