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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

gift dem deir favrt things...

updt likha kya?meri jaan upddt mein ataki hein😆



i got a cute idea... i was thinking of hw to implement it...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey read all of this..
amazing work.. i loved the concept :)
plz pm me once u update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai



😲
mujhpe shaq kar rahi ho!! *dramatically sighing*
kya zamaana aagaya babaji!!!🤢



chal hat drama queen...

ab nakhre bandh kar aur update dena...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai



saturday and sunday(triple updates),
its just that i m held up with ofc works...sorry...

Waiting for triple updtes 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Waiting for triple updtes 😊


come back soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanku guys for waiting for so long. My daadi is still in same condition. i hope she will be recovering soon. Thanks for the prayers. 😊

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Part 6

Each step towards KM only increased my hatred for him. He played with my dreams and in no way I m going to forgive him. My mom is still unaware of MSK's involvement. Aryan made her believe that his friend helped them but in return, I was working for him. Since it was aryan's friend she dint think suspected much. However, it took a long time to convince him for hiding it from mom. He is still surprised to hear that MSK bought the building just for me. exactly to be his maid. May be I hit his ego badly. Anyways according to the new contract brought by Aditya, I have to work from morning 8 to 7 for 6 months. Weekends are off for me. Thankgod I m free from his clutches for 2 days. These 2 days I dint met MSK and according to adi he is busy completing some works.
Guards showed me the way to enter lift. I was feeling so nervous but I m not going to show it. he is going to so regret for making me his maid. With determination I stepped out of the lift to show who I am!! But the sight greeted me freezed all the resolutions!! He, the great Maan Singh Khurrana was enjoying diary milk and his face, hands are all smudged with chocolate. He is looking like a cute baby who is relishing each and every piece. The song that came to my mind is

Kiss Me
Close Your Eyes
Miss Me
Close Your Eyes
Kiss Me
I can need your lips
and your fingertips
and Happiness in your Eyes
Kiss Me
Close Your Eyes
Miss Me
Close Your Eyes
I saw him opening his eyes and there was so much happiness in those eyes. Unknowingly a smile formed in my lips.
Maan..
He looked at me and gave a dazzling smile.
Morning geetipie.. Jeez! I m in love with my name..
That's when I realized what I called him. I gave him an angry glare.
Aww.. meri cutie naaraz ho? Ye lo chocolate kha lo.. tumhe pata hain, chocolate help us to subside our anger.
I ignored his comment and went kitchen.
Waise geet.. ek baat bataoon.. don't tell anyone.. k? dairy milk is my fav chocolate and when I feels so happy na I will eat lot of dairymilk.
He said giving me a dreamy look. I was trying hard to hide my smile.
I m not interested in ur personal life. So stop telling all these stuffs.
He frowned.
No u r suppose to know that. After all u r going to b my maid. So u should noe my favourites, rt?
Just for 6 months SIR!!
I heard some mumblings from his side like lifetime, but ignored it. I decided to make some breakfast. Yesterday I learned to make bread and omelet. So decided to try it. But when I opened the lid I saw steaming pasta. After opening each and every bowl I was amazed. It all contained different varieties of dishes like noodles, bread toast and even aloo paratha, my fav. I felt someone standing so close to me and I dint need 6th sense to find who that was!! His breath was fanning my shoulders and I felt tickling sensation in my stomach. Ignoring the weird sensations I asked
Who made this?
Tumhari maan.
I looked at him shocked!! he leaned towards me and his lips were almost touching mine. His voice was turning husky every minute sending jitters to my body.
Who kya hai na I don't want to die so soon…
Then he burst out laughing. It took me a while to realize what he meant. But before I could do anything he dashed to his room saying
Set the breakfast dear.. vl be back soon after a short break.
I can still hear his laugh. How dare he! Now he will face Geet handa, his loyal maid. Smirking I decided to make his breakfast memorable. From Today u r going to love ur washroom a lot.
I took some boiled milk and poured it into pasta. Then I mixed tomato and chilly sauce and then mixed it with pasta. After draining the remaining milk I sprinkled some chilly powder over it to give a beautiful look. Then I decorated it with coriander leaves giving it a class look.
Setting the table I was eagerly waiting for him. the door opened and there he stood in his vest and track pants. The water drops in his hair and body gave him a sexy look. I gulped my saliva and immediately looked down when I noticed his smirk.
Y can't u wear some damn clothes?!
Oh pls geetipie.. don't tell that u r not enjoying.
I gave him another angry glare.
Waise bhi thank ur stars that I m wearing vest and pants. Warna on off days mein bina kapdon mein hi ghoomtha rahtha hoon..
He said winking. He is such a shameless man.
Pata nahi kab tak nanga punga ghoomta rahega.
I mumbled embarrassed. That's when I realized he said abt some off days.
What do u mean by off days? Aaj office nahi jaana?
Nope. I want to spent my whole day with my geet. Esliye I was not able to meet u for 2 days. I noe u felt bad. But don't worry. Aaj ki din tumhari naam..
I looked at him weirdly. He is behaving as if I m his girlfriend. No geet! Concentrate on giving his breakfast.
Sir… pls have ur breakfast. Otherwise it will turn cold.
I can feel sweetness dripping in my voice. But kya karun. I want to c his reaction badly. I served the pasta and he looked at it keenly.
Y it looks different?
Oh no!
Its nothing. I had seen my mom decorating pasta like this. Its really yummy. So thot to do the same. If u dint like then its ok, I vl serve u toast.
I showed my faking hurt face.
No.. its k geet.. I vl eat.
did he believe me so easily. wow!! I saw him looking up and mumbling something. The second he put the fork in his mouth his face went pale and filled with horror. He started to run all over the kitchen asking for sugar and water. I started to laugh uncontrollably seeing this beautiful sight. Revenge is a bitch!! His eyes fell on me and gave me u r gone look. Sensing the danger I ran out of the kitchen and saw him following me. he ran all over the front room but then I tripped in carpet and fell on couch. After a sec, the danger too fell on me and his eyes were staring intensely.


Note: Next Update will be giving today itself. but vl be late. i hope u r loving the story. All suggestions are welcome.
😃




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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update👏
maan likes to eat dairymilk when he is happy😳😳 soo cute
oops geet taking revenge
waiting for the next part
Edited by valli30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
n I m loving it a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update

Love the sweet little revenge by Geet

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