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Posted: 12 years ago
Jst awesome and wish him happy birthday frm my side also
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Part 33

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That day, geet was trying hard to concentrate but her nerves were not supporting her. The only thought that Maan was thinking of giving her a chance was enough for her to loose her senses.

So she left early. Maan needed to get whole detail from her regarding the whole second phase but he himself was not feeling comfortable calling her.

He had heard her story and somewhere within his heart believed it all but still to sink it all in such small period was not easy. This relation with her have made him go thru so much that his whole life has changed completely. He himself was a changed person and the reason was their relation, so it was not easy for him to digest everything so easily.

But he was tired of his inner fight too and taking everything into consideration, the effect her presence makes on him, how her tears gave him pain he had decided to give it a chance. But he was not sure of anything.

He called Pari, his new secretary and asked her to get Details from Geet.

Soon he was informed that Geet has left early due to some personal reason. He very well knew her personal reason, she must be busy shifting to his room. The thought that she will be in his room again brought so many emotions within his heart. Never have they satyed in same room.

He was nervous, how will he handle her being so close to him, on his bed. Maan gulped his saliva only at the thought.

Maan intentionally, to avoid the situation worked till late in the office while Geet was waiting eagerly for him. Her heart beat racing up and down at single footstep.

She had shifted to his room, now their room and little redecorated it to give some cozy environment. She was nervous, if he does not like the idea of redecorating the room. In no case she wanted him to get upset in present scenario.

To get over her nervousness, geet went to kitchen to help whoever was there but to her luck she found savitri.

"What are you doing here, go get nicely ready. Take this new start in very positive way. Your positivity have brought you this far, don't ever give it up beta"

Geet to calm her nerves down just hugged Savitri. "My blessings are always with you."

Geet was again sent back to the room and was sitting in front of mirror lost in thought when at last she felt his entry.

Maan gave a look to the redone room. Geet got nervous of his reaction

"woo I thought that.." "Its Ok." And he directly went to get his change of clothes and the to washroom.

When Maan came out, Geet was not there. He again looked at his room, all wondows were open and the new soft and light curtains that she has placed in window were flowing with the air. He went to window to take fresh air

"Maan Coffee" Geet was herself nervous. "hmm" he took it.

"do you want some snack too" "No, I am fine."

Maan started to leave the room when "Maan" he stopped "yahi saath me coffee piten hain na" Maan turned, looked at her for few seconds

"Hmm" he nodded his head in yes and sat on the side couch in his huge room.

Both were silently sitting and sipping their coffee But Geet was moving her legs and hands and the sound of her bangles and anklets were pulling strings of Maan's heart each time.

She was looking down, not able to meet his gaze while Maan's eye everynow and then went on her.

Her shyness and nervousness were pulling him more. The curls tickled her cheeks and she lifted her hand to remove them.

Ehsaas wo pyaar ka fir mehsus ho raha hai

Anjaan ye dil usse uljhan me ghira hua hai...

Use dekh ke ye dil nayi dhun chedta hai

Uski hasi pe ye pagal dil naach uth ta hai...

Aankhein wo jhuki to jaise raat ho jaaye

Palke jab khole to khubsurat savera ho jaaye...

Payal ki wo dhun dil me hulchal macha jaaye

Adaaye uski is katil dil ko aur ghayal kar jaaye...

Dard uska chupaaye nahi chup paata mujhse

Taklif hai itni ki dard uska nahi bataya jaata usse...

Raaz unginat kyu chupaaye baithi hai wo dil main

Chuppi uski na jaane kaise kab tod paaunga mein...

Wo mera hissa pehle se thi par ab jaan pa raha hu

Wo ehsaas pehle bhi the shayad par ab samajhna chahta hu...

Rishta ye humara haule se ab is dil main bas raha hai

Dhadkan jaise dhun nayi dil ke saath ched raha hai...

By @mishtiritu (Thanks for this awesome creation dear.)

"I heard you were looking for the project file from me" Geet said after thinking for long to break the silence.

"yes but I don't discuss office in home and vice versa." Maan then left after his coffee.

Geet was called my Savitri

"Ji maa" "did you both have any talk at coffee time" "Nahi, he did not say anything"

"But he sat with you for coffee, right? Beta he won't take the initiative, he has shut himself completely, he cannot open up this soon. He has given you chance, use it. "

Geet smiled, Maa's words have given her some direction and she was feeling positive.

At night when they came in same room, the room felt charged with so many feelings and emotions.

Geet gave smile to him but Maan just nodded and got busy with his laptop to check the office reports.

Geet got his sleeping suit and placed it near him on bed. She then went to change to her sleeping gown. She had got the simplest on ON but still as she came out in silky material Maan's eyes went on her. The gown fell so properly on her, showing and hiding and curves in a way that Maan, however hard he tried his eyes went on her.

He again looked down, trying to concentrate on his work. But again, as Geet combed her hair the sound her bangles made, forced him to look at her and his eyes again got stuck against his will.

Their eyes met in mirror. Maan then broke their eyelock to again dip his head in his work.

Dammn , what was happening with him. Why was he behaving like that. But the fact was they had always desired each other badly but once she had held herself due to her ego and then Maan due to his anger.

Now when somewhere within he have accepted his defeat, where somewhere he had believed that she said true, where somewhere he knew he wanted needed her, so now he was not being able to control himself as much as he otherwise did.

Then later in night, Maan slept at on corner of bed, but he was fully aware when Geet came and laid down.

Geet smiled and shifted herself to little more center, trying to be as near him. Though from inside she herself was very nervous being on same bed but she have to keep bold face.

Maan could feel the closeness. Then Geet turned and he could here the dangling sound of her bangles and anklets. These always stirred his heart. Maan closed his eyes tight to get hold of himself.

But Geet kept taking turns and making him completely loose himself

"Can't you sleep still?" "I am trying, neend nahi aa rahi hai"

Maan did not say anything and tried hard to close his eyes and concentrate on his sleep.

"No it cannot be, I cannot be so weak in front of her, no way."

But Geet was no where stoping the torture. In the quiet dark room, she sometimes got up to drink water and making the sweet torturous sound to his ears and the again turning twisting and in same process turned and her hand made contact to his back.

He was already burning with her closeness and the music she was creating, making his imagination go wild in so many ways and in that when her hand touched his back he lost it.

Maan in sudden, lifted himself, took both her hand and pinned them above her head. This was surprising for Geet. Her heart started racing with speed at this kind of closeness between them.

"ek baar me baat samajh me nahi aatee tumhen"

Maan's eyes were angry, but as he looked down at her, even in dark he could feel her beauty and the way she was under him, he realized how he had imagined his Mishty under him and then he left her and turned his face to other side

"Please sleep silently."

He again tried to sleep while Geet went completely in different world. Abb kya nind aayegee usse.

But all she did was tried to be still and then after long drifted to sleep.

Next: Geet getting naughty...

All,

Thanks a ton to all of you for your best wishes, flowers and cakes for my son.

Please like and comment on this update and let me know your views and ideas.
-Anu
Edited by tellyme - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
supperb dear

geet getting so nervous and maan tooo

my god geet kuch kam hill karo

abhi sirf haath pakda tha with anger

but anyways good try to win him back
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 32 -
Awesome update Anu...
Geet told everything from her POV...she did realise her mistake and her feelings but by then it was too late. Her mere presence in his life had become a problem for him and so she went away...not wanting to create any more problems.
I think her father just shifted the blame so easily. It is so hard to grow a girl without a mother's presence. he made her to think like a man and not a womana nd when she failed because he did not tell her anything and just ex[ected blind trust, it was her problem...well pata nahi but in my POV he failed as well
Anywyas, pain toh Geet and Maan ka hi hai...at least he is ready to give it a chance...i just hope this time she doesn't fail him and they can get back thier happiness
sometime in future, i will like to see Anu, where they have a strong relationship forming and there is some accusation on Geet. That moment I want Maan to trust and support her to show that healing process is complete...it is a request
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update di
i m liking the present situation maan cant control himnself but trying hard to do it annd geet doing everything to make him like thsi 😆
chalo savitri once in a whiel gives tipes to geet
and the bedroom scene was awesoem geeting was testing maan's control atlast maan couldnot control and reacted😆😳

precap is awesome geet being naught😉

di is past still remain ya everything si over i mean what r the incident that made maan to loose trust on geet is there anything left or every past of them is over
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum update
waitin 2 see naughty geet..😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Guys if u don't know today is Anu's birthday so please wish her along with leaving comments
Anu - You didn't mentio n it's your birthday but once again "Happy Birthday"...
very nice part...acceptance is the key nahi...also howsoever long the relationship is, living together in one room makes so much of a difference. All pretences are gone, there is no where to hide and all your vulnerabilities are in front
Loved Geet's sweet torture on Maan...LOL...coffe and then sleeping...bechara, her anklets and bangles sound was giving him wild thoughts while he was just trying to control.
His Mishti has started to understand him and realised that there is desire and love behind his anger...bechari ki neend hi ud gayi...i just loved the line 'ab use kahan se neend aati"
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Posted: 12 years ago
happy birthday

nice update
maaneet momets were nice

Edited by lovesia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update

Maaneet getting nervous to speak to each other
in their bedroom

Maan is not able to sleep as Geet is continuously turning on their bed

Maan in anger held Geet hand n warn her to be still n geet went into her dreamland

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