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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice story.😊 Liked Rk & Madhu a lot!!😃Plzz continue soon & plzz add me to pm list.😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Clara20

hey nice update dear...sweet nokjhok..i liked that..and plz update soon..ur copmuter is repaired or nt




thanx alott dear😊
n yes my computer got repaired n m gonna update the next part tommorow😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjali.12

Nice story.😊 Liked Rk & Madhu a lot!!😃Plzz continue soon & plzz add me to pm list.😛



thanx dear
n will surely add u in my pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part-19

It was evening n RK n madhu were sitting in dere room doing there own work when dad came

rishu madhu bete kya kar rae h aap dono???????

Kuch nai dad me bas silent movie dkh rai thi

Wht??????

Silent movie kisse kaha tumne??????

Mene to tumhara naam nai liya toh tume aisa kyun laga k tume keh rai hun me

Dekha dad dekha na apne ye jaan bujh k ladai shuru karti h

Haan haan jaise um toh bade seedhe ho

Acha ab bas bhi kariye aap dono kbi bhi ahin bhi shuru ho jate h

Khair madhu bete hum aap dono ko ye btane aaye the k aaj apko apne ghar jana h

N phr kal rishu aa jaega aapko lene okh so aap packing kar lijiye toh Vicky chod aayega aapko

Oh okh dad thanku

Saying dis dad left

Waise kissi galt faimi me mat rehna kyunki me nai aane wala hun tume lene

Kya matlab h tumhara ye ek rasam hoti h

Pata h bt ye rasam toh pati nibhata h

Haan toh tum ho toh mere pati

Ohoo

Ab me tumhara pati hun n jab subh mene brkfst managa that b yaad h na kya kaha tha tumne pati my foot

Haan wo toh me gusse me thi

Okh toh ab me gusse me hun n me nai aunga

Tum majak kar rae ho na???????

Jaan tume aisa kyun lagta h k me majak kar raha hun????????

M vry serious

madhu thought for a while###agr ye nai aaya toh me mom dad ko kya jawab dungi n wo toh mujse hi puchenge n mom wo toh daantegi kyunki une kya pta ki ye unka rishab beta kitna bada dusht danav h huhn,,,,,,,,,chal madhu thoda sa pyaar se baat kar hi le nai toh awain hi bhao khaega#####

RK jst watched madhu making faces n thinking sumthing n smirked thinking abt her nxt step

RK wo me...

Bt RK ignored her

RK suno na

Haan madhu bolo me sun raha hun

Haan wo me keh rai thi k wo subh ki baat ko bhul jate h na wo mujse galti se muh se nikal gaya tha

RK didn't said anything

Acha baba dekho me sorry bhi keh rai hun aisa dubara nai hoga paka

N me kaise vishvass karun tum par

Ah haan jo tum kahoge me waise hi karungi

Pakka???????

Haan haan paka wala promise

Hmmm okh so tum hi kalse mera brkfast banogi bolo manjur h

MADHU cursed him in her mind challak lomdi muje pehle hi pta tha k ye toh hhi challo numbr one huhn agr muje isse kaam nai hota na tohj btati isse me,,,,,,,,

Haan haan paka

N usme koi gadbad bhi nai karogi

Okh pakka

Hmm thk h

Saying dis RK started to pack his clothes also

Tum kahin jaa rae ho??????

Haan tumhare ghar

But tum kyun tume toh kal aana h na??????

Nai padmini maa ka call aya tha k me bhi sath aaun so isiliye

But dad ne to aisa kuch nai kaha

Haan mene hi maa ko mana kiya tha une kuch kehnne se

Matlb tume pehle se pta tha

Uuu idiot donkey to tum itni der se maje le rae the

Me tume chodungi nai'saing dis madhu threw a pillow at him

While RK dodged it easily n ran away from dere laughing,,,,,,,,,

Ullu kahin ka pta nai khud ko kya samjhta h huhn????

While later in d evening RK n madhu were ready to leave

Okh bte apna dhyan rakhna n jaldi aana waise bhi aap dono k bina ghar bht sunna lagta h

Kyun dad hum nai h kya ghar me???????

Aap toh h bte bt ye tom n jerry nai hota toh bht shanty ci lagne lagti h

All laughed while rishabala made faces kya dad aap bhi

Chaliye jaiye n jaldi se wapas aaiye hum aapka wait kaenge bbye

Bbye dad

RK sat in d driver seat n started d car while madhu came n opened d back door n hopped in it

Challo

RK just stopped d car n glared at her

Kya hua aise kyun dkh re ho?????????

madhu muje nai lagta k me tumhara driver hun

Haan toh

Toh ye k aage aao samhji

Nai muje tumhare sath nai baithna

Tum bht kharab ho muje bht tang karte ho

madhu bachpana chodo n aage aao

Nai kaha na

Thk h tumhari marzi

madhu smilled thinking tht was easy bt her happiness was short lived when RK said

Toh thk h ma kahin nai jaa raha n na ye car kahin jaa rai h

Yaa toh tum aage aogi nai toh hun yai khade rahenge

Ye kaisi zidd h RK chalo na dkho hume late ho raha h

Aise hi hota h jaan yaa toh tum meri baat mano n nai toh baithi raho yai

RK tume pta h na tum kitne bade wale dusht ho n danav bhi

Oh thnx swthrt

Ab agar tumhara cursing programme ho gaya ho toh challe

Haan saying dis MADHU came to d front seat n RK strted d car

Soon dey reached handa mansion n rpadmini n shamsher mallik welcomed dem

Kaise ho aap mom????

Me thk hun bte

Tum log btao kaise h mere newly wedded couple????????

hum bhi ek dum thk h maa

Chalo aao jaldi andar aao

Dkho mene aj sab tum logo ki pasand ka banaya h

Chalo jaldi se fresh ho ke aao n phr sab sath me dinner karte h

RK n madhu went upto madhu's room n got frshnup n came down to hav dere dinner aftr dinner everyone sat in d hall n hav a lil chitchat n den everyone retired to dere room

Both changed n came to go to bed when madhu got a mechivious plan in her head

RK tumne kal kaha tha k wo tumhara room h toh tum bed pe sooge,,,,,,,ri8888888

RK saw her trying to read whts going in her devil brain

Hmmm toh????

Toh ye my darling husband k ye mera room h n yahan me decide karungi k tum kahan soge

N me chahti hun k tum couch pe soo

Oh no madhu aise kuch nai hoga

Well den ur choice tum chaho to floor pe bhi soo sakte ho

Nai madhu me toh bed pe hi soounga

Nai kaha na maine

Well thk h toh phr me bahar jaake couch pe sota hun

N jab mom subh puchengi toh tumhi une jawab dena okh jaan'

RK smirked thinking his work is being done n now madhu will stop him n thinking dis he picked up his pillow n blanket n started to move out

When madhu screamed are nai nai

Tum toh bura maan gae RK

Me toh majak kar rai thi

Hum yai sote h

R u sure madhu bcoz u see muje toh koi problem nai h said an smilling inwardly

madhu thought#yaa ri8 tume kyun koi problem hogi problem toh muje ho jaegi na agr mom ne ya dad ne tume bahar dkh liya toh#

Nai nai RK aao sote h

Okh saying dis innocently RK lied down on d bed n soon sleep took ovr both of dem''''

That's it for now

ll B WAITING FOR UR RESPONSE

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Edited by amrinderdhami - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
jey nyc updayte dear, but rk is not maan and i don't like the way u change their names. Madhu is not geet and rk is not maan. sorry for being rude
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved their nok jhok
rk always wins and knows how to push her button...please bring some romance and ahem ahem
Edited by kendra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Owesum update
Upadate next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really cute update😊 Madhu & Rk are really funny & adorable.Loved the small fights😃Continue soon😛 Thanks for the pm..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepak148

jey nyc updayte dear, but rk is not maan and i don't like the way u change their names. Madhu is not geet and rk is not maan. sorry for being rude



dear i do understan that these both are different characters but hav written this story for the geet forum n now m posting it here that's y sumtimes a lil bit of editting problem is there
i ll see to it that from next time it does't occur
i hope that's fine with u
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kendra

loved their nok jhok

rk always wins and knows how to push her button...please bring some romance and ahem ahem



thanx dear
but u ll hav to wait for a while to see the romance n ahem ahem

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