SS: LOVE+HATRED+LOVE=RIMA STORY PT 12-76 ND 13-77 - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago

HELLO EVERYONE,

A BIG THANKS TO ALL WHO LIKE AND COMMENTED FOR PREV PART...AS MANY OF U R WORRIED ABOUT RISHBALA SEPERATION SO I JUST WANT TO SAY DON'T TAKE TENSION ABOUT DAT SO EARLY JUST ENJOY DIS BEAUTIFULL UPDATE...HERE GOES D 4TH PART HOPE U ALL ENJOY IT...


4th PART:- LOVE BEGINS'

THE DAY BEGINS WID A BEAUTIFULL SUNSHINE AND IT PRESENT D DAY HAS BEEN JUST FOR THEM ONLY' LOVE IS IN D AIR ND WEATHER IS JUST LIKE A SPRING LITTLE BIT SUNSHINE AND LITTLE BIT RAINY'MADHU GET UP OPEN D CURTAIN OF D WINDOW AND ALLOW D SUNRAYS TO TOUCH HER'SHE PRAYS TO BABAJI DAT D DAY BRINGS GOOD TO HER LIFE AND STARTS TO GET READY'BUT SHE IS LITTLE CONFUSE😲 DAT AS SHE DON'T KNOW WHERE HE WILL TAKE HER, AT WHAT TIME OR WILL HE COME TO PICK HER AND MANY MORE QUES R RUNNING LIKE A HORSE IN HER MIND'

SHE JUST WENT TO TAKE A BATH AND AFTER HALF AND HOUR SHE COMES OUT OF BATHROOM AND AGAIN CONFUSE AS WAT TO WEAR'AFTER SO MUCH THINKING SHE GET IT AND DRESS UP IN A BEAUTIFULL RED AND WHITE COLOUR CHOODIDAR AND KAMEEZ AS ALWAYS LUKING LIKE AN ANGEL' SHE STARTS COMBING HER HAIR JUST DEN HER CELL BLINK UP WID MESSAGE SHE PICK UP D CELL AND READ D MESSAGE IT STATE' "BE READY COMING IN 15 MINS TO PICK UP U'RK"'. ON READING D MESSAGE HER HEART STARTS AGAIN BEATING FAST'SHE FEEL SO NERVOUS'

JUST LIKE DAT D DAY STARTS FOR RK ALSO' A BEATIFULL ND ROMANTIC DAY SIGNING HIM FROM TODAY HIS LIFE WILL ALWAYS BE LIGHTEN UP WID LOVE HE CAN JUST FEEL DAT'RK ALSO GET READY WEARING A BLACK JEANS AND RED COLOUR T-SHIRT JUST MATCHING WID MADHU BT NOT KNOWING DAT IT'S JUST HIS HEART SAID HIM TO SELECT RED COLOUR AS IT INDICATE LOVE'D CLOCK IS STATING 8:45 AM RK LEFT FROM D HOUSE TO PICK UP MADHU'

AFTER 15 MINS HE REACHED TO HOSTEL AND MAKE A CALL TO MADHU TO INFORM HER O COME OUT'MADHU PICK UP D CALL ND SAID ONLY YES'AFTER SOMETIME SHE COMES OUT FROM HOSTEL GATE RK IS STANDING NEAR D CAR AS HE SEE HER FIRST WORD COME AT HIS MIND IS "AN ANGEL"'MADHU COME NEAR TO HER LUKING AT GROUND AS FEELING GOOSEBUMPS DUE TO HIS GAZE'RK COMES IN TRANCE GOES TO LEFTSIDE OF CAR AND OPEN DOOR FOR HER SHE SITS IN AND RK DRIVE AWAY FROM THEIR NOT SPEAKING A SINGLE WORD WID EACH OTHER AS THEIR HEART R BUSY IN TALKS WID EACH OTHER'

D TWO WENT OFF FROM THERE UNAWARE OF DAT A STRANGE TWO PAIR OF EYES R LOOKING AT DEM WD CURIOSITY'

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AT LAST D SILENT IS BREAK UP BY MADHU SAYING "HI!!! ALSO SORRY FOR YESTERDAY'S RUDE BEHAVIOUR"'

RK:- IT'S ALL OK DON'T BE SORRY'

MADHU:- THANKS'BTW WHERE R WE GOING???

RK:-DON'T KNOW BT MAY BE ON A LONG DRIVE'

AS D CAR SPEEDS UP FOR D LONG JOURNEY D INTRO TALKS STARTS BETWEEN BOTH' FOR KNOWING EACH OTHER AS MUCH AS POSSIBLE'D JOURNEY HAS BEEN JUST STARTED'

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AT COLLEGE IN LUNCH BREAK TRISH HEADED TOWARDS CANTEEN MEANWHILE A SIMILAR VOICE COMES IN HER EAR'

ASH:- TRISH WAIT!!!

TRISH:- HI'ASH WHERE WERE U FROM MORNING NOT ATTAINDED LEC ALSO???

ASH:-I WAS NOT IN A MOOD TO ATTEND DIS BORING LEC DAT'S Y'BTW WHERE IS MADHU???

TRISH DECIDED TO HIDE ABOUT MADHU"S DATE WID RK AS SHE FELT IT WILL BE GOOD IF MADHU INFORM ASH ABOUT DAT SO SHE JUST LIED O HIM'

TRISH:-OH..SHE HAD GONE AT HOME TO MEET UNCLE AUNTY AS DEY CAME YESTERDAY'

ASH:- (SMILINGLY) OK COME LETS GO TO CANTEEN'

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RK TOOK MADHU OUTSKIRTS OF D CITY AND DEY HAD THERE LUNCH AT DHABA'FIRST RK REGRETED FOR DAT BT MADHU PLEADED HER BY SAYING "RK PLZZ I WANT TO EAT HERE ONLY... I NEVER GET A CHANCE BT I HAD WISH TO EAT AT DHABBA SOMEDAY PLZZ FULLFILL MY WISH'"

RK NOT ABLE TO REGRET HER ND AGREED TO HV LUNCH THEIR ONLY'MADHU REALLY ENJOYED D LUNCH ND BY SEEING HER SMILE RK ALSO BECOME HAPPY TOO'AFTER LUNCH THEY AGAIN START THERE JOURNEY RETURNING BACK'CONVO START AGAIN'

RK:-U ENOYED IT???

MADHU:-YES ND U'??

RK:-IF U ENJOYED IT DEN ME TOO'😊

D SUNSET AND D CAR COME TO A STOP RK EXCUSE TO HER BY SAYING "COMING IN 5 MINS WANT TO MAKE A CALL"'HE WENT OUT FROM CAR AND CALLS BITTUJI'

RK:- BITTUJI IS ALL D ARRAGEMENTS HV DONE???

BITTUJI:- YES CHIEF EVERYTHING IS DONE AS PER UR INTSRUCTION U CAN COME HERE AT ANYTIME'

RK:- OK!!!

MADHU FELT IT STRANGE Y HE GOT OUT FROM CAR TO MAKE A CALL'MEANWHILE HER PHONE ALSO RING UP BLINKING D NAME "MOM"'SHE GET TENSE AFTER 2 MINS PICK UP D CALL AGAIN HER MOM STARTS FIRING QUES ON HER JUST DEN RK COME INSIDE CAR AND SEE HER IN TENSE LOOK AS HE WAS GOING TO ASK HER WHO IS THEIR MADHU PUTS FINGER ON HER LIPS INDICATING HIM TO BE SILENT ND RK JUST NODDED HIS HEAD IN YES STARTS DRIVING'ALL WHILE MADHU IS JUST ANSWERING TO HER MOM'S QUESTION IN TENSION NOT LUKING AT RK AS WHOLE WORLD IS JUST VANISHED FOR HER' AFTER 10 MINS SHE HUNG UP D CALL AND TAKES A DEEP BREATHE AS FEELING ALL IS OK KNOW'

RK:-DID U TALK TO EVRYONE JUST LIKE DIS???

MADHU:-JUST LIKE WAT???

RK:- ABOUT FORGETTING D WORLD'SO BUSY IN TALKS DAT ALSO NOT KNOWING DAT U R WALKING ON MIDDLE OF ROAD'

MADHU:-NO IT'S NOT LIKE DAT' I JUST GET HYPER WHEN IT'S MY MOM'S CALL'WAIT!! WAIT!!! WAT DID U SAID WALKING ON ROAD???😕

RK:- YES LAST TIME I SAW U ON MIDDLE OF ROAD WHILE TALKING'

MADHU REMEMBERS ABOUT FRESHERS PARTY NIGHT BCOZ LASTLY HER MOM HAD CALLED HER ON DAT DAY ONLY'

MADHU:- DAT MEAN U WAS THERE IN CAR???

RK:-YES DEAR'

MADHU:-OOPS SORRY FOR DAT DAY ALSO IT WAS ALL MY MISTAKE AND I WAS GLARING AT U DAT IT'S UR FAULT'

RK:- IT'S OK BUT FROM NXT TIME DON'T REPEAT SUCH THINGS DEAR... MAY TURNS TO DANDGROUS ALSO'AND DON'T GET SO MUCH HYPER ALSO.. OTHERWISE I WILL TAKE UR CELL FROM U'RK SMILE LUKING AT HER AND SHE ALSO GIVE HIM A BIG SMILE'😃

WHILE TALKING DEY REACH AT D PLACE RK MAKES BLIND FOLD TO HER'BY HIS ACTION MADHU GET NERVOUS ND ASKS HIM "RK WAT R U DOING I.. I DON'T LIKE DARKNESS PLZZ REMOVE IT"'

RK:-NOTHING WILL HAPPEN TO U I M WID U ONLY'TRUST ME'TODAY I WILL SHOW U DAT DREAMLAND ALSO EXISTS IN REAL TOO'BY DIS I PROMISE U WILL REALLY REALIZE ABOUT MY FEELING AND LOVE FOR U MADHUBALA'AHAAAN'😉

RK COME OUT OF CAR GOES TO LEFTSIDE ND OPEN D DOOR'HE HELD MADHU'S AND MAKE HER ALSO TO GET OUT FROM CAR'AND BOTH START WALKING AS ONE OF RK'S HAND IN MADHU'S HAND AND OTHER AT HER SHOULDER'MADHU IS FEELING COMFORTABLE NOW HER NERVOUSNESS JUST VANISH AWAY'THEY COME TO STOP RK UNFOLD D CLOTH FROM HER EYES AS SHE SEE D VIEW INFRONT OF HER'SHE GET ASTONISH...

A BEAUTIFULL LAKESIDE (SAME AS SHOWN IN SERIAL) DECORATED WID COLOURFULL LIGHTS AND FLOWERS D MOON IS SPREADING IT'S SHINE IN D LAKE AS TIDES COMES AND GO'SHE FELT LIKE SEEING A BEAUTIULL HEAVEN AS SHE USED TO SEE IN HER DREAMLAND AT BEING SUCH A PLACE WID HER LOVE RK'

RK:- HOW IT IS??? DO U LIKE IT???

MADHU:- NO WORDS'

RK:- U DIDN'T LIKE DIS???

MADHU:-NO IT'S BEAUTIFULL JUST LIKE MY DREAMLAND'

RK:- I TOLD U DEAR UR DREAMLAND WILL BE IN REAL'MADHU DO U KNOW DIS PLACE!!!

MADHU:-YES HOW CAN I FORGET DIS PLACE'I KNOW U HV GIVEN UR FIRST SHOT OF UR MOVIE HERE'I M BIGGEST FAN OF UR'S FROM UR 1ST MOVIE...

BY HEARING DIS RK GET AMUSE AND HAPPY TOO'THEN RK PLACE HIS HAND INFRONT OF HER ASKING HER FOR DANCE..SHE QUIETLY PLACE HER HAND IN HIS NODDING YES'A ROMANTIC SONG START PLAYING IN BACKGROUND'RK HELD HER FROM WAIST BY ONE HAND COMING CLOSE TO HER AND OTHER HAND IN HER HAND AND D DANCE BEGINS'

Dil ibadat kar raha hai
Dhadkanen meri sun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun
Zindagi ki shaakh se lun
Kuch haseen pal main chun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun

Oh seyo leyo sama leyo
Seyo leyo aa'
Oh seyo leyo sama leyo
Seyo leyo aa'

Dil ibadat kar raha hai
Dhadkanen meri sun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun
Zindagi ki shaakh se lun
Kuch haseen pal main chun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun

Jo bhi jitne pal jeeyun
Unhe tere sang jeeyun
Jo bhi kal ho ab mera
Usse tere sang jeeyun
Jo bhi saansein main bharoon
Unhe tere sang bahroon
Chaahe jo ho raasta
Usse tere sang chaloon

Dil ibadat kar raha hai
Dhadkanen meri sun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun

RK TURNS HER TWO TIMES AND AGAIN HELD HER MORE CLOSE TO HIM AS BOTH CAN FEEL THERE BREATHE...STEPPING BACK AND FORWARD ALL LOST IN EACH OTHER EYES'A LONG AND CUTE EYELOCK'

Mujhko de tu mit jaane
Ab khud se de mil jaane
Kyun hai yeh itna faasla
Lamhe yeh phir na aane
Inko tu na de jaane
Tu mujhpe khud ko de luta

Tujhe tujhse tod loon
Kahin khud se jod loon
Mere jismojaan pe aa
Teri khushboo odh loon
Jo bhi saansein main bharoon
Unhe tere sang bharoon
Chaahe jo ho raasta
Use tere sang chaloon

Dil ibadat kar raha hai
Dhadkanen meri sun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun

Baahon mein de bas jaane
Seene mein de chup jaane
Tujh bhin main jaaoon toh kahaan
Tujhse hai mujhko paane
Yaadon ke woh nazraane
Ik jinpe hak ho bas mera

Teri yaadein mein rahoon
Tere khwaabon mein jagoon
Mujhe dhoonde jab koi
Teri aankhon mein miloon
Jo bhi saansein main bharoon
Unhe tere sang bharoon
Chaahe jo ho raasta
Usse tere sang chaloon

Dil ibadat kar raha hai
Dhadkanen meri sun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun

RK TURNS HER AS HER BACK TOUCHING RK'S CHEST'AS D SONG ENDED RK COMES NEAR TO HER EAR DUE TO DIS MADHU CLOSE HER EYES JUST DEN HE SPOKE SOFTLY "I LOVE U MADHU"'❤️ON LISTENING DIS THREE MAGICAL WORDS MADHU'S HEARTBEAT SKIPS FOR SEVERAL TIMES'AFTER SOMETIME SHE TURNS AND FACE RK AND FINALLY SHE SPEAKS UP "I LOVE U TOO RK"'❤️RK BECOMES SO HAPPY AND HUG HER AS TIGHT AS HE CAN'🤗

RK:- I M SOO HAPPY MADHU I JUST CAN'T TELL U'

MADHU:- ME TOO RK' I REALLY LOVE U SOO MUCH FROM D DAY I HV SAW U FIRST BT I WAS SCARED OF THINGS'

RK:-I KNOW DAT MADHU BT FROM KNOW U DON'T HV TO SCARE OR TAKE TENSION'FROM TODAY ALL UR WORRIES R OF MINE AND I PROMISE U MADHU WILL NEVER HURT U'ALSO OUR RELATIONSHIP WILL NEVER COME IN BETWEEN UR STUDIES'U HV TO TRUST ME'

MADHU:-I TRUST U RK'I WILL ALSO NEVER LET DOWN UR TRUST'

AFTER DAT DEY SEPARATE STARTS WALKING FROM THERE HOLDING EACHOTHER HANDS'CAR COME TO STOPS AT HOSTEL GATE BOTH COMES OUT OF CAR'RK LEANED NEAR HER AND KISS ON HER CHEEK'MADHU BLUSH ☺️OF AT HIS ACTION AND RUN AWAY INSIDE BY SAYING "GOOD NIGHT MR. 'S' "'BEFORE RK CAN ASK HER WAT IS MEANING OF MR. 'S' SHE JUST VANISH FROM THERE'RK DRIVE AWAY FROM THERE STILL THINKING ABOUT HER LAST WORDS AND SMILES SAYING "I WILL GET IT KNOW SOON GOOD NIGHT MY LOVE"'

BY THIS A BEAUTIFULL DAY ENDED WID PROMISES OF LOVE AND TRUST FOR FOREVER'


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LOVE AND THANKS

ZOHRA (SURU)

Edited by zoshad3119 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
r eally a nyc update, but a twist is coming. Hmm maybe some reporter or enemy is following and publish their pics. Rishbala MU then lol, this ash is also looking like mystery
Edited by deepak148 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ummm...well Abhay ki yaad agayi
a very nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome but so early?? i thought rk would have hard time trusting anyone!!
Edited by kendra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update Suru.
Loved Rishbala's long drive & Dance.
Update next part soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Romance in the air!!😃Love the date..It started with a mystery of two eyes but it turned to be very sweet!! "Mr.S" again mystery..😉😃Continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww the update is vryyy nice...plzzz dear cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesme update dear.. M jst wonderng who was watchng dem? :o Was it Ash? Plzz update soon nd thnks fr the pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear...
bt i think probably a new twist going to come up...
d stranger...who is he???????
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
I read your 3rd and 4th part together. Nice parts - well done.👍🏼
Edited by emptyworld - 12 years ago

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