Ariya : Hamsafar (ch 15c pg 64 ) ( 4-2-13 )

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Ramisa (Saba)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: -sree13-
are whats sameer's problem?? ek toh dono ko alag kar diya!!! 😡 but precap dekhke i am jumping..they would miss train & stay together in station..yayyy
update soon Rami

thanks sree di 😊

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Ramisa (Saba)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#352

Originally posted by: shrutisweety
rami sorry for the late comment dear
i was busy
coming to update it was amazing update
so both r in same train
and precap
both miss the train and
spend whole night
continue soon rami dear

it's ok dear u cmnt it's enough !!!😊

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Renumehra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#353

its a superb story start hui toh kitani mahobbat hai ki yad aa gyi
but really very nice..

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aimen.naseer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#354

superb update dear rami

continue soon plz 😃

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Geeta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#355

A great concept my dear rami!

Kab update karongi? Jab karongi to please pm karde na !! Xxx

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Ramisa (Saba)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#356

Originally posted by: Renumehra
its a superb story start hui toh kitani mahobbat hai ki yad aa gyi
but really very nice..

thanks dear start se kmh jaisi hi thi but half ja ke diff 😆

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Ramisa (Saba)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#357

Originally posted by: aimen.naseer
superb update dear rami
continue soon plz 😃

thanks

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Ramisa (Saba)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#358

Originally posted by: BabyGee_1995
A great concept my dear rami!
Kab update karongi? Jab karongi to please pm karde na !! Xxx

thanks dear😛

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Ramisa (Saba)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#359

hi to all my ache ache frnds and readers .
first plz mujhe maaf kar dena i was bzy with my studies and mood nahi tha updates likhne ka ...

CHAPTER 15b

On railway
riya arrive to station and sit on a bench
sameer and arjun also reach to station and sit beside riya's bench ..

sameer : uff...It's too crowded mene kaha tha mene araam se plain se chalte hain but tum ...
arjun : relax bhai just feel na kitna alag hai yahaan ka mahol ...
sameer : acha baba lo tum iss mahol ke mazze
riya was sitting with a sad face ...

she was missing arjun and all past moment's .
suddenly train come stop on station . all pplz get up and start going inside the train .
sameer : arre train aagayi chalo arjun . they get up and go to train while riya also get up . the crowd was not letting them to go inside . sameer went inside the train and give hand to arjun but crowd was too much ...

finally he hold sameer's hand and go inside .
sameer : Ufff...thanks god ur in kaha tha mene suddenly arjun cut him and say
arjun : kaha tha ke plain se chalte hain but meri waja se aap iss crowd mein phans gaye right ???
sameer : right ...

arjun : arre ... mera phone ... phone kahan gaya ???
lagta hai bahar bench par chut gaya mein abhi le kar aata hoon
sameer : arre nahi . phir se crowd mein phansne ka irada hai kya
arjun : nahi bhi i'm okay mein...mein abhi aata hoon just wait ...
sameer : arre par...suno to...arre arjun ... but he left ...
he went outside and pick the phone

riya was also trying to cross the door suddenly crowd push riya while arjun hold her and ask
arjun : aap thike to hain na ...
she put her hear up and both get shocked after watching eachother
arjun : riya ...tum???
riya : Arjun sir ...

arjun : tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho ???
riya : abb...aap...aap se matlab ???
arjun : matlab hai riya ( he said while grabing her arm )
he take he a side

riya : arjun sir kahan le ja rahe hain ap mujhe chroye plz...
arjun : riya aakhir tumhari problem kya hai haan ???
aakhir kyun tum mujh se rudely behave karti ho
riya was just staring at him [ shayed yehi rude behavior aap ke liye bhi acha rahega aur mere liye bhi ( she thought in her mind ) ]
riya : ab to muskurane ko bhi dil nahi chata sir to dil halka karne ke liye rude behave karti hoon

arjun : kyun tum khud ko itna dard deti ho kyun kar waqt tum emotional rehti ho ???
riya : kaash aap meri zindagi mein kabhi aate hi to itna dard na hota aur na hi pyaar ka matlab pata chalta ...
arjun : kya pyaar karna ek gunah hai ???
riya ignore his question and immidiatly try to go but arjun didn't let her ho

riya : jane dein sir warna
suddenly rail siren rings
arjun : warna kya riya ???
riya : warna train chut jayegi
arjun : to chut jaane do
riya : but... [ arjun put fine on his own lips ]
arjun : ssshhh...[ and stop her to speak anything ]

inside the train

rathore : ye arjun kahan reh gaya
he get up and go to the door of train while train start and rathore was gettig more worried for arjun .
the train left and riya was tensed while of course arjun was happy ...

NO PRECAP for today ..

So how was it !!!
let me know with your precious comment's

Regard
Ramisa

Edited by saba-ramisa - 13 years ago