ARHI SIMH... CHS 44, 45, 46 UPDATED! PG 66 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Awesome update
Shayam is back nice !! Shyam had Case filed against him ?
Oh ! Payal Want's to bring everything out what will happen ?
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
wow intrtesting con soon
loved it
thaks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 5

"Oh my god! U both look so cute together!!, u know what khushi, I knew before I left ki both of you were simply meant to be together,soo in love!!!"

NK snorted at that and coughed hardly trying to disguise it. All three of them turned to look at him

"And who might this be?"..

"leave it , lavanya whats with all this luggage?.. arnav tried tugging at the luggage as if trying to figure out how to fit it into his car.

"oh come on ASR u haven't changed one bit.and chamkeeli what is it with u and u and silent??"

"nk don't just stand there, help me dammit!"

"sorry nannav mere bhai'its your friend'I think u should do it yourself, chaliye khushiji get into the car ..its not good to stand in the sun for so long.." to say arnav was shocked would have been an understatement.. nk never refused like that .. he was always that helping gene like khushi did..

Both la and nk reached together for the door'but nk was too preoccupied in his thoughts about how to keep khushi away from shyam once they reach that he did not bother to acknowledge lavanya and got inside and shut the door behind him. Lavanya stamped her foot to which khushi smiled..

"woh ..he is mamijis relation from Sydney, y don't u sit in the front'.?"

Khushi said opening the door for her..

"no khushi'I'll sit here'hey! Would u mind? Move yourself so I can sit?" nk stared at her for a while and then moved over to the other side. lavanya got in and put two of her handbags on him and started readjusting her make up. meanwhile arnav had somehow slammed the luggage in and got into the drivers seat'.

"u know chamkeeli,asr, iam so happy now' my parents have decided to get me settled 'and I am going to have an arranged marriage! With all those rituals like u told me khushi'I am here to meet the eligibles my family has found!

"lavanyaji!!i am so haapy for you!"

"what the?! Lavanya you and arranged marriage?!"

And then they sat discussing the pros and cons of arranged marriages. khushi started to be her old self and the other three started feeling lighter bcoz of that..

"ok I ve got the list right here..let see asr do u know rohit singhania?"

"of singhania industries? no way lavanya' he is too much of a fraud for you"

"ok maan singh khurana'khurana industries?"

"nope heard he was in love with some geet"

"viraat choudhary'.in new york right now his dada is.."

"mr. choudhary'he is not ur type'more of an angry young man"

"nandkishore sharma..australia''''."

"NOWAY!!" came two voices in unision.""see'even he agrees'hw can I marry someone with such an old name!"

"oi,and who would want to get married to u?"

"whaat!!how dare you!!what IS your problem?!"

"my problem!?, iam nandkishore sharma!"

"oh!dont worry'u r removed from my list!"

"u'why would you'remove me 'I'll remove you from my list!!"

" nanneji..what list r u talking about?"

"mm..my'my friiends list'yes my friends list"

"I am not ur friend dumbo!"

"how dare u call me dumbo u pathetic murat!

"nannheji...its aurat!"

"HOW D'..""STOP IT YOU TWO!!"barked arnav and received his call.

"speak up aman'I don't have all day or the patience'I am driving "

"sir there is some urgent news I got to know from sources'its about mr. jha"

"I'll get there as soon as I drop these cartoons home."

"kya""WHAT""ASR!!"

"SHUUT UP!!"



THAT WAS CHAPTER 5...

FORGIVE THE ERRORS...


THNK U FOR READING!!

Edited by ziya-farhannish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
I guess this was the funniest chapter till now
Loved nk and la's fights
And Arnav called them cartoons
:-D
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 6

Arnav stared at aman furiously'.how could he have gone wrong?...the news had shaken him terribly!...buaji had registered a complaint against shyam for posing as an unmarried gentleman and tried to fool them into marrying her niece to him'.her niece'.. 'his khushi!...slowly bits of memories started cropping up ..her fiances name was also shyam!...her engagement being broken!...her tears that day'must have been then that she realized shyams faade!...as the pieces fell together at the right places, arnav started feeling the guilt eat into him'he did not realize as he mechanically strode out of his office room signaling aman with a hand'neither he nor aman could make out what he meant by it'.

He found himself driving home and walking upto his house ' his hand halted at the doorknob'he stood there a few seconds and took a deep breath'no'.. this is not how it has to be 'he was not prepared' he took a few more moments to gather himself and then started to think.. when he entered the house moments later'it was ASR walking into the room'.

If there was hell, nk would personally make sure shyam was packed tightly into a crate labeled "DUNG" and shipped there'they had arrived to find the family returned from the satsang and fussing over the stupid snake and then they had turned onto the latest nagoona (he meant namoona) and started fussing over her'.nobody except him noticed the snakes whispers and glances towards khushiji and it took him all his willpower not to punch him then and there'.khushiji '.poor thing was shivering scared'what is it that he could do'he had promised payalji that he would look after her without letting shyam know'but he was not sure about that now'..

Lavanya was bothered by what she saw 'ever since they had arrived khushi had been shivering'as if'as if she was scared of someone

'la could not figure out the exact thing but she had the gut feeling that khushis problem was shyam and she could see that everybody else was blind to this'except'except for the idiot nk. And she knew it because he kept hovering over khushi as if he were her personal angel protecting her from harm'

she amusedly kept watching from the sides and suddenly picked up the few dirty glances that were being directed from jeeju to khushi!...did arnav know?...oh god! She wouldn't have told him most probably scared of his anger!!...

"chamkeeli!!, we need to talk!!"'she pulled khushi from the couch and smiled at everybody'

"I am tired and still want to catch up onto everything that happened'can I take khushi with me?"..

"plzz nani' di'"'.:

NO!," nk bit his tongue suddenly for shouting so stupidly'

"umm'no'I want to talk to khushiji about something first !"

"well you can talk to her after I have finished!"

"are u DEAF? I said it was urgent!"

"nk! Lavanyaji! Stop both of you! U have been at each others throats ever since u met!""lets talk together ok!?"

Saying this khushi looped her arm through both theirs and pulled them upstairs in to her room'.

End of chapter 6

Phew!!i am sorry for the delay 'I was thinking for a better name and came up with " " SOMEWHERE 'IN MY HEART "..I hope its good!


plz comment and share ur thoughts...

Edited by farhannish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Well this title is better and don't stop sending me PM's because I want to know how the story is it takes time to unfold
Don't worry if the response is bad it with be good in sometime I remember when I started my first ff it took time to get readers and sometimes you don't know how many people read as there are silent readers as well
The update was nice
ASR came to know some truth
Continue soon
:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17

Loved it.

This is how the story in actual IPKKND should have been.Like the strong payal and the way you have described events.

Great work :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 7

Devyani raizada was a strong woman. She had gone through lots of ups and downs in life. She had held herself sanely through major losses like her husband who had groomed her into the strong person she was today and also her precious daughter that she had loved to the core.

But as time went by, the losses and the loneliness started creeping upto her. Who could she share her troubles and fears with? Her Arnav?,Anjali?, hadn't they had their share of pain and sorrows to last a lifetime? Her son? family affairs and responsibility of the three kids were better compared to the cartoon of a wife he had to put up with!

Will manorama be able to be the pillar for him when he might need it? Only time will tell! For now I should be worried about Anjali' oh devimayya! has not my child gone through enough? Plz guide us through this terrible times! It had been a difficult task to smile and pamper the cheat in front of her and she had to take extra care to make sure manorama did nothing stupid in front of him'the time will come and I will have my chance'devyani raizada promised herself wiping away tears'I will take revenge for what he did to my child even if thts the last thing I do'..

"Well then'.lets hope everything moves as planned'good bye" saying that payal cut the call and turned back to the family surrounding her'to say she was tensed was an understatement but looking at her bauji, she decided she will not let anything come in the way'that disgusting leech will get what he deserves and she will make sure he is punished for playing with their lives' her little khushi..what all she had to bear! Not anymore! she looked at akash as she thought about the next person she intended to hurt'..no its not yet time'she was not sure of how akash would react for what she planned to do to arnav' it might result in the end of their beautiful relationship' but then.. it seemed to be so little compared to what her baby sister had gone through!

Akash was still unsure of what he saw'his shy payalji was in a different avatar now..and he smiled inwardly as the picture of durga maa flashed through his mind. He was proud that she was his'yes payal akash raizada and he loved the feel to it'

"khushiji'I repeat!what I want to tell u is a secret! And I don't like her at all! How on earth can she be your friend?and what is with all this chamkeeli calling? Woh aapke thapmaan kar rahi hain! Who is she? Dramaqueen!"

"YOU!!..."

"nahi naheji 'who mere "APMAAN" nahi karrahi ..its just a nickname and I myself asked her to call me that!

"FORGET IT!lavanya shouted.." Khushi I am telling you to throw this 'this' whatever! Out of here so that I can talk to you in private!"

"NOWAY I am leaving her alone!"

"goto hell! How can somebody be soo irritating?!!"

Arnav watched amusedly from the poolside as the fight went on and the idiots asked khushi straight to the point as to who was more dear to her. He smiled as he saw his wife dearest stood with both palms on her head afraid it would explode! Time to step in and clear a few doubts'arnav unconsciously called out a silent prayer hoping everything would come out right this time'.

"NK'I want to spend sometime with my WIFE and ALONE"

NK almost burst his brain with all the thinking'what will he do now?

PRECAP:

ARNAV WANTS TO KNOW WHY NK IS AROUND KHUSHI ALL THE TIME! WILL HE GET TO KNOW?

AND A PEEK INTO MANORAMAS THOUGHTS

End of chapter 7'

Hw was it?PLZ COMMENT!

Edited by farhannish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Well I can say I liked the last part nk and la fighting while Arnav and Khushi watching them
And the. Arnav says he wants to spend some time with Khushi alone
Nice
Starting I was little confused what did payal tell to deviyani about Shyam or Arnav
Ok so naniji is worrie about manorama and her son
I liked how akash was proud of payal for her confidence
:)
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Taapmaan= Apmaan ... Hilarious:D
Loved your Nk and the update :)

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