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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome ff i read all the parts in an hour plz update soon and pm me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Shivangi_Taarey

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME DII!! M soo happy ki Rey is Alright now!! Jaldi jaldi update karo n Jaldi se use sabkuch yaad dilva doo.. Loved this update.. Update soon and doo pm me!!



thanks shivangi...sure i will...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: roxxyg

Awesome ff i read all the parts in an hour plz update soon and pm me 😊



thanks dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So guys here I m with next part...and I m angry...yes u read right...i m angry...i pm minimun 115 trians...and I didnt get even 50 likes??plz guys who dont want to like and comment just tell me...i will stop pming them...and I m not talking about my ff only...there are so many stories on taarey but in every story it hardly get 45 likes...there are so many trians I know...but only few trians hi like and comment karte hai...writers writes a story ...i know how hard it is to write a story...so plz trians like & comment in every story of taarey...after all its your fav couple...if cant get time to comment atleast like it...plz its my humble request...i know jab kisi ki story pe jyada likes hoti hai to writer ko kitni khushi milti hai...so plz like & comment in every tr story...

sorry if anyone dont like it...but i want to tell it so mene keh diya...now its depend on u guys...

and i will pming to all last time...after this i will pm only them who like this...

now time for update...



Rey is dancing and suddenly taani come in front of him...

rey stop dancing...he can feel her...

rey:i can feel u...

they both are standing there for some seconds...

all are wondering whts going on...but they dont know about this scene of taarey...so they are just watching them...

now taarey start dancing as befor dil se re sequence...so many questions are in rey's mind...how he dance...and he trying really hard to remember the scene...

finally rey trap taani against a wall...

after trying so hard...rey can recognize that the girl which he saw in flashback is taani...a teardrop roll down from his eyes...taani to usse yad aa gayi..but usne dance kaise kiya ye baat abhi bhi usse samaj me nahi aayi...

rey k dimag pe kuch zyada hi asar hone laga ...he is going to faint when suddenly taani come out from under his hands and gesture them to stop the song and she divert his mind by saying rey...pakdo mujhe...ruk kyu gaye??

hearing this rey again start to catch taani...but cant...so rey thodi cheating karta hai aur taani ko pakad leta hai...

he hold her by her waist...

rey:ye...i won...(pulling her closer)

ta:no...aap ne cheating ki...

rey:thodi cheating to chalti hai taani...

ta:no...its not fare...

rey:everything is fare in love and war jodhpur express...(he pull her more closer)

all are watching them and boys do chemistry...including swayam...

but taani know that all are watching them so taani slowly wishper in his ears:hum akele nahi hai rey...leave me...sab dekh rahe hai...

hearing this rey and taani apart from each other...

all come there...

all:hi rey...

rey:hi guys...

vi:hey dude...hows u???

rey:i m fine...

sw:aakhir taani ko pakad hi liya...

rey:ha...vo to hai...(to himself but tum logo ki bhi kya timing hai...galat waqt pe aa gaye)to taani ...agar hum akele hote to...

taani blush hearing this but quickly hide her blush as all are here ...

sw:ok taani...lunch ready hai kya??

ta:ha bhai...

sw:ok to chalo sab lunch karte hai...

all are going when taani stop all except rey...and said something...

then all go from there...

all sit on dinning table ...taani serve food and sit opposite to rey...

all are sitting opposite to their parter...

then taani gesture to nil and nil sit as he is staring at simmi with a spoon near his mouth and his mouth is open...

swayam slightly to rey:rey...nil ko dekho...

rey look at nil and smile...

sw:nil...

nil:ya...swayam...

sw:ese kyu betha hai...

rey:jese ki pose de raha ho...

and all laugh...

swayam remember the night when swayam said the same line to rey...

sw(to himself):rey ko hamari baate yad hai...

he smile looking at taani...

taani smile back...

now all start to eat again when vicky shout:oouucchhh...

sw:kya hua????

vi:kuch nahi...khana garam laga...

sw:to thanda hone de na khana...

rey:kahi bhag nahi jayega...

all laugh again...

and swayam remember again when he said this line to rey...

sw:(to himself and looking at taani)your idea worked taani...

in between all couple share llhh moment and rey notice swaron...

rey to swaron:r u guys couple???
they look at taani...taani gesture to say no...

swaron:no...

rey:oh...mujhe laga tum dono couple ho...

swaron:no way...

(they say this purposely...swaron fight dekhke shayad rey ko sab yad aa jaye)

all finish and rey go to his room...

all gether in the hall...

ta:bhai...dekha aap ne???rey ko aap ki baate yad hai...

sh:ya taani...usse baate to yad hai par kisne kahi thi ye yad nahi...

ta:vo bhi yad aa jayega bhabhi...

sw:sharon...ho sakta hai hamari fight dekh k usse yad aa jaye...

sh:ha swayam...mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai...

vi:matlab next step is swaron fight...

simmi:ya...right...

neha:neha not liking fight...

rinni:but rey k liye karni padegi...

am:ha...ley k liye...

ta:to ready...

all:ready...

ta:pehle me rey ko davai de deti hu...baad me hum apna plan execute karenge...ok???

all:ok...

ta:me andar jau uski 10 min baad aap fight start kar dena...

swaron:ok...u go...

taani go in the kitchen and take milk...bcoz doctor said to take medicine with milk...

in the room...

rey is sitting on the bed thinking about the dance...

"mene dance kiya...par kaise...????kya me dancer hu???me aur dance...???he can see flash backs of his dance...

and suddenly he said:"yes...i m a dancer...isi liye mene dance kiya...and taani k sath..."

and he hear taani's voice:"rey..."

he immidgetly run and hide behind the door...

taani come in and rey slightly lock the door...

taani:rey...kaha ho aap???rey...

she put milk on the table...

suddenly rey come from behind and said:"bhawoo..."

taani jump into his arms clutching his shirt...

rey hug her tight...

taani broke the hug and said:rey...aap ne to dara hi diya...

rey:achha hai na isi bahane tumne mujhe hug to kiya ...

ta:ok ok thik hai..chaliye aap davai le lijiye ...

rey:davai...yuk...

ta:rey...pi ni to padegi...

rey:ha baba i know...but milk k sath to nahi pini hai na???

ta:ha...milk k sath hi pini hai...

rey:what...no way...

ta:plz rey...mere liye...she made cute puppy face...

rey pinch her cheek abd said:ok my cutely wierd taani...

taani give him medicine...

now taani is going and suddenly rey said:taani...me dancer hu na...

taani is shock hearing this...smile come on her face...

she turn and run and hug him...

ta:rey...aap ko yad aa gaya ki aap dancer hai...????

rey:ha...

ta:thank u krishnaji...

rey:vaise ek baat puchu...

ta:ha puchie...she broke the hug...

rey:tumne jawab nahi diya ki hum akele hote to...

slowly rey's hand cup her face...

taani look down...and thinking...bhai...jaldi kariye...


rey made her to look in his eyes...he slowly caress her cheeks...coming closer and closer...as rey coming closer...taani is loosing her control...she close her eyes...

rey kiss her cheek...and going to kiss another cheek when they heard..."what the hell swayam..."

taani:inher mind...finally bhai...

rey:ye kon hai...????

ta:shayad bhai aur sharon hai...chalo dekhte hai...

they go in the hall and rey saw swaron are fighting...

sw:kya hua???

sh:how dare u touch me???

sw:ab...he touch her cheek...aise...

sh:i m not joking u looser...

sw:looser???

sh:ya..looser...

seeing this rey can see flash backs of swaron fights ...

taani is watching rey...who is now irritated with the fight...

he shout:"stop it guys...i said stop it..."

all look at him...

rey:kitni bar bola hai ki dont fight...but u guys are impossible...hamesha fight fight fight...is bar me tum logo ka patch up nahi karvaunga...just stop it...

and he go from there...

vi:ye kya...kuch bhi nahi hua...???

ta:are hua na...

ne:kya...

ta:suna nahi...rey ne kaha is bar me tum logo ka patch up nahi karvaunga ...unhe yad aa raha hai...

all:ya...right...

swaron hug eachother and sharon said sorry to swayam for shouting on him...

sw:its ok...rey k liye kuch bhi...

precap:rey:taani...ye diary kiski hai???

ta:(agar rey ne padh li to...esa na ho sari baate ek sath jankar unke dimag pe bura asar ho...)

she take it back...

ta:kuch nahi rey...isme sirf college budgets hai...

rey:ha...to mujhe dekhne do na...

he snatches back...



m sorry guys agar kisiko meri baat buri lagi ho but jab dusri serials ke ff me zyada likes dekhti hu to sochti hu ki why not in tr stories...i hope u all can understand...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
res

unres!!!hey dipu pehle relax...tumhara updated padhk dil khush ho gya..
and loved both 20 m 21 chap it was awesm...taarey s kiss in part 20😳 n naughty rey..rey ko thodi thodi baate yaad arhi hai ..n rey nver misses a chance to romance with taanii cute😆 and i completely agree with u dear..v really work hard on each updates ..v nvr get likes n comments..but v shd really thank those who take time n read our work n comment n like them..so their commenys n likes really pays off our hard work...😳
Edited by bags07 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Aww!!...loved the Dil se re sequence:)
Amazin part:)
Thnkz for the pm:)
Cont. Soon:)
Edited by iamursforever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Are baba. Calm down dear. Relax. Acha tumhe ek achi wali news btau? Tumhara ff fb pe shared he. Aur waha pe bhot sare likes nd cments he. Mayb coz they r active there. But I do agree with wht u said. Nd nice again. DSR
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Aww my Dipu 🤗 dont be angry it doesn't suit u at all
As for the update u have no idea how happy I am that u update am on my bed and I taught let me check if u update or not and to my surprise u did lol sooo happy anyway I totally love it yahh Swayam finally did the chemistry sign with the boys [:D/] Taarey dancing to Dil Se Rey bring back so many sweet memories, Rey little by little regaining his memories all thanks to his love Taani. Hmm naught Rey is always romantic and entertaininr 😉 hmm swaron start their fight at the wrong time interrupting Taarey cute moment lol. Dipu u truly are one of the best ff writer, your imagination and the way u wrote each chapter is never boring its always something new which I adore and it only make me want to read more N more chapters so plz continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww dat was a superrr se uparrr wala update , it was beautifulllyy writtten next part plsss jaldi...pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
dil se rey sequnce ws fab
awsm updat
thnks 4 pm

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