virman ss bad boy CHAP 19 pg 93 (9 may) - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Superb Update!!...
That's One Clever Virat!..lol
Thanks For The Pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Thanks for the PM..
Awesome update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
awesome awesome awesome... it was such a great update dearšŸ‘šŸ‘... the plan of virat for exploring manvi's feelings infront of her dad was awesome... loved it 2 the core... n sorry 4 late commenting... continue ASAP...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Landed up late again.Very sorry.😭😭.Loved the update. Manvi was so sweet .Confessed her love to Virat in front of her father.Poor FatheršŸ˜†šŸ˜†.It would have been a lifetime shock to him.šŸ˜†Loved the whole update. Btw, Virat is so smart.Loved the whole update.Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
nice one naina
Totally amazing
Poor manvi's dad... Virat is very smart
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
part 4
manvi was firmly holding virat's hand and was moving towards the parking and virat was smirking and mentally jumping with joy as his plan worked out... manvi herself confessed her love for him and that too in front of her dad. on the way, manvi and virat passed by the slabs where shabbir was still sitting. manvi gave him a see-i-found-him look and virat winked at shabbir and showed him thumbs up... the two besties high fived in air from a long distance which went unnoticed by manvi...
manvi was not in a state to notice anything as she was still scared by the thought of virat leaving her for ever.
manvi went towards virat's car and took out the keys from his jeans pocket.
virat was still quiet though he himself knew that he was hurting manvi but he have to do this... he have to do this to make her realise that he is important in her life to what an extent.
manvi got into the car and virat intentionally stood there and didnt sit into the car. manvi blowed the horn loudly to tell virat to get into the car.
virat got into the car and looked at anything but manvi.
manvi : virat...
virat : hmm...
manvi : how can u do this to me...??? did u ever love me...???
virat : i always loved u and will always do... but i know that u love ur dad as well... i dont want to come in between father-daughter bond... its better i leave you...
manvi : i dont like this selfless virat... i want my virat back... and how can you think i can live without you...??
virat : get off the car manvi... we need to move on... i cant see you unhappy...
manvi : what...??? move on...???
virat : yes we both should end this up here only... you can never be happy with me...
manvi : its my life, its my happiness and i know what is right for me...
virat : exactly my point... a guy like me can never be right for an angel like you...
manvi : virat dont this to me... how can u think of a thing like break up...?? virat... please dont leave me... i love you.. i am sorry.. dad never liked that i even talked to u and he told me to distance myself from you.. i vented my anger and frustation on you...
virat : its ok manvi...
manvi looked at his face and virat saw that manvi was broken and her eyes were telling him that...
manvi hugged virat and he hugged her back...
virat : i love you manna...
manvi broke down into tears the moment she heard him calling her manna...
manvi hugged him more closely and hide herself in his chest... and this was making virat feel more guilty...
virat was hugging her as tightly as he could. his one arm securely placed at her lower back and the other rubbing her back...
virat : i am sorry manna... i wont hurt you ever... trust me.. i would never go away from you... i promise...
manvi : virat... i want you in my life forever...
virat : i will baby... i will... unless your dad...
manvi : dad wont do anything... i will make him understand... (manvi separated herself from virat and looked into his eyes...)
and again she flunged herself in his arms...
virat was happy that now manvi would never leave him and the most important thing that mr. 'i-can-do-anything' chaudhary wouldnt be able to influence or brainwash manvi anymore...
by this time manvi had stopped crying and was enjoying being in his arms... her head was resting on his chest and she could clearly hear his heartbeats and she knew taht there was only one name there and that was hers- manvi...
virat was again holding her and mentally apologising to manvi for creating this whole scene...
virat was busy soothing her when he felt ticklish. he opened his eyes and diverted his attention towards the love of his life. manvi was holding onto his shirt tightly in a fist and in this process the third button of his shirt opened not to miss that the first two were already open. manvi kissed his chest and that sent shivers down his spine... it was not like that the flirtatious bad boy hadnt been close to any other girl, but he was amazed how everytime manvi made him feel that special.. she turned him on in a way that even his exs didnt... virat was trying hard to control his temptation of being close to manvi... he didnt want to be physically involved with her till the time they get married... yes he really wanted to marry manvi and hold her and cherish her till his last breath... he didnt want anybody to ever question his relationship or for that matter his love for manvi.
manvi : i love you soo much... virat hold me more closely na...
virat : huhh..???
manvi : i want a tight huggy... very tight... like this...
virat smiled as he felt manvi's grip around him tighten and her upper body pressed against his.
virat tightened the hold of his arm around her waist and the other made its way to her hair. he always loved the feeling of playing with her open long beautiful hair but today the clutcher in her hair was making it difficult for him. he took the clutcher letting her hair fall open and threw the clutcher on the back seat of the car. he entangled his fingers in her hair and kissed her hair and then the nape of her neck. manvi shivered with this very different feeling but next moment she pulled him more towards her. virat was trying hard to stop but he couldnt.. he again kissed her neck and collar bone.. he cupped her face and was about to kiss her - - -
there was a knock on the window of the car and it was none other than manvi's favourite junior - dabbu...
virat furrowed his brow and got out of the car...
virat : what do u want empty vessel...???
dabbu : actually...
virat : what actually...?? go get a life...
dabbu : i need to talk to manvi di...
virat : why do u want to talk to my girlfriend...?? u irritating creature...
manvi saw virat saying stuff to dabbu she got out of the car...
manvi : chill virat... whats wrong dabbe...??
daabu : manvi di i need your help...
virat : i too need manvi... buzz off now...
manvi : virat please... let him talk atleast...
virat : dare he say another word and i will kick his ass...
manvi : watch out virat... thats no way to talk...
virat : manna i meant...
daabu : i think i should leave...
virat : then why the hell did u come here...?? only to disturb us...?? talk to your saviour...
manvi : virat...
virat : lock the car and keep the keys with you... i will catch u later babes
virat left the parking cursing dabbu for his bad timing.
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ps : so this is not short arrosha... šŸ˜‰ right...???
sorry for the delay dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
*yaaay first to comment*
Loveed this Naina Di!... :)
Want longer updates coz dil maange more :*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg this was awesome naina 😃. Virat acting as he would be able to live without his manna he cant he will shatter in to a million peices 😭 And then the hug aww i love the way you express a hug i seemed as if i was on the 9th heaven. Should i get down now i think its time šŸ˜‰. And manvi wanting a tight huggy 😳 that was soo cute of her asking virat feeling comfort and warmth in his arms heres a big huggy for you naina for writing that part beautifully šŸ¤—. And then the hayyee bit uff ishh kyaa yaar itna sharma rahi hoon likha toh kya likha 😳 i think it should be labled ā˜¢ļø. Aur phir aya kabab mein haddi 🤣 virats initial reaction seemed as if he would pounce on him manvi made him understand otherwise dabbe teri khair hi nahi thi 🤣 VIRAT (how I imagined him) 🤬 tooo funny naina.
Update soon. Thanks for the pm 😃 and pm me please
Inayah šŸ¤—
Sorry naina for the long comment and you had to read my bakwaas 😳
Yay im second 🄳 and thank you for the long update hope to see more in the future ā­ļø
Edited by S.Khan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
nice and lovely update yr .
loved it ,looking forward for the next update .
thanks for the pm dear .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
hey nainu wow yaar

I think this is the best part of your os till now
loved how you described the hugg
aww dead

I wondering what dabbu wants from his savior now
dabbu such a haddi

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