VirMan SS...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 29 pg 146 - Page 28

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jia123sagar

amazing update

thanks for pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update. .love d sangeet. .finally manvi is falling for virat. .update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing Loved It
Especially What Virat Sed At The End
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Posted: 11 years ago
thnk u... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shabsem

Nice update. .love d sangeet. .finally manvi is falling for virat. .update soon

thnks...n ys she Is falling 4 him... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvVirManNiShal

Amazing Loved It
Especially What Virat Sed At The End
Loved The Song O Soniyo Perfect
Beautifully Written
Perfect EHM Moment Kya Kehna
Fabulous
Update Soon And PM Me Please
Thanksz x

thnk u so much...will continue soon n pm u... 😊
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0oh she's falling 4 him...😊😊..  GREAT.. plz continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

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0oh she's falling 4 him...😊😊..  GREAT.. plz continue soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello lovely peoplzzz...m bck..m sorry I cudn't update it...had sum serious things goin on..neways...thnk a lotzzz 4 ur lovely comments n lyks..hope u'll lyk dis update as well,,EnJoY...

VirMan...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 13...

~Recap~


After some time, both went back to sleep. Waiting for the sun to come out with a new day...VirMan's Wedding Day.


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~Morning~

It was time for VirMan's haldi ceremony, Viraat was taken downstairs for the haldi ceremony, while Maanvi was sitting in her room alone.

Viraat: (looking at Vanshika Maa's hand/worriedly) Maa please, yeh mat lagana.
Viren: Laga le Bhai, kuch nahi hoga.
Viraat: (making weird faces, while looking at the haldi) Nahi Bhai, uska color toh dekho, woh mere chehre par lagega toh mera bhi chehra ussi color nahi ho jaye ga?
Vanshika Maa: Arey Beta aisa kuch nahi hoga. Yeh rasam hai nibhani toh padegi na.
Kadambari Chachi: (moving her hands towards his face) Haan Viraat, lagwale.
Viraat: (moves back) Nahi Chachi, main aaj ke din koi risk nahi lena chahta, meri shadi hai, Maanvi dar gayi toh?

Jeevika: Don't worry Viraat, yeh tumhare chehre ko kharab nahi karega, infact aur sundar karega.
Viren: Haan, aur yahi haldi teri Maanvi ko bhi lagegi, chal ab nakhre band kar aur chup chap haldi lagwa.
Viraat: Pakka na Bhabhi?
Jeevika: (smiles) Haan Devar ji, bilkul pakka. Ab lagaye hum aapko haldi?
Viraat: Ji.

Viraat made weird faces as everyone applied haldi on him.

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Maanvi: (looking at Jeevika/worriedly) Di, pehle batao yeh haldi nikal toh jayegi na?

Now it was Maanvi's turn to get the haldi applied on her.

Kadambari Chachi: (amused) Haaye ni Maanvi, tu bhi?

Pinky Chachi: (smiles) Haye rabba, isse kehte hai ram milaye jodi.
Maanvi: (confused) Kya?
Jeevika: Kuch nahi Mannu, tu fikar mat kar, yeh bilkul nikal jayegi, aur tu dikhne mein bhi bilkul buri nahi lagegi, na hi Viraat tujhe dekh kar dare ga. Ab lagaun?
Maanvi: (looking at Jeevika/confused) Aapko kisne kaha main yeh sab kehne wali thi?
Viren: (smiles at Maanvi) Kyun ki tumhara hone wala Pati yahi keh kar gaya tha abhi. Aur zahir si baat hai, dono ek hi jaise ho toh sawal bhi ek hi jaise honge na Sali Saibha.
Jeevika: Ab hum lagaye?
Maanvi: Okk Di...

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It was Maanvi's Chooda Ceremony, Maanvi sat in the middle of the hall, her head covered with her dupatta, beside her was Pandit Ji.

Pandit Ji: (looking around) Choodey ki rasam ke liye Mamaji aage aaiye...

Beeji: Woh Pandit Ji, Mama toh nahi hai par yeh rasam Maanvi ke Chacha nibhayege.
Pandit Ji: Thik hai, aaiye.

Madhan Chachu came towards Pandit Ji and Maanvi. Pinky Chachi handed him the tray that had beautiful red and white bangles.

Pandit Ji: (looking at Maanvi) Beti, aap apni ankhein band kar lijiye.
Maanvi: Ji. (cloeses her eyes)

Madhan Chachu took the bangles in his hands and dipped it into the bowl, which contained milk and placed it into her hands.

Pandit Ji: Beti ab aap apni aankhein khol sakhti ho.

Maanvi opened her eyes and smiled at Madhan Chachu as he placed a kiss on her forehead. Pinky Chachi sat beside Maanvi and tied the kalire on the bangles, followed by Jeevika.

Badi Beeji: Chalo ab kalire girane ki rasam karte hain. Chalo sab baitho, Dabbu tu bhi baith.

Dabbu: Badi Beeji main kyun?
Maanvi: Oye Dabbe shadi nahi karni kya?
Dabbu: Karni hai na Maanvi Di.
Maanvi: (winks at him/smiles) Toh aa ja, itna acha mauka haath se mat jaane de.
Shlok: (looking at everyone) Main bhi baithun?
Viren: (extended his hands/calling Shlok close to him) Haan, aa Beta, tu bhi aaja, tujhe bhi shadi ki jaldi hai na, aaja.

Dabbu and Shlok sat beside some single girls, as Maanvi walked towards them and shakes her hands above their head one by one, the kalire fell on Dabbu's head.

Maanvi: (excitedly) Oye Dabbe, tu next in line hai.
Pinky Chachi: (excited) Haye mere Dabbu pe gira, mere Dabbu pe gira.
Badi Beeji: Chal, agli shadi Dabbu ki hogi humare ghar mein.

Dabbu blushed.

Shlok: (pouts) Mere upar kyun nahi gira?
Inder Chachu: (looking at Kadambari Chachi) Isse toh abhi se jaldi hai.
Kadambari Chachi: (walks towards him) Haye mera Shloku, tere upar baad mein girega..(pulling his cheeks) abhi udas mat ho.


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Viraat was standing outside of the mandap with Viren and Dabbu beside him, while Maanvi was walking down the stairs towards them along with Jeevika. Viraat was wearing a red and golden sherwani, with a matching turban on his head, on the other hand, Viren was wearing a beige colored sherwani with a pink turban. Viraat looked up at the staircase and saw his would be wife walking down, looking mesmerizing in her beautiful maroon wedding lehenga choli, with heavy matching jewelries, kalire that were tied in her chooda, her veil perfectly placed on her head, her mehndi's color apprearing even darker then before, and a sweet smile on her lips. Viren followed Viraat's gaze, who was lost in Maanvi's beauty, and saw Maanvi and Jeevika walking towards them. He smiled as he saw his beautiful wife wearing a beautiful orange net lehenga choli, with matching jewelries, her hair left open.

Viraat's Outfit: http://mensweddingsherwanis.com/product_images/t/591/Groom-Sherwani__60569_zoom.jpg
Viren's Outfit: http://mensweddingsherwanis.com/product_images/r/947/4963583__39805_zoom.jpg
Jeevika's Outfit: http://womenxone.com/files/2012/04/Special-Day-Orange-Net-lehenga-Choli.jpg
Maanvi's Outfit: http://womenxone.com/files/2012/04/Heavenly-Alluring-Red-Bridal-Net-lehenga-Choli.jpg


Pandit JI: (looking at VirMan) Dulha aur Dulhan dono mandap par aa jaiye.

Viraat smiled and exdended his hand towards Maanvi, she placed her hand in his and walked towards Pandit Ji. Jeevika handed them the varmala and walked back towards Viren.

Pandit Ji: Varmala pehnaiye.

Maanvi placed the varmala around Viraat's neck as he did the same with her.

Pandit Ji: Baith jaiye aap dono. (sits down)

Pandit Ji started the rituals, while Viraat was continuously staring Maanvi, who was just looking down. (sorry guyz i don't really knw nething bout dis wedding ritual, so m juz gonna add parts dat i knw...)

Viraat: (whisperes to Maanvi) Kya hua? Nervous ho?

Maanvi: (looked up at him/nodded/whisperes back) Haan, pehli baar shadi kar rahi hun na.

Viraat: (smiles) Main bhi pehli baar hi kar raha hun Maanvi.
Maanvi: Tumhare chehre se toh aisa nahi lagta.
Viraat: Chehre pe mat jao, feelings ko samjho Bandariya.
Maanvi: Mujhe kaise pata chalegi tumhari feelings Chep?
Viraat: (muttering under his breath) Yahi toh problem hai, tumhe meri feelings hi nahi samajh aati.
Maanvi: Kuch kaha tumne?
Viraat: Na..nahi...
Pandit Ji: Gath Bandhan(tying the sacred knot) ke liye Dulhe ki Bhabhi ya Dulhan ki Bahen aage aaiye. (Lyk I said, dn't really knw dese rituals, so 4give me if m wrong)

Jeevika ties a corner of Maanvi's dupatta and Viraat's sherwani's scarf together, symbolizing the sacred union of the bond of marriage.

Pandit Ji: (stands up) Phere ke liye aap dono khade ho jaiye.

Maanvi and Viraat stands up with the help of Jeevika and Viren. Everyone started throwing flower petal at VirMan, as they started walking around the sacred fire. Viraat was walking in front of Maanvi for the first three rounds.

Pandit Ji: Ab Vadhu(bride) aagey chalegi.

Maanvi walked in front of Viraat, both started walking around the sacred fire again as everyone threw flower petals at them. After completing the saath phere(nuptial rounds), VirMan sat down.

Pandit Ji: (handing Viraat the mangalsutra) Mangalsutra pehnaiye.

Viraat took the Mangalsutra in his hands and tied it around her neck, as she closed her eyes tightly, her heart skipped a beat at his touch.

Pandit Ji: (handing him the vermillion powder) Sindoor lagaiye.

Viraat took a pinch of sindoor in between his fingers and applied it into Maanvi's maang as Jeevika lifted her maangtikka.

Pandit Ji: Aaj se aap dono Pati Patni huye. Ab aap bado ke ashirwaad le sakhte hai.
Viraat: (smirks/whisperes to Maanvi) Lo Maanvi, ban gayi tum Mrs. Maanvi Viraat Singh Vadhera.

Maanvi blushed as she heard her new name, Mrs. Maanvi Viraat Singh Vadhera. Viraat was on cloud nine, Maanvi was his and only his for the rest of their lives.

Maanvi: Chup karo aur chalo.

VirMan looked at each other, and walked towards the elders to take their blessings. All the elders blessed them as they touched their feets.

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Dabbu: (teary eyes) Maanvi Di, Jeevika Di toh mujhe pehle se hi chodh kar chali gayi thi, aaj aap bhi jaa rahe ho na mujhe akela chodh kar.

Maanvi: (teary eyes) Aye Dabbe, main kahan jaa rahi hun? Main toh hamesha se tere paas hi hun na. (hugs him) Aur tu yeh mat samjh ki main chali jaungi toh tujhe azaadi mil jaye gi kuch bhi karne ka. (breaks apart) Meri news reporter 24/7 hai na, woh mujhe teri sari harkato ke baare mein batati rahengi, samjha? (looking at Badi Beeji) Kyun Badi Beeji?
Badi Beeji: (teary eyes) Chup kar Chudail, mere paas itna waqt nahi ki main tujhe khabar pe khabar deti jaun iss Dabbu ki. (crying) Tujhe agar itna jaanana hai na toh mat jaa na hume chodh ke.
Maanvi: (walking towards Badi Beeji) Haye meri Badi Beejii toh senti ho gayi. Arey Badi Beeji, (wipes her tears away) yeh rona band karo na, aapko dekh kar mujhe rona aa raha hai, mujhe dekh kar (looking at Jeevika) Di ko rona aayega, Di ko dekh kar (looking at Viren) Jiju ko rona aaye ga, Jiju ko dekh kar (looking at Vanshika Maa) Maa ko rona aaye ga, Maa ko dekh kar (looking at Viraat) Viraat ko rona aaye ga, Viraat ko dekh kar Ka...
Badi Beeji: Arey bas kar na, kitna bolti hai, thakti nahi hai kya? Viraat kaise sambhalega tujhe.
Maanvi: Badi Beeji, ab shadi ki hai toh nibhani toh padegi na, aur waise bhi (looking at Viraat) iska mat socho, yeh socho ki main kaise jhelungi iss Chep ko.

Viraat just smiled at her.

Beeji: Maanvi Beta..

Maanvi looked up at Beeji and walked towards her.

Beeji: (hands on her cheek) Hum sabko teri bahut yaad aayegi Beta.
Maanvi: (tears rolling down her cheeks) Main bhi aap sabko bahut yaad karungi Beeji. (hugs Beeji)
Pinky Chachi: (walking towards Maanvi and Beeji) Maanvi meri Bacchi, main toh tujhe bahut miss karungi.
Maanvi: (hugs Pinky Chachi) Main bhi Chachi.
Madhan Chachu: (hand on Maanvi's head) Mannu, apne Chachu ko bhul mat jaana.
Maanvi: (hugs him) Main aapko kaise bhul sakhti hun Chachu, (crying) aap toh mere Papa ho na...
Madhan Chachu: (hugs her tightly) Haan meri Bacchi..main tujhe bahut miss karunga.
Beeji: (walks towards Dadaji/hands folded) Vadhera Sahab, meri Bacchi ka khayal rakhna, main janti hun ki woh bahut galtiyan karti hai, par mann ki bahut komal hai, usse agar kabhi koi galti ho jaye toh usse maaf kardena.
Dadaji: Bahenji, Maanvi ab sirf aapki Beti hi nahi, humare ghar ki Bahu bhi hai, uska khayal rakhna humari zimedari hai, aap fikar mat kijiye, Maanvi bilkul thik ho jaye gi.
Vanshika Maa: Haan Beeji, Hum aapki dono Bacchiyon ka pura khayal rakheinge. (hugs Beeji)
Beeji: Aap sabka bahut bahut shukriya.

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Viraat and Maanvi standing at the doorway of the Vadhera Mansion, as Jeevika did their aarti.

Vanshika Maa: (smiles) Maanvi Beta, ab apna daahina pair(right foot) se iss kalash ko gira kar, iss thal mein dono pair rakh kar andar aajao.

Maanvi slightly kicks the vessel that was filled with rice, then steps into the tray which contained vermilion powder mixed with water, and enters the house bare feet, leaving her footprints on the floor.

Jeevika: Mannu, ab Badhon ke pair chhu kar ashirwaad lele...

Viraat and Maanvi took blessing from all the elders and hugged them.

Kadambari Chachi: (excitedly) Chalo bhai, ab anguthi dhundh ne ki rasam karte hai.
Viren: Haan haan, chalo chalo..


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Viraat and Maanvi, sitting on the couch, in front of them was a big bowl which contained milk and some rose petals in it.

Jeevika: (sitting beside Viraat) Sab se pehle game ke rules. Iss bowl mein main (showing them the ring) yeh ring dalungi, aur tum dono ko isse dhundhna hoga. Aur jo sab se pehle dhundhe ga, woh yeh game jeete ga.

Maanvi: (smiles) Yeh game toh main hi jeetungi.
Viraat: (rolled his eyes) Jao jao, badi aayi, yeh game main jeetunga.
Maanvi: (pointing fingers at him) Oye, zyada udho mat tum samjhe? (proudly) Yeh game toh main hi jeetungi.
Viren: (sits beside Maanvi) Bilkul sahi Sali Saibha, yeh game tumhi jeeto gi.
Jeevika: (hand on Viraat's shoulder) Ji nahi yeh game mere Devar jeeteinge.
Kadambari Chachi: (stands behind Maanvi) Nahi oye Jeevika, yeh game toh ghar ki Choti Bahu jeete gi.
Inder Chachu: (hands around Kadambari Chachi's shoulder) Yes.
Shlok: (walks towards Jeevika) Nahi, Viraat Bhaiya jeeteinge.
Dadaji: Nahi, Jeete gi toh iss ghar ki Bahu hi.
Viraat: (pouts) Dadaji, aap bhi iss Bandariya ka saath de rahe ho?
Maanvi: Kyun jalan ho rahi hai?
Swamini Bua: (smiles) Don't worry Viraat, jeet tumhari hogi, hum tumhare saath hain.
Vanshika Maa: (smiles) Jeete gi toh meri Bahu hi Didi, dekhna aap sab.
Viren: Arey woh toh tab pata chalega jab yeh dono game start kareinge na.
Everyone: HAAN...
Jeevika: Acha, toh shuru kartein hain...1...2...3...Go..

Maanvi and Viraat dipped their hand into the bowl as Jeevika dropped the ring.

Kadambari Chachi: (excitedly) Haye ni Maanvi, jaldi dhundh, Viraat ke haath nahi lagna chahiye.
Jeevika: (holding Viraat's arm) Jaldi Viraat, dhundho..
Viren: (hand on her shoulder) Maanvi, Viraat ko jeetne mat dena..
Shlok: (impatiently) Arey Viraat Bhaiya, jaldi dhundho na...

Viraat and Maanvi were pushing each other away, looking into the bowl. Both were still looking for the ring.

Dadaji: Maanvi Beta, jeetne mat dena Viraat ko.

Vanshika Maa: Haan Maanvi..
Viren: Maanvi naak mat katwane dena humara.
Kadambari Chachi: Haan Maanvi, dhundh..tujhe jeetna hai.
Viraat: (holds Maanvi's hand) Ek minute. (looking around)Sab Maanvi ko cheer kar rahe hai, meri team se koi cheering karega bhi ya nahi?
Maanvi: (laughs) Koi nahi karne wala Chep, sab jante hain ki tum harne wale ho.
Viraat: (looking straight at Maanvi) Tumhe kaise pata ki main harne wala hun?
Maanvi: Tumhare (looking at his face closely) chehre se pata chalta hai na.
Viraat: Aur tumhare chehre se pata chalta hai ki tum (looks away from her) harne wali ho.
Maanvi: Woh toh hoga hi nahi Viraat, main toh jeetungi.

Everyone was looking at each other and then at VirMan.

Viraat: (turns his face towards her) Tumhe kya lagta hai, main tumhe jeetne dunga?

Maanvi: (smiles) Haan, aur nahi toh kya..
Viraat: Sapne mat dekho, sach nahi hone wale.
Maanvi: Main sapne nahi dekh rahi, dekhna jeetungi toh main hi.
Viraat: (moves his face close to hers) Nahi, jeetunga main..
Maanvi: (moves her face close to his)  Main jeetungi.
Viraat: Main jeetunga.
Maanvi: Main!
Viraat: Main!
Maanvi: Main Jeetungi!
Viraat: (just inches away from Maanvi's face) Main Jeetunga!

Everyone: Arey Bas.

Viraat and Maanvi moved back and looked at everyone.

Viren: Kya (immitating VirMan) main jeetunga, main jeetungi...(irritatedly) pata toh tab lagega jab tum dono khelo ge. Par nahi yahan khel kam aur ladai zyada ho rahi hai.

VirMan: (looking down) Sorry...

Both dipped their hand into the bowl and started searching for the ring, while pushing each other once again. Everyone laughed at the scene before them. Finally the ring was found..

Hmmm..socho socho kaun jeeta..Viraat or Maanvi or VirMan??? hope u lykd it..plz leave ur comments..Thnk u..Luv Aartii..

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Posted: 11 years ago
hey it's not fair have to stop here.continue it naah😭waiting for next part😊