New AbhIya SS:Never Let me Go(EPILOGUE*pg88*Jan14) - Page 60

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Posted: 12 years ago
Never wished it will End so soon...but it has to as u said.its ok then.

again we are speechless at ur writing tanzie.always fab n unexpected good.really loved it.but again waiting ke End main kya hua...will give long comment after epilogue.But as usual Awesome update.

but i will sad...ek aur AbhIya FF ka The End hua...till when will we stick...lets not think...but Darr lagta hai...i wish this FF won't...!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello Hi, Tanzie!!😃

If you think I've ditched your work, lemme clear that that's not true. I had a reason for taking a break but I can never stop following your works not only because you're brilliant but because you're one of the very few writers who sticks to their FFs till the end and not leave it midway. That's something I admire a hell lot because it shows that you respect your readers. I mean I appreciate people who take time out of their busy schedules to give us lovely pieces of writing but when they discontinue it according to their whims, I can't help feeling cheated as a loyal reader. That's happened a lot of times with me and that's the reason I stopped reading FFs till I came across yours. I know you have a tough time at work but even then you didn't discontinue your works, I really respect that and hence, I can never leave reading them halfway either.

I am quite shocked that this story has reached it climax already 'coz I didn't expect it to end so soon but you have a valid point. That whole rant above was actually after reading your note only, you decided to end it gracefully instead of shelving it altogether.

All the Abhay-Pia moments in the last two updates were beautifully portrayed. Abhay seems initially insecure of Pia's decision to accept him again which shows that he still feels guilty and somewhere, even thinks that he probably doesn't deserve her now but am happy Pia put that to rest 'coz it was both their faults. But that doesn't matter since everything is fine now. Abhay's panic over Pia's ill-health is endearing to see. We can't undo our mistakes but we can make up for them and Abhay has done that. Time couldn't heal Pia's wounds but Abhay's love and care seems to make her recover. Maybe it's just my interpretation but Pia actually seems to be in better health with Abhay around.

Chand seems to be regretting as well and am happy he got some time for introspection. Actually, I have this thing for characters who are lonely from inside and hence, he kinda won my sympathy there.

Haha, once again you managed to surprise me with an open ending. It reminds me of A Walk To Remember when Nicholas Sparks says he couldn't kill Jamie when it was finally time to conclude the book and hence left open to interpretation. Khair, if you don't give us a conclusion in the Epilogue then for me Pia will survive (just like Jamie did) 'coz I don't like tragic endings and well, I believe that miracles happen.

P.S. I will catch up with Till the End and My Beautiful Disaster soon too!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
such a beautiful update. Life never gives one everything. He has accept it with its flaws. No matter what happened, i am glad they are stil together. Loved this fic. Waiting for epilogue
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Posted: 12 years ago

awsome update tanzie
glad to know abhay care for piya a lot in this condition and loved the scene when they reliving their past memories...
abhay punishment to piya become hawtt☺️
how abhay support piya its matters a lot in life partners life and in this codition specially...glad they moved on their life...that a spirit whatever happened abhiya remain together always...
its truly an amazing ff with a good message too
eagerly waiting for epilogue

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Posted: 12 years ago
Tanzie tanzie tanzie , haa wat a piece of writing ! Love it to the core ,s eriousky the upd was so beautiful ! I love how abhiya bond has been back to normal ! This upd was emotional too , hayeee I love love love it yaar it ended but with hope 😊 and can't wait epilogue then ... I m gonna miss this ff surely though hav been very irregular with comments 😆 beautiful ff in all , while started to read this never knew story would shape such this way , unique story indeed ! 👏 Love this ff tanzie 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
AMAAAZING UPDATE TANZIE😃 bt sadly d last one.
I will miss this ss.Ur works r always heart-touching n spectacular n this one was no exception.
So finally Abhiya returned to their paradise where they once started their dream journey n dreamt of a heavenly future together.Hope Piya recovers n they start wid d 2nd chance dat life has given them.
Felt bad 4 Piya.She wont be able to be a mother ever.But I just adored Abhay's feelings here.
Ghosts of past left their marks forever on their future bt their pure love will keep them going forever together.
I understood Piya's point abt nt forgiving Alina.True out of pure jealousy she destroyed 6 lives n is now getting d taste of her own medicine.
Hope Chand understands his son's happiness soon.Loved Rajlaxmi's stand n Shreya as always.
Eagerly waiting 4 epilogue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey all, thanks so much for such beautiful comments. Im really really happy you liked the ending because I was really worried and dissatisfied with it. I shall reply everyone after I post the epilogue. I will do it soon.. thanks again... much love 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
😆

Mandy 😈
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Posted: 12 years ago

@Pavi darling I can be generous at times, you see? 😎 Its all right if u take the 1st place this time 😛

@Tanzie - My 2nd fav story comes to an end 😭 Sigh 😭 But I loved the epilogue totally 😃 n thanks a ton for the happy ending darling 🤗 Me soooper happy 😃 See, am dancing I suppose it was evident right from the start that Pia would be Shreya's mother n Shreya would be her only child I feel really bad for Pia that she could not have her own child n fate snatched away her baby even before it came into this world 😭 This was the only dark cloud looming over Abhiya's beautiful paradise 😭 But destiny has its own weird ways 😊 Pia got to be the mother of a child whose mother had lost her life bcoz of Pia's one wrong unintentional move But in this way both Shreya n Pia could fit the missing pieces of their lives 😳 This part was so beautifully depicted here 👏
It was ironic that Chand died a lonely death but he brought it upon himself I really hope that he did accept Pia in the end, atleast after seeiing what she meant to the only living reminder of his daughter whom he loved with all his heart 😭
Coming to Abhiya, I so loved their journey in this SS 👏 It was brilliantly portrayed ⭐️ Words would never suffice to express how I feel about your stories dear 😃 Not just in IF, but ur one of my fav writers outside of IF as well 😃
Abhay n Pia fought so hard - first to keep their budding feelings at bay when they were in college, then when they got married, Pia suffered in guilt for keeping the truth abt Aryana's death from Abhay Abhay though he loved Pia a lot he had to throw her out of his life bcoz of his dad Then both of them suffered a lot when they were apart 😭 Though a part of him constantly tried to suppress his love for Pia for being responsible for Aryana's death, he could never truly throw her out of his heart 😳 I still remember when Pia first came to his house he threw their wedding photo frame but the very next moment he took it back n treasured it like it was the most beautiful memory of his life n he was still grieving about it though he used to spit venom in front of Pia 😭 Then the moment where Pia spoilt his laptop n Abhay tickled her to punish her was so cute 😳 Will always cherish these moments along with Abhiya Infact I loved all the moments - when Pia got her cramps for the first time when she was staying with Abhay n the way Abhay tended to her, Abhay n Pia finally letting off the steam, Abhay begging Pia to stay back but Pia refusing so that Abhay needn't suffer along with her seeing her ill Then the part about the disease - I applaud u for the effort u put into it 👏 Honestly when I read those updates I felt like I was reading something written by a medical professional 👏 Fantabulous 👏 And then came the time that would test their love - see if it could survive the test of time and not only did they make it through but they emerged as winners 😃
Pia's journal threw light on so many aspects of life - for one that life is too short to hold onto grudges 😳 Had they never met again bcoz of Pia's accident I doubt Pia would have ever got the will to fight her disease n she might have succumbed to it as well But Abhay would never let that happen. He had lost his love once n he would never let it crumble before him at any cost the second time 😳 It was Abhay's love n care that encouraged Pia to hold onto hope n happiness 😳 n I am so glad they had an eventful journey together that would serve as an example to many to not let ego come in the way of relationships all the time 😳 Its sad that she could not have her own child but in life u can never get everything u desire But I am happy that Abhiya r adopting a child coz Pia will now get to experience the joy of motherhood all over again coz I am sure though she loved Shreya like her own child, her disease didn't let her spend too much of time with Shreya 😭 But I am glad for Abhiya 😊 They deserve all the happiness that comes their way n much more 😃 Gone r their bad days 😊
Thanks once again for such an amazing story Tanzie 🤗 I will miss it for sure but all good things have to come to an end n this had a beautiful end to it 😳
U TRULY R THE MOST AMAZING WRITER OF THIS FORUM ⭐️
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