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Posted: 12 years ago
Aditi
m speechless right now after reading this part
<3<3

all i can say is i love u for writing such beautiful story...
Thank u so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
sry for late comment...

awesome part
i really love rey's character in this ff.. he is sweet, cute, hot, angry man nd now romantic..
they way he was acting to be stern.. awwiieee
kriyaansh romance... hayee.. i am blushing 😳 😳
par mujhe bahut daar lag rah h ki kria ki mom rey ko kya bolegi..
kyuki kriyaansh ki love story itni easy nhi h.. i guess they have to face more thing in their life..
eagerly waiting for next part..
update soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks a lot dear friends for your time and appreciation😃. Keep loving this FF as that is my only motivation and diet to write more😳. Love you for loving this story. Your reviews always make me smile and aware about goods & bads about my writing. 😊
Love ya all🤗


Edited by Nxt_rockstar - 12 years ago
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Update-35

He didn't have right plans to test her interests and she didn't have any idea about behavior which was anticipated from her. She spent whole day with her Rey and couldn't ask for a better day. He spent whole day doing mathematics on her, which observation to keep and which one to subtract! He didn't even notice her green sleeveless belted knit dress which she wore first time but He did notice the way she is conscious and craved for his one look! She noticed his complicated mind which was calculating something! Rey in whole day finally concluded that she really has forgotten her passion for dance. She wasn't interested in watching a ballet concert which was rare in any city of India! She chose to have a long drive with Rey instead! Rey had all the figures crystal clear about his confusion about Kria's mom judgment! Sanjana was right! Kria was far away from dance and her only focus was Rey!

Rey could feel that congestion because he has to judge her. All the time he was with her went as testing time. Loving looks of her, her smiles and her mischief, everything got overlapped by this test to their love. Rey could feel the tension.

Two days just flew away with their meetings and quality time. For Rey, process was becoming bulky where he has to sleep with lot of restlessness every night.

Kria was just one naive heart who was pumping with love of his. His companionship meant everything to her. Kria's mom was back to Palampur with a promise to come back in a month. She too had a business to take care in Palampur!

That morning, she woke up and could feel the freshness in weather. Sky was clear and sun rays were warm. Sanjana's silent departure from the city somewhere relieved her about her objections on their love. She was relieved that matter got delayed!

She was happy! She was running from the situation but she was fine with it! Till the moment she has Rey, she was okay with every step which can take her away from reality. And if truth to be accepted, Rey too was happy as he got more time

She took the long grey vest and denim shorts and went for bath. Rey was getting ready for a meeting with car dealers. In next one hour, she was all ready to spend a sunny day with Rey! Rey was heading towards her apartment. His shades can tell the harshness of sun! Rey unbuttoned his jacket and activated convertible of his Bentley! Rey could feel the cold wind caressing his sweaty neck! It was time to see the change weather. Winter wae flying away and spring has marked its identity with increasing temperature.

Kria was looking herself in mirror. She has wore her denim jacket twice and then decided to not wearing it! She took it finally in hurry when she heard the horn.

Rey's lips wore smile seeing her coming. She as always was smiling. She stopped right in front of car and gave it a drooling look! Rey's smug on her praising eyes, widened!

She said "A beautiful car with quite cool guy!" Am I having a nice Sunday? She pressed her lower lip and winked! He cackled and returned the wink. Kria settled in car and he accelerated the Bentley! Her long toned legs were compelling Rey to sneak gear handle again and again! He was for sure a distracted driver! Her eyes were on his long fingers which were dancing on steering! Kria's thoughts were on roll where she has scolded herself for noticing stupid things and drooling over his fingers even! She was nodding her head and grinning. Rey asked about subject of her grin! She answered "nothing". Rey kept looking at her showing his stubbornness to hear the reason! She stared into his shades and said "nothing Rey". Rey simpered and increased the pace of car.

In few hours, they were out of city and attraction for Kria was parallel sea which was side view for now. She was filled with joy and excitement! Trees and sea view was luring and sunshine reflecting in water was building a tremendous joyful feeling in her. Kria took off her jacket and stood in car holding front screen. Rey slowed down the car and asked her to stop kidding in car. She was adamant and widened her arms to feel the wind! Wind slaps were making noise in her ears, she giggled. Her eyes were closed. Rey was finding a place to hold her. He hooked his finger in belt rings of her shorts. Rey was handling steering and adamant Kria at the same time. Rey had an expression of prevention on his face. Kria's face was filled with smile. Wind was making her hairs to tickle her nape with constant brushing! She with her bare feet pressed music system to turn the music on! Rey was looking at her with his open and confused face. She just kicked the Bentley's royal music player with long toe nail. He was amazed on her blunt behavior! She was lost in her little happy mood where her hands were snapping her finger on beats of song! Uncalled rhythm can be seen her body! She wasn't dancing or shaking her body but the way wind was striking her vest towards her body, it seemed dancing to Rey! Her clothes adhered her curves and her scent was caressing Rey's senses. She with lyrics of song advanced her feet toe towards Rey. He couldn't stop himself from scolding her. But she was carefree and deaf to hear any of his scolding. Rey was happy with her joy but worried because of her antics in a moving car. Kria sat down and asked him to stop the car near seashore!

Loud music and harsh wind sound was making Kria inaudible for Rey. He asked "what". She leaned towards him and shouted in his ear "stop the car". Her restless breath left Rey restless out of hormones movements. Her aura was bit different today. Rey was in process of amusement! He stopped the car and she hopped out of car. She was bare feet and Rey was shouting her name to remind her about her slippers. She ran towards sea. Rey parked the car near the place she was! He was amazed to see this carefree Kria! She was playing with water. She ran towards Rey. He was ready to take her in his arms but she passed him with wide smile to reach the car and increased the volume of song. Rey was clueless about further scenario. She in sand drew some shapes with her hauling feet.

(Make sure song is playing from here on)

The initial music generated some heat in her knees. She wanted to exhale the increasing tension in her body! That heavenly tickle in calves made her move her legs.

Rumani aankho ki jana gazal tum ho

Befikar Beraham jana katal tum ho

Rumani aankho ki jana gazal tum ho

Befikar Beraham jana katal tum ho

She lifts her leg towards sky with her head spinning backwards to get the feel of joy! She gripped her vest from its edges in her fist and legs did the jazz walk. She was uncatchable. She was someone else who is totally unknown to Rey. He with his stunned mind sat on his car's bonnet.

Iss jami se falak bedhadak bedhadak

Itrati hui balkhati hui

Badalon ke pare gote khate hui

Behaya besharam kat ke bhagi hui

Sarfiri manchali pagal patang tum ho

Pace of her movements increased and with that cat walk, her stag jump took Rey's breath out for a moment. His hands unknowingly advanced to hold her but she was as good as her dance. Her stance and legato with the beats became dreamy. She twirled her hairs and settled them on her right shoulder. Her left shoulder was well exposed to Rey's eye. Her skin started shining. Is she for real or he is dreaming? He can't acknowledge his knowledge about Kria!

Her stunning dance wasn't a dance performance but a story which was never well told to Rey! She is a good dancer or she is dancing goddess! Today he was gonna witness meaning of her dance which her mother told him.

She was wild and serene at the same time. Rey felt neglected for the first time. He was standing alone there with bunch of questions in his mind! He literally shut his querying mind and let the eye do the work!

Rumani aakho ki jana gazal tum ho

Befikar beraham jana katal tum ho

Iss jami se falak bedhadak bedhadak

Itrati hui balkhati hui

Balkhatio ke pare gote khate hui

Behaya besharam kat ke bhagi hui

Sarfiri manchali pagal patang tum ho

Tum ho

Haan tum ho

Her pirouettes were meant to indicate her meeting with sky. She was not in her inspection. She was not in inspection of her vest's strip which was slipping from her shoulder. She did Cuban hip movement leaving Rey search for his lost breath!

She was not in conscious of catching his reactions as she wasn't doing it for him. She wasn't doing it but she was driven!

She slithered her palms across her bosom. Rey lowered his eyes immediately out of etiquettes. His forehead had few drops of sweat in his moderate temperature. She was in her trance meeting Real Kria where nobody invaded yet! Her correspondence with her conscious of being feminine got barred. Extreme joy ignited her most audacious way to express herself!

Teri khushbuye mahaki si main ho gayi

Teri khushbuye mahaki si main ho gayi

Behake bahake jhumu

Behki behki ghumo

Mehaki mehaki ghumo

Befikar beraham beshram

Shatani raho ka naya kadam tum ho

Her legs were reveling. Her hands were making circles in air. Her head was spinning in trance of extreme pleasure. Her giggles in between were making music more melodious. Her palms were moist. Her breath rate was perturbed. She was high without any intoxication. Rey was all surprised and shocked to know that he never actually knew Kria. He never actually has seen real Kria! He couldn't keep aside the craving for this truly amazing Kria! He was falling for her once again. He was getting close to knowing her deep secrets which not everybody gets to see! Whom he loved till yet? Whom he claimed to know every bit? Whom he considers HIS? He needs to know the real Kria. Reyansh Singhania was smitten with this Kria ghai. She is wild, she is voluptuous, and she summons you to love her. She is totally stunning without any smiles or behavior. Rey was all hypnotized towards her fleshing aura!

She was still dancing in her "grand" herself. She was on sand leaned and inhaling the vibes of generated ambience.

Jaane ke shayar ka judaa vaham tum ho

Jami se falak bedhadak bedhadak

Itrati hui balkhati hui

Balkhatio ke pare gote khate hui

Behaya besharam kat ke bhagi hui

Sarfiri manchali pagal patang tum ho

Haan tum ho

Haan tum ho

Rumani aankho ki gazal jaana tum ho

She again arouse to feet and with little snapping of hands kept on shaking her legs. Those little "thumkas" were jerky enough to move the hearts. And then she saw him and came back in senses. Music still had to go! Lyrics still had to come but she left the rhythmic movements and ran towards him. He could see the dream ending and portal closing. He could clearly see the reason which retrenches her from her divine self. The reason is "he". She absorbed in his arms and song & music were left alone to synchronize. Most amazing add on "Kria" was away from them and resting in his arms. She was hot, literally hot! He was unable to take the heat coming out of her body. Heat was nurturing and Rey can feel the value of it for Kria! How much dance gives her life! How much dance nurtures her! He was craving for her but he can't avoid the fact that she puts aside her life "dance" for him. Rey could grope the vibration in her bosom which was hard to resist. He kept aside his critical mode and grabbed her more tightly and kissed her shoulder.

She said "I am tired and headed towards car seat". She was leaning in car with her eyes closed and almost sweaty vest! Rey collected his scattered feelings and thoughts. Bentley was again on road advancing towards dealer's place. Rey was noticing this amazing enchantress and Kria's face was glowing out of her most amazing state. Dance made her all blissful and enchanted in herself. She was pleasured. Rey asked her to wear her jacket as wind was getting cold and Bentley deactivated its convertible. Roof was so there to protect them from chilly winds.

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Thanks for reading!😃

Your feedback is anticipated. 😳

Love🤗

Aditi



Edited by Nxt_rockstar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
so pehle...

me first me first...

second i can never get enough of it...

third...di jaldi se update karo...

so finally coming to the update...

it was just gorgeous write up... a beautiful creation di...

i mean seriously... the way u described it... i mean i cannot believe ki aapne yeh research ke basis pe kiya...

it was just so natural...

so the strt... i loved how u brought abt the way rey had observed her ... u know making conclusions and everything... it is so right...

i mean he is doinng everything... he knows that they can hv secret affair types but still.. he is trying his level best coz he doesn't want his fighter to negotiate due to him at any cost...

loved how u brought abt the feelings when he came to know that whataver mommy told was true...

poor he...

then the dance... i mean that was just... *have no words for it*

loved how rey was exploring the new kria... or his kria but a new leaf out of kria... that ws just worth everything.. his expressions... his love.. how he was amazed... how he was just drooling over his love...

the dance u described... was just oomph...

i mean gorgeous di... absolute gorgeous...

amazing creation di...

just a masterpiece...

waiting for next part...
Edited by -Vaish- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yaay...aditi updated...yaay...

You never dissapoint your readers...

Har bar time pe update kar deti ho...

Thanx 4 that

amazing part Aditi

it was so pure and BEAUTIFUL

loved it to the core

best thing was...you described everything so precisely and beautifully...

Feels like reading again and again

a drive in bentley with cool dude reyansh...hayeee kria u are so lucky mahn..

Even that beach was so beautiful...

Haha
bentley's music system started with her nail...rofl

I could imagine her dance...sey watching her and all...and a perfect end...in his arms


Thats why i said...IT WAS TOTALLY BEAUTIFUL
...

Waiting for the next part

Thanx for the pm dear


Ps - me 2nd...ahh not bad...
Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res...

unres...

chalo m in top 3 atleast...

now coming back to update...

seriously i have no words...

it was just a beautifull n

purely a bliss to read ur works...

hoe rey was trying to calculate kriya..

n now he is sure that...

watever kriya's mom has said to him is all true...

n than all that car scene was juast beautifull...

n than came the dance...

u described all things so perfectly..

i've become fan of ur writting...

now let see wat's rey gonna do...

update the next part sooon...

thnx 4 the pm...
Edited by anjee_007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
Thanx for d pm
Pls update next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey such a awesome update...
i always like n loved d way u took wrote this story n the way u took it ahead...
a big hats of to u for this part it showed wat dance s for her n how rey s a main part for her... it showed how rey felt abt d real kria ghai n fallin al over in love.. really superb update...
u explained d dance n way it s for kria really wel...
thanks 4 d pm
update next part soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was a 'Beautiful' part , in true meanings 😃...
Rey finally came across 'The Real Kria'...
Now he must have understood the meaning of Kria's Mom...
The song sequence was described greatly , Rey's feeling as well ...
Really Amazing part 😃...
Loved it ❤️...
N thanks for the pm 😊.

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