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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

are...aj kiski chehra dekhke uthi thi...meri sabse busy reader ne bhi poem par shuv nazar dal diyi😳...thanq Khushi di...😊

updating tonight...😊

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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

Part-6 5th Middle Chapter

Open Face Of Another World-To breathe A prayer

....Why did I spend so many years without any lady companion even after Dhara's death??
Then my soul replied-it's due to youe sin-feeling...your subconscious mind had accepted that u r the main culprit whose activity though being unintentional led her to the doom of death.So ur egoism forces u to do so.
Ohh...it may be...
...no,it is...obviously it is...
But how can I die now??...I've found my love,my life & my charm...so!?
But I'm in yoga state & decided to give life by constant starving...truly I didn't think a single word abt God...the time elapses only by rotating in the memory lane of my life-journey...I've realized-I don't want to die right now.
Ahh...being an emperor,I can't deny my own words...so have to die...yes,have to die...daydreaming...if anyone very close appears to me & makes a humble request...!!!...I'll take it as God's desire & surely will go.Let me see what destiny shows.
...God,plzzz forgive me for having such a deep possession for human relation till now...I heartily apologize...damn me!!!!...such a great foolish considering himself as FIRE OF GALLANTRY but almost having no sense abt hearty relation.

A Joyless Eye-Finds None Worth It's Constancy

Mihika bowed her head with a rosy blushing face...
"aapne kitna samay laga diya Samrat-ye bat samajh ne me..."
"Mihika!!!...tumhari mastisk ki sthiti to thik hay na??...tum mujhse prem korti ho??!! kyon??"
"iska koi uttor nehi hota Samrat.koun kab kise dil kho de-ye koi andaza bhi nehi laga sakta.aapka kiya mere liye koi anubhuti nehi hay?? sach bataiye..."
"haan hay...par"

Shashank,who's overhearing thier conversation got rally disappointed.Specially Samrat's talks annoyed him muchly...
"itna buddhu kaise ho sakta hay Chandu??!!...maine toh wo ashawa ko Mihika ke kaksha ke tara isliye chalna kiya tha ta ki Chandu uski kaksha mein pravesh kore aur ye jan toh avashya jaye uski manubhuti ki baare mein ...par usi ye bhi gyat kara de ki unka savandh kabhi sanvab nehi hay...aur ye buddhram!!!! kiya bol kiya raha hay voh!!? uska bhi Mihika ke prati anubhuti hay?!! aur ye atmahatya!! Chandu ne toh shuna hi nehi Mihika kya batana chahti hain..."

Suddenly Samrat's louder voice stuck his ears-
"avashya hay par main tumhe ek bhrata ke dristi se dekhta hoon"
"BHRATA??!!!"
"HAAN BHRATA...tumhara aur mera ehi samvandh uchit hay Mihika.ab aapne mon se ye sab adbhut chintaoon nikal do aur ankhe khulke dekho koun tumhe sach mein chahta hay...voh ehi hay...bulaoon??"
Mihika held Samrat's hand-
"aap mujhe aise hi..."
As soon as she held her hand-her cut wrist touched his wounded palm bleeding a bit due to his sudden fall caused by the horse & at that very moment his blood clotted & bleeding stopped!!
Samrat got highly surprised-
"ye...ye...k...kya hay Mihika??...tumhari rakt mere rakt se milte hi mera rakt skharan vandh ho gaya!!!...ka...kaise??"
"yehi toh mein aapko batana chahti thi Samrat...main atmahatya ki chesta nehi kar rahi thi...main to..."
"Senapati Shashank, aap iss waqt Mihika ke kaskha ke bahar kiya kar rahe hain??"-
Shashank got shocked to see the question-maker.

Memory Brings The Light...A Beautiful Relation

Acharya's heart echoed some words-
"mera uske saath rakt samvandh hay-sabko bahoot hairani hoga- par ehi satya hay.
He remembered the most sadful moment of his life...
...Acharya Chanak was arrested by Dhanand's army.Acharya Shatark tried his best to convince the king but...failed.That moment Vishnu arrived the spot & cried "Pitaji..."- the royal killer ended his duty...he'd fallen collapsing on the ground...Vishnu came forward silently...he's just speechless...Chanak feebly touched his head-
"dukhi maat ho Vishnu...maine jo shiksha tumhe diya hay -sadev use anusaran korna...BHAG MAAT KAR PRAYAS KAR PRAYAS BHAG MAAT ehi bachan atyachari nand vansh ka vinash korega-Akhand Bharat nirmit hoga...ek saral balak...tum shiksha doge use...aur...aur...tumhara ...ek... bhrata...hay...kabhi sambad...mile...toh..."
Vishnu got shoked but said-"haan...haan...bataiye Pitaji...bataiye..."
"prayas...kar...na...ki..."-He breathed his last leaving Vishnu into an ocean of queries.

Half Of The World Is...Half Of The World Was...

Helen looked at the room...that special one...her dreamland...her heaven...her man's room. From now it'll remain only in her memories-because,she's leaving India,her Sandro's country-again Hirat & then Greece.
Gazing at the nice bed she got lost in thoughts-
She's returning her room after dinner.While walking through the corridor a sobbing voice stuck her ears-
"aisa maat bolo Dhara...mujhe tumhare paas ane do..."
She got highly surprized. As far she knew Dhara was Samrat's 1st wife...so,who's that???
She entered the room & found the man was...Samrat himself!!...Acharya Chanakya decided to make Samrat take rest in differed room at every night to fortify him from enemies.
Helen came forward to him,her dream-man.5yrs ago she can't help being captivated just in a realm of those magnetic eyes...again that voice broke her thought...

"Dhara,skhama karo mujhe...tum to kabhi mujhe zara sa bhi kast mein nehi dekh sakti thi...to ab mujhe itna zada monokast kyon de rahe ho??"

Tears're rolling down from his eyes.His fair forehead got completely sweaty.
Helen came closer to him & gently touched his head.Sandro seemed to shiver for a moment.She removed his tears & sweats much carefully...& finally...she...can't help offering a sweet kiss on his forehead-
"koun si vyakti ya vastu aapko itna sata raha hay Veer??...aapne saare kast mujhe de dijiye aur shant ho jaiye..."
Even she didn't know why she addressed him as VEER.
Sandro waked up at once-"VEER!!! iss naam se mujhe shirf Durdhara hi samvodhit karti hay...koun ho tum??"

Breaking The silence Of Thoughts

Chitra-a good friend forever. I can't forget my gleeful childhood days with her.She's so simple,beautiful & smilimg.Wish her a happy life with a loving companion.
...ahh...ahh...I've hardly any power to think...my brain becomes fading...my sense is collapsing...the door of death...I'm coming Maa...I'm...I'm...coming to u...
"Chandragupt"-what an affectionate call!!...the voice...the voice...it's Acharya...my Acharya...ohh God, you are true...u r GOD...u r good...
My whole body wants to flush with joy.

"Chandragupt-ab sach me tumhe mera aur mujhe tumhara avashkta hay...aao..mere paas...lout chalo Magagh...tumhe anurodh hay mera...lout aao..."
-Acharya's words as if hypnotized me...is it true what am I listening??...God...God...this is your signal??!...really u want me alive???

I've realized the sound of silence
I'd like to get lost in pleasant yearning
Divided dedication or complete care with love
-Whatever u offer me-the feeling is mesmerizing...
Because...u r my world.

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Susmita

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

Here's pt-6...ur most wanted blood-relation mistery😊...no...no..not fully reavealed...suspense.😕
plzzz share ur suggestion & demands-not only appreciation.🤗
& sorry for the delay.

Edited by surprising - 12 years ago

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Paramita Ray

@DeewaniRimi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#254

Asadharan ebom Marmasparshi. R kichu bala batulata matro. So that's it.

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coolpavni

@coolpavni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#255

[B][/B] Rumpu...see dis time i'm commenting so early...lolz...
The update is simply superb...and its mysterios also...yeh acharya k rakysambhand vali toh sirf adha bataya hai...and why is cornelia addressing him as "veer" ???? hmm & lovd Chandu - mihika & shanky part... :) :)

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702755

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Posted: 12 years ago

#256

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chandrika as bhrata...omg dear,what you did?

if not as a couple,then you would have refrained them from writing as siblings.

don't worry,its your story so i am not pressuring you to change anything.

nice update and yaar you are damn good,you write poetic prose which i just can't.

keep going dear.loved it and do write more fanfictions.😃

shanky was jealous.yeah...😃

first part was a little boring,sry for that.🤢

and yeah it was mysterious.do update soon.

"veer" 🤢 omg...

acharya is calling him?or he is dieing?????????😕

Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#257

superb upd. rumpu loved it.👏

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Susmita

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Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr
Asadharan ebom Marmasparshi. R kichu bala batulata matro. So that's it.

I told u na just appreciation is not allowed...so what's it???😡

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#259

Originally posted by: lucykaede
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chandrika as bhrata...omg dear,what you did?
if not as a couple,then you would have refrained them from writing as siblings.
don't worry,its your story so i am not pressuring you to change anything.
nice update and yaar you are damn good,you write poetic prose which i just can't.
keep going dear.loved it and do write more fanfictions.😃
shanky was jealous.yeah...😃
first part was a little boring,sry for that.🤢
and yeah it was mysterious.do update soon.

"veer" 🤢 omg...

acharya is calling him?or he is dieing?????????😕

wow...my Chandrika reader is present😃...u feel boring 1st part???...it's my fault- srry.
& thanks fr encouraging😳...ur Chandrika...srry...I'd no option B...& Veer??...mysterious???..my pleasure.😊...Acharya is calling him...he's dieing-both is true.😉...bt there's another mys.😊...keep reading.😊

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A for Arpita

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Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#260

Finaly pura padh liya, Its a Owesome Story Line, n most importently Well Written,

U know what, I love mysterious kind of things, so I enjoyed it alot...

Cornelia, one of my feb history charecter, so mera pura dhyan ushi per tha :-P,

Well, In Short... I Loved It, u Love ur writting skill too :-*

Khub Bhalo Hoyeche :-)