FF-DIVISION!!!!(many jodis!!) chp 9 pg 6 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Okay guys now i am really upset!!!!!! my post has hit 1000+ views and still there are no comments and or likes?!?! 1000+ views and no comments 😭😭😭 it breaks my heart that so many ple have supposedly viewed my post but ple havent commented! guys please please comment! if there is anything that u dont like then tell me! if there is something u like tell me! everything is welcome! and silent readers are really welcome to comment!

please guys!
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So guys i had silently left this FF and i refused to write anymore

even though i LOVE this FF...i always had new ideas for this FF

and all but i stopped updating because no one was reading the FF

and commenting!


but because of 2 amazing ple i will now continue to write!

as long as these 2 people continue to read my work and stick

through my horrible writing i will continue!


TAMMY AND SANZY!!!! this on is for you! LOVE

YOU GUYS!!!!!!!!!!❤️❤️❤️

SO PLZZ COMMENT AND LIKE!








CHAPTER NINE

(FOR TAMMY AND SANZY):


After the guys are done working out:

Arnav: so now that we are done we can all go and freshen up and then go the same secret icecream shop k?

Viren; Alright it a plan, but I first have to go to the house and do some work and then I will meet you there in about half an hour

Virat: k bhai, we will see you there...

With that Viren left towards the Raizadas mansion and went to listen to the recording from the studio...

Viren edited the audio and made it so that the guys can watch it and know about the girls feelings and still not have too much given away about their family and their sisters spy business and all... (u understand :P)

Viren: (on phone) Jeevika, I am done with editing the audio from the guptas...whats the situation there?

Jeevika: I haven't gotten a chance to look at ur audio yet...we were going to go home in a bit and then I was going to look at it..

Viren: u don't need to worry about editing out audio...i made sure that we didn't talk about all the spy stuff and family mission and all... just have them listen to it...u will know what I am talking about... btw what did u tell them... why are u spying on us?

Jeevika: grins widely... that's for me to know and u to find out... :P

Flashback

Jeevika: girls! (about to cry face on :D)

Girls: Why di? Whats wrong? Is it Viren again?

Jeevika: yea! I think he is cheating on me!

Khushi: NO way! Viren can never do that!

Seema: he loves u a lot!

Payel: he will never look or eye another woman!

Maanvi: di how could u even think that? Whats wrong? Tell us...

Jeevika: he doesn't give me any time anymore...and when we are together now he is always getting phone calls and he receives them and moves away from me while talking which he never did before!

Khushi: di but that doesn't mean that he is cheating?!?

Seema: it could be anything di

Jeevika: * now crying harder (after all she is a girl :D) * NO I know there is someone else!

Khushi: okay okay di! Please calm down! We will do something!

Payel: yea... we will do something about this.. think what can we do about this?

Khushi: okay! Let me tell you what di... I am meeting up with arnav in like 20 mins to get my book back in the park...i will plant him with a bug then...

Jeevika: how will that help? I am suspecting Viren not arnav...

Payel: Di the boys always stick together

Seema: they always go everywhere togethe and do everything together...and I heard from NK that they are all working together later...

Jeevika: okay fine I am up for it...

Khushi: GRINING WIDELY! LETS DO THIS!

* End flashback *



CHAPTER 10:
Edited by Chandni1996 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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jeevika is so smart for using that excuse 😆
update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: evrydayirabbave

jeevika is so smart for using that excuse 😆

update soon!



AWWW I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!! U HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH UR COMMENT MEANS TO ME!!!!!

WHENEVER SOMEONE COMMENTS ON SOMETHING THAT U WORK HARD ON IT MAKE U HAPPY :D 😃


😆


OKAY I AM GONNA SHUT UP NOW! HAHAHA
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Chandni1996: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you sooo much for reading and commenting! it means a lot :)
U always comment and u are always there to read the update! i really appreciate it! 😳
Edited by Chandni1996 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: girlz-rule

@Chandni1996: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊


Thank you for reading
i think ur new, i havent seen you around...

it means a lot that u read! 😳
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Thank you! 😳
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@Chandini1996: Nyc story!!!!😊

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