VIRMAN STORY(THE OINTMENT)1 - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...great update...loved the way u described all this ...virat knock down all the goons...wow...continue soon if possible ...thank u so much for the pm... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow really awesome dear v was yelling in pain and he was mesmerised with m cute update hugs
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update... 😊
loved it... <3 <3
here are the flowers for you preity...
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and thanks for the pm... 😊 😊
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Priety! i am waiting for the next part... :)!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey feeling low for the bad news about show ending will update tomorrow...😔
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preity_d

hey feeling low for the bad news about show ending will update tomorrow...😔

Hey! Chill its not confirmed yet...so for now ignore...N yes eagerly waiting for the update..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing story
Finally our Hero Virat is here.
Plz continue soon and thanks for the PM.
Don't forgot to PM me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow loving the plot preity...u stopped at such a crucial pont thats nt fair...pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
here is the next part. hpe you will like it

PART : 3b

"Virat beta aajao khana taiyaar hain" he hurriedly put on the clothes and went out with her.

Dinner was a simple affair. Kaka kept on scrutinizing them on the dinner table. Manvi ate very little. Then they left for their respective rooms. Manvi entered her room. It was little bigger than Virat's mother's room. She sat at the corner of the bed. There was a window by her side. The window was open. She stared outside through the window. It was a full moon night. She stared at the moon. The moon so bright so calm so beautiful but has many scars on its face, just like her' she began to thought how in just three months her life took a terrible U-turn. She can remember her parents always saved her from the world like a shell. Now, she didn't even know her parents are alive or not. She dozed of slowly thinking all these. Suddenly wind stared blowing heavily. She woke up shivering in cold. She went onto the window and closed it. While closing she heart some noise of something''.. she tried to understand which sound it could be, but failed. She with little fear went outside. She tiptoed through the corridor with fearful heart. She found the source of the sound. It's like something was blowing in wing and making sound. She was curious. She slowly without creating noise opened the door and froze. It was a skeleton. The skeleton was blowing with air and smiling at her. she tried to make noise but couldn't. She felt her eyesight heavy and within moments she faints.

It was nearly dawn, when she woke up. She found herself neatly placed on her bed covered with a blanket. Her head was paining. She kept on thinking who must have buried her in her room. Yesterday she fall but no fresh Scratches were showing in her body. She was confused. Again after sometimes she dozed off. At about 7 in morning she woke up hearing birds continues quarreling''' she stretched her body and sat on the bed. Ray is coming between the doors of the window. She went towards the window and opened it' It was a lovely view. Various kinds of flowers and trees and birds and butterflies and squirrels were their playing in their own world. There was a pond also which she didn't notice in the previous night due to the darkness. Little fog was covering the whole atmosphere making it more heavenly. After sometime she went to the washroom and thank God current was available. She took a hot shower and got some local kashmiri dress from the guest room's cupboard and left. She came down and went to the dining area. Kaka was there doing some work.

"Beta tumaharahi intezaar kar raha tha, kya khayogi? Garam paratha le aayein? Yaa phir Virat beta ki tarha enlish khana bread and butter". He mimicked the words bread and butter. Manvi couldn't hold and laughed.

"Haste hue bahut pyaari lagti hoon hasti raho" he said.

Virat kaha hain kaka? She finally asked.

"Woh kya jogging bogging kya kahte hain,(he laughed a little) sabere ki safar mein gaya hain" he answered."

"Toh unka intezaar karein?" she replied.

"nahi beta, pata nahi kab aayega' tum kha lo' ruko main leke aata hoon" he came back after 10 minutes with hot paranthas and served her. Manvi tore a piece and put it to her mouth and felt puckish. She ran towards her room and did it. Kaka followed her till her room and waited outside. When she came back to her room he entered and asked, "Beat thik ho na? Virat beta ko phone karron?"

"nahi kaka abhi thik hoon, aap chinta mat kijie' thoda aur rest kar leti hoon."

"But kaka was not convinced beta naam kya hain tumhara?" he asked.

"ji Man.. Manvi' kyun?" she answered with trembling voice. As now-a-days she thought twice while trusting anyone.

"Virat ko batana padega na tumhari tabyat ke baaremein" he left saying that. He called Virat but didn't get any response so he himself made some Karha(soup kind of thing) and went to feed her.

Manvi was lying on the bed. She was felling hungry but couldn't take the risk to eat any more bite. Meanwhile kaka came with karha.

"Manvi protested but he made her drink whole container. Kaka left and she gradually engrossed herself in the arms of sleep. Virat came back home at aroung 1'o clock. He sat on the couch and kaka came complaining. "Pata hain Manvi ko kya hua?"

"Manvi kaun?" he asked casually.

"Virat beta tumhara dost" he said shocked.😲

Virat cursed himself for not asking her name previously. He said fumbling, "ha ha who hummare saath kabhi rahi nahi na? toh bhool gaya'then with little curiosity KYA HUA USSE?"

"Usse bomit aa gaya tha khaate waqt, maine karha pila diya"

Virat listened the first few words then he started thinking bomit? Kyun? Other words of kaka went from upwards his head. He suddenly shook himself and ran towards her room, crossing two-three steps of stairs in one moment. He entered her room without knock. There he saw her, sleeping peacefully. He went beside her. A lock of her hair is disturbing her eyes. He caught the hairs and stuck them behind her ears. But he felt hot touch. Again he placed his hand on her forehead and murmured, "oh my God. She is having terrible fever". He went to his room and came with a first-aid box. He took out the thermometer and checked, "its 101". He ran towards the corridor. He ordered kaka some cold water and clothes and kept cooling her head by wet clothes.

"nahi.. mujhe chodo'please''. Daya nahi aati tumlogon ko" she kept on murmuring this kind of dialogues.

Virat was hell worried. He became aware that something horrible happened with this girl and he wanted to comfort her. He couldn't think much and just hugged her tight. Letting her weak body to find some strength in him. And the afternoon passed away.

I will send the pms tomorrow.

flowers, tomatoes, eggs are happily welcomed. If you liked please comment really it means a lot to me
will reply individuals tomorrow.

Edited by preity_d - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


Res
*un res*
Priety kamini aur kitna wait karvayegi yaar kab pata chalega viraat ko that she is pregnant
Btw viraat ki age kiya hai maanvi 17 than viraat let me think 22 lol brain use kar na y i said 22
Poor maanvi hope viraat cream jaldi jaldi apna kaam kare aur maanvi ke saare pain vanish hojaye
I m toh dreaming viraat ka reaction wen he vl know about her
Poor gal she is still kid i mean she is just 17 *omg me maanvi same same age lol* woh abhi bachi hai how VL she manage and one doubt is maanvi connected to her child i mean like mom's generally r during pregnancy
Hash maine itna long comment kabhi nahi kiya
Now cont soon before i go insanse
Edited by copypaste - 12 years ago

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