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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi

for maan

Dil gumsum... Zubaan khamosh...
Yeh aankhein nam kyu hai..?

Jab tujhe kabhi paya hi na tha...
To aaj tujhe khone ka ghum kyu hai..


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Tere Baad Bacha Hee Kia Hai Zindagi Mein ...

Mein Hun, Bheegi Shaam Hai, Tanhai aur Yaadein Hai...



wow,,,
loved the poem for maan,,
every word depicts maan's inner turmoil
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 29

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Thanks again to Shruthe for this awesome banner
Thanks to all of you for your love and encouragement.🤗
Happy new years to all my wonderfull readers

@ maaneetmaahi Thanks for the beautiful poem you posted dear. I am posting small part in this update.

"You are in my house and its my and my family's responsibility that you get well soon"

She was leaving but she stopped "This is my house and my family too." And she left.

It was evening when Maan came from office but he did not find anyone in the hall, he gave his bag to one of the servant and straight went to his room where his father was on phone while his mother was putting wet cloth on Geet's forehead.

A sudden fear engrossed him "Kya hua"

"Bauji is talking to doctor, she is running with high fever since afternoon"

Geet sensed Maan but high fever did not let her look up

"Why did you not call me in afternoon" But by then his father was done with call

"Doctor says reports shows its viral of some kind and they cannot run any antibiotics and we just need to keep her temperature low. They ware working on more blood test"

"Itna kuch ho gaya, no body cared to call me" he touched her forehead, it was still burning.

Dil gumsum.. Zubaan khamosh...

Yeh aankhein nam kyu hai..?

Jab tujhe kabhi paya hi na tha...

To aaj tujhe khone ka ghum kyu hai..

Maan felt pain within seeing her like this.

"They want us to admit her, we should call her dad too" "Nooo" Geet said

"you just take rest, we are here thinking" even in her fever, Geet loved his scolding of concern.

"Its just fever, I will be fine" "ek baat samjh nahi aati, kaha na aaram karo"

He turned to his parents "Bauji, we will get doctors and nurses here itself and we should not trouble her dad now."

"Maa you take rest, I will do Patti till doctor's team arrive." They objected but he just sent his parents to take rest.

After everyone left Maan sat beside her, dipped the cloth in the water and thought 2 seconds before placing it on her forehead. He was now worried about her as fever was high and not dropping.

But even in fever, the moment Geet felt his hand on her forehead, she felt whole world's happiness within.

She just turned, making her wet clothed forehead touch his pants on his thigh area and her hands around his waist. "I love you" she murmured

This stirred a complete new feeling inside Maan, his desire for her. She could make him loose from far and this closeness, why his hands were not strong enough to remove this closeness'

He looked here and there... "Geet lay properly, you have high fever, let me do what I am doing"

But she did not move, all she wanted now in this physical weakness was to be embraced by him

"You are making my trouser wet" "I don't care, take me in your embrace Maan, all I need now is to be in your arms."

Maan stirred with thousands of emotion, pain of her high fever, her closeness and his own restlessness, desire and love for her, his resistance...

He made himself strong after an long breath in and out "Geet lay properly" and to his relief there was knock on the door.

He quickly moved from there and doctor's team was there. Geet cursed them big time under her breath for coming exactly in wrong time.

Sab Kuch mil jata hai is duniya main... faqat ...

Wo shaks nahi milta jis se Mohabbat ho jate hai ..

Doctor's team then were taking care of her but this did not give rest to Maan. Geet in his absence has shifted herself to his room to find solace so Maan have to move to other room.

But he had no rest, every half hour he would check on her. He made sure his parents did not take worry and forced them to take night rest.

Geet started getting better from next morning.

In Between

Adi, Shasha, Tasha and Pinky had wanted to visit her after knowing directly from MSK that Geet was sick and will not be working for few days.

Thus four of them decided to give her the visit and in this process they came to know the Geet stayed in KM. They were shocked to no end when in handa havelli they were informed

"She stays with her in-laws now" and finding out her in-laws house was KM had shocked them to no end. Adi was most shocked as Maan was his friend.

When all confused they reached KM, they were informed, she was in MSK's room.

And when they had reached the room, they had found Geet sleeping with a photo frame on her chest and when softly Shasha removed the frame to see who it was, everyone's eye has popped out to find it was Maan.

Adi started using his calculative mind "In- laws' Maan's room' his photo frame"

Shasha blurted out "Maan sir and Geet? " "Kab kaise kahan hue shadi" so many question but then Geet woke up.

She knew by now they know she is Maan's wife, she looked here and there to avoid there questing look.

Realizing she is Mrs MSK, Shasha and Tasha started buttering her more and poured her with so many questions.

But not to trouble her in this situation, Adi asked them to drop this topic. He asked shasha and Tasha to leave when he felt Geet wanted to speak something to Him and Pinky as friend

"Adi sir, Maan naraz hain mujhse, that's why?" "Mrs MSK calling me sir, hmm" he teased her, Geet blushed.

"Don't worry Geet, we are always there with you whenever you need us. Aur Maan ko to main dekh loonga, Ok now, take rest"

And after three days her fever completely went away and she started working but under strict instruction of Savitri. But within week she was all get going.

Maan in the mean while was all confused with his own feeling. He knew he was loosing badly but he was trying to resist even more, which was not helping him in any ways.

All her acts and her words only proved him wrong, in fever all she has wanted was to be with him, he somewhere saw the truth but denied to believe it. In these days, only he knows, how many times he had died to pull her in his embrace, tell her he was there for her but he restricted himself. Fear was still there, if this is all dream made of glass and can break in one hit, then what?

He will then be broken beyond repair.

But her acts, her eyes, her words everything just said him that his fear was useless, that she has truly started loving him and he must open his heart.

To avoid all this confusion Maan started working like mad and his evening would go on rigorously practicing football on ground to pour out his heart.

Geet had been working for the project very hard after loosing few days due to her health.

Two months passed and client declared that the second phase of the project went very successful and they were getting wonderful response.

They were all in praise of Geet when they met Maan. They wanted to have a success party for the second phase and show their collaboration strength to the competitor.

This Party was from client and Maan Geet and whole project group were invited.

Adi, Shasha, Tasha and whole other group were invited too.

It was the evening of Party. Maan and Geet were getting ready in their respective rooms and both their heart were beating fast for some reason.

To avoid his restlessness Maan left immediately after getting ready.

He was welcomed by client as their guest and then he got involved in the chatting on projects and all. He was turning his back on the main entrance of the party hall while chatting when he heard

"Wow" and saw many eyeing the entrance and when he turned, he felt his heart will completely come out from its place.

Geet's was making her elegant entrance to the party in white Saari with silver lacy border, backless blouse, her hair open, jhumka in her ears, dancing and touching her bare shoulder, slight makeup and she walked in so elegantly as her sandal made musical sound with the floor and her white silvery bangles making music of their own.

Why was it getting easy for him to fall for her, his own resolution seemed to fade away and her love for him was overpowering him but as their eyes met, Maan forcefully broke the eye lock.

Geet was stunned to see her handsome husband.. Uff how can anyone have this effect on her. All she wanted now was to swing in his strong arm, in dreamy way and dance to his tunes.

Next: Dancing together and confrontation and Geet's confession (Ok Gals you all will now know past from Geet's own mouth.)

Note: Hi Gals, I am getting very busy these days. I wanted to update my blog but don't get time for that too'

Two kids at home, critical project coming up in office and me trying to do some studies for professional career all this can delay the update and also please don't wait for PMs. I will when I have time.

Also between all this only your encouragement can keep me going. So don't mind if updates delay for long. I will do my best and you can do your best to encourage me.

-Anu
Edited by tellyme - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

After a long time I am first on your FF...yipee...

Awesome update...time is the biggest healer and as i said in another comment as well, time will only prove her love and melt his heart...
He feels for her but is scared for another rejection...
She just needs him but doesn't know how to say it...
Precap is very interesting...so Geet's confession, her own POV on how things happenned and when and why she has fallen in love with him...looking forward to it as i will love to read her POV...
Great update Anu...there is a serene calmness in this FF right now waiting for things to turn but hopefully in positive direction
Edited by ritzy09 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
😛
loved it
oh they got to know abt her being Mrs.MSK 😆
waiting for next more eagarly
Edited by reachsky2011 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
koi baat nahi will wait...

HAPPY NEW YEAR
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update


i feel bad for maan he is just scared tat he will be heart broken if he shows her tat he loves her

he fears the love nw and she wants him
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Posted: 12 years ago

wow superb upd.

loved it to d core.

happy new year to u too.👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update
Happy new year
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hope geet's confession and their confrontation ll help Maan to overcome his fear.

awesome update ... !
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Posted: 12 years ago
happy that u loved those poems...

hayee geet shifted to maan's room to get solace...

from the starting itself maan always showed his immense care for her...no matter how much he hates her(As he assumes😆)
and i just felt more happy when he showed his care without thinking anything...
his resttlessness seeing geet week...
and frustration that no one informed him...
the way he told "Kya hua" in fear...OMG!!!loved that..
and the way he made her shut and asked her to rest😳
uff ...geet bhi na...dreamland sey bahar hi nahi aathi hey,...
iss halath mei bhi she is all dreamy dreamy seeing maan too close...
and maan he has completly lost himself...but may be he controls himself well...so he every time gets back to his normal mode...no matter how much his heart wants geet
its the lesson which he has learned that "don't touch the glass doll,it may break...and break ur heart too"

he took care of her without bothering his parents or keeping any nurse😆...so i am really happy...

ho ho sasha pinky adi came to know the truth...😲😆

uff geet in saree...maan tho gaya...
eagerly waitng for next part...
intersting precap...

loved this update very much dear...BEAUTIFUL..
nicely written...👏👏
Edited by maaneetmaahi - 12 years ago

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