VIRMAN STORY(THE OINTMENT)1 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Update kab karegi 😭
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Update mai aaj karungi... 😃
(Today I will update)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just finished reading the whole story...it was so good ...so emotional...poor maanvi...she suffer alot... 😭 ...but when virat is here not to fear...finally virat entry...dasuu entry...loved it to the core...plz continue soon...n do pm me plz... 😊
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wen are u going to update😭
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Jab tak u won't update i won't study and i have xam 2mw
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awesome dear 🤗
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Originally posted by: copypaste


Jab tak u won't update i won't study and i have xam 2mw


oye aisa na kar... I will update at late night before 12
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As I said I will update today so I am updating... this part is not ended yet. wait for the next part with lot more things... and I will update the next very soon. May be tomorrow.

PART : 3a

He laughed out loud and said, "virat Vadera ko tod pana baccho ka kaam nahi'.. aur ekbaar jisse Virat ne aapna bol dia uski taraf (anger in his eyes) aankh utha ke dekhna bhi mujhe pasand nahi.

"Ha ha ha dialogue huh?" said an older man laughing.

One of them again tried to fetch Manvi. Virat's eyes were burning with anger. He caught the fist of that fellow and just turned to opposite side. A sound came of some broken bones. With a huge scream the guy falls on the ground. The other guys stepped back. But the leader who was the oldest was not in the mood of surrendering. He tried to punch Virat on the mouth but Virat had slide his upper body at the mean time and the guy's hand came back brushing the air. Virat began to beat them brutally. He kicked, jabbed, torn them. The guys fall on the muddy stable ground all wounded.

Suddenly Manvi started screaming, " Aur maaro, ha ha aur maaro' maar daalo." She laughed. Tears are rolling from her soft yet swollen teenage cheeks. Virat turned to her. He couldn't move back his eyes from her. She was mesmerizing. She thanked him through eyes. He walked towards her.

Suddenly one goon attacked him from behind. He beat him with sword on his shoulder. Blood started gushing out. A small "aah" escaped from his mouth. He turned and took the sword from his hand and cut him. He was dead. Manvi was hell shocked. First in her life she was watching a live murder. Some terrorists, who could run, flew away. Some kept groaning in pain while lying on the ground.

Virat came towards her. He shut her already opened mouth and signaled her to come with him. She followed him. He got up on a horse and gave her hand to Manvi to climb up. Manvi was hesitating'

"koi aur jagah hain jaaneko?" he asked. His voice was as rough as a roar of sea.

She nodded in negative.

"So, there is no space for any other words. Come hold my hand and climb" Virat ordered.

She followed his instruction. Being an amateur at horse climbing she clutched his shoulder and he literally pulled her with her all weight. She climbed with a jerk and collided with his chest. In the fear of falling she hugged him tightly. He started riding the horse. She slowly adjusted herself and within minutes they reached near a classy cottage. There was no one near the cottage. It was in an isolated area.

He said, "aaiye'"for the first time he said "aap" to her.

She noticed but hesitating to enter as her encounter with strange guys till now was horrible. He entered through the main gate and rang the door-bell. She slowly followed the way. After sometime a middle aged man wearing a kurta pajama and sweater opened the door holding a lantern.

"kya hua kaka? Aj bhi batti gul?" he asked.

"beta aur kya kare yeh tumhara Shaher thodai hai? Aajao..." after finding manvi with him, " tum ' yeh kaun hain Virat beta?"

Erm, kaka yeh yeh MERI dost hain.. paas ki ek gaaon mein iski koi rishtedaar rehti hain toh woha jaa rahi thi but bus miss kar di' toh yaha le aaya'" he managed to lie. "kaka please wo guest room khol dijiye."

Kaka said,"haan beta pehle tumlogon ke liye roshni toh'" he was cut by Virat

"nahi nahi main karlunga na' hatta gatta naujawan rehte hue aap kyun? Nahi" Then he turned towards Manvi, "umm tum tab tak mere saath aao na.chalo meri maa ka karma tuhe dikhata hoon. Waha change bhi kar lena."

Manvi who was standing and listening their conversation keenly said,"ji". After Kaka they both left for Virat's mother's room. Manvi entered the room following Virat. He lighted the diya and lighted the picture of her mother. Manvi looked at her with awe. Elegancy and innocence, her picture was a mixture of two. He showed her the cupboard and said to took out any cloth she like. She nodded. After showing the washroom Virat left her in that room. She closed the room and went to the washroom. After taking a bath in the freezing cold water she wore a pashmina salwar of his mother and came out of the room.


Virat's mother's pashmina salwar which manvi wore

She searched for Virat but couldn't find him. Atlast when she was crossing the stairs towards the next corridor she heard a load groan, "Aaahhh, ouch". She ran towards the room. There she found Virat applying ointment on his wound. He was yelling in pain while applying the dettol. She came forwards and took the cotton from his hand. Virat was astonished watching her. He unwillingly gave her the ointment. She put the ointment on the wound and bandaged with the cotton. He kept looking at her. For the moment he forgot about the wound he was feeling her warmth.

"Virat beta aajao khana taiyaar hain" he hurriedly put on the clothes and went out with her.

As usual tomatoes and eggs are welcome. and flowers also 😳

please comment if you liked it means a lot to me. 😃


pms will be send tomorrow



Edited by preity_d - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice Update..! Love their First encounter...And it was nice that u shown Virat took her on horse there is a saying in hindi..'safed ghode pe sawar ek shehzada aake lejaega..' i guess thats wht it symbolize...from now on she would b protected...:)
Yay i read before the PM! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

No mujhe aur chahiye priety this is not done plz plz plz plz
Viraat ko kab pata chalega ki m pregnant hai
Priety regularly update karna plz plz mere xams start main board xams hone se pehle mujhe zayada se zayada yeh read karna hai plz
Awww i loved it

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