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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hiii ...

here is the part 5..

thank you for your support ...





LIMITS OF UNCONDITIONAL LOVE




PART 5

happy new year dearies



here is a small treat for you all on my birthday...

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Only he knew what he felt when he heard her saying yes….yes to that bloody client of his….


Geet: sir …why are doing this….we are here for the meeting ….. where are the clients….

Maan : well geet I very well know who is your client and why are you here….i really knew everything about you damn business…so just consider me your another client…..after all you are doing all this for fulfilling your so called desires…and not to forget lust…..i knew that what I pay is not enough for you to enjoy yourself …to carry out a lifestyle you wants to…..

Geet…she was really shivering hearing him….

Geet: sir…what..what are you saying…… she again tried move backward but this times maan pulls her with such a force that she falls on bed…

Maan who was burning inside…he was furious on listening to that phone call …how dare that rahul lust on his geet…and geet when he heard her saying to inform her about the time and place…he just wanted to first kill that pervert for even looking at his geet which such eyes….. wanted to pull of his eyes for looking at his geet…

And geet he never knew that she would agree…did he not know enough about her..was she really a girl who will submit herself to anyone before any strong commitment….

Maan looked at her…she was still looking so pure …so innocent who can make anyone fall for her…. Yes…. Her innocence …..her childlike charm have probably made that rahul to ask her such a filty thing….but what about geet doesn't she knew his so called intensions …… that she agreed….

Maan was in a deep rage he just wanted to know why geet can go to such extent….

he still didn't know…..

maan: why geet…aren't you happy that I will be with you tonight….. ohh don't worry about the money I will get a huge amount transferred in your account…afterall you are my employee…you absolutely need to be benefitted…


geet ..she didn't know why her boss was behaving like this….she always had a respect for maan ……he being the sole owner of this huge empire is extremely easy to understand…he is down to earth…but where did she lacked to know this side of him….

Geet: sir….why are you doing this…she tried to get up but maan dangerously leaned over her …he was entirely covering her soft petite body with his rough structure……. Soft tears were lingering in her eyes .. anytime threatening to fall….

Yes she was in need..badly needed money…but this..she couldn't even think so….. it was against her self against her morals she would rather die instead of selling her off….. but today these thoughts were far behind in her mind…somewhere the tears who were there in her eyes were not of helplessness or need….instead they were there to show that she got a way…but what she is doing is correct… her inner concious screamed…..

Here she was lying below and a man was hovering over her…she could loose the most precious thing of her life her self respect her virginity but strangely today nothing was in her mind…all was that was coming was money and operation….

Geet: why are you backing yourself geet …you need money ….. can you afford to loose baba… he will die geet …just go along with the decision you have made in your mind…..

A daughter's feeling was overpowered by the sense which couldn't even think that what is right or wrong…..

Here maan who was badly waiting for her to push him..scream at him….. hurt him with her hands..but no….she was there lying ..its like she was silently giving in for which he is dreading….. he can't do it…no he won't …..

She was cold…her reaction was making him loose his sanity…he love her…truly love her …and love doesn't mean lust or satisfying your desires…a bond can only be made strong by devoting the time , understanding her…. Trust the most important aspect that can make you to move your relation forward..but here anger and lack of patience is taking toll on both of them…..


When maan didn't saw any movement from her…he softly bent towards her and kissed her nape…..expecting her to push….but his attempts were futile….

Maan: why geet…just push me…scream at me….prove me wrong….. that what I heard was wrong…. You are still that innocent and nave girl who stole my entire being with you…..but your cold behaviour ..agreeging to my demand is making me to hate you….. why are you doing this geet….

He was angry furious …geet how can she…does she even know the meaning of what he is saying….no she don't just ask her maan….his heart cried in agony ……

But mind was all set to create the differences….

Maan's mind: no maan…..look at her…does she is appearing that she doesn't know what relation a man and woman does have…. She knows that what could occur in next few minutes ….she knew that you can play with her….and lust..how can you forget that….it was her who agreed to that B***** rahul…asking him shamelessly about the time….you know what she meant ………… then why are you still thinking of her as an innocent nave girl…she is also like others maan…..just look at her…don't you think she is well aware of your position…and the way you are loosing with her….. she is not any vicar maan who will not know all these intimacy…..

Here geet didn't even reacted …when maan's lips touched her skin..it was like creating sensations ….. but inside a deep volanco was there that has started to boil …..

Although she didn't want to feel anything but maan here was playing with her senses….and why not…she is just a twenty one year old girl…all this intimacy and the need of money was making her to let him do what he wants……..

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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
koi nahi hai third bhi le dalu kya...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome
geet is trying to save her father and she can go to any level for this
but maan want her to show the opposite reaction
Edited by shri12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
happy new year maaneet lovers...
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Posted: 12 years ago
happy birthday nd happy new year

now about update
why geet is doing this
why can't she say about her condition to maan
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear
thanx for the pm
cont soon
waiting for next part
happy new year dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
1st of all a very B'day to you n wish tht all ur wish come true

coming to this SS --

Read all the 5 parts in one go

Geet taking care of her father like a mother take care of her child

lovely Geet not thinking her father as a burden

Geet fulfilling all her father wishes without uttering a word

Maan is in love wid Geet but fear of rejection doesn't let him to express himself in front of Geet

Maan express his love in front of Dadi

Maan misunderstand Geet n think tht she is also like any other girl

Part 5 update was little bit confusing to me, when Geet had spoken to the client i cant make it out n wht Maan had heard, just cleared this part

till now Geet undconditional love towards her father is beautifully described

waiting for next

Happy New Year 2013 to u

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