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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DIYA66

wOW!!!IT WAS SUCH AN AWESOME UPDATE... my guessing was right. hayeee ye kaisa kidnaping so romantic. I'm sure every girl would love to be kidnapped like this... 😳 on the other hand vedu's teeth got kidnapped by a bird 😆


waiting for next


thanks a lot dear...yup ur guess was right...
ye romance wala kidnapping hia... abhi wo long romance-2 khelenge...😆
yup, even me too😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_ya1408

Awesome update want to know at which place maaneet are going...update soon



ummm, don't know...😉
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updating...anyone wants the last update of 2012?????
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Thanks a lot for the likes...😊

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Wishing you a very happy new year, , I hope this upcoming year bring all the happiness, joy, everything for you'.. be happy, healthy and stay blessed'.. enjoy fully this last day of 2012 and welcome grandly 2013'.. love you all'..

and yes, , in this yeas 2012, if I did something wrong or said something to you which made you hurt then I am sorry'' please forgive me'. Koi bhi baat dil par mat lena'. It's a request from my side'..




don't ask to me that what is inside the gift box😆, jisey jo chahiye imagine kar lo...😆






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Gals- there is a news'.. I have also participate in OS competition by aniee di'. Hope you'll like it'. Will post it after 3rd jan'. right now'. I can only tell you the name'. it's "Cheers to Love"'.. did you like the title????


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@Ritzy09- di, last part was also long but on your special demand'. I have kept it little more long'. 2,000+ words'.. now be happy''

@angelic_princess- welcome in this thread sweety'. Now tere maze ke din gaye'. You have to wait with all for the updates'. You have read 60 parts in one go'. Now your work "wait & read"'..




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Part-61

"Wo mama said that, one bird came and took it away but jaldi hi that bird give me my teeth back" he replied innocently''''

Mohinder gave a approving look to vedanta that , that bird will give his tooth back to him'.. Vedanta excitingly jumped in his lap and then both nanu & grand son cuddled up in each other arms under the warm duvet'' annie smiled and left them alone'.

''''''''.

Both were in their reverie lost in each other touch, feeling so close in warm weather in the car, , actually cold is outside but hot is inside the car by their hot-2 acts, , no-no, not that hot' actually effect of warm heater which was switched on inside the car making them more hot in their acts''

Their lips were mere millimeters away from each other , , barely touched yet untouched, , their lips were about to meet but just then another halted on the way bringing back from their la la land making them blushed, , well they are not embarrassed , , there is no other person with whom they can feel embarrass n this situation and the road was also deserted, , by chance that car came there otherwise mostly that way been deserted''

Suddenly reality hit her hard and she looked at him with her confuse face'' maan can read the confusion which was in her eyes and lips'. Lips , , oops still his thoughts were wandering around those petals'.. He sighed and asked to her''

"what happen geet?" Asked maan cupping her face in his warm hands giving her warmth of his warm hands, , she snuggled her face in his palm but spoke before she lost in his sensual touch'..

"Will vedanta be able to live without us?" Asked maan feeling so helpless, , doesn't know anything'' maan can see the motherly love in her eyes right now and he knew that she is missing him very much but he doesn't want her to crave for him, , or she will feel that because of her Vedanta will live alone there''

"how you brought me here? Does everyone know about it?" She asked impatiently''. Though she is very excited for this trip but still she has a family also and kidnapped by her own husband for the honeymoon, somewhere she felt awkward but somewhere she felt thrilled and enthusiastic also'.. It is so romantic also'' she doesn't want to spoil his mood that's she didn't ask such questions''

"geet, , don't you trust me??" Asked maan'' he knew that she trust him but still wanted to ask this question from her'.

"maan, kaisa sawal hai yeh? Of course I trust you" she replied placing her hand on him which was on her cheek, , her eyes were speaking more loudly than her lips'.. And he understand that language of her eyes'.. There is immense love & trust for him in her eyes ''

"geet, actually everyone went to Mumbai at your place" he spoke looking in her eyes, , he knew that she will feel bad hearing that she won't be able to meet her family but he is here for compensating and giving her more happiness which she never got by his side'.

"geet, before you ask anything let me explain everything' can I?" Asked maan bringing her in his embrace by side ways holding her shoulder while she placed her head on his chest holding him by his waist encircling her arms around''

"geet, , dadi's friend lives in Mumbai and there is a wedding of her grand daughter'.. So she invited dadi there with family but I have already planned this trip, , so dadi gave me suggestion that she, annie & Vedanta will go there and me & u can come here for the vacation'. And rest about Vedanta, , he knew about it , that his mama & papa are going on vacation while he is going to his nana's place'

he was very happy, so I let them go there with Vedanta'. Now they are at your place in mumbai and then the day after tom they'll go dadi's friends place for attending the function' " he paused for a second glancing at her face patting her head slowly'..

She raised her face gazing in his eyes , , "geet, maine theek kiya na? And waise bhi Vedanta was having winter vacations so I thought I should let him go there'.. " she raised her face more and finally pecked his cheek lovingly and then blushed with her small act of hers'. Maan smiled at her simple yet sweet gesture'. He loved it'.

"maan, nothing can be better than this'!"'' she snuggled more in his embrace taking the warmth of his arms'..

"maan'!!!" She called him in her sweet tone'..

"hmmm" replied maan lost in her'.

"how did you brought me here???And packing & all" she asked in her confused state'' she really wanted to know''.. Maan chuckled at her question, , he knew that this question will come soon but he doesn't want to reply her right now''

"geet, , i'll tell you later" replied maan'..

She come out from his embrace gazing at his face with her almond innocent eyes''. "but maan'!!!" She tried to ask him but his finger placed on her lip stopping her, not to talk further''

"sshh geet, , suspense hai,,,,, mood khraab mat karo" she pouted and cribbed inwardly, , telling some profanities under her breath''

"achha theek hai but at least you can tell me how did you packed the clothes n all? Asked geet to him gazing at his face with hopeful eyes'.. maan put his index finger at the edge of his chin, rubbing slowly like he was in deep thought'..

"hmmm, so you want to know haan???" asked maan naughtily'.. geet pushed him back a little and replied''

"ji, pati ji'" and geet put up a stern faces'.. maan amused at her reply, raised his brow , and a smirk at the corner of his lips'..

"so, biwi wants answer'. Jaisa aapka hukum biwi ji" replied maan in a manner of slave, geet blushed at his antics'.. geet nodded and gestured him to continue'..

"wo actually biwi ji, , yesterday I brought all new clothes & other needed things' listen koi bhi cheez maine cupboard se nahi li, everything is brand new'"

"but maan, I didn't saw them" told geet'.

"wo isliye because I never brought bags inside the mansion'.they were here in this car itself' everything was ready'. " replied maan to her'..

"that means, everything is in shopping bag till yet?" asked geet''maan denied'..

"nope geet, I had purchased a new holiday bag and arranged them properly that too in outhouse, without telling you, , just annie helped me' and yes, , annie ne ek packet rakha tha for you only' she instructed me hard that not to open it' so I don't know what is inside that packet'. " maan was talking'.

Hearing all that geet was cursing him not to telling her anything'' maan can see the lips movements of hers which was moving so fastly''.

"ab tum aise tempt karogi to i'll make my honeymoon here in this car right now" she felt short of words at once hearing his shameless words , , and then she blushed profusely giving him more signals,,,,,,

"uff mar jawan'!!!" He fell on his seat placing his hand at his heart place doing drama which made her smile & blush more'.

"maan, , aagey jana ka iraada hai ya honeymoon yahi manaoge?" She blurted out and the suddenly bit her lip knowing that what she had told him'' he raised his brow questioning her while she hid her face in her palm'.. He leaned on her giving her clues what he wants''

"what an idea madam ji" maan spoke in her ear snapping her out from her palm and then he drove off the car towards his destination'''.. geet was looking outside niharofying the view of outside, , the nature's creation, ,

so many trees on the way like they are moving and they are only sitting in their car itself'' she slide down the window slightly feeling the chilled air gazing her face, , hearing the chirpy sound of birds at this early morning'' it's only 7 am''

Maan watched her,, , glancing at her while driving feeling happy seeing her so happy'' he slowly put the digital camera in her lap bringing her back from the fantasy world'.. she looked at the camera and then him asking him, , but he said nothing'' she happily took it started photographing of the nature's creation from their moving car'.. it felt so awesome''

"maan, how did you know that I loved photographing?" asked geet shocked while taking snaps of beautiful flowers and monkeys & so many other little birds, little animals'..

"geet, I'll reply you later , okay'. Now enjoy" he said, , concentrate on his driving'' she happily agreed and lost in taking snaps'' maan played the soft english music in the car which soothed her mind , , it is giving so romantic feeling'' it's her favorite song and favorite singer also'..

she loved this whole thing'.. she at once turned and placed her soft lips on his cheek , , his feet pressed the brake at once stopping the car , , she was shocked suddenly'' now he demands more''. He winked at her naughtily and she blushed, ,

Omg, she is loving this naughty maan'.. maan didn't do anything further and let her explore the nature for a while with her new camera'. Just then geet turned towards snuggled in his chest not to disturb him in his driving'.. maan smiled seeing his sleepy wify'..

he bend his face little not to broke the concentration on the road, , and placed a soft kiss on her head'. She smiled little and snuggled more'. Maan gave her space for snuggling more in his arms'..

He was driving continuously and she was resting in his arms'.. just then she spoke softly barely audible but yes, audible for maan'..

"where are we going maan?" she asked in her sleepy state, , maan knew that, it will come soon'.

"geet, it's a surprise for you'." Replied maan''.

"no more surprise maan, , I became a complete package of surprises'. Now no more'.. please'" she said cutely raising her face looking at his face hopefully'.

"ohh my mishty, don't be sad now'. "

"to fir batao kaha ja rahe hai hum?" asked geet again'.

"geet, you'll love it'. It's a natural beauty which you have never seen" said maan hinting her a little'..but she was confuse'.. "kaha maan?" asked geet again'.

"geet, remember, , once while watching discovery, you have never visit India's hill stations.. " asked maan'' she went in her thoughts''

Flashback'

Maan & geet were sitting on bed and watching discovery'. There was documentary show going on'. They were showing the hill stations in india'. She kept her head on his shoulder and watched the television'.. she spoke softly'. "maan"'.. "ummm" he replied'..

"this place is beautiful na, , natural beauty, snow , valleys , everything is so beautiful" said geet'.

"haan geet, , you know what, I have visited so many hill station in foreign countries but never find this beauty anywhere" told maan''

"you know maan, been in India I never went in hill station of India though I have visited foreign countries and India never'" she spoke truthfully'. Maan looked at her for a moment'.

Flashback ends'..

"yes maan, I had told you" said geet'.. "geet, that day I have decided that we'll together somewhere in India itself' no foreign country'" she felt overwhelmed'. She never knew that he'll fulfill her so small & simple wish'.. she placed a kiss on his cheek and snuggled in his arms feeling cozy confessing her love to him'.. "I love you maan"' maan smiled, , "love you too geet"

Precap

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please last time of 2012, press like button and do comment on the last update of 2012...again happy new year... have a great new year...

love ya neha😃










Edited by neha5058 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update

Geet asking various question to Maan, but Maan just telling her tht it is surprise

Awww Aniee giving packet to Maan n strictly warn him not to open *wink wink*

Waiting for next

P.S. Hey don't discontinue any of ur FF or SS

Regarding likes n comment maybe many r out wid family for vacation or some may be busy wid exam
Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago
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haha res
Happy new year...
Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago
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Note:-

And yes, my likes are decreasing….. are you not liking the story or something else? Please do tell me, , if something like this is there then I'll try to finish it asap….

Now about "winter moonlight" and "pretty little liars" didn't you like the story or what? These stories are not getting likes and comments…. If you are not happy then I'll discontinue them right now…. Even I am thinking to discontinue them because of less likes…. Now onwards I'll update only Fanaa hum mohobbat mein teri and waise bhi I am not getting much time for type the parts….

Edited by neha5058 - 12 years ago
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hehehe, , reserve karke rakho..
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resss




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