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Posted: 12 years ago


Chapter Sixteen – The Culprit

I ended up going to the studio even though I didn't have work. I saw all the other workers there. I walked straight up to the group of guys and I spoke with clear anger in my voice.

"Who. Spiked. My. Wife's. Drink?"

None of them spoke. I ended up grabbing one of them by the collar and that helped him spill the beans.

"It was Raj! It wasn't us!"

"Good. Now how hard was that?"

I let him go and saw Raj standing in the corner reading his script. He played a background actor in my upcoming movie. I'd only known him for a few weeks now.

His back was towards me. I felt the group of guys' eyes on me as I stormed towards Raj.

I placed a hand on his shoulder and before he could even properly see who it was, I had spun him and punched him in the jaw.

"How dare you spike my wife's drink?!"

"I was just having fun!"

"Fun?! You call that fun?! Do you have any idea what you did?!"

I know, you all are probably thinking 'poor guy', even I did for a bit. I thought I was letting out my frustration due to Madhu on this guy. But after I thought about it, I wouldn't have been in that condition in the first place if he hadn't spiked Madhu's drink. I wouldn't have slept with her or anything. And so…

I continued to punch him. He fell to the ground and I kicked him a bit before I picked him up to punch him again.

That's when I heard her soft bell-like voice call out my name.

I thought I was imagining things and so I continued to let out all my anger on Raj.

Then I heard her voice again, this time a bit more frantic.

"RK STOP! PLEASE!"

I turned my head and saw her standing behind me with a shocked face on her look.

I dropped Raj and turned to look at her. I saw her eyes fall onto Raj and they became watery.

I turned and looked at Raj who had his eyes closed in pain. He was bleeding and bruised. But I still didn't regret it.

I picked him up by the collar and threatened him.

"Next time you spike my wife's drink…you won't live to see another day."

I dropped him again and turned around. I saw Madhu's eyes on me, but I was angry with her as well. As she stood there in a state of shock, I walked past her and out of the studio.

I heard her light footsteps following me to the parking lot. I went towards my car and went to open the door when I saw her fair skinned hand on top of mine.

I stared at her hand on top of mine for a second and my angry expression disappeared.

I turned my head to face her and saw her looking at me with a face full of regret.

I wondered why she looked regretful and then she spoke.

"I'm sorry."

She spoke in a cute, child-like voice and then smiled. She tilted her head and put her hands to her ears.

"Sorry?"

She repeated herself as I continued to look at her with a straight face.

I tried to keep my straight face but she looked so adorable that I couldn't help but let a smile cross my face.

"Biwi…you're crazy. You know that right?"

"Correction! I'm unique! Now are you going to take me home or should I go home in a taxi?"

"Hmm…"

"REALLY? You have to think abou…"

She stopped talking and put her hand to her head. I watched as she closed her eyes and swayed slightly. She almost lost her balance but I caught her just on time.

As she fell into my arms, I looked at her in shock. I had no idea what was wrong.

"Madhu?!"

She was still conscious and she managed to open her eyes.

"I…I'm okay."

I brought her back to standing position but kept my hands on her shoulders.

She looked down with closed eyes for a second and then opened her eyes. She looked up at me and gave a tired smile.

"I just need to sit down. I'm okay."

I helped her to the passenger side and opened the door for her. I helped her into the car and with her seatbelt.

She was too dizzy I suppose to take a glance at me when I came close to her.

I closed her door and went to sit in the driver seat.

I put on my seatbelt and looked at her.

"Care to explain what's wrong?"

She looked at me. She seemed to be feeling a bit better now. She spoke with sarcasm.

"Mr. Rishabh Kundra, do you not remember how I woke up with a hangover and then you made me chase you all the way to the studio?"

I looked at her for a second and realized that I had completely forgotten that she had been nauseous and dizzy this morning from the hangover.

I tried to make her laugh.

"Well, next time, don't drink so much!"

It worked.

She laughed and I admired her. She was beautiful when she was happy. When she laughed.

I started the car and drove home. Forgetting everything that happened within the past two days.


Note to readers: I just completed writing up the happy end. So this FF will be coming to an end soon. Chapter twenty will be the final part. I just wanted to say thank you to everyone. Over this past week I've actually gotten many more likes on this FF! At first it was only 30, but now it's progressed to 60 and though it's ending soon, I'm glad you all like it! Thanks for all the love, likes, and lovely comments. <3


Happy Ending: Tears formed in her eyes as she nodded her head yes.

Tragic Ending: Without a second thought, I ran through those doors as if my life were behind them.


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Posted: 12 years ago
r eally gud update, just 4 parts remaining. o will read both endings lol, u know ur tragic ending seems very different and if i go by tragic part,madhu have not shown any signs of falling in love with rk. plz update soon and one question i think madhu have some problem ? is am i guessing right ?
Edited by deepak148 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I didn't get why madhu saying sorry here 😕
nice update like always 😃

Edited by Santhu.The.King - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepak148

r eally gud update, just 4 parts remaining. o will read both endings lol, u know ur tragic ending seems very different and if i go by tragic part,madhu have not shown any signs of falling in love with rk. plz update soon and one question i think madhu have some problem ? is am i guessing right ?


No spoilers!
There will be daily updates for the next four days! Everything will be out in the open then. 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
She has cancer hasn't she? Her mother isn't the one being ill, it is her... How I wished that wouldn't be true as this story really feels real. I somehow see the Madhu and Rk of your story as real persons with real emotions and thourghts which cause actions like this. *sighs* It is amazing. It really is. I feel so bad cause of Madhu being ill. And OMyGosh, you are actually able to write two stories -well two ends to a story- and that too so different from eachother; Happy and Tragic. How amazing! Love your work Pritt! Please PM for all your work? *dentist smile* That would be awesome!
Edited by BrunoMars - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Santhu.The.King

I didn't get why madhu saying sorry here 😕
nice update like always 😃


Remember how she angered RK into running to the studio in the last update? 😲
She continuously was saying out loud in front of RK how she regret sleeping with HIM. He got angry and stormed out. Madhu realized her mistake and came to apologize. Also to apologize for basically everything that happened in her drunk state.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...😊but I'm the type which checks the last page of the book first to check whether its got an happy ending and then read it...😉I think I'll read your happy ending and be happy...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Madhu jst slap RK without lisning d hle truth.and then hr ovrreactng.bt i feel madhu hiding sme thing.is she ok.nice update.cn sn.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Super update Pritt !! Can't wait to read the happy ending :P
Edited by zara.92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: BrunoMars

She has cancer hasn't she? Her mother isn't the one being ill, it is her... How I wished that wouldn't be true as this story really feels real. I somehow see the Madhu and Rk of your story as real persons with real emotions and thourghts which cause actions like this. *sighs* It is amazing. It really is. I feel so bad cause of Madhu being ill. And OMyGosh, you are actually able to write two stories -well two ends to a story- and that too so different from eachother; Happy and Tragic. How amazing! Love your work Pritt! Please PM for all your work? *dentist smile* That would be awesome!


Awww your comment made me smile! <3
Thanks so much! I'm glad you like my work!!!

And yup, two separate endings! I wanted to give people the choice. Honestly, I have to go through my work before I post it, just to make sure I'm not being biased towards one ending. So my story has to stay kind of neutral for me to give a happy ending!

No spoilers though! I can't reveal anything. The next four daily updates will reveal everything. :)

Thanks again though for the lovely reply! I'm so glad this feels real to you! But since it feels real, I suggest you don't read the tragic ending. If you plan to read the tragic ending, read that first and THEN read the happy ending. Just so it ends happy for you!

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