Arshi SS Parents'Affairs ch 24 /148 13 jan - Page 63

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow nice !!!!!!!!! update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update :) loved it loadz <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
why does garima need to protect them? is he trying to shoot them?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waitin fr next part eagerly
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Posted: 12 years ago
Okay!

The teaser was cool!😃

But as you know...Why I love your stories?...Cause it's all happy and mushy or even if it's dark or tragic in the beginning ...U always make it a point to solve it out and show a ray of hope and light!👏⭐️

So my point is...As u said If u plan to make Garima go suicide...It will feel somewhat wrong...u had written somewhere that it's cowardly.😕

All I will say is Don't let Garima suicide and all sad and Arhi sad...Even if dey deserved it!😛

Like U can still follow up the teaser but make it kinda cool and funny and sweet and happy ending yaar!😃😆

At some point of tym in the beginning of the story I had dreamt of Arnav and Khushi marrying but along with them Garima and Arnav's dad marraige...So can't u make dem all good now...Please try at least!😃

It's all up to you!
It's just a kiddish wish from me!😛

PS- I will always love what-so-ever u write anyway.😉

Bye😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
i guess so u have decided whats good for ur ss...so garima would now confront arnavs dad ...great to see the motherly love of garima is still alive ...i hate arnavs dad he is still not flinching...so they would come to know his intensions...great teaser...love u tk care...
Keep smilin...
God bless...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Now Garima is supporting Arnav and Khushi..
Continue soon.. :D
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There was a pin drop silence in car , they were going back to city .

Arnav"what the hell is this?" he stopped the car

Khushi who was lost in her own thoughts look at him"kya huwa"

Arnav" road is block , i think there is some accident " he step out of car to see ,and walked to the spot ,with in no time he was back caring Garima in his arm

Khushi panic seeing her mom "what happened?"

Arnav" i dont know "he made her rest in back seat in Khushi lap and driver as fast as he could to the nearest hospital


Khushi "What happened to her ?"

DR" i think she had not eaten anything that is way she fainted"

Khushi hmmm Garima was gaining conscious, she was moving her head and murmuring


Garima" i will not let him harm my child"

Khushi standing behind Arnav dont know why she was not touching her . Arnav pull her ahead of him

Arnav"she needs you"

Khushi "but"

Arnav placed his arm on her shoulder " you cannot step back as when you were not able to take care of your self she had helped you , you owe her "he made her sit next to her, he moved out to talk to dr


when he came back both mother and daughter were hugging each other , he cleared his throat

Arnav"Dr has discharge you"

Khushi"lets go home mama" with Arnav help she took her to car


In Car

Garima look at Arnav "beta forgive me , i really didnot knew you both have got married "

Arnav"who told you that?"he was shocked

Garima" your dad wanted to give you a defeat , he took me to church but again like before he was defeated "

Khushi"you guys gone there to get married "she scream on top of her voice

Arnav"Relax " he made her calm

Garima" everything is fair in love and war , do you know that?when i walk out from your home , his dad pointed out at few things which really embarrassed me "

Khushi "what"

Garima showed her eyes ,and pointed at Arnav

Khushi" if Priest had not told you we are married ,you both had got married "

Arnav"stop it Khushi"


The reached home luckily Buaji was not there .

Arnav" i think we should go now "

Garima" where are you both going?"

Arnav" i am taking her to her home"

Garima" i will not let you go"she hold Arnav arm as she knew Khushi will not listen her


Arnav" but why , that is my home he cannot kick me out"

Garima cupped his face " beta i know your dad the most , he had lost everything in life , we were in love , but according to your Dada will your dad has to marry your mom , if he will not he will not get anything from his father business as your mom was 75 %share holder of the company , your dad wanted to have higher studies it was his dream ,at that time said i dont love him i always took him as friend, he was deject for me and in anger he got married to your mom, he got admission in US university with in one week of his marriage, to run way from married life he left your mom with in 1 month of marriage , after your dad left your mom finds our letters and his diaries , she never knew we had a break up , she thought he don't love her that is way he left her,

I had left city , as that place was not letting me live , my parents force me to get married to her dad , i try to be fair with her dad , i told him before marriage i was in love with a guy when i was in collage , at that time he appreciated me but after marriage he use to taunt me .as that was carved on her dad mind , she took a deep breath.

Her dad made my affair with every possible person , with the postman or milkman , i was fed up , i asked for divorce as i have seen Khushi, she use to get frighten when we use to fight , i dont want to spoil her teens , we got separated ,i shifted from there to here to my buaji place .


one day i found your dad , for year or so we didnot told each other that we were single , but when we came to know dont know dont know why our love for each other again blossom in our heart, your dad

told me that when he made up his mind to come back and accept your mom as his wife , she had got annoyed for him for ever, your dad think he is a loser , he could not love you as he thinks he has no right on you, the lady who gave birth to you was annoyed from him and you are part of him" she paused

Arnav and Khushi look at each other

Garima" right now i will not let you go any where , you both just stay in front of my eyes , he is angry right now as once again he is defeated , he will not realized the blood running in you is his , he may do something silly as always as it is his old habit " she gave a weak smile


Arnav "for how long you will hide me? "

Garima hug him" till i can , as in my present he cannot harm you"

Khushi" why you both use to meet ?"

Garima" beta sometime you cannot help your heart , every time i use to be scared, but then i use to say to this is my last time , i will not meet him again, but every time i use to forget my promise "

Khushi "hmmm"

Garima" today i am thinking your marriage was written "

Arnav "what about yours ?" he tries to be funny as the atmosphere was to sad

Khushi beat him" then i will not see your face "

Garima" Khushi" she hide Arnav behind her " tum itni batameezi karti ho" she pull her ears

Khushi "he is my husband and i can do anything with him" she beat him

Garima" by the way as per my information you both never wanted to get married in life, why you both got married ?"

Arnav" because she has your blood and i have dad's, love was written in our fate"

Garima saw he had pinched Khushi and she was tying to hit him , dont know why she felt they both were looking like their past."it is your first day after marriage, if you both will fight like this what will you both will do rest of your life"they both sit straight"i want to rest, but you both promise me you will not step out of home"

they did promised




At night

Arnav "i am feeling sorry for them" Khushi who was lying in his arms hug him more tight

Khushi" i can feel their pain as i am in love, no one else can feel "

Arnav" why cannot they live together when we dont have problem?"

Khushi "are you crazy "

Arnav" khushi they have always suffer , dont they deserved happiness in life"

Khushi" please Arnav dont try to be bold ,it is India"

Arnav " one think is sure , when we will go back to our home ,i will take your mom with me "

Khushi" ok i will stay here then"she try to free herself

Arnav" tum bhi na you are still living in stone age" he hug her more tight



Next morning Arnav got up with loud bell,he free him self from Khushi and walk out


Garima" what was that cannot you ring the bell decently ?"

Dad " i am here to take you"

Gariam" i told you loud and clear i will not marry you do you get that"

Dad"then be ready your daughter "he paused as he saw Arnav standing behind Garima"you are here" he in shock look a Garima. Khushi too came out rubbing her eyes

Dad"i have said now on wards we don't have any relation why you are in this home"

Garima came and stand in front of Arnav and Khushi .

Dad"move away when i asked them not to come why they came in here"

Garima" dont you dare touch them , as if you touch them you will never see me in life again " she screamed

Dad" Garima "

Garima" right now i am her mom , and his mother in law do you get that" she pushed him away " if you try to hurt my children , i will forget i ever loved you"

Dad took a step back

Garima" you have only one relation and that is me , as your mom still blame you for your wife death , if you try to touch them i will never forgive you"

Dad felt the world around him has fade out

Garima" i have accepted our children marriage ,you should too accept it and give them your blessing , as i always said to you we were never made for each other"


Arnav"DAD" he catch him as he sink down to floor.



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i know few of you must be shocked after reading this

when i started this story i had 2 out lines in my mind


Their Parents cross the limit and Garima is expect , Dad dies and to cover up their parents deed they take care of Garima ,Khushi and Arnav loves vanish some where, if i will do that you all will kill me... so i drop the idea


then the other was Arnav made them married , but i really got mails never do that so i drop that idea too...

this is the third idea hope you guys like it 😉


i have change the storyline 😆


5 more parts be happy not ending on 20

hope so i am doing justice with the story


Edited by naddiya26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update.. but plzz update gift of gallows alsoo plzz n that too today
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Posted: 12 years ago
fabulous updates dear:)

i dont want garima to marry him...

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