VIRMAN STORY(THE OINTMENT)1 - Page 6

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

I guess I want to see Virat as a painter.. I dont know why but it seems nice to imagine him in that character. But terrorist sounds interesting also .. 😊.. I think you already have some plans to surprise your readers 😃.. Will be waiting for your next update.. Take care 😊

humm... nice idea... I also thought about it before 😳

Originally posted by: cutyvirman

demand is accelerating high

true 😆

Originally posted by: preity_d

5 votes for terrorist2 votes for doctor1 vote for painterokay I am updating in few minutes...

Hawt update 😉

Ointment
I think this post is the longest I ever updated... hope you will enjoy...

PART : 2

The 17 year old innocent girl kept looking at the lonely sky and twinkling stars'.. Today the little light of the stars are not able to soothe her condition. Slowly the night faded. Shaiko gained conscious at dawn. The first word of him after waking up was "Manvi". He opened his eyes with a jerk and started founding her. He ran towards the cave. He saw her glimpse and shut his eyes that instant. She was lying with only a teared kameez. He searched for his overcoat and found it near a eucalyptus. He covered her with that. Then he saw the fresh bruises and wounds of her body. Those bus***d's bite marks. Manvi was still looking at the sky. Within a day she changed to a oldie from a teenager because of the cruel real world.

"manvi? Manvi? Kuch bolo? "she was silent.

"kaha dard ho raha hain? Bolo? I am sorry main tumhe bacha na paya. Tumhara yeh bodyguard tumhe bacha na paya" he cried out. That was the limit. Manvi broke down in tears. She kept sobbing in his arm. Hours past. And now the sun rays are bolder and sprayed to all over the valley. Manvi was still sobbing holding Shaiko's collar. At last shaiko broke her from him and looked at her wounds. He carried her towards the lake. He made her clear the dry blood stains from her thighs, chest and shoulders. Then he supported Manvi to walk and together they came towards another village.

They came near a hut. It was three huts attached together. It was at the corner of the village, starting of the forest. Shaiko made her sit at the large stem of a tree. And tiptoed towards the hut. There was no one in the ground. Some ducks and hens are playing. Someone kept some wet dresses in a rope for evaporation. Shaiko went there. He took a much wet, almost dry saree and came near Manvi. He gave her the saree.

"Shaiko isse kyun utha laayein? Mujhe saree pahenna nahi aata."Manvi said in ashtonishment.

"Manvi I think this is a hindu village. So they will protect you. Your dress is not in decent situation..and my overcoat also is not in a good position and it had Islamic mark, so if anyone here come to know that I am a muslim" He said.

"but How will I wear it. I don't know anything about it. Mamma also used to wear Salwar kameez "

Okay let's try. He helped her draping the saree. It was not exactly the way a saree should be dragged but they somehow managed. Shaiko left his overcoat in the forest. They then came towards the house.

It was a hindu house. An old vaidya(village doctor) lived there with his fimily. He had one son aged 45, two cute twin grand-sons. They told their tragic story excluding the rape part and part that Shaiko is a muslim to them. They agreed to give them place to live with them. Manvi used to help them in house hold works and Shaiko used to help the Vaid's son in the field. Manvi used to live with the two grand-sons and Shaiko in the kitchen at night. They were living there for 2 months'

One day, after two months''.

Manvi was preparing breakfast for the kids. She felt puckish. From some days she was not feeling good. She ran towards the bushes and puked. Ahe was coming back suddenly her head spanned and she fall down on the ground. The old Vaid came running and examined her.

"she is pregnant" Vaid said. Manvi and Shaiko was hell shocked. A lone tear escaped from her eyes. She couldn't think anything properly then. In this little age everything is too much for her. She was hell afraid. She heard that if a woman becomes pregnant then she has to go through from tremendous pain. She was too young to understand a mother-child bond. She kept crying all day. Shaiko also was shocked he also only 22. How will he took the responsibility of the coming child? That afternoon, he was little less alert. He forgot to close the kitchen door at the time of performing namaaz. The Vaid's daughter-in-law was passing by there at that time. She was shocked to see Shaiko as a muslim guy. She thought maybe they are muslim terrorists and hiding here. Maybe they had a worse plan, so she told everything to her husband including her own imagination. Her husband was an ill-tempered man. So he came running towards Shaiko with his axe and beat him on his shoulder. Shaiko fall down on the ground. His prayers were unfinished. Everyone came there hearing the noise. Manvi was terrified watching everything. She ran towards Shaiko and took his head on her lap. The old Vaid came towards his Son and slapped him hard. he took him to his own room.Manvi followed him. He applied some ayurvedic medicines on his hand and bandaged. He came to the ground.

"baba, you know he is a muslim. If anyone of our village will got to know, they will not leave us" his son yelled.

"but they are our guest and guests are God to us. We can't behave like this to them" he said calmly.

"aap budde ho gaye hain' aapko koi chinta nahin. Btu I have two sons. I have to care for them. They are my responsibility"he shouted back

"thik hain, main kal unhe jaane ke liye kah dunga. But aaj nahi" he said firmly.

That night, at any corner of the forest some men gathered to have some secret meeting.

Huzzor pata chal gaya woh kaha hai'said a young-man.

A man on middle fifty said "accha hai' ab haat se nahi chutna chahiye"

"Nahi chutega" said another man.

at the old Vaid's room.

"Main nahi puchunga, tum login ke sach kyun chupaya." Said the Vaid. "zaroor tumlogon ki koi majburi hogi"

Manvi eyes filled up at the word "majboori". Shaiko looked down at the floor.

The Vaid again said, "tumlogon ko kal subah hi yaha se jaana padega. Samajh hi rahe ho..." he was about to say something more, but stopped at some noise.the men who were responsible for Manvi's this condition were outside the hut. They were calling Shaiko,

"oye Shaiko chal bahar nikal' tu muslim hai. Yaha tera jagah nahi. Aur Manvi ko hummare hawale kar de" they said. They and the Vaid's son exchanged meaningful glare.

The vaid understood who did this and said to them, "bhaago ''. Piche wale darwaje se bhaj jaao.. inko main sambhal lunga"

They gestured him thank you and ran toeards the forest from the hidden door of the hut.

The Vaid came out and said, they left. The animals gave a angry glare to him and ran towards the forest. "kab tak aur kaha tak bhagega?" one of them said. They reached them in the middle of the forest soon. Because they were too weak.They beat Shaiko hard. They left Shaiko in the middle of the forest and took Manvi with them. They kept Manvi at a fort kind of building. They were fighting for their so called freedom. So they were away from family and the entertainment of life, so they used to take their all depression on her. They used to force themselves on her every night.

One month passed. The will of live the life was dead to her now. She tried to escape many tomes but in vain. One day she heard they are shifting their shelter. Finally the day came. They made up her as a muslim girl. She wore a burkha and sat on a horse-carriage with the men. After half an hour they halted near a lake. It will be a long journey so they wanted to be ready. They came out side of the carriage at the barren place. Some gone to do everyday's work. Some were shining their weapons on the rocks and some were filling the jugs and buckets with water. Suddenly someone tapped on her shoulder. She jerked back. It was Aayan. He took her towards a secret way. Everybody was so engrossed to their work that nobody noticed.

He left her near the highway and said. "Run. Bhaag jaao yahase."
She was so shocked. Why is he being so good? Why is the predator being Protector? But she avoided asking. She ran with her life. How fast she can she ran. But the terrorists were not that stupid. They soon found Aayan's unfaithfulness and ran behind her. After one hours of hide and seek, they found her. She was hiding behind a stable. They came at the stable and grabbed her hand. All the horses began shouting some of them kicked them hard. It was like the animals were the real human and the humans are the real animal disguised as human. But what could do those shacked animals? They were again going to trap her when she bite one's hand and ran. She ran and collides with a solid chest. She looked up at him. Her eyes fall on his green orbs. He was not any similar she had seen before. She grabbed the arms of that person thinking him as her Savior. He assured her with an eye blink and walked towards them.

"Yeh ladki hummari hain..chod de isse"one animal said in anger.

"umhum ''(nodding head negatively) who meri hain'"he calmly said.

"Mazak accha kar leta hain. Humne 1 mahine isko khilaya pilaya'" one of them said.

"Hoga. But who ab MERI hain." He said firmly.

"Toh tu nahi manega?" They hit him. But their hitting was just like a mosquito's bite on his hard solid rock like feature.

He laughed out loud and said, "virat Vadera ko tod pana baccho ka kaam nahi... aur ekbaar jisse Virat ne aapna bol dia uski taraf (anger in his eyes) kisika aankh utha ke dekhna bhi Virat ko pasand nahi."

I think this part is not up to the mark 😕

please feel free to comment.. juta chappals are welcome, flowers may I request? 😕

Preity very emotional and heart wrenching update yaar poor maanvi pregnant @ 17 omg finally ointment ki entry yayee
Is he terrorist warna u know na 😉

Woow preity that was awesome... I feel sorry for manvi...but now virat is with her as her saviour.she is in safe hands now...i liked the quote animals are real human..nd human as real animal disguised as human so true..continue soon

Plz aaj hi update karna

Originally posted by: copypaste

Plz aaj hi update karna

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abhi toh 1670 words type kiye

Originally posted by: copypaste

Preity very emotional and heart wrenching update yaar poor maanvi pregnant @ 17 omg finally ointment ki entry yayee
Is he terrorist warna u know na 😉

ha ha pata hain nahi to 😆
thank you wave